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Hi guys, I am Vanshika. My first ever OS on my most favourite Jodi sukor'. Forgive me for mistakes. Hope you Enjoy reading.
SUKOR OS
SURAJ'S PROMOTION
"Suraj ,I hate you..."she said feeling annoyed seeing him laughing with his hands on his stomach.
"Tumko aakhir lagta Kya hai.Tum humein din me dus bar I hate you(imitating her) bologi aur hum tumko pareshaan karna band kar denge."he said again engrossing in his laugh.
Chakor helplessly stands up and moves away from her special sofa in which her newly found love was also sitting.There was a sudden change in her expressions.She no more seemed in the masti mood.And so walked and stood leaning on the window pane.
This was the night of their most awaited confession.And the clock strucked 10:45pm.Suraj got a bit annoyed on her for insisting to return to haveli and on her most foolish reason that,"imli humara intezaar kar rahi hogi."He tried to explain that imli has many other works to do other than waiting for her sister.But chakor is chakor.Actually we should not forget whose wife and love she is.
Presently,Suraj noticed her sudden change in expressions and went to her hugging her from behind.This was a bit strange for her and she startled at his sudden action.Suraj placed his head on her shoulder trying his all efforts to hold her as tightly as he can.Chakor liked it.But just after a few moments,her Indian woman instincts arose which made her speak.
Trying to protest against his hold,she said,"suraj Kya kar rahe ho???"
Suraj in an amusing tone,"badi bholi hai humari junglee Billi..."
Chakor,"aur humara pakhandi pati bahut chichora..."
Suraj tightening his hold,"hello madam, biwi ho Tum humari ,haq hai humara"
Chakor,"aacha .Waise Tum to aaj humein shaadi ke liye propose kar rahe the.aur shayad shaadi ke pehle door rehna jyada acha hota hai."
Suraj moved back and chakor felt displeased but didn't say anything.He said,"aisa Kya.tab to humein ek kamre mein bhi nahi rahna chahiye.kya pata kab Kya hojaye???..."
Chakor disappointed,"kamra...Kamre mein rahna koi Galat baat nahi hai."she thought she made something wrong somewhere.
Suraj,"ooo...Achaa.toh yeh jo tumhare rules hain yeh tumhare hisaab se chalte hain? Haina...?"giving a mischevious smirk."Chalo koi nahi.waise yeh kamra toh humara hai aur aajse tumne bhi humse pyaar ka ailan kar diya hai.Toh agar hum bed par sote hain toh tumhe koi problem toh hogi nahi na????"
Chakor shockingly,"suraj aise Kaise hum Tum ek bed par... nahi nahi bilkul nahi."
Suraj making a puppy face,"yahi pyaar hai Inka."pointing towards her.
Chakor ,"tum bar bar yahi kyun Keh rahe ho.tumko pata hai humko sote waqt hath pair chalane ki aadat hai."trying hard to persuade him to sleep on sofa."aur Waise hum tumko apne Saath sone nahi denge."
Suraj,"madam hum tumhare Saath nahi apne bed par Sona chahte hain" and goes on one side and sits as if annexed and removes his blazer.
Chakor with her hands on her waist gave him angry looks.But he acted like completely oblivious to this lies down and hides himself in the blanket.Chakor was left helpless as she could not bear his emotional torture if she starts blabing at him.With no option left she decided to sleep on her or more particularly his special sofa.She took her pillow ,closed the lights and went to lie down in her sofa when suddenly she thought of changing into a more comfortable clothing.She went into bathroom.
After about five minutes,she came out and laid down on the sofa when she felt something warm near her cheeks.She tried to see and to this her reaction was omg..."suraj Tum yahan Kya kar rahe ho?"
Suraj in a sleepy tone,"yeh toh humein tumse puchna chahiye"
Chakor,"Suraj bakwass band karo aur Jao bed par so Jao."
Suraj acting as if he didn't listen said,"Chakor hum jaante hain ki hum bahut handsome hain aur ab tumse control nahi ho raha hai.lekin Abhi Tumhe mere Saath Kuch bhi karne ki permission nahi hai.jao aur bed par so Jao."
