Ishqbaaaz SS : MIL JATE HAI JO BANE,EK DUJE KE VAASTE (Chap 7 updated)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello my lovely Ishqbaaaz fandom. I am , well, you can say unknown.

I have written a Short Story about Ishqbaaaz. It will be of few chapters only. 😊

It's my first attempt of writting a SS. Hope u all enjoy it.😳😳

Please give me your reviews on it.

Love u all :*


CHAPTER 1 :


(Shivaay's perspective)

SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI is this true that you broke with your GF Tia Kapoor? Mr. Shivaay can you please tell us what is the reason? Shivaay sir we heard Ms. Tia broke with you because of your arrogant nature,is that true?

All this questions started suffocating me. I felt like running ,but i couldn't . What I feared the most was here. The questions about my realtionships. About my breakups.

"Bhaiyan???Bhaiyan?? "

Suddenly I hear a voice and I come out of my hazardous thoughts.

I opened my eyes and all i could feel was the crazy disco lights flashing around and making me blind.

Cursing the lights, I looked around and realized where I was. The ROYAL CLUB, with the drink. I didn't even realize how much drinks I had.

"Bhaiyan? kaha kho gaye the aap?".

I looked at my duffer oberoi, the only one in the house who can even make a dead body smile.

RUDRA SINGH OBEROI, the fun loving and,well, girl loving oberoi.

Ru : "Bhaiyan??" He pouted.

I could not control my laughter looking at my cute brother and started laughing. He looked relaxed seeing me happy. My duffer just loves me so much. He can't see his Shivaay Bhaiyan in pain. I smiled at him and before he starts any drama I answered,

"I am fine Rudra". I looked behind him and saw few girls staring at him in naughty way ,"And I can see you are fine too." Rudra blushed in his typical Rudra style and said "Iss baar ek nahi ,do nahi, teen phasi hai bhaiyan"

I almost choked down my drink and looked at him in utter shock giving him How-Are-You-Able-To-Do-Such-Things look.

He then gave me the Ye-Mere-Baiye-Hath-Ka-Khel-Hai look in return. All i could do was look at him in disbelief . His "GIRLFRIENDS started calling him and so he departed back to his 3 temporary GF.

The talented oberoi, I said to myself . He is most talented when it comes to handling girls. I should take some tips from him. Anyways, this was not the first time I was lost in thoughts. Thoughts about Tia , my almost 6th or 7th GF, who left me. I lost the count now.

I sighed thinking about all breakups and looked at my crazy little bro.

Again brushing off my heart breaking thoughts I start searching for Omkara. My artistic brother. Well, not today atleast, as it's his bachelor party. My little brother Omkara is going to be married tomorrow with the love of his life Ishana. I remember him always being the shy and introvert one. It was a shock for everyone when we got to know that he has a girlfriend. Rudra did such drama after knowing his brother was going to be a paraya dhan soon. Laughing at the thoughts of it I continued looking for the groom-to-be, the OMKARA SINGH OBEROI.

I spotted him at the corner talking on phone with someone. Looking at his face it became obvious he was speaking to Ishana. The blush on his face totally different today.

When i think about them I wonder how can two people love each other so much. I never had a true love experience. Well, ya, thanks to my behaviour. But I am SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI. People should change according to me. Why should I change my attitude for people.

Brushing away my thoughts I told myself to concentrate on my brother's wedding. I stood up, as I didn't want to get too much drunk.

I started walking towards the dance floor to refresh myself from all weird thoughts that keep playing on my mind. Suddenly I bumped to a girl, we both got tripped a little. I saw the girl falling, before i knew anything i was holding her. She too was holding onto my shirt tight, real tight, like she knew I was the only one who could have saved her . She opened her eyes. And I didn't realize when I got lost into her eyes. HER EYES . HER INNOCENT EYES.

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Chapter 2 : page 1

Chapter 3 : page 3

Chapter 4 : page 4

Chapter 5 : page 4

Chapter 6 : page 5

Chapter 7 : page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: water9786

Amazing start dear..

Continue soon...
Waiting

Thank You so much. I will post chapter 2 soon. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivika123

Thank You so much. I will post chapter 2 soon. 😊

Your welcome dear
Waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome start
it seems so interesting
plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2
(Annika,s perspective)

What's the point of doing something you don't like? I asked myself. What's the point of working like a clock? Why do I have to work Lord? Why?

