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Here is a update with a sorry, I mean sorry to keep you guys waiting😆

This update is res to arpu, dillu,JAZ, Nik, anopama, Asad, Zoya, Natalya, addirita, jerry uff jass, greyanastasia , tehs, Riddhi95, jayshreerao, chccochips, suganti, asifiqsh and to all the special readers each and very opinion maters a lot to me

A very very very very special res to my sweetu(as I promised you), Maina(here is your story IDK when I will get mine) , Somu

Hope you all enjoy this update will be eagerly waiting for your reviews

Chapter 9



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Zoya: Allah Miya! Its gonna be really tough to pacify him

Asad's room:

Asad: how can she talk like that! Incredibly Foolish girl

Next day morning

Zoya was pacing in the living room extremely nervous and Humeira was seated on the couch looking at her

Humeira: my head is spinning looking at you

Zoya nervously came and sat beside Humeira

Zoya(nervously): humi I told you everything, Asad is very angry with me in such a mood he is coming here with his family, I hope nothing goes wrong

With that took a glass from the nearby table she gulped the water in one go, well it was the fifth glass of water she drank in half an hour

Humeira: bus kije baji aapko chad jayegi

Zoya: I'm not in a mood to JOKE right now!

Humeira: ok! on a serious note don't stress yourself nothing is going to happen here as he is not going to come here

Zoya mouthed a big O hearing her

Zoya: What do mean by that! Wait! Did he call you?

Humeira: and also he gonna get married to an another girl there were rumors about them dating in past yesterday night he confirmed the news on Twitter

Zoya's world shook hearing her, she tried reasoning but then her voice didn't corporate with her, her eyes glistened she felt like dying then and there, Humeira held her shoulders and made her sit

Zoya(fumbled): you're ly...lying!

Humeira: baji, I'm soo sorry, I never knew you were this sensitive about him and nothing as such happened I just made up things

Zoya felt like she got her life back, Zoya jerked her hand fuming

Zoya(shouted): How could you do this humi! I felt like someone was choking me, you know how much I love him still you played this prank, I thought that I los...

Humeira: lost him?

Humeira: I'm sorry baji but whatever you were feeling now you made him go through yesterday and it was wrong, I know you were not fully joking you're insecure but why?

For the first time, Zoya didn't have any answer

Humeira: Baji you always say that if you deserve it you will get it then now why are you not accepting you deserve all the happiness in the world what's the problem

Zoya: I know but happiness comes with a price tag and I'm scared I won't be able to pay back the price

Asad: happiness comes with a price tag, not love and if your love is with you, it doesn't matter if there is happiness because love conquers it all

They turned towards the source of voice which came from the entrance

Humeira smiled seeing Asad and his family standing there well they arrived when Humeira was talking about Asad's so-called dating rumor, he was extremely angry on Zoya for talking like that but shock overpowered his anger hearing Humeira's talk Asad was wondering when he twitted something like that when he heard rest of their talk and couldn't control himself when he heard Zoya's fear and take on happiness, Dilshad was happy seeing how much Zoya loves Asad and she was worried for nothing, Najma and Ayaan also admired them but Ayaan was extremely impressed by Humeira the way she was handling Zoya, Zoya was just smiling hearing Asad she felt like she was again falling in love with him,

Humeira shook Zoya by her shoulder to bring her out of the dreamland and went towards them

Humeira: please come in!

She called out for Gaffur and Razia, Gaffur and Razia came to the living room hearing Humeira

Humeira: abbu look Asad jij...Asad ji and his family

Gaffur was shocked seeing AAK himself standing there, he immediately greeted them happily and all were sitting on the couch expect for Zoya and Humeira who standing beside Gaffur one more person was awestruck seeing the occurring that's none other than Razia here she was expecting some poor construction worker and there stood the multi-billionaire

Dilshad noticed Razia standing lost

Dilshad (to Razia): why are standing please sit down

Razia: ji nahi thik hai I will bring tea for you all

Dilshad: no need it's ok

Gaffur: not ok at all chai toh peene padegi Dilshad ji please

Dilshad: thik hai bhaisaab aap itna bol rahe ho tho

Razia smiled and was above to go to kitchen when Zoya stopped her

Zoya: ammi you sit I will bring tea

With that, she rushed towards kitchen

Humeira: I will go and help her

Razia(sarcastically): that's needed go

Asad and Gaffur sensed her sarcasm Gaffur ignored it, Asad fumed at it but immediately changed his expression everyone was there and he did not want to create a scene because that's the last thing Zoya would want

