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Diya

@Sonai_02

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

This is really amazing.

Love is not what should be expressed in words but should be felt by heart.

Shravan had been writing so many diaries.

That was sooo cute !!

Waiting for Destined 😭

Love 🤗

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

A PM from u makes me happy ...😊

This was a beautiful piece & very thoughtful .. 👏

Indeed Silence is a special gift .. I'm one such person who fails terribly in expressing emotions verbally.. I could connect so well to this piece ..

It was indeed like Shravan to not verbalise his love for her,but love her intensely,but he got hurt when she judged his love .. She was also not wrong completely it indeed makes u feel nice to hear words of endearment once in a while from the person we love ..

Poor Kamal ! got hit by that heavy box .. thanks to him she got the treasure that would assure her of his love & her importance in his life; inspite of his silence ..

Bits & pieces of diary was awesome ..

& again they reunited in silence .. soulmates they are ..

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

sanjh its awesome yr..
adorable cute sweet ..everything..
beautifully written dear..
love it...❤️
thnx for pm...

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

silence is waht we need to understand in marriage...we have to understand each other with acyion more than words 😊

but also concurred with sumo sometime we need to express also, because our partner want our love to be expressed in words ❤️

both side of coin you penned very well sanjh you wrote it as a completely matured person 👏

but till now i witnessed here some kind of expressinve versions of shravan but girl you brought him in new avtar a silent shravan who wants sumo can decipher his silence...perfect

journey of OS from sadness to happiness was amazing 👏

keep writing such emotional stuffs you are very good in this 👍🏼

ab destined bhi update kar do 😉

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Firse! Abhi yeh unres kab hoga! 😭

Haila...meiny yahan bhi res shora hai...😲😕😕

Mein meri short term memory loss aur meri later latefee...🤢

SORRIIEEE!!!

Abhi karti hon unress!

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Sunain

Haila...meiny yahan bhi res shora hai...😲😕😕
Mein meri short term memory loss aur meri later latefee...🤢
SORRIIEEE!!!

Abhi karti hon unress!

Lo unressed at 3😳

Finally!😛

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Sunain
Res😳
***
Unress

Cuddles!!!🤗🤗🤗

kya kabhi tumhein kissi ny bataya tht you are a complete Gem...❤️...nhi tu jaan lo...You are such a wonderful soul...i really really love you🤗...Meri sweety pie...choco cupcake..love you...aj bara pyaar aa rha hai tum par😳...🤗...mein us waqt tak hugs karti rahon gi jab tak tum suffocation k mary mjhy khud nhi dur phek deti😛😆

Dramaqueen banti jaa rahi hai tu haan! Woh bhi bahut badi! 😆

Okay..baba..now coming to ur update...

Tumny tu mjhy bilkul khamosh hi kar dea😕😆
Srsly...was a spell binding one!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Awww thank you.. 🤗

As my signature says...A meaningful silence is better than a meaningless word...so true!
You penned the whole concept of silence wonderfully and the elements u used in ur OS...were Outstanding!👏
Dil jeet lea tum nay..sahi maino mein🤗

Tu wakai talent ka pitara hai...nazar na lagay meri chori ko*dramatically gesturing*...😆

(Rolling eyes)

Wakai..khamoshiyan alfaaz hain...😳

Its true sometimes people wants an assurance a voiced out one not only an expressing one...just for their pleasure and satisfaction and same case was with Suman...and Shravan all hesitant to do so...all becoz all thoz years back he has been holding it back and kept on assuring himself tht all is well tu by now uska unconscious sense bhi yeh sahi smjhta hai and he dosent feel comfortable confessing his love...but express kar sakta..maybe he might be afraid of losing her again...or still scared of her rejection though its impossible but his unconscious isnt helping him.

Awwh..poor kamal ji...sar par bump...dent to paka aya ho ga😛😆

OMG!!😲...eleven diaries...⭐️...each for an year!...mast idea👏
this whole part and thoz dairies context were amazing!👏
you penned his agony his torment his predicament really really brilliantly!👏👏👏

ohh..Suman uski shirt ka kona pakar k soti hai......❤️

And the ending was super duper cute!
Loved it to core!❤️

Really u penned it hell stupendously!👏👏

Love you meri cuddles🤗

Again a bada wala thank you bae!

Cheers!
Lalchi❤️

👍🏼 Finally tune unres kara! Hufff! So waiting for you to unress!