Bin Tere 2 ( FF On MehRya Chapter 16 updated on 18th June) page 131 - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

good one shamz 😊. cannot wait to see how plan b goes awry😆.

update soon and thanks for the pm.

Hi Kelly good to see your feedback back after long 😳
I will be updating soon ..
WELCOME Dear ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

It was a good one sham di..

Shaurya must be good at apologising😉

Just waiting for plan b and its consequences😆
Thanks for the chap abd pm

Precap is so amazinggg!!

Hahaha Welcome Arpi..where are you these days
Every one is curious about plan b and precap😉
Will be updating soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pictures r perfectly used from show. Its like show to din b din bekar ho RHA hai but ur ff is day by day getting interesting 🤣
Nehal ko kiss ka pta chl gya how embaressing dmfor MS😕
Cute teddy. Madam ne teddy lekr touchy na hone ki shart k sath sath plans bhi bnaye hain but kismat ko kch or hi manzoor hai 😳 aur ye baat to SK bhi jaan gya hai...Baal Baal bch Jo gya 🤣
Ravi chachu ka invitation SK coming to sharma niwas ab vha kya hoga haan.
Mehak ki bchi ne plan b bhi teyar rkha hai...chahti kya hai
And SK always said u have to pay for this...is baar kya krega Usk sath 🤣
Omg he ll purpose her in precap
Pka vo nashe me hone ka fayda uthayega n sabk samne use purpose krega 🤣 namune h dono ak dusre ko smjhte nhi 🤣
Thank u for pm me di
Love n hugs to u🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Parud7

Pictures r perfectly used from show. Its like show to din b din bekar ho RHA hai but ur ff is day by day getting interesting 🤣

Nehal ko kiss ka pta chl gya how embaressing dmfor MS😕
Cute teddy. Madam ne teddy lekr touchy na hone ki shart k sath sath plans bhi bnaye hain but kismat ko kch or hi manzoor hai 😳 aur ye baat to SK bhi jaan gya hai...Baal Baal bch Jo gya 🤣
Ravi chachu ka invitation SK coming to sharma niwas ab vha kya hoga haan.
Mehak ki bchi ne plan b bhi teyar rkha hai...chahti kya hai
And SK always said u have to pay for this...is baar kya krega Usk sath 🤣
Omg he ll purpose her in precap
Pka vo nashe me hone ka fayda uthayega n sabk samne use purpose krega 🤣 namune h dono ak dusre ko smjhte nhi 🤣
Thank u for pm me di
Love n hugs to u🤗


Ismein koi shaak nahi Hai ke dono namoonay Hai...😆😆
Baby pictures ke hisaab se hi scene banta Hai😉
MS ka dimaag Shaatir Khanna se bhi tez Hai 😃
Propose toh karega...but Mainy yeh nahi kaha ke naashy mein larega 😉

Wait for the next PM...
Love you too deary 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
I thought I can deal with SK sisters gang and wasn't afraid to give a provoking precap...but here a got a special request from a silent reader... which I can't deny ...I don't know I will be able to do the justice with the next chapter because I have planned so many cute things here...but I will try my best...so get ready for next update today...iam off to writing..🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz


Ismein koi shaak nahi Hai ke dono namoonay Hai...😆😆
Baby pictures ke hisaab se hi scene banta Hai😉
MS ka dimaag Shaatir Khanna se bhi tez Hai 😃
Propose toh karega...but Mainy yeh nahi kaha ke naashy mein larega 😉

Wait for the next PM...
Love you too deary 🤗

To fer nashe me vo kya gana gayega Usk sath


Nashe c cgadh gyi oye kudi nashe c chadh gyi
Patang c lad gyi oye kudi Padang c lad gyi 🤣

Di I always want to mehrya dance on this song aur tha bhi scene aisa but vha ajay k sath pehle MS dance krti h than SK k sath but its less
Can u write this its matching to ur story not in POOJA somewhere else now as SK nashe me h or use ms se bdla bhi to Lena hai 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay...sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry...
Iss baar to kaafiii late ho gayi...kya Karu mera birthday week jo tha...frds, family, guests San main ulaj ke reh gayi...
Kyaa baat had shammu new new therd new banner or nayi mahek bhi... 😉
I'll read all chapters in one go...
First chapter I love to see mahek was worried about shaury and take care of him as well as... But shaurya ka bachpana Nahi jayega...
Second chapter to faadu tha...forcefully kissing ohh shaurya ye to tum hi kar sakte ho...but mahek ko bhi uski dukhti rag or haath Nahi rakhna chahiye tha...chalo unknowingly mahek me shaury ka picha uss chipku se chuda dia...😆
Third one was tashan wala update...shaurya khanna me maafi mangi OMG...or mahek shaury ka pura fayada utha rahi hai...plan to kammal ka tha but as you said shaury ka kismat achhi thi but what is that alcohol in pooja now this is too much...if shaurya's image going ruind shaurya never forgive her easily...waiting for next...what will he do now...

Arz Kia hai...

