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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld
Nice update
Riya ke sath kisi aur ko sochne main bahot taklif hote hai
Last tak intezar to Karna Parega
Plz update soon

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Amazing update sis . You have written very good . Aww i liked that scene when She putted her head on his shoulder and started sobbing . Arjun said stop this and the last part was nice when riya said that if he will propose her tomorrow then she won't deny this time . continue soon thanks for pm</font>

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Angelsonali1
I will have no problem if abhi and riya become one.i like their pairing too😊

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I too love this abhi..

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: mamatha2310
vety emotinal update
Arjun n Abhi dono hi Riya ko
khush dekhna chahate hain
Arjun Riya ko hurt nahin karna
chahta Riya Arjun ki kmzori nahin banna
chahti Abhi kya kare khush ho k use us ka
pyar mil raha hai ya dukhi ho k us ka pyar
us k pass hai par khush nahin hai
count soon n thanx for pm
n sorry for late

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Angelsonali1
Please update do na.😭

Will try to update today

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Part 5:-

Riya:-agar tum na kahoge toh Mein mom dad ke chune hue ladke se shadi Kar lungi..Meine faisala le liya he..

Saying this Riya left to her room leaving abhi ..

Abhi move his hand through his silky hairs n sigh..

He walked to window n started looking out..

Iss din ka intzaar toh usse kabse tha..Shayad Tabse jab Ye ehsaas hua ke woh Riya se pyar karta he..Ke jab Riya usaki ho.. kab Riya usse shadi ke liye ha bole..Kab woh Usaka proposal accept kare..

Agar koi Dusara ladka hota abhi ki jagah toh aaj bahot khush hota ke finally usse Usaka pyar Milne ja Raha he..Par abhi Inn ladko me se nahi..Woh Ye acchese janta he ke riya Ye Sab sirf Aur sirf Arjun ke liye Kar rahi he..

Woh ek ajeeb si mushkil me fas Gaya he..Kya kare Aur Kya na kare..

Na woh Arjun ko samza pa Raha he na Riya ko..

Agar usane Riya ka hath nahi thama toh Riya usake parents ko chune hue insaan ka hath tham Legi..

Aur Kya woh ladka Riya se utna pyar karega jitna Arjun ya abhi karte..?

Agar usse Ye baat pata chali ke Riya ke Dil me toh koi Aur he..Toh Kya woh usse wahi pyar aur respect dega..?Ya fir typical man ki tarah Usaka ego hurt hoga..

Kya woh insaan kabhi Arjun aur Riya ke pure pyar aur rishte ko samaz payega..?

Aur agar samaz bhi paya toh Kya zarurat padne pe woh Riya ko protect Kar payega Jaise Arjun ya abhi karte..?

Ye sare sawal abhi ko zinzod Rahe he..He restlessly drink a glass of water in one go..

He started taking deep breath trying to make him relax..

Abhi(mutter to himself):-kya Karu..?Kya Karu Mein..?

Abhi(muttering to himself):-arjun apne pyar ko safe rakhne ke liye usako kisi Aur ko sopne ke liye tayar he..Riya apne pyar ki kamzori na bane iss liye usse dur Jake kisi Aur se shadi kar rahi he..Aur Mein..?Mein..?(with determination)Mein bhi woh Sab karuga Jo meri pyar ki khushi ke liye hoga..Fir Chahe Isake liye Muze tumse shadi hi Kyo Na karni pade ritz..At least tum mere Sath rahogi..Mein tumhe Har khatre se protect Karne ki koshish karuga..Har khushi dene ki koshish karuga..Tumse aise hi pyar karta rahuga..badle me fir Muze pyar mile na mile..

Next day..

All are in office..Doing their work..

They are busy in solving a crucial case..

Finally they got some clue..N after that Sam told all to take a leave as it almost night now..

All are gathering their stuff..When abhi get up n walked to Riya..

Abhi:-ritz..Muze tumse kuch baat karni he..?

Riya:-hmm..

Abhi hold her hand n bring her to center on conference room..

Abhi:-aaj valentine's day he Ritz..

Riya come to know what abhi is going to do..

Abhi sit on his knees..

Abhi:-i know..Itni baar propose Kar Chuka hu Aur tum reject Kar chuki ho..Par aaj fir bhi tumhe propose Kar Raha hu..Ye jante hue bhi ke tum kisi Aur se pyar karti ho..(he smiles little):-but Sach Kahu Mein Arjun se jyada handsome hu..(Riya smile lightly)(abhi wink to her)more hot than him..N I m dam sure more romantic than him..(he suddenly get teary)Aur usse jyada hi pyar karta hu tumse..Mera pehla Aur aakhri pyar ho tum..Arjun tumhe khud se dur Kar sakhta he..Mein nahi Kar sakhta..Kyo ki fir Mein mar hi jauga..

Riya look to Arjun..N Arjun look to her..

Abhi:-i promise..Har khushi tumhe dunga..Tumhara Har sitam sahuga..Maut ko bhi tumhe lene se Pehale Muze marna hoga..(with tears):-will u marry me Riya..?

