RiKara SS - ADHA ISHQ - EPISODE ONE Updated Pg 1

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Thank you so much for such a warm welcome 🤗 I have written regularly on indiaforums for a while 😊 and right here right now ... This is what I present to you ❤️

" Main Gauri ke saath phirse saat phere lunga" ... That he had promised ... To Buama ... To his wife and more than anything else to himself😎, so now after a week of lavish preparations when even the countdown clock says ... Its less than 24 hours to go!!!😲 Let's see what is actually in store for RiKara 😳

Will update in a day or two for sure ... Till then suggestions are most welcome...Just imagine RiKara


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

interesting ...plz continue this

Sure thank you 😊
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Yesss😉
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Continue soon and do pm..
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Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Continue soon and do pm..

For sure 😊
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HOLA AMIGOS 🤗 i am back and this time with the update, i modified the concept of this story taking my part of creative liberty so read on and let me know how you felt about it 😳
P.S.- Written by the jet-lagged me 😆

EPISODE ONE

"Namkeen Si Baat Hai, Har Nayi Si Baat Mein...

Teri Khushboo Chal Rahi Hai Jo Mere Saath Mein ..."


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OMKARAJI!!! Aap toh naa pooreke poore paglet ho gaye hai. Humme samajh mein nahi aa raha ke aapne itni badi baat itni aasaani se bol kaise di??? Saat phere, sindoor, mangalsutra ya shaadi koi mazaak nahi hai, mana ke aapko yeh sab baatein taam jhaam lagti hai lekin iska matlab yeh nahi hai ke aap gharwaalo ke saamne bayaanbaazi karte phirenge. She scolded him flanking crazy frenzy.😵

Gauri very well knew that her husband blindly idol worshipped his Buamaa for her commitment towards his family or maybe it is about all the sacrifices that he said his mother-like figure has made. One reason behind his declaration that she was sure about is the way Buamaa has bought up Omkara almost single handedly when Jahnvi struggled with having a successful career but failed relationships. She knew Omkara was inviting trouble... His absolute "AA BAIL MUJHE MAAR tendency.

You don't have to worry Gauri. I will sort out everything. Tumhe chintaa karne ki zarurat nahi hai. Buamaa se baat maine ki hai, toh ab iska job h natijaa hoga woh meri problem hogi. You never have to be a part of any of my whimsical decision. Those words pinched and pricked her! He was literally talking about wedding vows and rituals and how can she be not a part of it??? To her, it sounded silly.🤔

Aap kehna kya chahte hai??? Aapko phirse shaadi karni hai, Saat phere lene hai aur ab aap bol rahe hai ki humaara aapke iss faisle se koi lena dena hahi hai? Aaapko kya koi doosri mil gayi hai jisko gauri banaake aap uske saath rasme aur kasme poori karenge? She asserted with shaky confidence. JUST SHUT UP!!! He ordered her disdainfully. She was becoming possessive that he began to realize.

Gauri , I am sorry for declaring such an affair without even asking you. Politely he continued...Meri wajah se pareshan hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai tumhe, Tumhaari zindagi hai, tumhe jaise jeeni hai jiyo, Jo karna hai karo, Jahaan jana hai jaao. The concluding part made her realize that she had to go, the mere thought of going away from him was making her behave like a maniac but sadly this was a reality check for her.😒

Hum chalte hai! & she cried her farewell silently. The clock struck 11 and he labeled her to be outright mad. He was going to stop her but then saw this huge dark pot bellied man who was actually waiting for gauri even his teeth succumbing to tobacco. Oh meddam, Taxi ka meter badh raha hai. He said scratching his exposed navel. Who was he? Omkara thought not an inch of him looked like any taxi driver. His mind raced ... he thought of him to be a thug maybe a murderer or even a rapist! And gauri was leaving with him!

