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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
'so you called her' he closed his lap finally confirming her tickets.
'shivay, I am still not sure...'
'sure about what Anika... I can't let my brother suffer...' The business man, tough competitor in him never want to fail for his brothers...
'shivay... I am just saying that... Leave it... I am with you... I too want om back to his life...' She lay down the bed indicating that the conversation is over... She know the sleep is deprived for her until she meet her chutki again...
6 years is a long gap...
6 years ago...
'this marriage is not going to happened ' omkara Singh oberoi screamed his lungs out...
'she is characterless ' he pointed towards the young lady standing the mandap all clad in her bridal dress...
Omkara looked at her expecting she will retreat back to him... Clear herself... But no this time she choose to stay silent...
'bua ma... Mom... I don't want this marriage... She is not someone you all think... I know her truth...'
He said all the furry in his eyes...
'she is just like Svetlana.version no 2...'
Before he say the next word, a tight slap landed on his face...
'om ,just shut up your mouth..'
'shivay...'
'enough of your bramblings... I heard so much... Not any more...'
'shivay... What I said is the truth...'
'no more words om... If you don't want this marriage... It's ok... But not a word about her...' He looked down not because of guilty but what just happened is not right...
'gauri..., I am very much sorry what my brother done... Forgive him for me gauri...'
' and I think its over now... Anyway this marriage is not going to happened... But i thought to give you a marriage gift... I don't want it to go waste...' She looked at him.she want to cry...but she is not, tears are long forgotten... Still she don't know why? For what she want to be in this relation...
'anika... This is your sister... Your long lost sister... Your chutki...' He said keeping her hand in anika's .the both sister looked at him surprisingly...
'shivay... '
'truth can't be hidden for so long... My personal detectives find out apparently...' He said the matter of fact...
They hugged each other... Anika got her sister back...
'i thought i lost you forever chutki...' She hugged her once more for herself make sure she was real...
'and gauri... Pack your things you are leaving from here...' His ordeal voice make them apart...
'shivay... '
'anika... Help her to pack... We will talk later...'
'gauri... I think it's better for you...' He looked at om... Who standing there without knowing what is exactly happening there...
Gauri nodded her head and walked along with Anika... Its time to walk away from him...
Within few minutes the sisters came back ...
Gauri walked up to om... Before going she want to speak...
'omkara ji... Forgive me... I shouldn't come back to here when you called me... It was my grave mistake to worship you... You called me characterless... You don't have any rights to judge me... You don't know me... And you didn't stand in my shoes then how you judge me... Bye... '
She looked at Anika... Her new relations.. Something she thought she never have... She lost her god but gained so much better than that...
'gauri ... Just wipe out the sindooor... You don't need that now...'
'no bhayia..., this is my vishwas, my belief no one can change that... Even the god himself...'
Her words cut into his heart like a sword... And it starts to bleed. Om felt something wetting his eyes... He didn't understand it was his tears until he wipe it...
She hugged her sister... Said the last good byes to everyone... All this while everyone is nice to her...
She walked down with her brother in law, the new found relation... For a new journey...
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After that day no one speak about gauri... That name is forbidden in OM... Expect Anika and shivay... For Anika she is not gauri its only chutki... Her chutki... She smiled at her thoughts... How much she changed after that day... Yet she is same as before...
She is thankful to shivay... Letting her continue her education... She slowly closed her eyes praying for her sister...
Shivay looked at his wife sleeping adorning a sweet smile on her lips... He knows she is thinking about her sister... Now his also...
That day was horrible for all of us... He remembered those days just like yesterday...
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Flashback
'om..., I need to talk...' He sat down on the couch handing over his personal file to him...
'open it...' He ordered...
'what's this shivay..?' He looked at it confusedly...
'the truth about gauri...' Shivay said without any emotions...
'what more truth she have shivay... ?'
'the truth that she is innocent about thakurian's death... The truth is not what you saw in her... The truth is that gauri is trapped in a marriage not only to him but also to his brothers... The truth is that she disguised as chulbul only because for her mother... That too a mother who didn't give birth to her... The truth is that her intentions was always pure just to make sure that you are safe...' He take a breath to compose himself... His brother is at fault... He failed to see the truth...
'how you know? ' it was a mere whisper...
'do you think I will let you marry some random girl... I enquired about her through my personal connections... And that's how I came across the truth that she is chutki...'
He saw his little brother hide his face in his palms... He can't blame his brother completely... The circumstances never let him believe the truth...
'om...' He called...
' now I feel I done the right thing... Shivay..'
'what you mean...? ' he asked exasperated...
'calling off the wedding... She deserves someone better than me...'
'om...' That was a mere whisper... His brother considering himself as unvalued...
'yes shivay... I kept her on the same light where I kept Svetlana... I threw her self respect into the mud... Shivay am I a sadist...'
'Absolutely no... Om just forget about gauri... She is not in your life now... She didn't exist for you...' He patted om's back...
He nodded his head...
'i will pray for her even though I didn't believe in god... It doesn't matter, anyway she believes...'
' I slapped you...' He touched his cheeks...
'oh! I deserves it... And really you are so strong...' He said smiling... But shivay knows behind the smile there was guilt... And he knows his brother is going to sink in that guilt...
'om don't you want to know where she is? ' he asked.. He don't know what he is expecting...
'no shivay... Let her live peacefully...ask anika bhabhi to forgive me... I hurt her sister' He said and walked back to his room... The day before it was belongs to her also... Suddenly he felt empty... There was something missing in his room... His sculptures lost something that he can't point out...everywhere he felt an unknown silence...
'this sindoor is my vishwas... My belief... No one can change that... Even the god himself' her words echoed in his head...
He want to change their fate if he has the power... He remembered the girls came into his life...
Ridhima, ishana,Svetlana ,gauri...but gauri leaves her mark in his heart forever...
He desperately wants to know where is she now.. But he no..he don't deserve an answer... This was the punishment he giving to himself...


