Ariya SS: Mere Dard Ko Zuban Miley..Part 10 Pg 53 -- 22/7 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aimen.naseer

loved it!!

riya's friends cares for her how sweet
Poor riya bechari kaha phas gayi
hope she'll be fine
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mamatha2310

Superb update

Riya' s friends are realy best
Wo Riya ko kitna sapport kar rahe hai
But poor Riya kahanphas gai
Plzzz us ke sath kuch galat na ho🤔
Waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

Very nice dear

Love it
Hope Riya will be fine
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Awesome update..

Riya is in some deep trouble..
I hope Arjun confess his love to riya..
I think only Arjun can bring the confident riya..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: etfr


Restless Arjun imagining riya at bar. But soon he saw her in real.
Riya got fully drunk. Ronit took her somewhere.
Shreetu n Ayesha search Riya but didn't able to find her.
Riya is in danger.
Arjun got worried about riya.
Nice update
Amazingly written.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: stormfly13

Hate to read. I want to see this. Awesome story. Thanks for the PM. Update soon.😊


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Posted: 8 years ago




Hey everyone. Thanks alot giving me this much response.
Well...i got many of my readers asking me about ronit's character. He is a good man inside. soon as the story proceeds you will see his good side as well. A few pmed me to post pic of my ronnie's character as it's getting difficult for them to imagine this character so here is the pic in the poster above (Rohit purohit who has appeared in last episodes of Arjun as Karah).
coming to next part..




CHAPTER 4




knowing about the absence of ronit and riya, made arjun tensed. At one side was his friend and on the other side was his love, what should he do?? this question consumed all his strength to think or to take any stand in short it made him sensless..



Other's, waiting for an answer were looking at him. "Let's go shree in logo se kisi bhi tarhe ka jawab expect karna fizool hai hum khud dhund lein ge riya ko" said an inflamed chottu.



Shree nodded and said "Tu thik keh raha hai chottu ye bhi apne us dost ki tarha nikamme hain". And they left in search of their dear friend.



"Aakhir gaye kaha dono.." thought arjun in his mind.
Arjun :" Sam...is se pehle ke kuch galat ho jaye humein dono ko dhundna hoga". Sameer nodded and said to search riya and ronit along with them.



Outside the club:



Shree: Aisha tum yaha ruko. mein left side pe jata hoon aur chottu tu right ja.


Aisha and chottu nodded together. shree went left while chottu went right to search riya. Arjun and sam began to search inside the bar.


Inside the room:



Ronit who was said to be drunk was actually sober (not drunk) .Yes, he was concious of everything happening around. He tempted hard to seduce a drunk riya but she tries to get her free from him. "Kya hua riya baby..why are you recalcitranting. Dekho..You are a good girl right? So be a good girl (He said in a bit harsh voice)".



"Nai..Tum gande ho you are a bad boy..i hate you. Mujhe ghar jana hai leave me" said riya getting her arm be freed from his hand. She walks towards the door and tries to open the door when ronit grabs her wrist and folded her back.



Having a cold scream riya said "Ouch...ronit leave my hand you're hurting me". "i meant to hurt you miss riya..samajhti kya ho tum apne aap ko aaj tumhara sara ghamand mein (rolling his eyes all aroung the room) is band kamre mein nikal hi dun ga".



After several attempts to get her freed from him she injured his arm with her teeth. With her red eyes..she searches for something to get her out of the room. Her eyes suddenly, caught a wooden stick placed near the door. She moves ahead and picks the stick. Turning round, she hit it hard on his forehead. He fell down unconscious.



Soon in a while arjun and sam arrives and knocked the door, it was locked inside. Arjun and sam broke the door by hitting it hard together. the scene inside made them displease, ronit was lying insensible.



On the other hand riya was unconscious laid at a cornor. Choree and aisha also reached the spot. Watching the room is all messed up and ronnie-riya laying ununconscious All were shocked.
Arjun and sam rushed towards ronnie while other trio moves ahead towards riya. Turning his side arjun found ronnie's injured head. which made samjun dead.



