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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hottyangel

amazing updates... dev is very matured and understanding... he loves geet a lot and he wants her happiness. he made her realize her love for maan... why maan is avoiding geet... hope the twist is not something that hurts maaneet...




Hmm his love was selfless ...

Hehe lets see bout that


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

Congozz on new thread sweets...


I gotta catch with lots of updates... Be back soon... 😳




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Finally Geet realises that she loves Maan. And Maan knows that he loves Geet but holding himself back as he wants her happiness.




Hehe the reasons for him is other too so ...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

maan avoiding geet to after knowing his feelings fr geet

maan saw dev hugging kia he get angry he thought he cheating geet
but dev let go geet bz he observed geet have strong feelings toward masn than him



hmm true love is like that only hehe


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

hoo geet realized her love for maan.
maan still trying to control his feelings for geet
feel bad for DEV





Hehe hes a tough nut to crack


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: happydays30

Nice update
Maan is controlling his feeling towards her, he is avoiding her
Dev knows his heart will break
Geet realised her feeling for Maan
Now wats going to happen , hope they don't seperate
Geet suffered a lot , no more suffering for her





Hmm its just the start


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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
maan wants to avoid geet
dev already know that
let's hope something better
waiting for next
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago



Part 18



"Don't fear an enemy that attacks you but the fake friend that hugs you



"Sir, there was a call for you to urgently go to America for a business meet, Adi informed Maan as soon as he entered his office. "Alright Adi, have you made the arrangements for the same, Maan asked. "Yes Sir, you can go home now and rest for a while then your flight is at night, He informed his boss. Maan nodded and went to their home. Adi knew his boss needed rest he hadn't gone home for four days now because of this project so he asked him to rest.



On the other hand Geet after she returned that day skipped school for four days still feeling unable to face Dev. Yash entered their house to find Geet in the kitchen, "Still skipping school Geet. Geet looked up and nodded nervously, "Yes. "Okay forget it. Let me treat you today, we can have our little party what say. Anyway Maan has go to America for some work, so let's enjoy in his absence, Yash said noticing her gloomy face. "Isn't Sameera di still there too, Geet asked warily. "Hmm, yes I just hope it is not a trap for Maan, my father and sister are always imposing things upon him, I'm sure they must have plotted something big against him this time. Even if I stop him, there will be no use as he is working hard for you, Yash said. "Geet you know how to chop the veggies, Yash asked.



"Yes bhai, I know, She said taking the vegetables. They started preparing occasionally chatting. Geet felt comfortable with him and Yash observed her and understood what she has been going through but decided to not ask her the same. He really had now thought of Geet like his own little sister and hoped his family don't hurt these two anymore. Maan entered to get his things and found the two of them preparing something, "What are the two of you doing. His voice startled Geet and she dropped the knife and the bowl, Maan was worried about her getting hurt and rushed to her side. "Are you alright, you are not hurt anywhere are you, He said holding her hand checking for any injuries. "I'm fine, She said pulling her hand from his hold. "You have to leave right, so just leave, She spoke. Maan was dumbfounded by her weird behavior but he nevertheless went back to his room to pack leaving Geet behind with a thudding heart. Yash noticed this but did not say anything.



The diner was a silent affair making Yash getting bored. "Maan, I'm sleepy carry meee, Yash said. "Hey what are you doing get off...ah we are not kids anymore, Maan said pushing him off. "You know Geet when we were back home, dad used to get weird ideas regarding us, , Yash said making Geet laugh. "Good to see you laughing, I was so bored with the silence, oh my, I will just get some pepper from the kitchen, He said getting up leaving the two of them alone. "I'm sorry for my earlier behavior, Geet apologized. "Its okay dear, did you talk to Dev about that girl fiasco, Maan asked. "Yes, She said. "So hes not cheating on you right, Maan asked. "No hes not, Kia loves him but he doesn't, She said. Maan sighed in relief, putting his head down on the table tired. "I really like that boy, you couldn't have found a better one, He spoke closing his eyes due to tiredness.