Zoya thinking, " Allah Miya! What's wrong with him, since the time he has entered he didn't say a word is he really here to ask my hand for marriage because he doesn't seem to, Allah Miya you know he is emotionally challenged so please handle everything "

Here Humeira and Zoya arranged everything on tray and went back to living room where all were laughing at something

Humeira whispered, "Congratulations baji! I think your marriage got fixed"

Zoya just hidden her blush and went to them and placed the tea on the table

Najma(dramatically): Thank you bhabhijaan!

Zoya just smiled at that

Ayaan took a cup when he noticed there was black coffee too in the tray, he smirked seeing it

Ayaan: bhabhi you have made black coffee for bhai that's so sweet!

Asad smiled seeing the small blush crept her face

Zoya: vo main...Asad doesn't drink tea so I made it

Dilshad(smiled fondly): chalo aacha hai now I can stop worrying about my son

Najma(teasingly): bhabhi aapne itne pyaar se banaya hai toh utne he pyaar se bhai ko de bhi do

All of them were having a good time except for Razia who was not able to take the fact that this orphan girl will be going to such a rich and happy family

Zoya thinking "everyone is killing me with their teases, Zoya stop blushing! But what happened to this Akdu I made a black coffee for him and he is not saying a word, Ya Allah he is still angry even I can't talk to him in front of everyone"

Suddenly something clicked her mind

Zoya thinking, "Zoya you're so smart!!"

She smirked evilly which only Asad noticed though he was not talking much he was not leaving a single chance of glancing at her

Asad gulped seeing her smirk

"beware," thought Asad

Zoya took a black coffee and extended towards his direction, Asad held the cup but then she purposely made some coffee fall on his shirt

Asad immediately got up from his place wiping the stain

Asad: dammit

Zoya: I'm so sorry, I didn't know how it fell...

Asad looked at her in awe as he knew she purposely did it but before Asad or anybody could react Razia interrupted

Razia: what did you do! I should have only served (looking at others) beta I told you don't stress yourself as it would be more difficult with blindness

Zoya had forgotten about Razia in her over excitement

Zoya: ammi vo main...

But Asad interrupted her

Asad: actually it's my fault I was thinking something and cup slipped from my hand

Zoya was touched by this and was feeling more guilty for hurting him yesterday

Razia: Oh leave it! you will have to clean it beta, Humeira

Humeira immediately went to them

Humeira: baji take jiju to the washroom

Zoya: yea..yes

With that they went from there, Humeira smiled widely and secretly gave Ayaan and Najma a thumbs up and took a chair and placed it next to Najma and started their chatting

Razia thinking, "what will I do with this girl! Sometimes I wonder how come this fool came out of my womb"

Ayaan(whispering to Najma): she's is mind blowing isn't it?

Najma: bhaijaan?

Ayaan realized what he said so coughed a little and continued with the tea as all the elders were busy in discussion Najma just controlled her smile seeing Ayaan's interest in Humeira

Zoya: well he didn't like your company much did he permanently left you?

Asad (confused): who?

Zoya: your voice Asad

Asad just rolled his eyes at that lame joke

Asad: am I suppose to laugh?

Zoya: no that would be too much for me handle for a day after your romantic dialogue

With that Zoya opened the washroom door for him and they entered

Zoya: Allah Miya what's wrong with you Asad in a relationship guys are the one who pacifies and here I'm apologizing since yesterday night

Asad: well in our case I'm the sensible one

Zoya: give a break! Sensible? You are acting kiddish

Asad: and you were talking foolishly!

Zoya held both her ears and looked down

Zoya: sorry

Asad immediately held her hand putting it down and resting both his hand on her shoulders

Asad: never bow down in front of anyone

Zoya smiled widely nodding in yes, Asad opened the tap and was wiping the stain off his shirt

Zoya: freeze!

Asad(confused): what?

Zoya: don't move

Zoya held his right shoulder and traced her hand down towards his hand and resting it near his chest beside his palm

Her touch was creating havoc inside him

Asad: Zoya we will be getting married soon so don't make me loose my control

Zoya was in big O realizing his naughty thoughts

Zoya: ya Allah! you are so shameless

Zoya said trying hard not to blush

Asad(smirking): Oh common you're losing your control and expecting me to behave that's funny

Zoya: I'm just helping you!

