Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 4 uptd chap 27 pg 67 (6 mar '18) - Page 19

A kind request ...

fabulous update
jalal get to know about moti
awasome teasing
precap was interesting
waiting for next update
please update soon
thanks for pm

amazing
motion left only to be replaced by Abdul 🤣
poor Jalal
frustrated boyfriend 🤣

its not Jalal's fault that he came to Jo's home at night
indirectly Jo only invited him giving him necessary details..
why wouldn't a boyfriend take fullest advantage of such a situation 🤣 🤣
pizza boy, maid, bhabhi 🤣
it was fun
Jalal wasn't able to believe that moti is her bhabhi
haha
moti left them to have some romance
so sweet of her

Jalal is so wow.. ☺️
teasing Jo with all nonsense indecent thoughts
haha
finally he is rewarded with a kiss
Jiju is back
ab kya hoga ...
noor at our hero's rescue 🤣
update asap diii
❤️

Wow mind-blowing update... How much I m in love with this story now.. Only god knows... Frankly speaking.. There r two stories which I love and cherish the most.. One is njapa and other is this story... Souls entwined... I don't know y but wenever I read ur update I used to read a line twice or thrice to feel the story... And wen I do I used to see njapa's Jalal in ur Jalal.. Just my feeling... How much I m in love wid these two jalals... So cute.. Throughout the update I was continuously smiling like an idiot... God.. How much I love this.. I m in hangover now... Love u sis for presenting such a beautiful story... Living every line of ur story... Lashy di and u r my all time favourite... Plz don't make ur sis wait for long.. Update soon sis... Once again thank u sooo much for the update...

Originally posted by: swetiii

u updated
yippeee

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

fabulous update

Thanks a lot dear ...

jalal get to know about moti

Yesh he finally knows Moti's truth 😉

awasome teasing

Hahaha ...im glad u enjoyed dear ...coz after this u will have to bear rukkaiya's drama ...for two chaps atleast 😆

precap was interesting

Lol ...the most awaited one ...right 😉

waiting for next update

Will try my best to update soon dear
please update soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
motion left only to be replaced by Abdul 🤣

Bechara Jalal ...he is not getting even a free second to be with his girl and u r having fun at his expence ...not fair muski 😡😆
poor Jalal
frustrated boyfriend 🤣
Lol ...ofcourse that he is
its not Jalal's fault that he came to Jo's home at night
indirectly Jo only invited him giving him necessary details..
why wouldn't a boyfriend take fullest advantage of such a situation 🤣 🤣

I second u ...he is not at fault at all ..Jodha should have been alert right 😉 but if she had been , then we wouldnt have got to see them romancing right ...moral of the story ...jo hota hai acche ke liye hi hota hai 😆
pizza boy, maid, bhabhi 🤣

it was fun

Im so happy that u had fun reading this part ...

Jalal wasn't able to believe that moti is her bhabhi
haha

Ofcourse yaar...after all ...he had been knowing her just as Jodha's friend ...so it was really hard for him to beleive .
moti left them to have some romance
so sweet of her
Moti has always been very understanding ..hasnt she ?? 😉
Jalal is so wow.. ☺️
teasing Jo with all nonsense indecent thoughts

Sangat ka asar is all that i can say ...😆
haha
finally he is rewarded with a kiss

Yayyy ...
Jiju is back
ab kya hoga ...

Wohi hoga jo manzure author hoga 😆
noor at our hero's rescue 🤣

Umm hmmm ...lets see what all she does to help her mamu 😆
update asap diii
❤️

Fablous update Avika

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy

First of all , a very hearty welcome to Ja forum karthika ...hope u r having fun here 😊i saw u on forum many times before but never got to talk with u 😳

Wow mind-blowing update...

I never knew u r following this story ...im really surprised ..and im really happy to know this...yayyy i got a new reader .

How much I m in love with this story now.. Only god knows...

If u were a telugu girl i would have sung pawan kalyan's song 😆 anyways...im so glad to hear this dear

Frankly speaking.. There r two stories which I love and cherish the most.. One is njapa and other is this story... Souls entwined...

Ohh wait ...did u just say that ?? U like Njapa and souls ...am i really reading this ...someone needs to pinch me to gt me back on earth ...seriously ...

u really made my day with this comment dear...but on serious note ...i know this story is no where near njapa ...njapa was an epic story and and im a hug fan of it ...i know there is no comparison between the former and latter ... *sigh* ...still dont know why im feeling on cloud nine reading ur comment 😳

I don't know y but wenever I read ur update I used to read a line twice or thrice to feel the story... And wen I do I used to see njapa's Jalal in ur Jalal.. Just my feeling...

Like i said above ...im myself a big fan of njapa which is still fresh in my mind ...thus i wont wonder if u find similarities between the two Jalal's 😆 and to tell u the truth ...this is like a huge compliment for me...do i really deserve this ?

How much I m in love wid these two jalals... So cute..

Hehehe, i guess..u didnt read my other story "ek vivaah aisa bhi " ...if u had then u would have added him too in ur list ..trust me 😉

Throughout the update I was continuously smiling like an idiot... God.. How much I love this.. I m in hangover now...

Aww ...how sweet yaar

Love u sis for presenting such a beautiful story...

Love u too dear 🤗

Living every line of ur story...

Lashy di and u r my all time favourite...

Now im sure im in heaven ...me blushing ☺️

Plz don't make ur sis wait for long.. Update soon sis...

Will try my level best to update soon yaar ...but cant promise ...im actually a little busy these days that i hardly get time for IF ...but whenever i get time i will try to update asap

Once again thank u sooo much for the update...

Originally posted by: duhasaad

Fablous update Avika

Thanks a lot duha , happy fo hear that u liked the update dear .

first jalal and Jodha meeting on the store room where Moti keep on searching for Jodha, Jalal hurt Jodha a little by calling Moti a lizard unknowing she is Jodha sister in law,

Dont u think he did a huge mistake here ? Calling his girlfriend'a bhabhi lizard ...😆

Jalal left and Moti started teasing her so sweet, and here came the boy friend again came to the house, this scene was just so funny specially when Moti pulled his leg and both Moti and Jodha started to tease him,

Im glad u found this scene funny and enjoyed reading it ...thats a big acheivement for me 😊

Moti is such an understanding girl she left them alone,

She has always been since the beginning ..haina 😉

Jalal is so naughty and Jodha is so shy

just loved this update

So happy to know this dear

continue soon Avika waiting