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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is not good yaar...its awesome...

A different concept ,want to see what an intoxicated gouri chiraiyya is gonna do...

Please please update soonish dear...

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit
This is not good yaar...its awesome...
A different concept ,want to see what an intoxicated gouri chiraiyya is gonna do...

Please please update soonish dear...

Aww, thank you so much dear. If I'm not wrong, you are the author of 'When she coloured my canvas'. I'm extremely sorry if I'm mistaken. At this moment, I have no idea how to proceed. But if some good plot conjures in my mind, I'll surely write it down. Thanks for your feedback.

Cheers,

Nivi

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Shraddha Dikshit

@Shraddhadikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Aww, thank you so much dear. If I'm not wrong, you are the author of 'When she coloured my canvas'. I'm extremely sorry if I'm mistaken. At this moment, I have no idea how to proceed. But if some good plot conjures in my mind, I'll surely write it down. Thanks for your feedback.
Cheers,
Nivi

Hey, I'm that same person. Glad to know that you are following my ff.

Its ok dear, even I do feel blank sometimes, just pen it down when you get a good plot.

and please do pm me when you update it, if not I might miss it.

Bye...

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

Good concept

But was too short

Please provide us with part 2 or make it an SS

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Hey, I'm that same person. Glad to know that you are following my ff.
Its ok dear, even I do feel blank sometimes, just pen it down when you get a good plot.
and please do pm me when you update it, if not I might miss it.

Bye...

You have emotions at correct place in your ff. My apologies for delay in comments. I have logged in after many days so I will try to read all the chapters in a day ortwo and then give my view. I will surely pm you, dear.

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nivi.. am I right??.. hi this is Neha..

Loved this Drabble.. short yes but perfect description of a confused Omkara .. yea it's a huge conflict at hand for him.. he misses her yet brands her as an actor.. ouch.. hope he gets out of his mess n realises the heart wants what it wants sometimes.. simple.. the mind can play all the games it wants really..

Chalo thanks for this one

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Good concept
But was too short
Please provide us with part 2 or make it an SS

I'm glad you liked it. I know it was short but the Drabble was in a spur of moment. At present, I'm not able to make out how to proceed. And secondly, I'm very lethargic. Updates might be delayed. But I assure, if a proper plot comes in my mind I will surely continue. And will pm you also.

Cheers,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Nivi.. am I right??.. hi this is Neha..

Loved this Drabble.. short yes but perfect description of a confused Omkara .. yea it's a huge conflict at hand for him.. he misses her yet brands her as an actor.. ouch.. hope he gets out of his mess n realises the heart wants what it wants sometimes.. simple.. the mind can play all the games it wants really..

Chalo thanks for this one

Hi Neha. Nice to meet you. I'm glad you loved this Drabble. Omkara deserves a monologue, doesn't he? He behaves like a monster yet no reason to explain why he behaves (not that he deserves any explaination for all the wrong doings. But my little ice-like heart is ready to forgive him if he will be guilty in future).

Cheers,

Nivi