Geet looked at him guilty of lying but she was scared what if all this ends once she tells him she loves him. She looked at his sleeping form and was going to caress his head when she was disturbed by Yash's voice, "Hey Maan wakey wakey, Adi just called your flight is in two hours so you should get going. Maan woke up with a jerk and started leaving, "Alright then I will leave. I will be back after I get the work done there."Hey aren't you forgetting something, He said. "Like what, Maan asked. "Goodbye kisses for me and Geet, Yash said. "Ahh, let us skip that, Geet said trying to back off. "Ah, come on Geet, it was common there he did that for us and you are..., before Yash could complete, Geet said , "I said no means no... "Hey, I was just joking, did not want to hurt you, Yash said. "I'm sorry Yash bhai, Geet said. "It's alright dear, are you worried about something, Yash asked. "I think I should leave, Maan said. He went out, but Geet was feeling guilty. "He forgot his mobile, Yash said. Geet snatched it from him and rushed out, while Yash smiled looking at her.



Geet rushed to him, "Wait, you forgot your phone. Maan stopped hearing her, "Geet, but I don't need it in a foreign country. "I'm sorry ...please when you return I have lots to talk about and something important to tell you, She said in a go.







He smiled and kissed her forehead, "Goodbye Geet, I will hear everything you want to say when I return. He left leaving Geet behind with a myriad of emotions. Maan reached the airport and boarded his jet with Adi joining him and briefing him about the meeting. As he landed he was tightly hugged by Sameera, "Oh I missed you so much Maan. "Hey let go off me, Maan said. "Maan since you are here and we are going back, I thought I'd come to pick you up, Sameera said. "Hey, hold on, I'm not taking you back. "I just heard from dad, there are many things, you have been hiding from Geet, that you want her to know, She whispered making him shocked. "What, He said separating her from himself. "Let's go dad is waiting, She said.



"Have a seat Maan, Mr Malhotra said. "What have you told Sameera uncle, Maan asked. "Hmm Adi how much work has been done, Mr Malhotra said. "Sir we have completed almost everything we are ready for the test the coming week, Adi said. "Adi, leave us, Maan ordered. Adi was loyal to him so he followed his boss's orders. "Now uncle tell me what have you told her, He said looking at the father and daughter duo.







"I have a proposal Maan, He spoke in his business tone. "First, you return here . Second you take Sameera with you as your fiancee, He put forth his proposition shocking Maan. "Hey just hold on now, you just want me and Geet separated right. You want to take her away from me, Maan said . "I would not hold on from now and watch you fall in love with the daughter of your father's murderer. I lost him but I won't lose you and if you don't want her to know the entire truth then I suggest you take the second easier option to take my daughter as your fiancee, I have enrolled her in a University in your country, so marriage can wait until graduation but until then both of you will be together as an engaged couple, He finished.



"I won't agree to this nonsense, Maan said getting out of his cabin furiously. Sameera rushed behind him, "Maan , please try to ..., before she could complete he turned around and said in a hurt and angered tone, "I can't believe that you would do this to me Sameera, I thought of you as my closest friend but you betrayed me. I thought that you may be childish but you had that self respect but you proved me wrong today. You planned this with him, why are you all wanting to hurt her, what has she done to you or your father.






"My self respect died the day I loved you Maan, why can't you love me back, why won't you give me a chance, why won't you give me your heart. I love you Maan, I seriously do and have always since we were kids and you know that, She said desperately professing her love again and again, but she forgot the matters of the heart could never be imposed, regardless she tried. "If I take you as my future wife then will you not hurt Geet, if that is so then for her I sacrifice myself, I don't know what do you mean by giving my heart to you but for her I will do that but please I beg of you don't hurt her anymore, He said giving up sacrificing himself again for the only person he held dear Geet not knowing how it will affect her and them.





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Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Part 19




"Your Love is my Beautiful Lie"



Sameera looked at his face he couldn't even lie that he loves her what was she trying for, she thought for herself but even if it means just being by his side it would satisfy her. She knew shes doing wrong but ...she loved him so much that she was ready for anything. Maan felt choked with emotions, but then he could not risk her getting to know about the truth, not knowing that she already knew half of the truth courtesy to Sameera.




On the other hand, Geet went to school and was confronted by an angry Kia, "Where have you been. "I..I was, before she could complete Kia gave her a notebook. "Here the notes for everything that you missed, and don't thank me Dev asked me to do that, you know how tough it is to take notes for a person like me, She said. "Thank you Kia, Geet smiled. "Dev never took an off you know, I don't know what happened between you two but just talk about it, running away is not a solution, She said softly. "We care about you Geet, you made me Naina and Dev worried, Kia told. Geet thought about her words and she was right, she was being a coward running away, she looked up to see Dev, who smiled looking at her and she smiled back.