Riya look to abhi with tears..Then she look to Arjun..

Arjun(also have tears) give her just encouraging teary sad smile..

Riya again look to abhi who still on his knees..She too goes on her knees..

Riya:-yes..Yes..I will..I will marry u..

Abhi put ring in her finger..N pull her in hug..He knows she need it most..Riya broke down n started crying hugging abhi..

Abhi hug back her n trying to make her relax..

After a while she broke off..Abhi give her support n both get up..

Here choree n Sam are looking them so shocked..

Choree issliye ke unhe pata he ke Riya Arjun se pyar karti he..Aur aaj achanak woh aise abhi ka marriage proposal accept Kar rahi he..This shocked them..

Aur Sam..Woh Kahi na Kahi Ye feel karta tha ke Riya Arjun se pyar karti he..Aur Arjun ki aakho me bhi usse Riya ke liye feelings nazar aati thi..Sam bhale hi Arjun se sikandar ke matter ko leke naraz ho par..Dil se woh Arjun ko abhi bhi apna dost manta he aur usaki khushi chahta he issliye abhi Aur Riya ko aise dekh woh shocked he..

Par Sab iss shock se bahar aahhi Rahe hote he ke ek Aur shock unhe milta he jab Arjun aage aakar abhi ko hug karke congratulation bolta he..N then

Arjun Riya ko bhi hug karta he..N Riya too hug back him..Both trying hard not to broke down..

Arjun:-congratulations Riya..I m so happy for u..

Riya:-thanks..

Both broke hug..Riya look to abhi..Abhi knows what she is feeling now..She just wanted to run away from here..

He hold her hand..

Abhi:-ok..Bye guys..Kal milate he..

Saying this abhi took Riya out of office..

Choree shock se bahar same ek dusare ko dekhte he..Unhe toh Ye Sab sapne jaisa hi lag Raha he..They left from there without a word..

Arjun bhi Waha se Jane wala he tabhi Sam usse awaz deta he..

Sam:-rawte ruko..

Arjun stop on track..His back is facing to Sam..But Arjun didn't turn to face sam because ab itni der se roke hue aasu aakho me se bahar nikale aaye he..

Sam:-tum aise kaise behave Kar sakhte ho ke Jaise ke Tumhe koi farak hi na padta ho..?

Arjun(still his back towards Sam):-matlab Kya he tumhara..?

Sam:-matlab Riya tumse pyar karti he..Ye toh koi bhi samaz sakhta he..Bas Sivay tumhare..

Arjun:-I know..

Sam(shocked):-tum jante ho woh tumse pyar karti he..?

Arjun don't answer..

Sam(shocked):-aur abhi ko bhi Ye baat pata he..

Arjun again don't answer..

Sam(shocked):-lekin fir bhi Riya ne abhi ka proposal accept kiya..?Abhi ne bhi usse propose kiya Ye jante hue bhi ke woh tumse pyar karti he..?

Arjun again don't answer..

Sam(mutter but audible to Arjun):-muze hamesha se aisa laga ke shayad tum bhi Riya se..

He stop abruptly..

Arjun(completing Sam's words):-ha Mein bhi..Ha Mein bhi usse pyar karta hu..

Sam just staring him with shock..

Arjun turn n look to Sam with teary eyes..

Sam:-toh fir tumne Ye Sab kyo hone diya..?Why don't u told her dam it..?

Arjun:-usse pata he...

Now Sam is more shocked..

Arjun:-tumne sahi kaha tha rathod..Sahi kaha tha..Roshni ki maut ki wajah Mein hu..Mein usse bacha nahi paya..Mein usse safe nahi rakh paya..Par Riya safe rahegi Kyo ki woh muzse dur rahegi..

Sam stared him without blinking his eyes..He realised what Arjun had done to Riya safe..

Sam(shout):-tum pagal ho Gaye ho rawte..?Had ho gayi tumhare pagalpan ki..jis sikandar ko tumne dekha nahi..Kisine dekha nahi..Jisaka Kahi koi namo nishan nahi..Uss sikandar ke dar se tumne Riya ka pyar tukara diya..?Usse khud se dur Jane ko mazbur Kar diya?I can't believe this..Tumhara pagalpan tumhare itne sar Chad Chuka he ke usake dar se tumne Ye Sab kiya..

Arjun:-tum Chahe kitna bhi inkaar karlo rathod par Sach yahi he ke sikandar he..Aur Ye ek din zarur Sach hoga..

Sam(shout):-sikandar he Ye tum sabit Kar paoge ya nahi Ye toh waqt hi batayega..Par rawte PlZ..PlZ..Aage se kabhi kisi ke itne karib mat Jana ke usse tumse pyar ho Jaye..PlZ..Firse kisika Dil aise mat todna..

Arjun(with tears):-ye toh firse muzse hoga bhi nahi rathod..Kyo ki ab mere tute hue Dil me roshni Aur Riya aise bas gayi he ke Aur kisike liye jagah hi nahi bachi..Aur nahi Dil me hasarat bachi ke kisi Aur ke karib Jane ki..

