El Secreto (One Shot)

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Extremely well written. Masterpiece. Hats off. Loved it to the core.

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@nRiya

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Damn!!! this piece of work is brilliant⭐️. I know this is OS but really hope you'll continue this story further because I wanna know how they're going to play their cards & how neil bring back Avni Aysha Haidar😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hi,

I wasn't logged in when I read this earlier and gal (?) u were one of the reasons I logged in so I could comment on this lovely piece of fiction I read today!

I loved how the words flowed allowing me a seamless imagination of the scene being described. Excellent writing! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and hope u continue it into a series because the premise u created looks really promising and intriguing to say the least!

-Luv Niki

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asyaanu

@asyaanu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Ahhh... I cant evn tell u how good this is😊

u take the readers to another world... I am just waiting for ur write ups dear...

Pls do write more

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

oohh this was awesome👏
loved the underlying passion☺️
thank you for taking time out to entertain us with your wonderful stories😃
please write more
take care