PLZ NOTE...

GUYS I AM GETTING SO LOW RESPONSE FROM HERE... IF YOU DON'T Want ME TO CONTINUE PLZ ASK ME... SILENT READERS PLZ DROP A COMMENTS... IT MEANS A LOT... I KNOW I AM NOT GOOD WRITER... STILL I WANT TO WRITE...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
On no, please don't stop ...
I want to see a happy ending...
RIKARA union.
And yes, you are good at writing yaar...
Please do continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Plz don't stop..u r an amazing writer...nd this story is totally different from the current track..love to read this...eagerly waiting for rikara confrontation after six years..I just hope they'll be happily ever after...continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
ah plz dont stop
I REALLY like your writing
and I need how gaurika relationship is gonna be when she back and their interactions with each other

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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Omkara deserved that slap
Shivaay did the right thing

When he asked Gauri to remove her Sindoor
Her Vishwas really hit Omkara
He was so wrong about her

Not after 6 years she will be back
A new Gauri will come
Everyone is excited...shivaay n Anika

Wish new interesting twists n turns await us
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Plz continue. Dear... Every story is started to be completed ... Let on repent more in front of gauri...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Please continue.
Excited to see the new avatar of Gauri after 6 years
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
This is awesome update dear I m totally loving it plz continue 👏
Kaha se low response look how many people gave good response 😆
I think u can alter title because ur ff is intense one it will catch more eyeballs like peculiarity attracts 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3
She enters the hall... Everyone is there... But her eyes searched someone else...
'chutki...' Anika ran towards her sister...
'di ' they hugged each other...
'chulbul Bhabhi... We are also here...' Rudy commented
' I know... Mr Rudy ' she talked to everyone like nothing happened years back... But only one person understand what she lost in this all years... She doesn't change a bit... Gauri kumari Sharma is same as always... Her high education never changed her taste for life...,her ideologies,her principles everything is same as before ... Jhanvi understood she is same as the one her son rejected... The sindoor in her forehead is enough for her to realize it...
She looked at the young lady with a motherly affection...
'maaji...' She hugged her...
If she ask her son once to marry her then her son never go back to his habits...
'anika... Take her inside...she need to take rest... It seems quite long journey..' Jhanvi said...
They walked upstairs till her eyes searched something precious to her...
'he is not here...' Anika said keeping her heavy bag to the corner of the room...
She looked at her sister expecting she will say something about him...
'he gone to attend an exhibition..' She turned towards gauri... The sindoor in her forehead always a sad truth... Over the years as an elder sister Anika said to her to wipe it off... Finally she give up... No one can change gauri kumari Sharma's beliefs...
Gauri walked towards Anika understanding what going on her sister's mind...she hugged her...
'Di ,everything is ok... I am here...'
'gauri... Are you over him..? ' she asked what she wanted to ask for a long...
She move from her sister and looked straight into her eyes... The realization dawned on her... Her sister changed... For outside she is same but inside she is a new one... Over the years she learned to mask her feelings...
Gauri walked towards the mirror... She looked herself in it...she wanted to laugh at her own life... She touched her forehead... Why she still doing this... She doesn't have answer... She is not the girl who omkara met at Bareilly... She changed in lot of ways... But still she preserves what her mother taught her...
'chutki...' Annika's concerned voice startled from her own thoughts...
' I don't know di... I have no answer...' She said hugging her dear sister... She don't know why she always stuck in that day... Why she can't able to get over him...
Anika hold her sister in her motherly arms till shivay break their moments...
' Anika if you talk enough with chutki... Plz give us some time...we need to talk some brother sister matters...'
'shivay... You...' Anika walked out of the room leaving behind the brother sister Jodi only after giving a bright smile to shivay...
She know how much shivay loves gauri... May be a little bit more than prinku... She is always grateful to her husband... To let her sister find her dreams... But she still miss something precious in her life... As a sister she needs to make it right for her..it's the only thing she can able to do for her now...
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Omakara threw his most expensive paint brush,enough to spoil his new set of colours that gifted by saumya last year... The glass bottles thrashed on the floor... The colour spread into form a new version of his soul.. A new version of himself...
he looked himself defeated... It was too long he himself immersed in his artistic works... He looked at his canvas it felt so incomplete... He felt he lost his power. He don't have a muse to explore..its all gone years back... Of course its all because of him...
He didn't see her till... When he came back from his friend's exhibition he felt OM changes in some way... The furniture and all the other things are same as always... But something somewhere there was a change that he can't able to point his finger... It was then he came to know that his gauri, no bhabhi's chutki came back successfully completing her studies...
Even if he wanted to see her something hold him back from doing so... Maybe the guilt of last six years...
It was almost 3hrs he locked himself inside his art room... But first time in his artistic life he failed miserably... The colours in his canvas shows his life at the moment... He looked at the canvas only to realize he lost what he preserved all this long...




Ps: Sorry guys can't able to reply to your comments... Will do when ever I got time...
And thank u all for the support...

Every comments will accepted here... So no worries guys...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it yar...
so chutki is back...but she is still broken but now she knows how to handle her

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