Sam taken back hearing this words..He keep staring him..

Arjun left from there

Sam(in mind):-kuch samaz nahi aa Raha.. Jo ho Raha he galat Ho Raha he ya sahi..Kaise samzau..?Aur kise samzau..?

He move his hand through hairs frustratedly..

Here abhi n Riya back to riya's home..

Riya make her mind strong..

Riya's mom:-are Riya..Abhi tum dono aa Gaye..Mein khana lagati hi tum dono ke liye..

Riya:-mom..Ham baad me kha lenge..Muze aapse kuch baat karni he..

Riya's papa:-kya baat he Riya..?

Riya:-aap chahte he na ke Mein shadi Kar Lu..Toh thik he..Mein Kar rahi hu shadi..

Riya's parents get happy..

Riya(without giving them chance to speak anything):-meine apna jeevansathi chun liya he..

Riya's parents look each other..

Riya's papa:-kyon he Woh beta..?

Riya:-jeet..I want to marry him..

Riya's parents get more happy..

Riya's mom:-hey bhagwan..Isse badi khushi ki baat Kya hogi..?

She hug Riya..

Riya's papa:-ye hamne Pehale Kyo nahi socha..

Riya's mom:-ha..Ham toh ladka idhar udhar dund Rahe the..Lekin ladka toh hamari aakho ke samne hi tha..

Riya's papa (smile):-ha sahi kaha..

Riya's mom:-jab tum dono bhi yahi chahte ho toh hame Kya problem he..

Riya's papa:-ha..Abhi se accha ladka kaha milega..?Mein jaldi hi abhi ke parents se baat karta hu..

Abhi:-nahi uncle..

Riya's papa:-kya hua abhi..?

Abhi:-umm..Woh actually pehale Mein apne parents se baat karlu fir aap unse baat karna..

Riya's papa:-ha Ye thik rahega..

Riya left to her room..N abhi goes behind her..

Riya's parents happily smile..

Here riya's room..

Riya is sitting on bed in lost state..

Abhi come there n sit besides her..

Abhi:-ritz..

Riya look to him..

Abhi:-meine jaan buzke uncle ko apne parents se baat Karne ke liye Roka..Taki tuze Aur waqt mil sakhe..

Riya:-mein jitna jyada waqt lungi utni hi jyada kamzor ban jaugi jeet..Aur Kya tum apne dost ko kamzor padne doge..?

Abhi:-kabhi nahi..

Riya:-toh fir aaj hi apne parents se baat Karo..

Abhi give a nod..Both took dinner almost silently..

Abhi then talk to his parents..

His parents also get very happy because they know abhi loves Riya truely..

N his parents talked to riya's parents..N they decide to do engagement ceremony at very next Sunday that is after 3 days..

Next day ..

Abhi n Riya come to office..Choree took Riya in canteen n bombard her lots of questions..

Riya told them truth as she thinks being her secrete keeper they deserves to know this..

Choree emotionally hug her..

After lots of time they back to conference room..

Abhi:-sameer ..Muze Aur Riya ko 2 din ki chutti chahiye..

Sam raised eyebrow..

Abhi:-i n Riya are getting engaged on Sunday..Of course u all r invited..But we need to do some arrangements so 2 days leaves..

Sam look to Arjun through corner of his eyes..Arjun bas abhi n Riya ko dekh Raha he trying hard not to show any expression on his face..

Sam sigh..N just nodded looking to abhi..

Soon the 2 days fly away..N it's engagement day of abhi n Riya..

They had arranged a small yet elegant ceremony..

Only close relatives are invited for this function..

Abhi made Riya ware the ring..

Riya's mom:-riya..Ab tum.abhi ko ring pehnao..

Riya look to Arjun through corner of her eyes..He just blink his eyes to her..

Riya put ring in abhi's finger..All claps n started congratulating them..

Parents announced abhi n riya's wedding after next 15 days..

Abhi hold riya's hand to give her support..Riya somehow kill her tears inside..

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Angelsonali1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

I just loved the update. I like abhi very much.he is so selfless. Really he is more handsome than arjun 😛

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Tumpa12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

superb
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Kya tumne ye soch hi liya hai ke har story mein mujhe itna rulaogi ke mere parents mera phone tod denge...

.lekin mein phir bhi kuch na kuch jugad laga kar tere saare update padhungi...

.and fut fut ke roungi akele mein...

.kash mere life mein abhi jaisa koi aa jaye...i swear puri jindagi usase pyar karungi...

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Kya tumne ye soch hi liya hai ke har story mein mujhe itna rulaogi ke mere parents mera phone tod denge...
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.lekin mein phir bhi kuch na kuch jugad laga kar tere saare update padhungi...
.
.and fut fut ke roungi akele mein...
.
.kash mere life mein abhi jaisa koi aa jaye...i swear puri jindagi usase pyar karungi...

sorry tumko rulane ke liye..

but aage aur bhi he..

all the best..hope ur wish come true 😉