Zoya just sighed and started wiping the stain off his shirt with her handkerchief, Asad was just looking at her with a satisfied smile, her hair flix was coming in between but was not disturbing her has it doesn't matter all she could see is darkness, Asad tucked her stands behind her ears

Zoya (fumbling): I...I think it might be done

Asad(huskily whispered in her ears): not yet!

Zoya could feel his hot breath in her earlobes

Zoya: A...sad you

Asad(enjoying her state): yes me

Zoya: you...your shirt

Asad: is disturbing you?

Zoya: haan...I mean no...we should be going

Asad took three step back

Asad(with a naughty smile): let's go then

Zoya: huh? (mumbled) and calls me a spoilsport

Asad: you said something?

Zoya: nothing!

Asad moved towards the door and Zoya sighed calming herself but instead of getting steady her heartbeat accelerated has she felt his lips on her cheek

Asad(whispered in her ears ): even I'm not a spoilsport

Saying that moved out of the bathroom with a naughty smile

Zoya: Urgghh! Zoya tu bhi na! You always fell into his trap

She touched her cheeks and small smile formed on her lips and rushed outside

Their family were discussing something when our ASYA came there

Najma: our bride and groom is here

Humeira: let's inform the love birds the news

Asad: What news?

Ayaan: ammi had a word with Maulvi Saab and guess what nikkah's date had been finalized

Saying that excited Ayaan hugged Asad

Asad and Zoya smiled hearing it both of them can't wait for that auspicious day

Humeira: it's your engagement next week and after two months nikkah I'm sooo excited!!

Najma: me too

Asad(sadly): after two months?

Dilshad: see bhaisaab he's so impatient if it would have in his hands he would have got married today itself

Humeira just coughed teasing Zoya who was just blushing by now

Gaffur: I can see that but Zoya beta when I asked about Asad yesterday you didn't say you were talking about Asad Ahmed Khan

Asad smiled knowing what was coming

Zoya(complaining tone): abbu I told you he is into construction field

Gaffur: but you didn't say it's AAK frankly speaking I was expecting a construction worker

Razia(under her breath): even me! This girl can't even give a description properly

Humeira: even I thought only my Baji can give such introduction about AAK

Khan family broke out into laughter hearing that

Zoya just pouted looking down embarrassed

Asad(teasing tone): actually Humeira AAK sounds weird so maybe your baji thought to avoid it

Gaffur: that would be strange if someone doesn't know about you beta

Asad just smiled at it enjoying the compliments just because it will be annoying Zoya

Humeira: aur nahi kya jiju whole India knows about you

Zoya thinking, "Allah Miya! What's wrong with my family yesterday I was telling him abbu will reject him hearing this weird name and here abbu is going on with his praises"

Asad: that's sweet of you Humeira but there many people who find it strange

Zoya(annoyed): stop taking advantage of the situation Asad

Asad: Excuse me you are the one who called me weird and almost made me a construction worker

Zoya: for the last time it was not construction worker it was construction field and architect comes under construction field and you're an architect aren't you?

Asad: great now you have doubt on my architectural skills also! Ladies minds are full of doubts

Zoya: Allah Miya! When did I doubt you Judgmental Ahmed Khan

Asad: long list zo

Dilshad: stop it!

All were just looking back to Zoya and Asad seeing their cute fight looking at the never ending process Dilshad finally had to interrupt

Dilshad: Ya Allah! Ab tak toh sagai bhi nahi hui hai aur lad aise rahe ho jaise nikkah hokar arsa beeth gaya ho

Najma(giggling): sacchi ammi they are made for each other

Dilshad: vo toh hai

Dilshad came towards Zoya and took out the beautiful diamond studded bangles from her purse and put it on Zoya's hand

Zoya(awkwardly): phuphi ye...

Dilshad: Shhh (smiled holding her hand) now I can see the real beauty of this bangles. Zoya this bangles were given to me by my mother in law during my nikkah it's our family tradition to pass it on to the eldest daughter in law of the family and now it belongs to you

Razia just gulped seeing the expensive diamond studded bangles adorning in Zoya's hand she fumed in jealousy she would have been the happiest lady alive if that hand would be of Humeira's but it's in Zoya's destiny

Razia thinking "I have tolerated enough now water is going over the head I will have to do something"

Zoya(smiling): Thank you phuphi

Dilshad(sternly) : phuphi? You have lost the right to call me that! Mai tumhare phuphi nahi hu!

