All I Want Is You: An AkDha OS (Author's Note Pg2)

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Hi Ramya...

So beautifully written piece of writing. Simple and lovely. Please post other two Oses too. Would like to read.. 👏

Thank you, Shagun for letting me know this work. 🤗

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

It was a beautiful os on akdha

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Beautiful os ramya

Sweet and simple scene

I love your writing style

Plz post other parts too

Thank you lil shagun for informing us

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

A captivating OS, Ramya! 👏

A new experience for the Emperor -his first temple visit with his Queen. A prayer to be together in every life earned him a blush from his Begum that he so desired.

Very well written. Of course, you have to follow up with the other two Oses as well, Ramya!

Shagun dearie, thanks for giving us the link. 🤗

Edited by roseraja1915 - 8 years ago

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

AUTHOR'S NOTE:

Thank you people for the reviews. I'll reply to all of you individually soon. Shagun you're such a sweetheart, thanks for pm'ing so many people!

I wanna repeat myself, the other two shots are on Ruqaiya-Akbar and Salima-Akbar respectively, capturing their love so let me know if you'd really like to read that. Some of you may not like that, i guess. 😛

However if you really wanna read, check this link below-

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4745032

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Fantastic OS ⭐️... Your writing style is so unique and different 👏👏

Thank you Shagun for the lint 🤗

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Ramya,

Jalal-Ruks OS is awesome too! And I really loved ur description of Ruku,she was the most butchered character in the show!

Loved their nostalgic moments and the game..Salim is such a cutie!❤️ But how come you mentioned Ruku as Mallika-e-Hind?😳

Pls write an OS on Jo,Jalal and chotu Salim if possible!😃

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Ramya

Just read other two parts too... Totally different take. You've glorified Jalal and Ruqaiya with their childhood friendship and memories and Jalal and Salima with their understandings and mutual respect. Really very interesting read. Thanks for sharing it here... 😳

Edited by Kalgi22 - 8 years ago