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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins


Well that's a relief.Watching the episode right now.Shivaay is being so damnn adorable hayee



The way Shivaay said Aao na, I was like, main aa jaun toh chalega 😆
The way he said, I felt my heart dropping in the pity of my stomach. *blush*

And the very casually that he dropped the kiss on her cheeks, Haye, (it happened the same way in IPK)
And Annika's reaction to it 😆 She stumbled on just a cheek kiss and at that moment I wanted Shivaay to say,

'Ek kiss par tumhara ye haal, Annika I have a lot more than just a Kiss in my brain, Sambhal kar haan' *Blush*.
😆

The way he caught her was also, So mushy mushy, haye!!

And then when he said that we'll celebrate at night,Our First Night
And Annika just blankly nodded, I was like, beta tune khud par hi aafat bulayi hai 😆 😆
Edited by babydevil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
@babydevil
Yep the enitre 3 minutes of Shivika had me drooling over Shivaay.God, how desperate is he to get his hands on his wife?And how LUCKY is Annika omgg.I wonder when their first night will actually happen..
And haha you seem to have a very dirty mind Divs😆 Which is one of the reasons I'm ardently waiting for your fic ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

@babydevil

Yep the enitre 3 minutes of Shivika had me drooling over Shivaay.God, how desperate is he to get his hands on his wife?And how LUCKY is Annika omgg.I wonder when their first night will actually happen..
And haha you seem to have a very dirty mind Divs😆Which is one of the reasons I'm ardently waiting for your fic ;)



😆 😆 😆

Yeah man, Annika is quite lucky to get such a besharam-ly romantic husband *haye*
I swear I ain't yet over with his Aao na and the husky that was dripping through these words were,
Tauba maar hi dala! 😳

Oh! I'll try not disappoint you with my Story and its romance 😆
Edited by babydevil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil



😆 😆 😆

Yeah man, Annika is quite lucky to get such a besharam-ly romantic husband *haye*
I swear I ain't yet over with his Aao na and the husky that was dripping through these words were,
Tauba maar hi dala! 😳

Oh! I'll try not disappoint you with my Story and its romance 😆

Someone get me a Shivaay IRL please😭
I can only imagine how further Annika would have been willing to go if she didn't have Pinky's threat looming over her head gurr😡

And duh,I'm sure you won't dissapoint babe.I trust your imagination to the fullest 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

Someone get me a Shivaay IRL please😭
I can only imagine how further Annika would have been willing to go if she didn't have Pinky's threat looming over her head gurr😡

And duh,I'm sure you won't dissapoint babe.I trust your imagination to the fullest 😉


IRL means ?
I am sorry but I am pathetic with abbreviations
If not for Pinky witnessing their sexual encounters, I am pretty Sure that Annika wouldn't run away, she would Shy away but not deny such advances 😉
But that PINKY😡

I loved it when Kaminee insulted Pinky today, This Pinky has to be really dumb to not get that she is doing wrong by separating her son and Annika, because previously Nayantara insulted her for this, then Jhanvi screamed on Pinky for the same Damn thing.
and today Kaminee. I mean when a ruined mother points out your fault as a mother, you should get the warning. But then again it's Pinky😕

Thanks for the trust, now I need to re-work on my chapter 2😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil


IRL means ?
I am sorry but I am pathetic with abbreviations
If not for Pinky witnessing their sexual encounters, I am pretty Sure that Annika wouldn't run away, she would Shy away but not deny such advances 😉
But that PINKY😡

I loved it when Kaminee insulted Pinky today, This Pinky has to be really dumb to not get that she is doing wrong by separating her son and Annika, because previously Nayantara insulted her for this, then Jhanvi screamed on Pinky for the same Damn thing.
and today Kaminee. I mean when a ruined mother points out your fault as a mother, you should get the warning. But then again it's Pinky😕

Thanks for the trust, now I need to re-work on my chapter 2😆😆

In real life haha. But sadly that's never happening since such a sexy man like Shivaay cannot possibly exist😭
Annika would shy away for sure, but that would only make Shivaay more determined to get her. I really feel like killing this Pinky. I can't even begin to tell you how much looking at her infuriates, as well as disturbs me. The Pinky Kaminee scene kinda confused me since Kaminee kept saying 'tumhara' beta tumse pyaar nahi karta and all and then at the end she asks incredulously TUMHARA beta?Idk what the writers have up their sleeves but all this drama and suspense is driving me crazyyy
If you are indeed editing then make sure to add as much romance as possible ;) Only if it goes with your story tho (But I guess it does?)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

In real life haha. But sadly that's never happening since such a sexy man like Shivaay cannot possibly exist😭
Annika would shy away for sure, but that would only make Shivaay more determined to get her. I really feel like killing this Pinky. I can't even begin to tell you how much looking at her infuriates, as well as disturbs me. The Pinky Kaminee scene kinda confused me since Kaminee kept saying 'tumhara' beta tumse pyaar nahi karta and all and then at the end she asks incredulously TUMHARA beta?Idk what the writers have up their sleeves but all this drama and suspense is driving me crazyyy
If you are indeed editing then make sure to add as much romance as possible ;) Only if it goes with your story tho (But I guess it does?)



