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will b updating tonight
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congratzz for te new thread
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PART 15

wow lovely amazing emotional update..te way geet was feeling guilty with my maan ki words thinking she have hurt him and dev too supporting my maan feelings was lovely emotional..te way yash ski words made geet too realize wat she meant to my maan and rushing to my maan and his surprise to see her and they both talking they relation and geet promise not to leave him was lovely heart touching..te way sam was angry on her thinking her plan flopped and left,good..te way my maan ki accident omg geet rushing to him like her life depends on him was lovely emotional..te way my maan was fine and teasing her trying to cheer her was lovely..omg maan babu was been attracted towards his geet and asking yash who was hell bent on teasing him..i love te update so much yar

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part 16

wow lovely restless update..te way my maan was lost in his geet and trying to block his thought but who will block his heart which was beating for his geet, he was avoiding her without knowing to her was lovely..te way dev ki insecure abt my maaneet and kia wants to take advantage of it was lovely..te way dev knows wat ever may be atlast he is te one who is going to be hurt even though he wish geet's happiness was lovely..te way yash was hell bent on bringing my maaneet together how ever my maan try to run away..omg dev blurted shocking geet..i love te update yar

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part 17

wow lovely emotional update..te way geet was shocked with dev ki words and ruuning away to find his words and saw my maan and shocked and crying to him was lovely emotional..te way yash wants my maaneet to spend together and but geet's words tat its between us hurt him and he left even though geet said but my maan warned dev and dev ki words I cant comple u bhai was lovely emotional..omg dev freeing geet to find her happiness and he himself drowning in his pain was lovely emotional..i love te update yar

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part 18

wow lovely thud thud update..te way my maan have to go to usa and geet ki pain thinking abt te separation was lovely emotional..te way geet feeling something wen he left me too feeling some kind of fear omg why tis destinty always wants to play its crule game between my maaneet..now my maan was ready sacrifice his life for his geet omg,tis sam and her dad playing with his feelings..now wat will happen to geet..i love te update with heavy heart..

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part 19

wow lovely amazing speechless update..wat to say how to say ,im short of words right now after reading te update..te way geet ki all excitement ruined seeing my maan and with sam and his words omg even though yash sense something abt his sister and dad but he was helpless was lovely emotional..te way geet ki heart was crushed even before it blossom and she was crying seeing my maan with sam hiding her pain she is behaving normally was lovely emotional..te way dev cums to know abt my maan and sam and still asking geet to talk with him..te way my maan celebrating her b'day making her heart swell in happiness seeing my maan ki love for her..her words shocked my maan and freezed him..omg now who is te new entry going to bring another storm on my maaneet's life..i love te update yar

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Part 20








"You broke my heart but I still love you with all its pieces"



Maan was shocked to hear what she said. He parted her to look at her but she was scared now to face him and buried herself again in his arms. "What..., He said still shocked as to what he heard. "I..I heard from Sameera di that we are not related in any way ...that is when I.., She revealed. Maan just removed his arms from her...backing off.







"Geet.., Before he could complete he heard his phone ring , "Hmm...yes...okay I will be there. He disconnected the call and looked at a scared Geet standing there. "Geet, here take this and call a cab to get home. I have some work. When I get back we will talk, He said calmly. Geet nodded and left from there leaving Maan in thoughts shocked by the revelation. He was shaken by her words, her words reverberated in his mind over and over, "I love you Maan. He smiled sadly at the irony of the situation...the words he wanted to hear when now he heard them ...he couldn't even reciprocate her feelings ...as he has vowed to protect her ..the truth being far more devastating and he knew she wouldn't be able to take it. Her words still echoed on his mind playing like a broken record.



Geet entered the house to find it decorated, "Happy Birthday Geet. She saw Sameera bringing a cake and food for her. "You didn't even tell me, I saw it on the news. You could have informed me earlier, so I could have prepared something better, but still let's celebrate. My 18th birthday was great. Come on now, eat up and cut the cake, She said. "I'm sorry, Geet said quietly. "Oh its okay, I will remember it from now on, Sameera said. But Geet did not apologize for her not telling her birthday but for her confession. "I can never take it back, She thought. Maan went to his office while Geet went back home. He opened a folder containing her pics, he tried to touch the screen but then her words came back to him, "I love you Maan. His thoughts got disturbed when his friends entered, "Aww did you not like our surprise, the little one was so happy."You morons what was that for, He grabbed his friends. "Come on Maan you should give her surprises to make her happy. Little ones loved to be pampered these days, One of his friends said.They left him when the receptionist informed him about a guest.



