Illusion - parni FF part 29

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Summary: teni loves parth, parth is married. Teni tries to replace his wife, but she took it to far, causing her to have a mental breakdown.

Note: I am a parth and Teni shipper, but this story is a horror and theirs never a happy ending. So I'm not asking anyone to read, after all it will focus more on Teni since its about her.


Index


Prologue page 1

Part 1; page 1

Part 2; page 2
Part 3; page 3
Part 4; page 3
Part 5; page 3
Part 6, page 3
Part 7; page 4
Part 8, page 4
Part 9; page 4
Part 10; page 4
Part 11, page 4
Part 12; page 4
Part 13; page 5
Part 14; page 5
Part 15; page 5
Part 16; page 6
Part 17; page 6
Part 18; page 6
Part 19; page 7
Part 20; page 7
Part 21; page 7
Part 22; age 7
Part 23; page 8
Part 24; page 8
Part 25 page 8
Part 26; page 9
Part 27; page 9
Part 28; page 10
Part 29; page 10
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Prologue

Theirs never a day I don't think about the wonderful life I could have had. one where my parents wouldn't be so disappointed, where, I married the man that treated me so well and have a happy life with wonderful kids.

Would that have made me happy? Would that had made me forget about him, the one man that control my life, my heart and consumes my every thought. I don't even think I have an answer to that question.


A year ago....


" teni where are you, the groom family is here?" Her mom says

Teni on her bike, says " I'm going somewhere far where you won't find me"

" Teni, stop this nonsense and get back here. The groom family are impatient "

While her mom was talking , Teni end the call. She says in her head I'm 25 years old, but I'm to scared to get married. I don't understand why she keeps pressuring me too, when I'm ready I will. But it won't be now or next year, she thought. When she arrived at her friend house she asks for him.

His mom smile " oh Teni , amen is in the tree house."

" thanks aunty" she says before going to the back an climbing the tree.

When she arrives, she saw her friend making out with a women. She shly looks away and clear her throat. Amen seeing her smirk " ah, Teni. I didn't know you we're here "

" that's because you we're to busy enjoying your five our fling"

The girl confuse turn to amen " is that what I am?"

" no...no, she's just joking"

Teni pretends to look at her watch " am I ...isn't jyoti suppose to be here by five"

Amen glares at Teni, but she just ignores him. The girl angry slaps amen before walking out. As soon as she was gone, Teni starts laughing.
" what is wrong with you?" He says

Teni while sitting by the entrance with her foot out says " I told you no third party allowed in our treehouse "

" but that was years ago"

" so, it still applies "

Amen sigh " what brings you here? "

" I ran away from another proposal "

Amen shook his head " is it because of the men you keep imagining in your head"

Teni frown " his real, I know he is. I would not be dreaming about him if he wasn't."

" OK, whatever you say. But Teni, I think it's not healthy, you should probably give up because theirs no one like that in this world."

Teni glares at him " I'm leaving "

" why you just arrive?"

Teni now climbing down looks at him " your annoying"

Amen says " you interrupted my make out session, just to leave. " when Teni left he saw jyoti walking climbing up " right on schedule " he mumbles.


Elsewhere, Teni was still upset with amen. She knows she's not crazy, he exist. She just haven't met him yet. While going down the hill, she recall what happen in her dream. She was unaware of her dream guy coming out from the flower shop and entering his car.

When he pass right by her. She noticed a truck heading straight to her. It was speeding so fast, she didn't have time to move. Their we're crashing noise and people screaming, the bike wheel roll down the hill and landed near The flower shop. Parth turn slightly, but continued when he saw the green light again.

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Well written. Waiting for the next part.
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Part 1


When parth arrives home the whole family congratulate him on his business deal. Indu feeds him, while dadaji gave him a hug. He says parth have made him the happiest person in the world. He said he knew he had it in him, and all their effort was worth it.

Parth smile " I was away for too long, and even home sick, but you all supported me and encourage me to not give up."

Dadi says " it wasn't just us, your fiancee help too"

Parth turn and search for shovori. " where is she?"

Dadi points up the stairs and parth excusing himself quickly ran upstairs. He calls for shovori, making her panic. She quickly tries to decide if she should change clothes or not.

" shovori?"

" parth!" She says blushing

Parth enters and close the door. " you didn't come to welcome me, why" he says

" I was trying to look perfect"

Parth seeing the clothes on the bed laughs " you know I don't care how you look, you will always look beautiful to me"

Shovori shly says " even with a scar?"

" I will love you just the same"

They both smile at one another, Parth suddenly remember the flower behind his back. " here this is for you?"

" Parth these are beautiful"

" I know these are your favorite, so I had to get it. "

Shovori touched, hugs him. Parth hugs back and puts his Chin on her head. " we shouldn't do this"

" yeah, but I miss you"

Parth holding her says " three more days until our wedding than I won't have to call you my fianc."

" it will break many girls heart, seeing you unavailable anymore."

" your right, I will miss the single life. Maybe I should rethink about it" he jokes

Shovori pouts " you can't, and I won't let you"

Parth chuckles when he felt her tightened her hug. " OK... I understand "

Shovori was about to say something when her phone rings. Parth raise a brow " who is it?"

" the hospital, hold on a sec Parth" Shovori moving away answers the phone. She had so many expression on her face. When done, she hung up. Parth asks what happen and she fill him in. Parth tells her to go ahead.

