Commitment~~SS{Part 8_Pg.35}05-08-17 NO PM - Page 21

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice update..

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Good one

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Mein bahut late hoon 😭 what to do very busy life. 😉 Its indeed chotu update 😡 Shraman's are hurt & sad. 😲 Pushkar has plan in his mind let's see kya hai woh 😆

Continue soon & thanks for PM 👏

Vinu

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

okay, i certainly don't look like this Pinky 😆

but I'm waiting 😛

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

🤣Madhu...🤣🤣
Sorry dear...par abhitak maine type bhi nahi kiya hai aur main problem ye hai ke mera MS word uninstall ho gaya hai...So mai nahi jaanti ke update kab karungi...Sorry😳
And your Pinky is too cute...Aaj se mai tujhe pinky bolungi😆

He lied on his bed...staring at the ceiling and his mind playing rewind of the series of events that occured that morning..The way her hazelnut orbs stared at her made him fall for again...His thoughts were irrupted with the ringing mobile...

"Bolo...kya hai??"He was irrated..

"Ghussa kyu ho rahe ho sweetheart..tumne call kiya tha na dopaher ko...kyu kiya tha??"She answered sweetly..as always..

"Kuch nahi..woh galati se lag gaya tha..."He snapped

"Ohh..Aacha suno...Mr. Mehra ko jaante ho na tum...??Unka call aya tha mujhe...success party rakhi hai unhone apne case ke jeet ke khushi mey parso Mumbai mey...Aur mai chahti hu ke tum mere saath aao..ussi bahane tum unnse mil loge.."

This was what he had been avoiding from the week...

"Nahi..woh actually meri meeting hai parso..So I won't come..."He said..

"Kaha hai meeting??"

"Mumbai.."He blurted out and GOTCHA..!!

"Great na then..kya baby tum bhi na...ek kaam karna meeting khatam hone ke baad call me...Hum eksaath jaayenge...Bye..."She said and cut the call leaving no words for him to say...

"Kya hua bhaiya...Aise kyu ghur rahe hai aap phone ko??"Pushkar entered with steaming mugs of coffee...

"nahi kuch nahi..."

"Monica thi na...??"

"Tujhe kaise pata??"

"C'mon bahiya...woh ek he hai jo aapko call karti hai and u only listen..."He joked...Shravan smiled

"Kya keh rahi thi Bhabi??"

"MIND IT PUSHKAR..!!"

"Easy bhai...mai mazak kar raha tha...kya keh rahi thi??"

Shravan told him everything...

"Meri toh kismat he aise hai..aaj he Sumo se mila aur..."And he stopped...

"Aur..??And who is Sumo??"

"Nahi woh...kuch nahi...Coffee de..."

"Nahi...pehle ye batao ye Sumo kaun hai??Oh ha yaad aaya...Woh aapki commited friend...Par aap uss se kab mile??"

Pushkar sounded so innocent that Shravan doubted how he had became a lawyer...

"Pushkar ek baat bata...aaj mai kis ladki se mila??"

"Mujhe kya pata.."

"PUSHKAR!!"

"Aare..mere saath toh aaj aap sirf Miss Tiwari se mile...Aur kise..."he stopped and looked at shravan who was looking knowningly at him...

"Ohh..OO...OOOHHH..tabhi mai kahu aap itne nervous kyu ho rahe the...baa baar usko dekhte he kyu reh rahe the...OMG bhaiya...what a coincidence..!!"

Here Pushkar acted as a perfect Lawyer..who could spot and say lies easily..He had tracked her the day he had saw her profile being stalked by sharvan..and god helped him too...She was the owner of the resto and ...

"Toh bhaiya kya baat huyi aap logo ke beech??"

"baat??Kaike baat..she didn't even listen a word not regarding to our work...

"Ohh...Toh aab??"

"Aab kya??dekhte hai kya hoga..."He laid his hands down as he had nothing to do...Jo hona tha pehle he ho chuka tha...and that doo was unmendable...

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"Shravan Pushkar ka bhai hai..."This was the only line which kept ringing in her mind as she reached home...

"ye sabkuch ek saath he kyu hona tha..!!"She shouted...

"Kya hua betiya??"Shyaam came out hearing the sound...

"Nahi..kuch nahi...kya aap please ek strong coffee bhej denge 15 mins ke baad?"

"Bilkul..."

She strode up the stairs..went up to the washroom and stood in front of the mirror...

"Kyu bhagwan..jab sab thik chal raha hota hai..aapko kuch na kuch galat karvana he hota hai na..par Sumo tu kyu load le rahi hai...ye kabhi na kabhi toh hona he tha na...Duniya gol hai..kabhi na kabhi toh woh tere saamne aane vala tha na..."Her heart and brain started their battle whose voice was big enough to make her deaf to her ringing phone and the knocks on the door...

"Bitiya coffee..."

"Thanks kaka...Dinner ready hua hai na??"

"Dinner??Par aapne toh kaha tha aap bahar jaane vaali hai Aditya saab ke saath.."

In Shravan's mess she had totally forgot about her dinner with Aditya...

"Unka phone aaya tha 3 baar...Keh rahe the ke aapko kiya tha par aapne uthaya nahi..."

"Thik hai..."She closed the door and rushed to her phone..42 missed calls..The dinner was planned at 8.30 and it was 10...

"Hello..??"

"Kya Suman..kab se intezaar kar raha tha mai??!!"

"Woh kuch zyada kaam ho gaya tha aaj...I am really very sorry Aditya..."

"Ye hamesha ka hai tumhara...This was the 5^th time u did this..Aagar tumhe aana he nahi hota hai toh why do you promise Suman??!"he cuts the call furiously..

"Lo..aab iska he ghussa hona baaki raha tha sirf...SHRAVAN...tumhari vajah se mera din kahrab ho gaya..."She cursed him..."Really Sumo..."Her heart started talking"Saachi??uske Meeting ke baad you got such a big booking, A event , and a party too..."

This was it..How much did she ever curse him..Remembering him or seeing his picture made her day...

"Shravan..."She whispered looking at the ring in her hand..."Kyu??"A tear escaped her eye as she laid on the bed to let sleep evade her it wasn't going to..anytime soon...

So kya lagta hai??Kya hoga aage...I am sure mere super talented readers ne guess kar liya hoga..Especially Arpita😆😆

Joote and tomatoes are welcome...For this only😆😆

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Hope to meet you guys soon..{with a update ofcourse..forum pey toh any time avaliable hu}😆

ANU😳