RiKara SS - ISHQ BULAVA - EPISODE SIXTEEN Updated Pg 48

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Hola guys,🤗

Keeping it short and sweet i want to say that i bring to you a simple RiKara story. It is not and will not be something dramatic to read because i miserably fail in that genre every way possible!

Out of league as it may sound, i want to keep it uncomplicated and romantic soaked in RiKara moments!

In my story, the characterization has changed a bit. Here Gauri and Anika have grown mature together, through an experience they call life. SISTERS can be the synonym.

The family of four with an ailing father lives in America. After completing their studies they both come to Delhi with prospects of career enhancing. Giving their parents the full fledged freedom to romance in their Home-Sweet-Home, these girls has literally settled in Delhi

and now that Anika has given away her heart to Shivaay, its time for wedding bells to ring ... not in America or in Delhi but in Mumbai... the home of OBEROI'S. Alittle sad part here is that Mr. Sharma ... the doting father of these lovely girls has not recieved his medical clearance yet and so he will arrive a bit late for the wedding.

now that we have so-much-so discussed, the ultimate point is every meagre and major responsibility is on Gauri's head ...

Read on to know more about what's exactly going on


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INDEX
Episode One Pg 1
Episode Two Pg 3
Episode Three Pg 4
Episode Four Pg 7
Episode Five Pg 8
Episode Six Pg 10
Episode Seven Pg 12
Episode Eight Pg 16
Episode Nine Pg 19
Episode Ten Pg 25
Episode Eleven Pg 31
Episode Twelve Pg 34

Episode Thirteen Pg 38

Episode Fourteen Pg 41

Episode Fifteen Pg 43
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EPISODE ONE


SHUT UP YOU FOOL! These were the exact fords that registered his mind as he positioned his first foot inside the majestically decorated hall ... adorning the most royal any blue can afford ... gilded were the orchids. He could not help but concentrate on this pretty-looking miniature ... shabbily dressed in something that looked like a pale yellow kurta, a piece of cloth that was literally supposed to mop the kitchen floor and wait ... do those perfectly molded legs belong to her? What is she doing to them? ... Flaunting? What is she wearing underneath? ... Nothing? And then a closer focus made him recognize the faded denim shorts that were braving him to the rescue of her sanity ... oh you filthy freaking man! His brain began scolding him ...

He continued to observe her, stare her to be accurate. She was running around the hall like a hurricane throwing orders at every person. Whether it is the flower arrangement and the sad story of stale crippled flowers, the music system and its complicated audio jack, the caterers and their so oily food. Everyone seemed on her hit-list now & little did he realize that now he was WANTED as the firecracker was coming up to him ... her face was red ... she was tired that he was sure, hungry at the moment but all he could imagine is the smoke coming out of her ears . Oh useless smoke detectors, his common sense was practically joking.

DON'T YOU HAVE ANY WORK? She was ranting at him now! With arms folded against his chest he continued paying attention to her. Where on this earth have you been? So much of work needs to be finished here? For what do you think I am paying you young man? Standing and staring at all the admirable women out here. Every sentence of hers sounded an octave higher. His expression was calm. We need to sort things out here ... her tone dense this time. For what purpose do you think Shankarji has blessed you with such good height? I really don't think you have to go and pose for TIME magazine, do you? She was continuously chatter shouting at him now. YOU ... YOU COCONUT TREE!!! She was not going to stop, was she?

He followed her as her little feet took big steps almost stumbling at every forth step to a full-size ladder. That ladder had recently come out of a library, he could tell. FIX THE LIGHT! She pointed upwards. He noted now that if she did not care for herself now, they might need to rush her to the hospital. With absolutely no choice, he had to climb the ladder and fuss with wires of the fairy lights. Just hoping that she keeps her cool, which she was actually not able to because right now all the cucumbers in her head were being sliced. Did you have an appointment at the beauty parlor? She had again started with him ... such healthy silky hair you have, so high on maintenance they have to be! He did not look at her but was surely imagining deviled horns at this instant!

Finally, everything seemed to fall in place. Not exactly happy Gauri was satisfied with all the convoluted effort she had put in. she took a round around the place, the big plain white hall had turned out to be amazingly photogenic. With the perfect amount of silk drapery, cushioned sitting arrangement and the lingering scent of fresh roses in the air ... EVERYTHING THING WILL BE PERFECT! She promised embracing herself.

The time has come; her heart throbbed as she stepped inside the room to call her sister ... Ani... Her voice soft as caramelizing sugar. She was awestruck to see what she actually saw. Anika looked breathe takingly beautiful in her pink colored lehenga choli ... putting all her worn diamonds to shame. But there was no twinkle in her eyes, the gorgeous smile was missing. As she took Gauri's fingers into her palms ... and confessed, I miss mom and dad! Don't worry love I am going to bring them to you in less than 24 hours, Gauri re assured Anika.

The arch in her posture is perfect ... So this was the only thought in his mind as he gaped at the beauty complimenting the red Anarkali suit before knocking the door ... BHABHI he called and Anika's eyes shined brighter than a variety of constellations when she saw him. Please come in ... Anika requested as Gauri had found no time to turn trying to adjust Anika's necklace and then her bangles. Ri please meet my brother in law, Anika introduced. With a fantastic smile Gauri turned to welcome the guest for just her jaw to drop ... alarmingly drop.

Shivaay is waiting for you Bhabhi ... Omkara put forward his hand to take Anika downstairs before which Anika was enlivened by the fact that finally her Roka ceremony was about to take place ... she shook the wit out of Gauri clutching her tightly by the shoulders. Gauri remained rooted to the floor all the time.

He was not recognizable now! From the dull brown shirt and messy hair to a proper formal black sherwani suit . What an amazing makeover... Gauri thought as she tried to catch a glimpse of him from the corner of her eye. He was busy talking to some guests. How could it be? How was he able to be so different? How dare he look so bewilderingly handsome! She was cursing herself now ... from which planet of the galaxy has this specimen arrived? She was mental blabbering. Maybe VENUS conceded her innocent heart.


UPCOMING - Oh My Mata !!!

Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Ayushi 🤗
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Guys, writing something like this has taken a lot of effort from me and continuity so will solely depend on your response. I want to read your comments 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all pooru, thanks 4 writing something like this on rikara.
I actually liked Gouri's pov on Om...
Really waiting for some love soaked moments of Rikara...

& Dear please do pm also...
Otherwise I might miss these gems.



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Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

First of all pooru, thanks 4 writing something like this on rikara.

I actually liked Gouri's pov on Om...
Really waiting for some love soaked moments of Rikara...

& Dear please do pm also...
Otherwise I might miss these gems.



Thanks Shradhha 🤗
The POV and crazy misunderstanding 😆
After all she is MadRi right now
I will leave a message for sure
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A non-dramatic simple tale full of RiKaralicious moments.. Reading your intro made me jump in glee- this is exactly what I wished to read
And then reading the chapter..Awww!! It was really really sweet. Gauri calling Om "coconut tree"!! The malayalee in me feeling proud
Wonderfully written chapter yaar.. Can't wait to read more!
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Originally posted by: sreekailas

A non-dramatic simple tale full of RiKaralicious moments.. Reading your intro made me jump in glee- this is exactly what I wished to read
And then reading the chapter..Awww!! It was really really sweet. Gauri calling Om "coconut tree"!! The malayalee in me feeling proud
Wonderfully written chapter yaar.. Can't wait to read more!

Thank you from the bottom of my heart Sree .. The weirdly different way to compliment Om's height is even my favorite dialogue 😳 ... The Bengali thanks the Malyali 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288

Ha ha funny indeed😆

Thank you 😳

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