" are you sure, you just came back"

" Shovori I would never make you choose saving someone life over me. Go ahead, I will explain to dadaji"

Shovori hugs Parth " I love you so much" she says

" I love you too"

Meanwhile, the hospital was extremely busy. Nurses and doctors running around the place. Turns out it wasn't just Teni that was in that accident, Many others as well. When Shovori entered, she could hear people crying and shouting for their loved ones.

When she saw a man, half burnt. she almost throw up. " Shovori, I'm glad your here" " we could use the extra hand"

" what happen here"

" two big trucks caused an accident today. Injuring 20 people. "

"20?"

The male doctor nod " five people died from it, while the remaining fifteen are struggling for their life."

" this is terrible"

" we need you to attend to a patient name Teni. She was mainly affected , the crash kind of damage a part of her brain, And Face. She also has a twisted leg. so She will need to undergo surgery."

" poor thing, I will do what I can"

The next day, teni was covered with bandages. She couldn't really move her body or open her eyes. Its like her brain wouldn't send a signal to her body. The only thing she could do was listen to people and dream.

Right now she's in her room, shared with her dream guy. He smile at her while watching her sleep. What he didn't know is, Teni wasn't sleeping. She was pretending. The man got up to leave, but Teni grab his hand " don't go"

The man laugh " I'm right here, I'm just gonna get you breakfast"

This made her let go, she got up when her stomach growl. " your hungry too, don't worry daddy is bringing us food"

Just in time, he bought her favorite dish. He watch her get so excited before digging in. " are you happy"

" very happy" she says while eating

The man laugh, finding her cute. Teni look up to say something when the world around her starts to fade.

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OMG 😲 ParNi... is it a Parth&Teni story?! 😃
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Originally posted by: NatalyMusketeer

OMG 😲 ParNi... is it a Parth&Teni story?! 😃



It is actually, but its a thriller because i love thrillers. So expect a lot of ten crazyness , its actually a challenge, but theirs nothing a cant handle.
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Originally posted by: Kanie01



It is actually, but its a thriller because i love thrillers. So expect a lot of ten crazyness , its actually a challenge, but theirs nothing a cant handle.



Okay... waiting for the next part...😛
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Wow well written. Waiting for next. Very interesting.
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Part 2

" I can't believe this happen to her"

" the doctor said she will be fine, her body just needs to recover"

Teni could hear her parents crying and her friend aman reassuring them. Shovori walks in after them, telling her not to worry, she will get better. Teni hearing her gentle voice calm down. She suddenly heard phone ringing, and Shovori answering.

She heard their whole conversation before the room went silent. It was like this for teni, dreaming Wonderful dream, waking up to her parents and listening to Shovori talk on the phone.

Sometimes she wish, she could stay in her dream world. With someone that loves her very much and vis versa. the next day arrives and Shovori, was excited for two things. Her body started functioning which means they can take her out for fresh air, And she got married.

It was great, going out and smelling something other than medicine. But teni just wish she could open her eyes to see. When she's not out, Shovori would keep her company and talk forever about her husband Parth and his good nature. How they were soul mates. Teni remember her asking if she met her soul mate would she do anything to keep him.

That question had made her think , but at the same time tired. She wish Shovori could change the subject. She sigh when shovori got a call. She told teni she will leave her and give her some space. Teni sigh with relief, even though she couldn't open her eyes yet, she was sure where she was must be breath taken.

While Teni was enjoying the fresh air, she heard a familiar voice, it was so familiar it started making her heart beat. She could hear his voice coming closer, making her nervous. " so she's not here" he says

Another nurse says " she was, but she had a call. Would you like to wait for her?"

" no, it's fine, I'm late for work. I will just give her a call later." He says smiling at her.

The nurse blush, " OK than"

Parth look one last time before sighing, Teni hearing his footstep moving away panicked. No, he can't leave, she thought " I just found him, he can't leave me" she says opening her eyes.

She didn't really take the time to realize her eyes finally opened. No, she tried wheeling her chair when she saw the side of Parth face. He was near the entrance walking away. Teni eyes widen, she tried wheeling the wheelchair faster, but she wasn't fast enough.

Her wheel ended up hitting a rock, making her fall. The nurses quickly surround her, but Teni ignored all of them and the pain she was feeling. She was just staring at the door with a smile. He's real, he's real, she thought.

Shovori came after Parth left, she saw Teni on the floor and asks why no one is helping her up. The nurses quickly apologized before picking her up.

Later on that night while Teni was sleeping. She saw her dream guy again. This time it was on their wedding night. She was dressed in a beautiful sari, waiting patiently for her now husband. while waiting a small wind blow, opening the windows.

Teni could see the full moon, big and bright. The moon shed it's light in the room, giving it a romantic glow.

her husband Who looked exactly like Parth, walk in with food. He sat down and put it on her lap. Teni confused look up " we're suppose to be romancing, but you bought food instead."

" I know how much you love to eat, so I made these myself so you will have enough energy when we consume."

Teni now eating blush " your planning to not make me walk the whole day"

Her husband smile mischievously " of course " when he said this Teni face became beated red.

" I would have thought u we're the nice guy type"

Parth seeing her done remove her tray before standing to remove his suit " I am, but when it comes to you. You I can't help myself."

Teni shy looks away while mumbling to herself. This was how her family saw her. Aman says " doctor are you sure shes getting better?"

Shovori smile " she is, this is a normal routine for her."

Teni mom says " trust me aman this is normal for us. She talks and react in her sleep all the time. "

Aman says " I wonder what she's dreaming about"

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Aman says " I wonder what she's dreaming about"... poor Aman... in fact, they are both unhappy, Teni and Aman just have no luck in love... 😔
Edited by NatalyMusketeer - 8 years ago

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