I want someone as ASR IRL❤️, thanks for the help girl😆
@bold : True I was like what the wuck..😕
the first impression I got initially, Pinky has lied through her teeth about Shivaay's illegitimate thing but by the end I was like 'Ye toh rocket science se bhi zyada mushkil hai ree baba'

off- course it does sweetheart I mean how else do they plan for the 'Billa' 😆😆😆
I'll try to add much more of this newly discovered Besharam Singh Oberoi😉

Love
Divs

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Posted: 8 years ago

Ch-9

Hello guys!So my exams have finally ended today, and I have unlimited time on my hands now! I was supposed to update this tomorrow, but then I thought to sort of celebrate the start of vacations by posting the chapter now. Hope you guys like it :)

"So you're saying, Annika asked Shivaay for the umpteenth time in the past few minutes, still in disbelief over what he had told her, "that all this time, that cheapdi Tia has been deceiving your family so badly, and you didn't even suspect her for once?!

"Nope, Shivaay replied, popping out the p'.

"Gosh, Annika exclaimed, and then suddenly, she burst out laughing. It was a full-blown laughter, with tears of mirth running down her face as she tightly clutched her stomach. Taken aback by this sudden outburst, Shivaay stared at her disbelievingly.

"Why are you laughing?

Annika somehow managed to control herself, and replied,

"It's just, I can't believe that the GREAT Shivaay Singh Oberoi was being made a pappu of for the past three years, she said, and then burst into laughter again.

Shivaay couldn't help but smile at her in fondness. If she wasn't in his life, he would never have been able to handle the situation, never have been able to be so much at ease with what he had found out. Ofcourse, he reminded himself, if she wasn't in his life, he wouldn't have found out the truth at all, not until it was too late. Reaching out to caress her cheeks, he placed a soft kiss on her forehead.

"Thankyou, He whispered, lips still lingering against her skin.

"What for?

"For...everything. For coming into my life, breaking my windshield and my ego, all at once. For being so damn beautiful that I just couldn't stay from you. Thankyou for making me find out Tia's truth and saving my family from an almost inevitable doom.

Annika scrunched her nose in confusion.

"But Shivaay, what did I even- "

"Sshh, Shivaay interrupted her, his lips trailing down her cheeks, and slowly, but surely, towards her lips.

"You're not angry at me anymore, and neither do you have any restrictions, so how about we don't speak and use our mouths for...more interesting things? He asked her with a smirk.

Annika blushed. She was indeed feeling so much better, and lighter, now that she was no linger burdened by the feeling of guilt. Infact, she was craving him just as much as he was craving her, after a whole day of separation. However, giving in so easily just wouldn't do now, would it...

So just as Shivaay leaned in to claim her lips, she moved her head sideways, leaving Shivaay yelling "What NOW?! irately.

Giggling at his restlessness, Annika placed a chaste kiss on his cheek, and picked up her bag from where it lay on the dashboard.

"We're in my chawl, Shivaay. In front my house, where my little brother is waiting for me. This is definitely not the place to, uh, do 'interesting' things with our mouths. Saying that, she placed another kiss, this time on his pointed nose, got out of the car, and went into her house.

Shivaay stared after her, shocked with her sudden departure, and after a while, his face broke into a smile. Running a hand through his hair, he shook his head at his girlfriend's cute antics that always left him drooling. He then drove off into the darkness, thinking about exactly how he'd make her make up tomorrow for the torture she had put him through today.

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Upon reaching home and freshening up, Shivaay got down to business. He had to plan a, what was it Annika said? Yeah, a khidkitod plan to ruin the Kapoors. He had to make them realize that by messing with Shivaay Ssingh Oberoi, they had made the biggest mistake of their life. And it wasn't going to be easy; someone who had gotten away with such a big scam was surely capable of a lot, and so revenge would have to be taken slowly. Shivaay would have to take his time so that when he finally destroyed them, they had no way of redemption. He was busy devising his upcoming moves when his brothers walked in.

Settling themselves on his bed, they only stared at him with a playful, knowing look.

Shivaay looked up from where he was typing at his laptop, and raised his eyebrows at them.

"Why are you both looking at me like that?

"No reason, bhaiya. Rudra replied.

Narrowing his eyes at them, Shivaay closed his laptop and joined them on his bed.

"No, seriously, what's wrong with you two? Om, atleast you tell me?

"I think we should be asking you that, Shivaay. What's wrong with YOU? When did you start hiding things from us, huh?

Shivaay's heart skipped a beat. How had they possibly found out about the Kapoor scam? He hadn't wanted to tell them, since he didn't want them to worry about it. He wanted to sort everything out, make a clear-cut plan, and then finally let the family know before the huge showdown. Moreover, he still considered OmRu as his babies, as they would always be, and he would make sure that as long as he was around, nothing would trouble them at all.