Ok! Ok! Annika stop doing your melodrama.
This lines are not meant for you, the middle class girl.
Brushing away this 2Rs. thoughts i start packing my stuff.
Phew!! My boss finally decided to leave her staff early and give a day off too.
Ek par ek Muft!! Muft!! Muft!! I said mimicking the ad I saw yesterday and started laughing at my own silly joke.
Well, boss was so meherbaan at us only because she was getting married tomorrow. She also gave us the invitation of her Royal Wedding.
The Oberois and The Mehtas.
This wedding is lately the talk of the whole country.
Who would not love to attend a Royal Wedding.
Waise, Love bhi kya ajeb chez hai.
Who would have thought that our strict Boss could ever fall in love with the most humble man on the world. Omkara!!
Anyways, what would I know about this type of love? The only love I have in my life are my sisters.
And for now, the only thing I am Excited about is going home and meeting them.

Wandering in my own thoughts, I took a bus to my home.
Same routine.
PUFFT! Indeed a tiring day.
Looking outside my window seat (lucky day I got a seat atleast) I started thinking about my sisters.
My first sister, Gauri, the confident one. She is never afraid of anyone . I remember her patent dialogue "Ek jhaap me deewar pe satt jayibe". Don't know from where did learn such language, but it's cute.
Today it's her birthday. Her 24th birthday. And the only thing she was cribbing about was going to a club with her sisters. How can I denay the only wish of my sister, after all she gave me the cutest pout ever for one yes.

Thinking of cute, picture of my sweetiepie Saumya flashes in front of me. I smile remembering her. She is the cutest among three of us and intelligent too. Also, the only one who can eat almost everything in the world and still look as cute as a baby.

"Madam aapka stop aagaya" , the conductor's voice woke me up from my dream land.
As I reach home, I see something that left me shocked. UTTER SHOCKED.

I saw my sisters, my cutiepies , wearing the shortest dress ever made on this planet.

As soon as they saw me, they came running towards me and hugged me tight.
Finally coming out from that literally breathe taking hug, I stared at them in anger. And obviously they didn't take me serious. As usual.
Saumya : "Didi!! Aap aagayi itna jaldi. Chaliye tay.. ", before saumya could complete her sentence and convince me to say yes for their dress I decided to say something "Ye kya pehna hain tumdono ne? Aise kapde kon Pehneta hai? Mene chutt kya dedi thodi tumdono toh sar pe chadhne lagi."

Gauri : "Phew!! Relax Annika di relax!! It's my birthday na. Birthday ke din sab maaf. Please please."
And here comes Gauri's cutest pout.
Before I could say anything saumya joined her.
Great! Now I can't even be angry at them.

I looked at them with Ok-But-This-Is-The-Last-Time look and smile at them.

Saumya : " Chalo di ab aap b Tayar hojao."

Saumya gave me a box of dress
I opened the box only to face my shock number 2.
My dress was shorter than I could imagine. Before I could protest, Gauri hold my hand.
Gauri : "Didi. Please! Aaj koi chu cha nai. Aaj mera birthday hai. Aaj sirf Gauri ka raaj hoga. Please "

Ok! Now I give up and wear that 2Rs dress.

As I was getting ready, I looked at the photo of our Maa Papa. I wish, they were here to celebrate chutki's birthday. They would have loved their nautanki daughters so much.
I got emotional thinking about their sudden death. But, now is not the time annika. Chalo, clean up your aansu and get ready to celebrate with your sarfire but cute sisters.

As soon as we reach the club my two crazy sisters immediately jump towards the dance floor, leaving me alone. And to catch up with them, I start walking fast on my Kill-Me-Please heels only to bump into someone strong, very strong , who BTW smelled liked a chalta fhirta daaru ki dukan. Before i could knew I tripped and next i was in his arms, his hands holding my waist tight, real tight, as if they were afraid of letting me go. I opened my eyes slowly, only to meet his eyes. HIS EYES. HIS KANJI AANKH.
Edited by shivika123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome start

it seems so interesting
plz continue soon

Thank you dear. I updated chapter 2. Do read it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Amazing update dear..
Loved Anika here.
Gauri and Saumya are too cute...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahah this is awesome 😆 Loved it. Continue soon dear 😳
A really lovely writing style...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haayee
Sab aankho ka khel hai janab...
Ese hi to pyaar hota hai
Ufff shivika
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Loved both chapters.
Waiting for next one

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