23rdjan08 D-V in get ups of Shramiks

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Dharam-Veer broke the Murti,Maharaj is Angry
Jaivardhan: Maharaj ye kya kar diya dharam ne
Veer: Tum to gaye
Dharam:Tum bhi

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in darbar Dharam-Veer standing infront of maharaj all other's standing around them
Dharam:Pitajii
Maharaj: Bas aaj to had ho gayi App kab bade honge dharam
Dharam veer look at each other
Maharaj: Hum yaha pooja me aapka intejaar kar rahe the aur aap bahar daud laga rahe the
again dharam veer look at each other
Veer: Maharaj isme dharam ki koi galti nahi,isse humne daud lagane ke liye kaha tha
dharm look at veer
Mahraj: Veer aap kab tak dharam ki galtiyaan chupate rahenge aap humaari behen ke bete hain isliye hume aapse koi shikayat nahi
Veer: Par maharaj
Maharaj: Nahi veer (turning towards dharam) Dharam aap kab apni jimmedariyon ko samjhenge do saalon me aap ko iss arya rajya ke singhasan par baithana hain par aap to apni jimmedariyaan nibhana to door aap to unse door jaa rahe hain Aap iss singhasn par baithane ke kya Aap to ek Aryavrat kehene ke bhi layak nahi hain
All shocked by this statement fo majharaj DV look at each other
Dharam leaves from there Veer also almost going to go behind him maharaj stops him
Maharaj: Jaane do use veer
Jaivardhan: Maharaj aap chintaa kyon karte hain hum murti phirse banvaa lenge
Agni: Haan maharaj ab murti tutni hi thi to tut gayi Aap bas hume saat din de dijiye hum saat din me nayi murti taiyaar karvaa denge[finally sagar's give some dialoughs to harshh]
Jaivardhan and Agni look at each other with evil smile😆
Maharaj: thik hain par tab tak tum dono {DV} mandir se door rahoge
Veer node his head saying yes
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Dharam is seating at window recalling words of his father which was said in darbar
Veer: Dharam dharam
Veer enters calling n searching dharam he saw him in window
Veer: Dharam hume tumse jaroori baat karni hain
Dharam: Par hume kisise koi baat nahi karni
Veer: Dharam
Dharam: Hume kuch der ke liye akela chod do veer
Veer: Hmm...Vo to main nahi kar sakta aur ye tum bhi jaante ho😉 Haan mana ki Veer se achha koi aur nahi hain😆 aur tum itne bhi bure nahi ho [Dharam gives smile]
Par ab wqat aa gaya hain ki sab ko pata chal jaaye ki Mera bhai veer ek Aryavardhan kehlaane ke laayak hi nahi balki iss Singhasan par baithane ke kabil sirf mera bhai Dharam hi hain aur ye baat hum abhi saabit kar denge to phir singhasan ke liye do saal rukane ki jaroorat hi nahi padegi
Dharam: par hum ye karenge kaise
Veer: Mere paas ek yojana hain
dharam veer seating on one chair
Veer: Dekho hum vo Maa ki murti chaar dino me banakar maharaj ko bataa denge ki tum kis kabil ho[both smiles]
Behind them Agni is listening all this converstion
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In room of Jaivardhan conversation between Agni and Jaivardhan
Jaivardhan: Aakhir aisi kya yojana banaayi hain veer ne ki vo chaar dino me murti banvaayega
Agni: Pata nahi pitajii
Jaivardhan: Agni tum un dono pe nazar rakho aur pata lagaao ki aakhir ye Veer karne kya vala hain
Agni: Jii pitajii, ab hum bhi chaar din me hi murti bavaayenge aur maharaj k khush kar denge
Jaivardhan[shouting]: Agni Agni Agni Kab samjho ge tum maharaj mere barso puraane dushman hain
Agni llok at him with shock
Jaivardhan: Chouk gaye main bhi aise hi chauk gaya tha jab aryavrtaton ne meri vajah mere chote bhai ko singhasan par bithaya,Lekin iss baar main aisa nahi hone doonga,Agni vaada karo ki iss baar singhasan par dharam nahi tum baithoge
Agni: Main vaada karta hoon pitajji ke iss baar singhasan par dharan nahi Agni baithega aapka Agni
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Dharam is sleeping Veer came from behind
Veer: Dharam,dharam utho dharam dharam Dharam by shouting Dharam Dharam
Dharam gets with scared and forward knife towards veer[i dn't understood raat ko knife le kar kyun sona hain]😆
Dharam: Veer tum itni raat ko humaare kamare me kya kr rahe ho
Veer:[Smiling] Dar agye naa sach tum tum dar gaye naa😆
Dharam: Veer majhak mat karo
Veer: Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itna darte ho😆
Dharam: Veer tum itni raat ko mere kamre me kya kar rahe ho
Veer: Raat going towards window and opening cloths
Veer: ye tumhe raat dikhati hain
itz a morning sunshine morning😉 dharam came near to him
Veer: Dharam agar hume chaar din me mrti banani hain to hume din raat ek karne honge
Dharam agrees with smile and node his hair
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Dharam veer going out
Dharam: Veer hume ye to bataao ki hum jaa kaha rahe hain
Veer: Chalo to sahi tumhe pata chal jaayega
Agni is asking sainiks where r dharam veer
Both heard him and hide behind piller
Dharam: Ab kya kare
Veer: Ruko
Agni leaves from there to another side
Dharam veer are abouth to go outside agin agni came and both dv hide outside of window
Agni[speaking to himself]: aakhir ye dono subhah subhah gaye kaha
Veer: Vo to tumhe kabhi pata nahi chalega😆
Agni: aakhir ye dono jaa kaha sakte hain
Veer: Dhundhte rahoge😆
Agni: Kuch bhi ho jaaye main in dono ka pata laga ke rahoonga
Veer: Koshish karke dekha lo😆
Agni leaves Dhamar tells him by nodding his head tht agni gone from there
Veer: chalo
while going into mahal sainiks standing below saw dv and thinks tht they are thiefs😆
Both dv jumps and run here n der der n here from this house to another and jump from one house's window and rescude from sainiks
Dharam is holding his belt of stumak veer notice tht
Veer: itni jaldi thak gaye
Dharam: haan tum battao, vaise hum yaha kar kya rahe hain
Veer: aao
now both are in shramiks area where they r working both hide behind one wall
Dharam: Ab hume kya karna hain
Veer: Hume inke saath reh kar Chaar dino me murti banaani hain
Dharam: Par kaise
meanwhile some boy n girl talking on another side of wall Veer is listening them
Boy: ye sab uss dharam aur veer ki vajah se hua hain bas ek baar vo dono mil jaaye
Dharam: Ab hum inke saath kam to kya inke saamne bhi nahi jaa sakte😆
Girl[who is veers sister]: Aisa mat kaho Tum dekhana ek din koi aisa jaroor aayega jo hume is kaam se ajhaad karvaayega
Boy: Phichale 15 saalon se tum yahi keh rahi hon pata nahi vo hain bhi yaa nahi
Girl[by angry voice]: Aisa mat kaho vo hain aur vo jaroor aayega
Boy: Vaise ghoose me tum aur bhi sunder dhikhati hon
Veer smiles😳
Suddenly Jaivardhan enters Veer n Dharam listening him
Jaivardhan: Suno tum sabko phir se murti banaani hain aur iss baar tumhaare pass sirf chaar din hain😡
DV shocked
Jaivardhan: Aaaj aur abhi se kaam shuru karo aur jab tak kaam khatam nahi ho jaata kisi ko bhi paani nahi milega😡 chalo shuru karo kaam ab tumhe din raat ek karna hain
and he leaves
Dharam: Ab hum kya karenge
Veer: Mere paas ek aur yojana hain😆
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Next scene DV wearing Shramiks clothes and standing in mud [knew it sagar's philosophy]😆
Dharam:to ye hain tumhaari yojana
Veer: Smiles Haan kyun achhi lagi😉 Ab hume in shramikon ko sajhana hoga
Dharam: Inhe kya samjhana sayz it with attitude of ignorence Veer gives angry look😕
In other direction one baba fall down saying pani pani Veer feels bad tht baba's son saying pitaajii uthiye pitaaji vo is taraf aa rahe hain😡 [can't he came and give water to his father]
Veer is shocked with tht mans statement One sainik saw tht old man
Sainik: e budhhe uth chal kaam kar
Veer is angry Dharam giving strenge looks😕
Veer's sister came and Giving water to old man
Veer smiles😳
Suddenly someone hit on her hand he's ofcourse JV😡
Jaivardhan: kaha tha naa kam mat rokana,chal jaa iss baar tujhe maaf kar diya eking agali baar aisi galti ki to tujhe bhi tere baap ki tarah humesha ke liye ajaad kar doonga
Veer in strenge wat he's talking Veer's sis leaves
jv starts heating tht old man by chabbok😡
Jaivardha: Kaam nahi karega paani chahiye kya tujhe
tht old mans son is crying pitaaji utho
Veer is so angry
old man fall down near veer n dharam Jv almost to heat old man Veer catch tht chabook Flashback fo his father how he also catch it in same way👏
Dharam shocked Veer turns back
all shocked
Jaivardhan: Veer tum
----End of Third Epi----