Guess that won't be possible now, he thought.

Sighing, he decided to come out about it.

"Look, I would have told you guys. Eventually. I just needed time to...figure everything out.

"What's there to figure out? Rudra asked incredulously. "Itna sab ho gaya, uske baad bhi you want to figure things out'?

"Well, I mean, it's still not too late, you know. It could have been worse. We've only gotten engaged and not marri-"

He couldn't finish, however, since both his brothers suddenly let out a dramatic grasp, that made his ears cringe, followed by a loud Oh My Mata' from Rudra.

Rudra then wailed out even more dramatically.

"You got ENGAGED to Annika didi, and you didn't even TELL us?

Shivaay was taken aback at that, and after a few moments of utter confusion, it finally dawned on him that they had been on entirely different pages all this time.

Oh God, it seems like the 'universe' is all set out to testing my sanity today.

Sorry for yet another short chapter, but I just cannot write longer ones, somehow. Will put in lots of Shivika romance, as you all want, in the upcoming chapters.

Let me know your thoughts, if possible!


Chapter-10

Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear..
Loved the scene when Anika laughed whole heartedly when Shivaay told her about Tia😉
Amazing update dear..
Waiting for next
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Firstly, It was such a calming update. Filled with so much of warmth and happiness, even after so much of deceiving and lies. Brilliant Anklet, Just plain Brilliance👏

For Shivaay, to not take tension and to not worry about the threat that was around his family, even for a second is a big big thing. This sudden good change within SSO is all because of Annika, True Love.
This SSO knows how to appreciate good things in his life, to cherish it without restrictions or any sort of inhibitions. Two Reasons; One. before this he had no one to take in his worries, to participate in being a shield to his family, even OmRu were told about problems when it's solved. Two. he realises someone is doing this for solely his happiness and his family's safety, no favours in return asked.

When one realises the goodness within a human, the sort of positivity it brings is way more powerful, than thought.
And tonight when Shivaay discovered it ,again, within Annika, he couldn't help but feel the gratitude and happiness.
He was just not thankful for her involvement in the Tia trap but truly thankful for changing his beliefs and principles of Naam Khoon Khandan, Thankful for letting him see beyond such belittle thing, to let him be aware of one's intention than one's lineage. Thankful for proving him wrong and making him restore his faith in human, in general.

But poor Shivaay baby, today just wasn't his day! yesterday his life was going so good but today, NOT EVEN A PROPER KISS! how horrifying is that! Poor guy is already controlling just way too much. Uppar Annika and uske Nakhre Noor Jahan ke! Not to worry Shivaay baby, This Anklet na, I'll handle her, let me see how she doesn't let you lay finger on your Annika. Go romance😳

Moving Forward, Dear Shivaay, for a change it's not you acting like a tube light but the dear ones around you, definitely are! ( Though you guessing that OmRu got to know about the Kapoor's was really illogical but keeping that aside)
I feel you Shivaay baby, perviously Annika and now OmRu are wrecking your patiences but take a deep breath and go on to your mantra, Main sab sambhal lunaga.

Annika Sweetie.
You are the saving grace in Shivaay's life, Knowingly or Unknowingly you have always helped this Bhagad Billa of your's and taken every pain to save him, if Shivaay is the Shield, you are the sword. While he will only protect, you on the other hand, will slay down his each enemy.
So tonight you may have laughed it out in front of Shivaay, to not make it too stressful for him but I am sure your last thought before you hit the bed will solely be about how to teach Tia a lesson or two about universe's negativity and it's clearance. So while in front of Shivaay you laughed freely but even then you were a erupting volcano within. Already blocking your movies on the map.
But that doesn't mean that you'll leave Shivaay in the pools of wants, Stop showing your nakhre woman, Haan nahi toh!
All you had to say was to drive out of the chawl and Shivaay would have whisked you into another dimension altogether, Not that you should have done it just because Shivaay wanted but because YOU wanted it too and cut some slack for that poor guy, He went through a lot in just a period of 24 hours.
firstly the restlessness after knowing that You have some admires, Ogling to glory at you. Secondly the deceive he got caught of, You know it took more than half his day to get everything right, just not for his family solely but For YOU ( he initiated this search stuff for You only.) and then you were being all tube light to question Shivaay's commitment towards you. Poor Lad.
But I hope you realise it and make it for him tomorrow 😳

Whereas for Omkara and Rudy boy.
My lovely mumkins, you know exactly which buttons to press within Shivaay. I am patiently waiting for you people to play the cupid and give some moments of 'Aahmm' 'Aahmm' to your brother and his 'fiancee' ( You know whom exactly is in question) 😆😆 and other than being the cupids I am way more than sure and confirmed that You both will play, ' Unse panga nahi lete jinke do-do devar ho'😉

Dear Anklet,
Amazing expressions and update but that was damn small chapter😡
appki bhali isse me hai ki aap jaldi se update karne.
Werna Chamki ki Dhamki, abhi bhi yahin hai *smirk*

Warm Love
Divs
Edited by babydevil - 8 years ago

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