"Sameera, what are you doing here, He asked. "Here since you are always stuck here, I bought some homemade food for you. I told you not to give her special attention but well I will let it slide since it was her birthday, She said. "Here I found this when I was cleaning up, She said handing him a letter. "You could have...He said but was cut by her, "I don't know it looked important so I bought it with me.Maan opened the letter and was shocked to read the contents.










"Why didn't I get it earlier, oh no, Geet..., He said worried now. "Maan what..., Sameera asked but he was too shocked and ran out of the office. "You look in a hurry Maan. Come on I will give you a ride, Yash said. "Yash did ..you know that Geet and Dev broke up, He asked. "Not that she told me but yes I understood they did, He said concentrating on the road. "I see. I have been such a fool not to notice that, He said. "You did that on purpose because you did not want to look at her that way, He said. "You got that watch back, He asked looking at the watch. "Its so small. It won't fit, Maan said. "Of course it won't its of Geet's size, He said. "Why did I not see her, I failed to see what she was going through, Maan cried. "Hey, its okay, just try to be more observant and look beneath the surface...its not late, Yash said.Its already too late Yash. Somethings can not be undone, Maan said quietly her words ringing in his head.



Next day, Geet went to school and was the talk of the school, all thanks to her being in the news. "You are center of attention now, Naina said sitting beside her. "What for, Geet asked disinterested. "Oh come on Geet, that present you got and the media and all, Naina said unbelievingly. "Why are you knitting, you are really too girlish, She teased. "Hey its just I feel happy doing something like this, She said. "Oh I get it must be for your boyfriend right, hey hey come teach me please, Geet said. "Ah okay, but whom will you knit for, you broke up with Dev right. I don't know why would you do that, She said. Before she could answer they saw Dev entering the classroom. "Ah, Geet I just remembered I have to take some notes from my boyfriend bye, Saying this she rushed out leaving Geet alone with Dev. After a moment Geet said, "I told him about my feelings. "That is good. And.., Dev said. "I don't know, it must be weird for him to hear it from his family. Even if he rejects me I feel happy that I was able to tell him, She said. "Geet you know, I always had this feeling that Maan bhai always knew that you are not siblings, Dev said. "You think that...then why would he come to get a total stranger, She said. "That only he can answer, Dev said.



Geet thought about the prospect and then left for home. Maan saw her standing on the bus stand and went to her. "Geet, come in, why are you standing here without your blazer, He asked opening the door of his car for her. "I..don't have one, I left it in that house, She said. Maan nodded and took her to a huge showroom to buy her new dresses. They dressed her up in the best dresses and then showed it to him, "What do you think of this one Sir.








"Hmm great, pack them all, we will take them, Maan said. He paid for everything then turned to Geet, "Now let's get to home. "At least let me change, She said holding the pillar to support herself. "What happened, He asked. "I have never worn these heels and what if I fall wearing these, She told making him laugh. "Oh come on now, here take my hand, you won't fall, He said forwarding his hand which she took.



"You know it was one of my dreams to take you shopping, my other dreams are to take you on hiking, drives and all but well I guess everything can't be fulfilled...you got with Dev ad then all this ..., He said. "If its with you, I will go anywhere, She said. "Geet, you are very special to me since you are my family...but please don't say such thins like you love me as it feels a little weird hearing that from you, He said.








"Yes, I..I'm sorry..., She stammered. "Geet, I have decided to get you to join this Medical school, its the best in the country, and before that you would be joining this boarding school which is near to that Medical school for your studies. They are having a few tests just for formality and after that you will join there, as if what you said yesterday is true then I guess we can't be together, He said handing her an envelope. "So you are trying to send me away, just because of that...I hate you for this, you said you will never leave me then how could you.., She cried and ran off. "I know I'm hurting you Geet, but I have my reasons to protect you, Maan smiled sadly looking at her retreating figure.



Geet cried in her room, "Lies all lies..he said he would never leave me, why just because I said I loved him and he loves that Sameera di , shes so selfish and stuck up what is so likable about her...I hate this ...I hate myself for being like this ..but why ...why should I always be alone.






