Soothing the Fire-Shivika FF UPDATED(Chapter-20 on pg-144)06/09 - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins



Your comments get ME soaring in the sky love :* Infact I've started writing the next chapter already because I didn't feel like making you wait (don't know when it will be up tho). And jeez I'm so happy my story makes you feel better yayay❤️Mujhe itna compliment mat do yaar I can't handle it!! And you know what I want to watch Pinky suffer somehow but that's far from happening in the show anytime soon so maybe I'll somehow make her suffer here lol :P If the story line permits, that is, because this should be light hearted to the core(as you wished)😆😆



The more the Pinky Ponky Suffers the more light hearted it is 😆 😆
Haye ye kyu bataya ki you have started writing ab toh bas aapne mere raaton ki neend aur din ka chain cheen liya 😭 please jaldi Update karna 😃
And if you plan to make Pinky Ponky Suffer na Toh please acche se jalana usse but don't forget Shivaay is the best beta but but but International jodi toh Annika ke saath hi jeeta hai na, you get what I mean? 😆 😆

Update Soon Sweetheart

Warm Love
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil



The more the Pinky Ponky Suffers the more light hearted it is 😆 😆
Haye ye kyu bataya ki you have started writing ab toh bas aapne mere raaton ki neend aur din ka chain cheen liya 😭 please jaldi Update karna 😃
And if you plan to make Pinky Ponky Suffer na Toh please acche se jalana usse but don't forget Shivaay is the best beta but but but International jodi toh Annika ke saath hi jeeta hai na, you get what I mean? 😆 😆

Update Soon Sweetheart

Warm Love
Diva_Vineet


Haha I'll try and update ASAP.Trying to make the chapter romantic you know toh time lag sakta hai 😉
Annika ko toh best bahu nahi mila na so maybe she can make Pinky suffer haha ;)
And ab tumne bol diya toh I'll try and make it AS LIGHT HEARTED AS POSSIBLE get it ;) ;)


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins



Haha I'll try and update ASAP.Trying to make the chapter romantic you know toh time lag sakta hai😉
Annika ko toh best bahu nahi mila na so maybe she can make Pinky suffer haha ;)
And ab tumne bol diya toh I'll try and make it AS LIGHT HEARTED AS POSSIBLE get it ;) ;)




Suddenly after reading this I am very Happy ki Annika didn't get the Best bahu 😆
Oh Romance 😳 take time darling then Shivika ke romance me I don't want things to haarhaarayike happen, So take your time 😆
Other than that suddenly this light hearted looks so appealing and attractively warm to me (heheheheheh)
And also how is the preparation going on for your exams?

Warm Love
Diva_Vineet
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil



Suddenly after reading this I am very Happy ki Annika didn't get the Best bahu 😆
Oh Romance 😳 take time darling then Shivika ke romance me I don't want things to haarhaarayike happen, So take your time 😆
Other than that suddenly this light hearted looks so appealing and attractively warm to me (heheheheheh)
And also how is the preparation going on for your exams?

Warm Love
Diva_Vineet


Haha, don't worry you'll get Shivika romance in all the chapters. ;) Was typing the chapter right now, and if you're okay with a short one, I can update by today hopefully :)
And exam preps are.. I really don't know how they're going. One minute I think I'll do good but then the next I'm making plans to run away on the result day hahah😛
The writing bug has bitten me and I'd rather write all day than open my textbook. Gosh I cant wait for vacations-infact I'm planning to write a LOT more Shivika stories when I finally get the time. I even have some ideas that I think people might like.
Do let me know if you're okay with a short chapter!😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins



Haha, don't worry you'll get Shivika romance in all the chapters. ;) Was typing the chapter right now, and if you're okay with a short one, I can update by today hopefully :)
And exam preps are.. I really don't know how they're going. One minute I think I'll do good but then the next I'm making plans to run away on the result day hahah😛
The writing bug has bitten me and I'd rather write all day than open my textbook. Gosh I cant wait for vacations-infact I'm planning to write a LOT more Shivika stories when I finally get the time. I even have some ideas that I think people might like.
Do let me know if you're okay with a short chapter!😊😊



