AnShi OS- Denial (Shivaay's Emotional Turmoil) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Goodnesss...this is a gem.

Your style of writing is so enthralling and enrapturing that I got way carried away with the flow and didn't even notice that it ended.

I love this, seriously I do!



Hey Niki!

Thank you for taking the time to review and I am so glad that you enjoyed reading this. 😃 Hopefully the future chapters will turn out just as entertaining for you. 😛


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

It was simply fantastic.



Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
I loved it. So cute ... I love how Jhanvi realises Shivaay is talking about himself ... ❤️ Also it was so cute to read of Shivaay's denial and the way he was projecting his feeling on Annika.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey i couldnt stop smiling... i was smiling nd smiling till the end...oh my god!! A possessive Shivaay.. 😊
The stares the smiles the hair in the mouth... this all was soo damn good..my sis asked whether iam a fool to laugh to myself...
Loved this its the best OS ive read so far... pls continue...
This is for u🤗
Shivaay's...🥺 heart broke thinking of Om nd Anika...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.
Loved Janvi's character here. The show has not yet shown her character well. It's either sad or fighting. But u hv done a great job.
Badi Maa , a package of both OM nd Rudra, bechara Shivaay kaha phas gaya.
Loved the mother son convo nd OM's confusion.

Will surely read ur SS now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic one shot
Shivaye baadi ma is smart and awesome. Love her brilliant way to make shivaye accept his feelings for anima.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am following the whole story as well but stopped to comment here because I love your writing! It was a delight to reread this section...Shivay in denial is just too precious! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Hey! 😊
Can totally imagine Jhanvi puling legs of Shivay n Shivay in bheegi billi n angry billi mode when Jhanvi proposed Anika's name as Om's prospective wife, just to pull Shivay's legs!! 😛 I don't know why, but I really love this woman named JHANVI n adore her so much!!! Maybe she couldn't be called best mother (certainly best than that evil Pinky!!) coz of her own problems due to Shwetlana n Tej, but still I love the mother inside her n hopelessly wish that Shivay n Anika would have been so lucky if they got Jhanvi as their mon n MIL respectively! I really love the mom-in-law side of her, totally contrast to Pinky's character! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this OS. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

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