Tasveer Banaata hun Mein 1 SHOT, Om & Gauri updtd on pg 33 19 June - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Such a beautiful Teaser

the lines are so heatfelt and has warmth to it

will be waiting for the update


Glad you are waiting Right HAving Baahubali ffever till it is not gone can't focuse on ShivRu moment...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar




Thank You


With Regards

Ila


U r welcome Ila dear. 😃 🤗 And Gul Mata obviously shouldn't mind if u become the CV darling. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting teaser dear. Update soon. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Interesting teaser dear. Update soon. 😳




Thnks I will try today hope.my internet pick up it's speed ik page khulne mein hi time LGA rha Hai...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Fursat Ke Lamhon Mein, Mashroof Raahon Par...

Jo Saath Tum Chalien, Aaya Safar Ka Maza...

Aise Mujko Mile, Hai Dhoop Mein Saaye Se...

Yun Banke Aaye Ho Tum Mere Rehnuma...

Tumse Jude Kuch Aise Hain Silsile...

Dil Yeh Mera Harpal Yeh Tumse Kahe...

Thanks Brother for Being There...




Everyone was expierencing the rollercoaster after whatever they have seen no one had expected this outcome. Tension was really high and no one is able to sleep. There is no one who can mellow down an angrykara. Everybody knows that Omkara is a kind of a person who rarely gets angry and his anger has its own genuine reason. But the question was how to diffuse the bomb which got activated and right now is in its dormant stage. Here, Rudra was biting his own nails and scheming to do something. He was analysing the situation in his own way. He was standing in the kitchen and constantly watching the utensil which was placed on the burner. Shivaay had come to take water but seeing the lights of kitchen on came to see who is there. Shivaay seeing Rudra there asked him what he is doing. Rudra stopped Shivaay and told ik minute bhyia aapko dikhta nhi ki Rudy nhi the Great Rudra Singh Oberoi is thinking. At which Shivaay lifted his both eyebrows and asked him kya mein jaan skta hun ki the Great Rudra Singh Oberoi Kya soch rha hai... Rudra smirked- ha ha ha... Dekha bhyia aap bhi muje nhi jaan paaye... anyway main yeh soch rha tha ki yeh bruner jlta kaise hai... making a puppy face mujhe bhook lagi hai... Socha tha O apne dil ka izhaar krke aayega bhabhi ke saath acha time spent krke hum yahan Obro moment karenge and fir usse shaheed hone k liye bhabhi k paas khud bhejenge... khud toh gusse ka pasta bnaake aur khaake araam se room mein bhaita hai aur yahan mere pait mein chuhe kud rahe hain... Meri toh kismet hi kharaab hai mere dono bhayion ki shaadi kya huyi dono biwiyon mein itne busy hain mera koi dhyaan hi nhi rkhta... ek ko gusse se fursat nhi dusre ko romance se fursat nhi... Hey Bhagwaan! Koi toh ho iss duniya mein jo meri fikar kare. Shivay seeing him with his I-know-this-would-come look slaps his head and said- Isse iss trh se on krte hain vaise tu pka kya raha hai hawa... kuch daalna toh tha... chal hat tujhe main apni special dish khilata hun. Rudra seeing Shivaay in action gets side. Rudra- Vaise bhyia! Sach Kahun O ke begair yeh moment adhura lag rha hai. Shivaay being serious- I know Rudra, filhaal itna theekh hai ki voh apne room mein shaanti se bhaita hai yaa so rha hai yaa kuch bhi soch rha hai... vrna jo situation hai usme toh voh kya kare yeh toh sirf bhagwaan jaante hain ya fir yeh khamoshi. I hope subah tak uska gussa theekh ho jaaye. Rudra smiled- Bhyia! Aap kabse O k gusse se darne lage! The Great Shivaay Singh Oberoi ko toh toofaanon se ldne ki aadat hai... Shivaay seeing him mocking shoots his dagger at him and said- Baat toofaan se ladne ki nhi hai usme doobne se bchne ki hai... Uska abhi bharosa nhi voh kaise react kare bchpan mein bhi aisi situation aayi thi where he was angry on bade papa... Rudra was inquisitive as he has rarely seen Omkara that much angry because he knew whatever the case Omkara always controls his anger or he rarely get that much angry and asked- Vaise aisa kya kiya tha usne jo aap aise bol rhe ho... Shivaay making serious face- He threw the statue on bade papa. Rudra got shocked- Huh! Kya