Maan returned from office. "Did you tell her, Sameera asked. "I did but I guess she got angry and must be hating me for all this, He said. "Why don't you tell her the real reason, she has the right to know. Why do you lie to her always Maan, She said. "Well because that is all I can do to keep her safe.Sameera could you do me a favor you always said you will help me with anything, He smiled. Sameera looked at him, "If you need any help then for once let me help you. "Thanks, please keep a watch at her, pick her up from school and be with her like a shadow, can you do that, He said. "I will, don't worry, She said . Unknown to them someone was already keeping an eye on their activity.





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Part 21







"There is no love without pain"



High dive into frozen waves where the past comes back to life
Fight fear for the selfish pain, it was worth it every time
Hold still right before we crash 'cause we both know how this ends
A clock ticks 'till it breaks your glass and I drown in you again



Next morning, Maan found Geet sitting outside of his room. "Geet..what .., He said. "I want to talk, please, She pleaded. Maan sighed, "All right come in. Geet entered his room and sat on the bed. "The last time you were here, I was shocked to see you sleeping holding this photograph He said picking up their family photo. "Did you always knew that we are not siblings, She asked. "Yes..I always knew that, He answered. "Then why did you come for me, She asked. "Because I made a promise to my dad to look after you even when we are not related in any way, He said. "You know Geet, he really wanted to see you as a doctor, that is why I'm fulfilling his wishes, He said.






'Cause you are the piece of me I wish I didn't need
Chasing relentlessly, still fight and I don't know why
If our love is tragedy, why are you my remedy?
If our love's insanity, why are you my clarity?




"Are we not working, is it because I said that and you love Sameera di that you are sending me away, it means we can't be together like you said, She asked. Maan sighed, "Geet, please could you just do as I say this time, please don't ask any more questions. "You know Maan, now I have friends at school, I'm not alone anymore, it will be sad to leave them, She said. "Yes that would be but..., before he could complete she just stood up to leave. "Thank you for taking care of me and sorry that I bothered you with my words. I won't be troubling you anymore, She smiled walking out. Maan recalled the past...









Past

A young lady knocked on the door of her friend carrying her little daughter in her arms who was crying. A man opened the door shocked to see his best friend in this condition, she was bruised, "Madhu, what happened. "Yash, please help me...he is searching for us, She cried.






"Come on in, He ushered her inside. The noise broke the sleep of his five year old son who came outside to find a lady with an year old baby in her arms. "Maan, come here, Yash called his son. "Bring me the first aid box and take the baby from auntie, He told him and he nodded bringing the first aid box and took the baby in his arms. "Dad, she is running a temperature, Maan said. "How did all this happen, you were happy right, He asked his friend while tending to her wounds.
"I don't know what went wrong but I had to leave I could not live there any longer and save her, he used to be violent when she cried so to protect her I stood in the way ...He would have called my relatives as my mom is not here..So the only place I thought he wouldn't think of will be here to save my child, Madhu said.











"But why would he do that, I know he loved you then why..well leave that you are safe here. Alright, wait here I will call the doctor for the baby, He said. The doctor arrived and checked the little one and prescribed some medicines for her. Madhu held on to her baby patting her till she fell asleep. "We will leave by the morning, where is Rhea, She asked looking around for her other friend. "She died in an accident few years back, now my son is the only family I have, He told. "You did not tell me, She said.








"I was too broken ...I did not what to do , Maan was only an year old and I was lost , she was our only hope. The day I lost her...I was shattered, then only my friend Anirudh was there to bring me back, and you are not going anywhere, with this child where will you go, you will stay with us, He said. "But .., She tried but he said, "No ifs and buts you are staying here and that is final, you did not tell her name, He asked. She nodded in acceptance knowing her stubborn friend won't let them go, both Rhea and him were always overprotective towards her, so she gave up on the thought of leaving."Geet, She said. "I remember you always said that to us that you will name your daughter Geet. Rhea would have been delighted if she were alive, He smiled thinking about his decesaed wife, how much she missed Madhu when their son was born, the three of them have been best friends since childhood. Both of them were elated when Madhu announced her marriage but after that they lost contact with her.