"Hey, Geet here, Dev said forwarding a parcel to her. She opened it to find a similar photo frame to the one that got broken. "Wow you got that, thank you, She smiled. "Yup, I did, good to see you are happy having it, He said. "So, did you talk to Maan Bhai, He asked. "Not yet he left to America for some work, She said. "Geet you know sometimes I feel there is more than meets the eye, I think hes carrying a burden, He said. "Thank you Dev, for not hating me even after what I did, She said. "Geet, I can never hate you, no one does so please never run away from any situation face them, He smiled and she nodded.



Geet left and Dev watched her but his thoughts were disturbed with the gardener's voice, "The two of you make a good pair. "We broke up, Dev said. "Whattt, why , but just now you were behaving so normally with her, The gardener asked shocked. "Well that is because if I don't smile she will be guilty and blame herself, which I don't want. I still love her and want her happy, He smiled. The gardener really liked the young man before him, but he did agree with his thoughts regarding Geet whom he knew suffered a lot and prayed for her happiness, not knowing the sadness shes going to get today.



Geet entered her house happily and found Yash there. "Hey come on Geet, let's have a barbecue today, He said. "Okay Yash bhai, I will be there in a moment, She said running to her room to get changed and joined Yash in their garden where he set up for the barbecue. "Geet, are you scared of fire too, He asked. "Not really but a little, She said. "Maan hates fire, you know when we had barbecues back at home he used to be careful to put out even the slightest of flame in the fear of burning the house down, He said.






You were the shadow to my light
Did you feel us
Another start
You fade away
Afraid our aim is out of sight
Wanna see us
Alive






Before Geet could ask why they heard the doorbell. "I will get it, Geet said. Opening the door she found Maan standing with Sameera there. "Geet who is it, Yash said coming out wiping his hands. "Sameera, why are you back, what about your studies, how come Mom let you off that easy or is it you and dad did something again, Yash bombarded her with questions looking at his sister suspiciously."We are getting engaged to be married. Sameera will stay here with us as my future wife, Maan answered this time making both Geet and Yash stare at them in shock. Geet's whole world came crumbling down with this piece of information. "You are joking right, Yash said.


Where are you now
Where are you now
Where are you now
Was it all in my fantasy
Where are you now
Were you only imaginary
Where are you now



"Nope, we are damn serious, he finally accepted my love, Sameera said. "Or you blackmailed him into it, tell me Maan what happened there, Yash asked. "Nothing it is just like she said, I..I think I like her too and I..guess I mean we all know each other since our childhood, Maan said. Yash decided not to say anything further on the matter. "What is the need to get married so soon. you are just 22, Geet said this time unable to control her emotions. Maan looked at her and saw her hurt, but he had to carry this on so he diverted the talks, "Are you gonna keep us standing here. They joined for the barbecue, Maan knew Geet was hurt but did not know the reason why.

Atlantis
Under the sea
Under the sea
Where are you now
Another dream
The monsters running wild inside of me
I'm faded
So lost
I'm faded





They wrapped up everything and all retired to their rooms leaving Maan behind. Geet was feeling restless so she came downstairs and looked at Maan putting out the fire.








"Geet what are you doing here, He asked. "How did our parents die, Came her sudden query. "Arson, He said. "You mean someone lit the fire, She asked. "Yes some guy was arrested, He said. "Geet you should go in its getting cold, He said. "I'm fine here, She said. "You said you wanted to talk about something.., He asked after a while.


These shallow waters, never met
What I needed
I'm letting go
A deeper dive
Eternal silence of the sea
I'm breathing Alive
Where are you now
Where are you now




"Do you really love Sameera di, She asked all of a sudden catching him off guard.His face turned serious before answering her query.





"Geet...I ..I know you must not be feeling good seeing her but I..I do love her. I'm sorry I said I will stay back here but I guess I have to look after her too, please try to get along with her. I will fulfill my responsibilities towards you before I leave just like dad wanted and you have Dev now too so..., He said. "You will leave me, She smiled sadly. "Its no need you can go back, I will manage, I had thought of living alone from the very beginning anyway, She said running back in. Crying her eyes out in her room, "Its true I wanted to live alone then why does it hurt now... She slept tired of her thoughts.







"I'm leaving, Maan said rushing out. "You did not even have breakfast, here I prepared so much for us, Sameera said. "I'm getting late so forget it, He said trying to leave but she grabbed his arm making him sit on the breakfast table stuffing a toast in his mouth. "Just shut up and eat, She said. Geet saw this and she laughed looking at his mouth stuffed with the toast and Sameera feeding him more, "You two are already like married couples, She commented. They had their breakfast and then rushed out. It has been a week since Sameera and Yash started living with them, everyday she heard their voices but her heart ached seeing them together. She went to her school and Dev saw her gloomy so he asked her the reason, "Maan loves Sameera di, they are getting engaged. "What, that is impossible no one can like a birdbrain like Sameera, He commented making Geet laugh.