Aah the life of a student, I too have to start with college soon, I am crying abhi se hi but then I am happy too 😆
I am fine with everything with Shivika in it, the point is will you be satisfied by what you post? That's it if you are, then Please post
😊
And if not I can wait and wait patiently to see ki Annika aapne aapki 'Oh bete ki' hone se kaise bachati hai 😆
As it pleases you darling 😉

I am abhi se excited, when are your vacations starting 😆

Warm Love
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil



Aah the life of a student, I too have to start with college soon, I am crying abhi se hi but then I am happy too 😆
I am fine with everything with Shivika in it, the point is will you be satisfied by what you post? That's it if you are, then Please post
😊
And if not I can wait and wait patiently to see ki Annika aapne aapki 'Oh bete ki' hone se kaise bachati hai 😆
As it pleases you darling 😉

I am abhi se excited, when are your vacations starting 😆

Warm Love
Diva_Vineet


I think I'm kind of happy with how the next chapter is turning out, so I'll update by tonight if I'm done with it. I just hope everyone likes it :3
Happy for college,huh. Any particular reason? ;) hehe jk.
And my vacations start from the 6th of June. Can't wait 😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hehe m so loving this ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Ch-5

This one's dedicated to babydevil for being SUCH a sweetheart :*

Annika was struggling to get out of this situation she had landed herself into. Clearly, she had underestimated Shivaay's level of jealousy. If she told him now that she had only been trying to make him jealous, God only knew what beast would be unleashed. There were, of course, boys in her locality who wanted to have a go at her, but once these road-side Romeos had been beaten by her loyal Chameli, they had learnt their lesson to never mess with her again.

"Um, Shivaay, let it be na? I've told you, you don't need to worry about them..." Annika wrapped her arms around his neck, while Shivaay's automatically went around her waist. Trying to divert his mind, she said,

"Now will you wish me good morning properly?"

Shivaay smirked.

"You know... I'm DYING to wish you good morning properly.." He inched closer to her lips, but before he could capture them, she moved her head to the side.

"Shivaay!" Annika exclaimed. "What if someone walks in?Don't act so stupid!"

"Heyy, you're the one who wanted a proper Good Morning. I'm just fulfilling my girl's wish."He said while pouting.

Annika couldn't help but pull his cheeks.

"Well I didn't know this is how you wished someone!Wait, is that how you wish Tia too?!I swear if you say yes, I'll beat you up with my Chameli so bad..."

Shivaay laughed at her antics. This was the first time he was seeing her be jealous, and it filled his heart to know that all of this, was for him. SHE was for him.

"Aww, look at you! Now you know how I feel when you mention these admirers' of yours? And don't think I'm going to let them go so easily- anyone even eyeing what belongs to me will suffer, and badly."

Oh Gosh, will he never let this go, Annika thought.

"Okay, okay, Mr.Jealous Singh Oberoi. We'll talk about this later. Now let's go down, Dadi is calling you for breakfast."

Annika was about to leave the room, when Shivaay pulled her back into his arms.

"Just one kiss, and then we'll go. Please?"

Annika glared at him.

"You're such a cheapde, Shivaay! You REALLY need a beating from my Chameli.."

"Okay hold on, who's Chameli again? You're bag or..."

"NO! My bag is Chikni! Chameli is my chappal. Gosh, how can you possibly mess up their names?"

Shivaay sighed, while playing with a strand of her hair.

"Maybe because they're all named so similar.." He mumbled.

"Hey-I heard that!"

"Achha tell me, why do you always name your things with 'Ch'?"

"Because it sounds so khidkitod! She said with a childish enthusiasm. "You know, I always thought that if I have a son, I will name him CHINTU!"

"What nonsense", Shivaay exclaimed with a startled look. "I will NEVER name my son Chintu!"

"Stupid Baggad Billa, who said anything about YOUR son? I was talking about MY son!"