Smile faded away from Zoya's face hearing that even Asad looked at his ammi worried

Dilshad(cupping her face): ammi bulane ki aadat daal do

Zoya's eyes glistened hearing that

Zoya smiled widely through her tears

Zoya: ammi

Dilshad hugged her hearing that, Zoya hugged her back tightly after years she was experiencing motherly love she can't thank her almighty enough

All just smiled adoringly at them, Asad was the happiest seeing Zoya's bonding with his ammi, Gaffur was equally happy and relieved his princess will be in safe hands, He silently thanked Almighty for giving her the happiness and love she deserved and craved for all these years

Dilshad coming out of the hug wiped her tears

Dilshad: main apne bacho ko rote hue nahi dekh sakti and anybody will make you cry I will make their life hell(teasing tone) I hope you're getting the hints Mr. AAK

Asad: ji ammi

Zoya giggled hearing it

Razia thinking, "enjoying this happiness in your life Zoya because I promise you it just for a day I won't let you take the happiness which my daughter deserve"

Dilshad: ok we will take a leave, bhaisaab and Razia bi we are a family now so don't worry about anything all the functions we will handle together

Razia(sugar coated voice): Yeah sure

With that they left from there happily, Ayaan sat in the passenger seat and Asad opened the back door of the car for Dilshad and Najma they entered inside followed by Asad but before entering he glanced back at her house and there stood his angel in the window waving at him as expected he smiled and waved back at her and entered the car, Zoya went from there after hearing the sound of the zooming out engine with a smile

Humeira came to her

Humeira (teasing tone): now I'm getting whom you were waving at after our inauguration ceremony

Zoya: shut up humi

She rushed outside to save herself from further teasing

Humeira: baji wait!

Humeira followed her giggling

Precap:

Accident!

That's it let me know your valuable reviews :)

Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago
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Res..
Mine,
Soumya,
Shweta
and all the lovely readers of this lovely story!

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First of all Sorry for not being able update your story!!

But I am not able to write the chap. properly.

So that is why I am giving a break to it for some days!!

I am SOOO SORRY for that!!😭

But I am working on the update only and it is written a little only and that is worst also!!


Now coming to your update:

As usual no need for me to say IT WAS WONDERFUL!!

You always nail whatever you right!! Kindly give me some classes also!!

Zoya what has she done!!

Now she is right it is going to be tough to pacify Asad!!

Humaira!❤️ I love this Humaira!! "Bas kije baji apko char jayegi!! 🤣

She is so lovely!!😆

But I loved the way she made Zoya understand!

Asad as always a perfect entry!!

Well he is right!! For the first time!!😆

Well looks like the Ayaan is going to fall for Humaira!

Glad that Dilshad is completely fine with it!!😊

So AAK and his impact is on!!

Razia deserves it!! I am sooo happy to see gaffur's reaction!!!

Dilshad- Gaffur convo. about tea. The typical one of course!

Razia is tooo much I hate her!

Zoya is zoya! She can't stop her mind!! Can she??

Ayaan and Najma's teasing was cute!!

Asad is a nice face reader!!!

"BEWARE" That is something I love!!

Asad I am loving his character already!!

Ah there romance was soo nice!! Do write more scenes like this!! I love them!!

Razia she is your daughter only! But the difference is she uses her mind in good deeds unlike you who is always plotting against others!!

Asad is too much excited for the marriage!! I can imagine his face while saying "TWO MONTHS!!"😆

Well their banter!! No need to tell it was soo cute!!

I love everyone except that witch Razia!

Razia is plotting something dangerous!! I am afraid now!!

So the Khan family left!!

precap!!🥺

Accident??

Who's?? How?? is it Khan family?? Or someone else?

Aanchal you are a bad person!

Seriously you gave such a hectic kind of precap!!

But I loved the update!!

Update sooon!!!

I am waiting for it!

Thanks a lot for the special RES.🤗

I LOVE YOU FOR THIS AWESOME UPDATE!!🤗

Cont. soon!!

P.S:

Kindly give me some classes!! I want to write a chapter properly!! I need to have a teacher!! N who is better than you??😊





Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update
Loved it completely
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