fir se bolna... Shivaay- He threw the statue on bade papa's face. Rudra was so shocked he immediately blurted out- Fir papa bche kaise?? Shivaay slapped him and said- It was sheer luck that The Little Omkara wasn't able to aim properly aur voh jaake deewar se takra gya. Bade papa ki haalat dekhne layak thi! Rudra imagined he and Shivaay going in his room and O throwing one of his statue to their faces he jerked back to reality and blurt in half shocked state Par aaj vaale Omkara ka nishaana b nhi chukega listening to this Shivaay asked what. Rudra diverted him and asked Vaise bade papa ne kiya kya tha. Shivaay- He promised him to come to his award ceremony he had come first in academic and drawing competition and both the brothers together as usual he didn't come. Shivaay was emotional- You know what Rudra that day what he said- Shivaay mujhe bura iss baat ka nhi laga ki voh nhi aaye... mujhe bure iss baat ka laga jab unhone phone kiya tha function shuru hone se pehle papa ne kaha tha he was reaching there but voh nhi aaye. Shivaay I hate lies. Kuch bhi ho sach bol lo main nhi aa paunga muje business important hai bchon se jayda. I will handle that but jhuth nhi shivaay bas jhuth nhi... bhut dard hota hai dil mein bardaasht nhi hota voh dard. Shivaay was literally on the verge of crying he felt Rudra's hand on his shoulder he turned and composed himself. Rudra understanding his brother- I know bhyia aap unki bchpan se fikar krte hain aap hi the jo unhe unke dard se bahar laaye the... aur humesha dhal bane ho but abhi ki situation mein O kya soch rha hai kaise pata lgaaye. Uska apne iss self zone se baahar aana b jaruri hai! Jab tak usse baat nhi karenge tab tak uske ander ka toofaan shant nhi hoga. Shivaay- I know but filhaal uska volcano ka reason kuch aur hai aur voh tbhi shaant hoga jab voh usse face karega. Rudra frowned and seeing Shivaay's look both spoke together- Gauri Bhaabhi. Rudra- ufff... such tricky situation mtlb iss Omkara naam ke toofaan k aage humein bhaabhi ko aage krna hoga. Kya din aa gya... But bade bhyia isse toh voh gussa nikalega kam se kam hum usske gusse ko mould krne ki koshish toh kar skte hain naa neeche dekh hi liya hai kya ultimatum dekhe bhaite hain O bhaabhi ko. Shivaay was thinking on this matter and told- You are right par kare toh kare kya? Hmmm let's see filhaal tu apni pait ki bhookh khthm kar. Rudra- Thank You Bade bhyia I love you and kissed him. Shivaay- Theekh hai Theekh hai vaise bhi Khaali pait gya toh uske gusse se hi pait bharna padega tujhe... Rudra was going to take bite and stopped and got scared- Bade Bhyia! Kyu sher k muh mein jaane ki koshish kar rhe ho. Jaana hai toh khud jao naa mere ko kyu suli pe chada rhe ho? Abhi tak toh mere baal b safed nhi huye aur main statue ki chot se toh bilkul nhi marna chaahta. Shivaay in his tone- Shut Up Rudra jldi finish kar. Rudra in dramatic way- Kya Jamaana aa gya hai... ek Bhai khud hi apne bhai ke marne ki planning kar rha hai... Shivaay- Rudra! Last time vrna aise hi khaali pait le jaunga.. Rudra- Nhi bhyia khaata hun... Rudra- Vaise bade bhyia iss situation pe arz kiya hai- "Kisiko nhi hai meri fikar... kyuki sabke paas hai best figure... Jisse darte the humaara pura parivaar aaj usse chaahiye iss chote bhai ki madadat... Shivaay slapped him and told- Ho gya tera now finish it up quickly isse pehle ki Om so jaaye. Rudra- Ok Bhyia!

**********THE END**********

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Posted: 8 years ago
this was lovely Ila..
Rudra and his antics.. isska kuch nahi hosakta...
lovely updatr.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its so nice and wonderful...keep writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Cutey update yaar...
Rudy afraid of volcanokara...very funny...
Loved it Ila..
Do continue writing...
Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it Ila
Beautiful 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome OS yaar...
Bohot dinon ke baad got some quality ShivRu to read.
So much fun... I really miss OBro moments on the show nowadays.
Thanks for the PM and the lovely update!

Eagerly waiting for more from you!

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