Sameer: Ronit...Ronit get up kya hua tujhe ronit uth.
Checking his impulse arjun shouted "Sam jaldi se ambulance bula. is ki nabz(pulse) nahi chal rahi. "h..haan i'll call the ambulance" saying this sam brings out his phone and dials the hospital no. in hurry.hearing this, stunned chottu, Aisha and Shree looked at eachother's face.



Arjun looks up at riya who was also ununconscious, but caring for ronnie arjun picks him up, took outside and put him into the ambulance.
While on the other hand chottu, shree and aisha took riya to he house along with them.



At the hospital:



Samjun reaching the hospital, put ronnie on trolley and rushed inside.A doctor was passing by when arjun said "Doctor..dekhiye na please mery dost ko boht chot lagi hai aap please issey ek baar dekh lijiye.



please doctor issey kuch nai hona chahiye..bacha lijiye mere dost ko please doctor".



"Doctor aap ko jitne paise chahiye ap ko mil jayein ge bas hamare dost ko kuch na ho please" said sameer and implored.
"Nurse inhe jaldi se emergency ward mein admit karo kaafi khoon beh chuka hai inka jaldi karo" said doctor and torned to leave when arjun stop him while holding his arm. "Doctor mera dost..thik to ho jaye ga na" said arjun with numb eyes.
"ye to dekhne ke baad hi pata chale ga" replied the doc. and leaves.



At riya's residence:



Chottu holding riya came into her room and made her lay on the bed. shree poured some water in the glass and splashes on her face. Riya came into her senses holding her head which seems heavy to her.



Moving her eyeballs all around she said "Mein..mein yaha...par hum log to club main thy na".
"Tu ne kaafi pee li thi aur behosh bhi ho gayi thi..shayed iss liye tujhe kuch yaad nahi" replied shree.



Riya got stunned and asked "Kya matlab..".
Trio begun to look at eachother's face. "Kya hua koi mujhe kuch bataye ga bhi ya nahi" asked riya in anger.
Aisha: Actually riya..wo..
Riya: Wo kya aisha kuch batao bhi sahi
Aisha: Wo...you were drunk and..and ronit tried to take advantage of you.



Riya got shocked and said "Kya..par.." getting furious she asked "kahan hai wo ronit ka bacha us ki itni himmat kaha hai wo". "Hospital mein" said shree in cold voice.



Riya (Shockely)"What par kaise"."Pata nahi..jab hum tum logon ke pas pohnche to tum dono be hosh thy aur ronit kafi injured tha"said chottu.."Riya tumhe kuch yaad hai ke waha kya hua tha" asked aisha.



Riya, holding her head said "Nai...mujhe kuch yaad nahi kya hua kese hua kuch nahi..". She get up from the bed and continued "i need to go to the hospital". Trio tried to stop her but she didn't.



At The Hospital:



Arjun and sam sitting outside the room, on the metal chairs are waiting for ronit to open his eyes. "Sam..i don't know why but i'm not getting positive feelings about anything"said arjun. Putting his hand on his shoulder says "Don't worry buddy everything will be fine".



Holding his hand in frustration said arjun"mujhe boht dar lag raha hai sam..agar ronit ko kuch ho gaya toh??"."kuch nahi hoga ussey arjun..tum fikr mat karo sab thik ho jayega trust me" said sam while consoling him.



In a while Ronnie gains consciousness. Nurse shouted and called the doctor to check him. Hearing her voice both rushed inside.
Arjun hurriedly opens the door. Finding ronit awake in front of him, filled his eyes with tears. Watching his friends ronit shed tears in joy. He knew that his friends will always be there when in need.
Arjun places his hand on his cheek with wet eyes he says "dekh yaar itna door mat jaya kar..tu janta hai tere bina hum kuch nahi..tere bina hum teeno ki yaari adhuri hai".



Ronnie put his hand on arjun's wrist and says "Tum logon ko chod kar mein kahan jaun ga..tum dono ke bina tumhara ye dost bhi adhura hai".