Chakor,"suraj hum tumhe ..."irritated she tried to hit him but stopped.Her fast brain soon understood the scenario.Suraj wanted to sleep on bed but with her.But due to her refusal,he preferred to sleep on this sofa so that she could sleep comfortably on bed.This thought made her smile.
She loved his scournful way to show his respect towards her and this was the only reason that made her life interesting or may be his also.This was also one of the reason that she loved him unconditionally.
Now it was her part to play.She smiled and then moved towards the bed.Suraj who was attempting hard to go on with his acting of sleeping peacefully.When chakor left he turned to take her last glance ,of the most beautiful night of his life till date.
Few seconds later,he felt something beside him.He felt a cloth piece on his hand.When opened his eyes,he saw Chakor who leaned on the sofa.And her purpose was clear in just a second.She made place to lie on the same sofa in which Suraj laid.
Suraj filled with confusion, amazement but opened his eyes to show his fake disgust to her.Chakor ignored him as if he wasn't visible to her.She laid down near her.Their hands almost over each other.Her pink dupatta covering his chest over his black t shirt.
Suraj trying to look annoyed,"patni ji,apni bhawnaon par control karo.mana ki humse sexy pati tumhe nahi mil sakta Lekin iska matlab yeh thodi nahi hai ki Tum Kuch bhi..."
Chakor pulled him again on the sofa,"jyada nautanki mat karo aur so Jao.hum bahut thak Gaye hain."
Finally he spoke,"kya hua chakor???hum toh Mazak kar rahe the.hum jaante hain Tum comfortable nahi ho aur woh bhi is chote se sofe mein!!!"
Chakor,"suraj ab toh hum tumhare sath hi soyeinge.chahe Kuch bhi ho jaye." And pulled her blanket up pretending to sleep.
Suraj smiled seeing her childish behavior.He said,"biwi ke naam par ek ziddi baccha Mila hai humein."Chakor made a puppy face hearing this.Suraj,"plz meri maa Jao aur bed par so Jao,humein itna seriously mat lo."
Chakor,"humne Jo Keh Diya so Keh Diya."
Finally,Suraj came into action.He slid his hands below her and picked her up.She was shocked at this and tried to protest but all in vain.
He carefully kept her on one side of the bed and pulled her blanket up.As he turned to leave,she stood up and ran towards the sofa and picked his pillow and blanket and came back to her place on bed holding his things tightly.
Now,it was no more unknown to Suraj that his most deserving rival was none other than his own wife who would do anything if she makes up her mind to do that.With no options left,he fell over other side of the bed but still a huge amount of guilt in his heart.He knew Chakor was doing this for him.
After minutes, when chakor was sure that this is his final sleeping place.She returned him his things.His silence created a unbearable atmosphere in room.Suddenly,he got up and brought a round pillow and kept it between them.
This is then he settled peacefully on the bed and looked at her.She was smiling.So he too returned her a smile.
Chakor,"suraj!"
Suraj eyes closed,"hmmm"
Chakor,"bad night and many nightmares."
Suraj,"same to you,my love."
And there was chuckles heard from both sides.
It was morning,a totally different scenario is found.Pillow on the floor.The bed which was meant for two people could now adjust four more in it.Chakor's hand on Suraj chest.Suraj's hand on her waist.Her legs between his and better not to say more.When the cool breeze of the morrow entered the room through window, chakor shuddered but this was not enough to wake her up.Rather Suraj got disturbed by her sudden movement and moved a bit without realizing his position.And this woke up chakor and in seconds,both were wide awake.The first thing their sleepy eyes saw was each other's face which caused a smile to form on both of them.There was a brief eyelock followed by an ecstasy of fumbling.They realized their positions and we're embarrassed to the core.They moved apart and both turned to other side.Eventually a smile formed on both the pair of lips.Chakor took her dupatta and ran straight away to the washroom closing the door behind her with a thud that made Suraj realise the effect he had on her.While she in the washroom walked towards the mirror and saw her face which turned blood red.And she looked even more beautiful than any other state time she saw her reflection.
Thanks for reading guys.Hope you all liked it.I imagined the confession night without that vimli crap and the result was this.plz do comment and like.Actually I found many members of the forum who wanted sura promotion from sofa to bed like me so this.it was my first OS and promise to write more if u like it.thanks again.