I$hu😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks alot great update 😊
Edited by siya-akhtar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot ishu.. the update is wonderful 👏 👏
Edited by lakshmim_84 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thx laks 😆 😆 But not perfect s you do
yaa i know u have practice of this with PRC updates
ab to mujhe bhi aadat daalni padegi 😆

Well welcome siya n laks 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwww...excellent job... 👏 ...thnxxx a lot ishu.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Innocent Ishita

Thx laks 😆 😆 But not perfect s you do
yaa i know u have practice of this with PRC updates
ab to mujhe bhi aadat daalni padegi 😆

Well welcome siya n laks 😃

😃thats true.. now as soon as they say the dialogue.. i write it in my book... my writing speed has increased soo much.. thanks to the updates😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lakshmim_84

😃thats true.. now as soon as they say the dialogue.. i write it in my book... my writing speed has increased soo much.. thanks to the updates😆

huh u wrote them in book Man!! i just recall them while writing😆😆 so ma memory become stronge and writing speed increase on pc not in book
ma handwritting is so small tht after some dayz i also didn't get tht wat i wrote😆...but after some time i get it But ma teachers of skul used to have big whole wala specks to chck ma papers😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 update ishu 👏 👏 ....thank u
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the lovely update 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Welcome Sam 😃 Thx for comments 😛

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