The white Bandage dressed on ronit's head reminds him to ask about the incident happened hours ago."Who hit's you ronit..tell me..i will not leave him" yelled arjun. "it wasn't him but her" ronit replied.



"Her?? who was she" asked arjun surprisingly."Guess who?" said ronit creating a little bit suspense to them. Arjun and sam looks at eachother with blank faces.



Rising his neck he tries to get up but in vein..Arjun once again asked her name. Submerged in pain he announced "Riya" which left both samjun shocked.



"But riya..she herself was unaware of her surrounding then how could she hit her" thought sameer. "par riya aisa kyu kare gi" asked arjun. "Pa..pata nahi arjun but she did" replied ronnie.



tears filled arjun's eyes. He came out of the room and sat on the metal chair. red eyed arjun remember ronnie's words.
His anger towards riya increases after every second. In a while an anexious riya appears in front of him..and she was standing about hesitatingly. "Ar...arjun" giving a short silence payed her words hardly "Ro..Ronnie ka..kahan hai".



Unfortunately a moment hadn't passed her uttering a word when he furiouly get up from his seat and said "naam mat lo us ka apne mooh se tum" which shocked her from inside.
"Ar...arjun hua kya hai" asked a fearful riya."kya hua..tumhe kuch nahi pata" he asked."Mein kuch samjhi nahi..tum kya kehna chahte ho" she asked confusingly.



Arjun:don't act smart riya (it gave her another shock)actually tum jitni bholi dikhti ho utni ho nahi"(He said while pointing his index finger towards her). Tears dropped out of her eyes.



He began to move his steps towards her while she took steps back, looking at eachother's eyes..she could see that pain and extreme anger in his eyes which was enough to make he feel frightened of him. "Par mene kiya kya hai arjun" she uttered.
"janna chahti ho tum ne kya kiya..(showing his hands dipped in blood) yeh dekho..ek insaan ka khoon bahaya hai tum ne riya" screamed an enraged arjun "tum ne mere dost ko maarne ki koshish ki hai" he continued.



Hearing this her heartbeat stoped for a moment, her sensing power made her unable to think for that moment.The tears stucked in her throat. she was not able to express her pain nor could utter a word further.



"Tum abhi tak yahi khadi ho? Jao yahan se" said arjun furiously. But she paid no head to him rather she stands still. "Mene kaha jao yahan se is se pehle ke me kuch kar dun leave.." he yelled.
Hearing loud noice outside sam came outside .Watching a furious arjun sam hold him back and asked" Arjun ye kya kar raho ho" looking at riya he continued.



" riya tum yaha kya kar rahi ho itni raat ko..dekho ronit is fine now. Tum ghar jao boht raat ho gayi hai..else come i'll drop you".
Still in shock, she landed her eyed on him for the last time before her departure when he avoided meeting his eyes.



Ajuns has always cared for her with a devotion bordering on obsession. He've always saved her from all the troubles and difficulities spreaded by ronnie..but today..the question was to choose between a 12 years old friendship or a 2 years old love, and he prefered his friendship over his love.He proved his loyality and true friendship to which ronnie himself salutes.



Inside the room, an injured ronnie was taking advantage of the scene created outside. He smirked and said "mujh se panga se ker tum ne acha nahi kiya riya..ab apni khair manana..kyun ke..kuch hisab kitab abhi baqi hain" and he smiled.



Precap:

Ronnie's torture for riya begins..



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Ps: Ignore typing and grammatical errors.


So guys...that's it for today. As it's exam's season..so busy in it. Sorry for the late update hope my dear readers will forgive me. And will update the next part right after 7 June. till that enjoy reading and do leave your precious comments, all the bashings, hate, love and suggestions are allowed. 😳
Toh dil khol ke bolo😉
Edited by Devilicious - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome amez super update
loveit
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Posted: 8 years ago
I hate Ronnie y he behind riya always troubled her poor Riya now Arjun also hurt her pre recap shocking plz no more pain for Riya eagerly waiting for nxt dear and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor Riya... felt really bad for her...
Ronnie took advantage of his friend
Don't know what is going to happen to riya??
Nice update
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon 😊

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