Maan got a new playmate in the form of Geet, he would take her on walks but he still missed the one thing he wanted the most , a mother and looking at Madhu with Geet he wished for his mom to be there too. Maan used to get teased by his classmates for not having a mom and thereby he used to pick up fights unknown to his dad. It was one such day where he was outnumbered and was going to be hit when Madhu found him, seeing her the other kids dispersed leaving Maan alone. "What happened Maan, why were they beating you, She asked lovingly caressing his head. "They tease me as I don't have a mom and today is mother's day, He cried. "Did you tell your dad about it, She asked trying to calm the weeping child she could understand that he missed his mother.




She has seen in these days living with them how he used to look at her when she fed Geet with her hands. The child needed a mother's love."No...dad will be worried, I don't want that. Daddy still cries looking at Mom's photograph. I will not trouble him more, He sobbed. "Alright then, you can take me as your mom, She said. "Really, I can, He asked. Madhu wiped his face with her dupatta, "Yes, you can.Come on now smile. He was very happy that day and Madhu never told about that incident to Yash as she promised Maan. Maan found a mother in her and after two years they decided to get married for the children as Maan wanted Madhu as his mom and she really loved him as her own son. Yash was very attached to Geet wanting her as his daughter he never had. In these two years many moral inspectors tried to poke their nose in to Yash and Madhu's relation but they never bothered, they had been friends since long so they never cared what others said. They only decided to get married when they wanted not for the society but their children and decided to move on. The four of them lived happily. Yash had legally adopted Geet just six months before their marriage.Everything was fine until that fateful day where everything ended. Maan was returning from school when he saw a crowd near his house, his friend came running to him."Maan there is a fire at your house, His friend told him. He ran towards his mansion to find it in flames. "Dad...Madhu Mom ...Geet .., He cried.








"Hey kid, back off its dangerous, The Police held him. "No please I can't lose my dad...let me go, He yelled. "Sir the lady died on the spot, Another officer told. "No she can't leave me, Mom you promised..., He cried. "We found the man, hes charred badly...he does not have much time either, He told. Maan was shocked he lost a motherly figure again. His dad's burned body was bought when he ran to him. "Dad.., He cried. "Maan ..li..listen to me...you have to p..protect Geet...though she is not your sister but protect her ...b..but t..treat her like your f..family..never let her be alone...never blame her for anything ...i..its not ..her fault...keep her safe..you have to..Promise me ..., Yash gasped. "Sir please don't talk much we are rushing you to the hospital, A doctor said. "I promise dad, I will look after her, Maan said crying. "Maan always remember I'm proud of you son.., Saying this he died. maan did not even get time to mourn over his death when he found Geet missing. "Geet...Geet, where are you, He called searching for her. "Maan, help me please ...I'm scared help me, Geet called. Maan found her in a confined place with smoke all around. "Geet take my hand, He said. He got her out and she cried. That was the last time they saw each other as both were taken by different families.





Present




Maan was bought back from his thoughts with the sound of his phone ringing, he looked at the photograph, "That day, I lost my mother again.I have hated fire ever since it took away from me all that I loved. I don't remember my mom but she must have been like you only. You left me when after two days you would have officially been my mom. I will protect Geet, I won't let her be harmed. I promise...You were always the best..the days we had were always be my happiest memories.








Geet's transfer news spread amongst the students, her friends Naina and Kia cried hearing about it, "Geet why are you transferring. "Please don't go, Kia cried. "Its fine, I hope you uys don't forget me sorry for any troubles I caused you all,Geet said. "What are you saying Geet, we are friends we will always be right, no matter where you go, Naina cried. Geet felt sad seeing them cry. She went to the gardener, "Uncle, I would be leaving soon. The gardener was burning down the fallen leaves from the garden. He looked up shocked to hear her, "Why are you leaving. "My guardian has got me arranged in a boarding school and after that a renowned medical school then he will returning to the states with his fiancee, She said. The gardener was sad to hear that, "Are you happy. "I don't know I guess I should just go there because he wants that. The gardener did not said anything further. "I wonder how we learn to use matches does it need to be taught, She said. "Hmm..children are not allowed to do so though anyone can use them by watching, He said. "You know I was thinking I don't remember anything from when I was young, guess must be bitter memories though I don't have much happier ones even now, She said.



"Geet, you know roses require a lot of attention, He said. "Yes, She said. "Do you know it needs to be cut to grow more, He said. "Yes Dev once told me about this, She recalled. "Here take this, He said giving her a branch in a vase. "Its up to you how you want to grow. No one can decide it but you, so bloom as the flower you would like yourself to be, good luck dear, He said. Geet smiled at the old man and left thinking on his words. She went out to see Sameera standing there with her car it has been frequent now a days. "Why are you picking me up daily, She asked. She smiled at her, "Because I want to. Geet nodded and they went to buy new dresses for her and then she took her for a meal. Sameera liked the kid in front of her but her love for Maan has messed her rationality.