Arre ooh chaakuwala ji, aise kaise meter badhega??? CHAAKUWALA??? Like seriously??? What kind of a name is it? Oh wait she knows his name, she knows him! How can it be??? She is even trying to bargain! His wife is surely one-of-a-kind specimen. Rare & irrational. Tum iss waqt iss chaakuwale ke saath kahi nahi jaa rahi ho gauri, kal subah chali jana. He restricted trying to drag her with him after eyeing CHAKUWAALA to get out of there. She was just having a hearty laugh mimicking his glowered face.😆

The very next morning she bid adieu to OM, never expecting to see him again. She put in plain words to him to inform everybody that she is a cunning runaway bride. She cried wordlessly and for him waving her a do svidaniya was becoming hell of a tough job for him. He felt like a color from his canvas is fading like a part of him is breaking. This was a new found feeling, how-when-what-why he knew nothing about. But suddenly Buamaa interrupted and stopped her bahu. She had her own selfish motive gauri knew very well. Exchanging glances both of them sighed... some other time!😔

The day passed by but Om noted that Gauri has been behaving oddly for a while sitting in the window pane blankly staring at the sky. Khana kyon nahi khaya gauri? Om questioned. Aap humaare saath pleej aisa mat kijiye Omkara ji. Ab maine kya kiya? He knocked his brain. Humme chhod dijye, jaane dijiye she said expressionless. And now he understood what she was talking about. The whole I am the oberoi bahu' drama was taking a toll on her.😭

Take it easy gauri, wanting her to relax Om walked towards her. Aapko anjaan banne ki zarurat nahi hai, Itna jaan lijiye ke aapke paas rehkar bhi aapse dur rehna humaare liye koi aasaan kaam nahi hai. Har baar har roz koshish karte hai ke aapse thoda dur ho jaaye,lekin hum jitna dur jaane ki koshish karte hai aap utna hi paas aane ka naatak karte hai, har baar humara dil toot jata hai. Behaving hard-edged that he was forever trying to be, he held her by the shoulder trying to comfort her.😒

His grip tightened on her shoulder joint as she spoke ... Aisa mat hone dijiye Omkara ji warna humme aapki kasam hai agar aapse alag huye toh khud bhi nahi jaante kya kar baithenge, mar hi jaaenge and suddenly his finger pressed her lips. Don't u dare behave extreme Gauri he warned, not having the courage to look straight into her teary face, he looked down and a single tear escaped from her eye.

For all things said and done, it was becoming extremely stressful for Om and in this difficult time, he had his brothers by his side... all three of them by the pool side. Om told both of them the whole melodramatic RiKara tale and both of them were stunned with rigid disbelief. It was Om who married Gauri, She lied to him about being Chulbul and is still staying with him because of the Svetlana mess. It was way to Hindi-Tv-Serial type for his brothers to understand and process. Whenever and whatever you decide we support you assured Shivaay thinking kitna raita phaila diya Omkara ne!

Rudra trying to ease the situation blabbered that Arre worry not O agar aapko Chulbul bhabhi ke saath nahi rehna toh main aapke liye mere hi college se koi heroine-type ladki dhundta hoon bilkul aapki tarah artist! SHUT UP RUDRA!!! Om spoke coldly. Remarrying someone else and him??? That was totally out of question. All he was thinking about is how absurdly is Buamaa behaving in the name of Ratan. Gauri was right, he himself heard Buamaa talking weird stuff. Now he is so determined to complete the abstract mosaic that Buamaa was busy creating.😲

Lost in his thoughts, he did not realize that Gauri was sitting on the opposite edge of the pool. She always sat there; he knew playing with water was her favorite passtime. Their eyes met and they exchanged half smiles.

Gauri found it to be ironically saddening that this is how she and Omkara are meant to be, Distanced. Correspondingly distanced. She thought about how well his name suited his character. Bilkul Bholenath hai yeh toh, she murmured to herself. Stressing herself to a point about how hell bent firm he is in front of her trying to act all angry young man types but that he isn't. He can never be, She was so hopelessly in love with him!❤️

Whatever she has done, However as a person she is, she can never deserve to be harmed by any of the nerve wracking Oberoi clan conspiracies. Om was quite sure that Buamaa is about to mess up inconsiderately and this one involves Gauri because if it was just with him, she could have done it way before! He knows his family way too well for not doubting Buamaa's intentions of insisting a remarriage. Gauri will be safe, he repeatedly reminded himself but at the same time tried to make himself believe that she has to leave-she will go, He was just looking at actually staring her all the while because of which she was crimson now.😳

MOHHABAT NAAM HUA SHAAYAD KHUD SE KHUD KI RUSWAI KA...

DEEWANEPAN MEIN BHI MAUKA DHOONDTE RAHE KHUD SE KHUD KI JUDAAI KA...



Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omkara is so sensible
Thinking on the right line

It was hilarious n romantic

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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Omkara is so sensible

Thinking on the right line

It was hilarious n romantic

Thank you vrinda 😊
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awesome Loved it...you really portrayed gauri's emotions very well
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it...you really portrayed gauri's emotions very well

Thank you 😊

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