"Did you tell him, He asked. "Umm...no, I guess its of no use, She said. "You know you should, He said. She nodded and was left in thoughts. She came back from school and found a mail in the mailbox. She took it and when she entered the house she found the whole decor of the mansion changed. "I redecorated it, how does it look, Sameera chirped. Geet looked around and then her eyes fell on the shelf where their photograph with her mom and his dad was there. She went there and started to look for it to find it missing. "What did you do with the photograph here, why did you remove it, Geet said angrily. "I did not touch it, I swear Geet, She said. "Don't lie you just put all your photographs here, I don't mind that but why did you remove ours it was the only one which had all of us together, She said marching angrily to look for it in other rooms. She was happy when she found it in Maan's room.









She took it and hugged it tightly relieved that it was safe and slept there hugging it. Maan came back and found her there, he was surprised but when he looked at the object she was holding he smiled. He covered her up and hugged her. He put her on his bed and left to her room to sleep. Geet woke up to find herself in Maan's room. She took the new photo frame from her bag and put the photograph in the new frame. She was leaving for school when Sameera noticed that watch still with her. "You have let her borrow that watch for long now, don't you think you should get it back ..., She said to Maan.



Under the bright
But faded lights
You set my heart on fire
Where are you now
Where are you now



As she was coming back from school she received a message from Maan, "If you have time then could you come here. She looked at the photograph he sent and remembered it was where they met. She reached there and found Maan waiting for her there. "Maan, why did you call me here. Is your work done for today, She asked. "We are doing a test today of the project, He said. "You see those arrangements there, they will be announcing the opening soon, He told her. "Great, you have worked really hard, She said looking at the arrangements. "Here, Happy Birthday Geet, He said forwarding a box to her. "You knew my birthday, She asked surprised. "Of course I know, He smiled. "But I never told you, She said. "I know your birthday, I always remembered it, He said. "Can I open it, She said looking at the box. He nodded and she opened it to find a watch there.





Where are you now
Atlantis
Under the sea
Under the sea
Where are you now
Another dream
The monsters running wild inside of me
I'm faded
So lost
I'm faded (Faded by Alan Walker Lyrics)



Her eyes turned sad, "Yeah...its right I have been borrowing your watch from a long time now. She took out his watch and gave it to him. "Where is Dev, you two are not celebrating, He asked. "We broke up, She told him. "Is it ...that litte punk he was cheating on you after all, I'm going to thrash him up for this, Maan said enraged ready to leave but was stopped by Geet, "That is not the case, don't behave as if you care for me because you don't. She cried stopping him. "Geet, what happened, please..., before he could complete both were shocked by the dazzling lights and on the huge announcement on a huge screen placed there showing her picture which Maan took with that handy cam of his saying "Happy Birthday Geet, followed by his pic which said From Maan. Then there were fireworks in the sky saying the same Geet was shocked even Maan too. He called his friends and they accepted that they did this thinking it was a special day for his only family.



"This..., Geet said. "My friends did this, we were going to make the huge announcement but ...I ...I was thinking how to make your birthday special. You are 18 today, I always thought how to make you happy on your birthday then how can you say I don't care for you, He said sadly. "I'm so.., before she could say anything they were surrounded by media, "So young lady how does it feel to be pampered like this on your birthday by the business magnate himself."I..I'm so happy, Geet whimpered. "Are you his friend, The media person asked but Maan covered her, "Please no more questions.



He called his guards and they took the media out. "Gosh who knew they would even call the media, He sighed. "Geet are you alright, He asked finding her sobbing in his arms. "Geet, talk to me, why did things didn't work out between you and Dev, He asked.








He heard her mumble something but was unable to hear it clearly due to the noise, "What, I can't hear you."I love you Maan, He heard her speak shocking him with her confession. On the other hand a man watched the news flashing on the screen in delight and in recognition, "That is my daughter...Geet and that man Yash's son ...Maan ...My little Geetu has grown up to be just like my Madhu...I found you Geet.













So here are the next two parts, please do give your honest reviews...Next part most probably on Friday 😃








Precap- The sound of a broken heart 🥺







A Short Teaser - " Please don't say goodbye ..."










Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Great update
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