Badloo to mera naam waqt rakhna..,
Tham jaau to haalat...,

Chalak jau to muje Zajhbaat kehna..,
Mehsoos ho jaau to Mohobbat...!!!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
😊😛hai hai hai... new to forum ... just enjoying... you are superb
wow...superb writing skills... loved it ... just i even dream yaa ...
just only waiting for your fata fata updates..😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am updating this chapter quickly on a request of a silent reader...and request all the silent readers to break the silence😊

Chapter 12:

Nehal opens the door and they both enter the Sharma nivas , Everyone has reached the Pooja including Karuna and Vicky along with Harish ...Nehal smells that Shaurya has drunked some alcohol, she takes him aside and calls Vicky...Mahek interrupts her and tells let's go inside as everyone will be waiting for us , Nehal scold her have you lost it Di ..do you even have a idea what will happen if Bhaiya goes inside like this ..you know everything about this Pooja and still you brought him here like this ... how could you Di ?? Mahek face fall down again , thinking my own sister is making my plan backfire on me .. Vicky makes an excuse and come out of Pooja , Karuna watches him leaving from there and gets scared after reading his facial expressions, she follows him , Vicky reach them near the door and scolds Shaurya, how can he drink and come for a Pooja , Shaurya tries to explain but Karuna comes there ...she sends Everyone inside and tells she needs to talk to him alone, Mahek looks at Karuna who was in a very bad mood and than looks at Shaurya and makes a sad face and hold her ear and says sorry by just using her lips... Shaurya glares her angrily...Karuna finally breaks her silence and asks what are you up to Shaurya?? I have never seen you drinking in your life , I know how much hate your dad because of his drinking habits ? Now you have started drinking and came here for Pooja , have you any idea , Shaurya tries to defend himself saying Maa some old friends visited office and they took me along with them, even though I tried hard ...he was about to give reasons...Karuna asks him to stop and leave the place and said she will make some excuse on his behalf, He leaves the place and drives away to home...and after reaching home he takes out all his anger on his punching bag .

Pooja is completed and Karuna leaves from there after informing them that Shaurya got some urgent call and he has to leave , kanta tells it's ok work should always be first, Mahek goes to her room , she was worried about Shaurya, as she knows he loves her mother alot and because of her she has scolded him , she calls him to say sorry, he disconnect the call , she calls again and disconnects...she messages him saying...I need to talk ..It's urgent ?? Shaurya gets furious and replies why is your Plan C is ready so quickly?? I'm in no mood to talk, Mahek messages back ok than I will come there and talk to you , ...he smiles after reading the message and says Meri Billi mujh se meon ( she is using all my tricks) he calls her to listen what she wanted to talk , Mahek answers the call and says sorry?? He asks for what ?? I thought about chachus reaction I forgot about Karuna MAA, shuarya takes a deep breath and let's go off his anger , and tells this was the last time that he is forgiving her next time he won't, he reminds her about the team outing for Which they have to leave early. He informs that Vicky has invited Nehal also so it won't be a problem for her to come down, Mahek informs that she is afraid that chachi won't be allowing them , He leaves the final decision on her .

It's morning and Nehal and Mahek are still trying to convince kanta , who isn't ready to send them out of City, Mohit interfere in between and tells ok mummy I will go along with them than you don't have to worry about their safety, PD tells now kanta must not be having any objections let the girls take a break from their routine life Kanta agrees but asks them to come back before 12 ...they all hug kanta and says her thank you.

After one hour shuarya reaches PWG lane along with Vicky and to pick up them , they goes inside Sharma house, Mohit opens the door and calls them to get down soon , Nehal comes out she was wearing a black long skirt with a Black and White sleeveless top , Vicky looks at her and praises her with his eyes, Nehal blushes , Mohit asks where is Di and mahek tells iam here, she was coming down from stairs , wearing dark blue body fitting jeans white sleeveless top and a blue and white stole around her neck, Shaurya eyes get wide opened looking at her , he could never imagine that she could carry Western outfit so well , she comes near to him and snap her fingers...and asks chalein ?? He comes back to his senses and says yes ..they all leave from there after assuring they will be back soon...Mahek Nehal and Mohit sits in the back seat and Shaurya all the tries steal glances at her from rare view mirror, they reach the resort where the other staff was waiting for them, Mahek colleagues praises her as she was looking absolutely stunning in jeans, Mahek Smiles and looks at Shaurya who eyes and ears were already on her, whole day he tries to talk to her but was distracted by someone or other, they had their lunch..played all sort of outdoor games and were almost tired , it's around 6.30 pm and it was dark and they lit the bonfire, and starts couple dancing, when Vicky interrupt them and brings a guitar and Shaurya to sing a song, no one is aware that he is a good singer, Shaurya denies but Vicky and Nehal insist him and mahek also joins them and request him ..he looks at her and takes the guitar...and everyone settles down.. Shaurya starts singing looking into mahek's eyes and with a smile on his face as if he was dedicating the song to her,

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..


O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..
O re piya re..

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana
Khwahishon ki baarishon mein
Bheeg sang jaana

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re..


Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum
Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum
Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum
Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re..


Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na
O re piya re.. piya re...
Piya re...

Everyone claps after his performance and praise his voice, Mahek looks at him and shows a thumbs up saying you sang well and he closes his eyes saying thank you,

Soon again they start getting bored and Nehal suggest let's play Truth and dare game , everyone agrees except Shaurya , he was about to leave when mahek provokes him saying, I know you don't have guts to talk truth or even show some dare , Shaurya looks back and asks her you want me to join the game ?? she nods her head saying yes ...he joins them..

Everyone Completes the task some choose truth and some choose dare , it was Mahek's turn and she choose dare , Shaurya gives her a smirk and Vicky was about to give her a dare and Shaurya stops him saying let me give her dare , he tells it's easy to weara western outfit...and ask her to dance on a peppy song , Mahek Smiles after listening to his dare ...and she takes out her stole and keep it aside ...she chooses beat pe booty song and starts dancing on it , Shaurya's mouts gets wide opened after looking her grooves ...nehal close his mouth and tells Di is a trained dancer and what you have given her wasn't a dare it was a cake walk for her , Shaurya Continues to watch her without a blink and looks around his staff who was also enjoying seeing her dance ,he gets jealous and waits for the performance to end , it was his turn when she comes and sits beside him , he compliments her that she dance well and he wasn't aware about it, and she replies even I wasn't aware that you have such a melodious voice, he chuckles , Vicky tells Bhai it's your turn, so choose truth or dare... Shaurya choose dare ,Nehal whisper something in Vicky's ears and Vicky smirks and tells done ...so Bhai your dare is propose the girl sitting right beside you , Shaurya looks at Mahek and than tells have you lost it Vicky...even Mahek takes Shaurya's side and tells yes what kind of dare is this ...Nehal interrupts and tells Di it's a simple dare either Complete it or accept you both are loosers , Shaurya looks at them and tells fine I accept...he looks at Mahek and blinks his eyes telling don't worry, he takes her in to center and picks up a red rose from the table , and goes down on his knees holds her hand and tells ...

without you iam
like a leafless fall,
a snowless winter,
and a flowerless spring.

without you iam
like a colorless rainbow,
a sunless day,
and a starless night.

without you iam
like the ocean without a wave,
the beach without sand,
and a flameless fire.
without you my heart misses a beat..
without you my name sounds incomplete..

will you be part of my life ..
will you be mine for rest of the life ..
will you add my name to your name...

He takes a pause and asks bolo Mahek banogi tum Shaurya Ki Mahek ?? (Are you ready to be Shaurya's Mahek )

Mahek holds her breath and was almost her eyes have tears in it, even though it was for a game but it looked like he told all those lines by his heart, she unknowingly nods her head saying yes , and he kisses her hand and gets up , he hugs her and she hugs him back tightly and he tells in her ears don't forget it's a game , Mahek breaks the hug and looks in his eyes and tells I remember it , Everyone claps for them and mahek excuse herself and goes to room to freshen up ... Shaurya looks at her until she is out of sight and wait for her to join them as they have decided to leave once she is back , office staff has already started packing their stuff, suddenly there was a power cut and Shaurya runs to the room where they were resting in the afternoon, Mahek was almost screaming for Nehal and Mohit , Nehal and Mohit also runs after realizing Mahek went inside and she was afraid of dark , Shaurya gets inside the room and finds her standing holding the door he hugs her , she was almost shivering and he tells don't worry iam here she hugs him tightly and starts crying, he cups her face and rubs her tears and hugs her back , guard starts the generator and power is back , Shaurya takes her stole and covers her and gives her some water, nehal and Mohit aslo reach there and asks Di are you fine ?? she nods her head and tells yes .. Shaurya holds her shoulder and takes her out towards the car, he opens the door and makes her sit in the passenger seat , for a minute even he was scared looking at her state , and thankfully he remembers that she was afraid of dark, She was quite all the way .. Shaurya holds her hand making her feel comfortable and Mahek nods her head telling she is fine , they reach safely at PWG lane almost around 11.30 pm ..Vicky hugs nehal and tells her good bye, Shaurya opens the door for mahek and she comes out...he cups her face with one hand and tells take care don't think anything about the incidence, she smiles and says good night.


No Precap

Edited by Shamrouz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Edit ...😉

Hay Wats up with the rocket speed updates ,women ?
But never mind..main na aam kathi hun..pathae kyun ginnoun ? 😆
Okay so it was truth dare game ...
I really felt bad shaurya had to listen so much from his mother
Lol shaurya and mehak phone convo 😆
And shaurya was shocked seeing mehak in western outfit ?


The outing scene was Well written 😳

The bonfire , shaurya can actually sing ? 😲


My rockstar bhai 😎
And mehak just rocked the floor with her dance moves


I can imagine how bhai's face wud have been 😆
And the way he proposed her in front of everyone !!


Totally dreamy..
He really cares for her...tats y he was the one to rush
To her wen she screamed...


I like the way he holds her wen she is scared 😳

Sunshine..loved the update ...

PS...no precap ?!?!? 😆


Edited by -Thabassum- - 8 years ago

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