"Well, your son and my son will the same and one, obviously." Shivaay said as if that was the most obvious thing in the word.

As soon as Annika registered his words, her face turned red.

Avoiding Shivaay's eyes, she stuttered,

"W-woh Dadi was calling you downstairs. Come quickly." With that, she managed to get out of his embrace and ran out of the room.

Shivaay only laughed.

God, it's so much fun teasing her!

~

As soon as Dadi saw Annika, she knew something had happened in the room. She was blushing, and smiling to herself while playing with the corner of her dupatta.

"Annika puttar, where's Billu?"

Annika was startled out of her reverie. Hearing his name, her face heated up again, which didn't go unnoticed by Dadi.

"He's coming in a bit, Dadi."

"Okay, "She smiled at Annika. "Why don't you join him for breakfast too? I know you probably didn't eat anything since you're in such a rush before you leave home."

Before Annika could answer, a voice spoke from behind her.

"You're right, Dadi. Why don't you join me for breakfast, Annika?"

It was Shivaay, who had just sauntered down the stairs and stood beside her, close enough for her to feel his body heat. This mere closeness got Annika's hormones all riled up.

"Uh, okay. "She managed to speak out.

A few minutes later, the both of them were seated on the dining table, with the only other people in the hall being Dadi and Prinku, who were busy talking to each other. Dadi, however, had her eyes on them too, subtly noticing their every exchange.

Shivaay had left his usual spot to go and sit right next to Annika, which frustrated her to no ends, as she didn't trust him to keep his hands to himself. Inching her chair slightly away from his, she started serving them both. Shivaay, however, was not one to let go easily. Since he saw her in the morning dressed in that fitted outfit that highlighted her curvaceous figure, he had been dying to pull her in his arms and do sinful things to her.

Pulling his chair close to her in return, he leaned over her to reach the bowl of pasta. Doing so, he rubbed his nose against her hair, inhaling her heavenly scent. Leaning back, he found Annika glaring at him.

"What?" He asked innocently, while lading both their plates with the pasta.

"You know very well what, "She gritted through her teeth. "Dadi is here, Prinku is here, and anyone else could walk in anytime! So will you please maintain some distance, Shivaay?"

The stubborn man that he was, he simply replied with a Nope', and started with his breakfast. Annika sighed, but started eating too, looking around every other second to see if anyone was noticing their proximity, since Shivaay was sitting so close that it would look was from just friendly. Moreover, the family members would surely wonder how two people who never seemed to stop fighting were now breakfasting together so comfortably it looked like they had been doing this for ages. There was a perfect sync amongst them, passing each other whatever was needed with just a simple gesture from the other. They were both silent, until Annika suddenly gasped.

"What happened Annika puttar, are you okay?" Dadi called from where she was sitting in the living room.

"Y-yes, Dadi. I'm fine. "Annika replied.

After all, how could she tell Dadi that her insolent, stubborn and outrageously handsome of a Grandson had suddenly grasped her knee under the table, and now his hands were moving over her thigh in slow torturous movements. Peeking a look at Shivaay, Annika found him smirking devilishly while taking a mouthful of his food.

Regaining her composure, Annika decided to take revenge.

Tada!

Sorry for the cliff hanger guys but that'll keep you all interested I hope ;) Next update will be on Thursday/Friday, hopefully.

What do you think her revenge will be? Even I don't know yet but feel free to guess haha ;)


Chapter-6

Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update. Awosome one
I was away from Toronto on vacation when I read it and res for comment. Sorry took long to unreserved.
I must say you are best with last lines and cliff hangs
Can't wait to read next chapter. Plzzzxxzz update soon. 😃
Edited by jazmeen - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shivaay is a very cute and romantic devil!!!!!!

Wondering what Anika has in store for him? ⭐️

As usual very well written 👏

I can imagine Shivaay's expression when Anika said 'Chintu' 😆 😆 Behara!

I feel like once Shivaay realises that she was just making him jealous, he's going to make it tough for her, These two I tell you! 😆

Waiting for the next part! 😃

Loads of love,
- Sims 🤗

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