Maan came back home late from work as he was going to enter he thought he saw something but suddenly Yash grabbed him, "Maan, I'm hungry lets go for dinner my stupid sister took the car so please lets go."Yash, wait a moment, I think I saw someone there, Maan said running in the direction but there was no one. "Must be your imagination, Yash said. They dined at a restaurant. Yash looked at him and asked after a while, "Are you for real. "Excuse me what do you mean by that, Maan asked. "I mean you sending Geet away ...for what may I ask..when you worked like a Robot for her all these years, He said. "A Robot...you know that is a rude thing to say Yash,He smiled. "Why, I haven't said anything wrong, I mean you have been a robot all your life. A Robot which works only for Geet. And here I was under a happy delusion that living with her is finally making you soften up a bit, Yash said concentrating on his food. "You mean I was letting go of my Robot self ", He smiled.



"You know Maan, I don't know what have you programed in your Robot brain the morals values or whatever but when I look at you I see lies written all over your face. You hide your real self under that mask. For once ...just once I want you to let go of that ...For once I want to see the real you not the Robot you, Yash said making Maan surprised. They left for their home. "You going back to work, He asked Yash. "Yes I'm working on something, He said. "Hey Yash, have I always been a Robot, He asked. Yash scanned his face, for some reason he could always read him under his mask. "Yes you have, I gave up on you the moment I met you. You remember what you said, Where is Geet...why didn't dad bring her here and after that you asked dad to tell you the fastest way to grow up so you can go and get her , you have been working so hard all for her and now you are doing this. I just don't get what you are thinking anymore.Do you still think you want to let her go, He said. "Hmm...I have to, He said. Yash looked at him once more before leaving. "You know Maan, I think its not bad to let out the real you once in a while.


Walk on through a red parade and refuse to make amends
It cuts deep through our ground and makes us forget all common sense
Don't speak as I try to leave 'cause we both know what we'll choose
If you pull then I'll push too deep and I'll fall right back to you



Finally the day arrived when Geet had to leave to give her test for the boarding school. Sameera accompanied her till the airport from where Maan would take her there. "Have you taken everything, check again, Sameera said. "Yes I have, thank you, Geet said. "Good, just look at your hair, let me comb them again, Sameera said. "Now its good, do your best, She said. "Goodbye, Geet said moving out of the car towards the airport. She stood there thinking about the decision she made when her thoughts broke hearing Maan's voice. "What are you doing, He said looking at her knitting something. "Nothing, She said. "Good, now let's go I guess our flight will be due in sometime so do you want to get something to eat, He asked. "I'm not going, She said making him stop in his tracks turning to look at her.



'Cause you are the piece of me I wish I didn't need
Chasing relentlessly, still fight and I don't know why
If our love is tragedy, why are you my remedy?
If our love's insanity, why are you my clarity? (Lyrics "Clarity" by Zedd)








"What.., He asked. "I said I'm not going to give that test, nor I'm going back to school or the house. I have decided to live alone and do some little jobs again to make a living. I have saved a lot of money though lets see how much it was ..., She said calculating in her mind. "Just wait a second, you think I will go with this idea of yours, Maan yelled. "I know its not the ideal way of living but its my life to live and since we are not related there is no need for you to take care of me. You can live your life and I will live mine. Since I love you so much , there is no need for me to live with the lie of being a family anymore. Goodbye Maan, its time for to be free, She said turning back leaving.








When he saw her leaving, something broke in him. Yash's words echoed in his head, "For once just for once I want to see the real you. He turned her to him only to find her in tears, Yash's words echoing in his head made him do the unexpected ...as he kissed her . "Please don't say goodbye ...I will tell you everything...please don't leave me.



So here are the next two parts...I will be giving alternate day updates this week so I could wrap it up ...as I don't want it left hanging till July ...please do give your honest reviews regarding it 😃😃 ...the updates from the next part might be on my blog






Precap - Geet Kidnapped and the truth maybe 😆






A Short Teaser- "I will be lying if I said I didn't feel anything for you..."



Thank you for all your support😃😃
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