SUKOR OS
SURAJ'S PROMOTION
"Suraj ,I hate you..."she said feeling annoyed seeing him laughing with his hands on his stomach.
"Tumko aakhir lagta Kya hai.Tum humein din me dus bar I hate you(imitating her) bologi aur hum tumko pareshaan karna band kar denge."he said again engrossing in his laugh.
Chakor helplessly stands up and moves away from her special sofa in which her newly found love was also sitting.There was a sudden change in her expressions.She no more seemed in the masti mood.And so walked and stood leaning on the window pane.
This was the night of their most awaited confession.And the clock strucked 10:45pm.Suraj got a bit annoyed on her for insisting to return to haveli and on her most foolish reason that,"imli humara intezaar kar rahi hogi."He tried to explain that imli has many other works to do other than waiting for her sister.But chakor is chakor.Actually we should not forget whose wife and love she is.
Presently,Suraj noticed her sudden change in expressions and went to her hugging her from behind.This was a bit strange for her and she startled at his sudden action.Suraj placed his head on her shoulder trying his all efforts to hold her as tightly as he can.Chakor liked it.But just after a few moments,her Indian woman instincts arose which made her speak.
Trying to protest against his hold,she said,"suraj Kya kar rahe ho???"
Suraj in an amusing tone,"badi bholi hai humari junglee Billi..."
Chakor,"aur humara pakhandi pati bahut chichora..."
Suraj tightening his hold,"hello madam, biwi ho Tum humari ,haq hai humara"
Chakor,"aacha .Waise Tum to aaj humein shaadi ke liye propose kar rahe the.aur shayad shaadi ke pehle door rehna jyada acha hota hai."
Suraj moved back and chakor felt displeased but didn't say anything.He said,"aisa Kya.tab to humein ek kamre mein bhi nahi rahna chahiye.kya pata kab Kya hojaye???..."
Chakor disappointed,"kamra...Kamre mein rahna koi Galat baat nahi hai."she thought she made something wrong somewhere.
Suraj,"ooo...Achaa.toh yeh jo tumhare rules hain yeh tumhare hisaab se chalte hain? Haina...?"giving a mischevious smirk."Chalo koi nahi.waise yeh kamra toh humara hai aur aajse tumne bhi humse pyaar ka ailan kar diya hai.Toh agar hum bed par sote hain toh tumhe koi problem toh hogi nahi na????"
Chakor shockingly,"suraj aise Kaise hum Tum ek bed par... nahi nahi bilkul nahi."
Suraj making a puppy face,"yahi pyaar hai Inka."pointing towards her.
Chakor ,"tum bar bar yahi kyun Keh rahe ho.tumko pata hai humko sote waqt hath pair chalane ki aadat hai."trying hard to persuade him to sleep on sofa."aur Waise hum tumko apne Saath sone nahi denge."
Suraj,"madam hum tumhare Saath nahi apne bed par Sona chahte hain" and goes on one side and sits as if annexed and removes his blazer.
Chakor with her hands on her waist gave him angry looks.But he acted like completely oblivious to this lies down and hides himself in the blanket.Chakor was left helpless as she could not bear his emotional torture if she starts blabing at him.With no option left she decided to sleep on her or more particularly his special sofa.She took her pillow ,closed the lights and went to lie down in her sofa when suddenly she thought of changing into a more comfortable clothing.She went into bathroom.
After about five minutes,she came out and laid down on the sofa when she felt something warm near her cheeks.She tried to see and to this her reaction was omg..."suraj Tum yahan Kya kar rahe ho?"
Suraj in a sleepy tone,"yeh toh humein tumse puchna chahiye"
Chakor,"Suraj bakwass band karo aur Jao bed par so Jao."
Suraj acting as if he didn't listen said,"Chakor hum jaante hain ki hum bahut handsome hain aur ab tumse control nahi ho raha hai.lekin Abhi Tumhe mere Saath Kuch bhi karne ki permission nahi hai.jao aur bed par so Jao."
Chakor,"suraj hum tumhe ..."irritated she tried to hit him but stopped.Her fast brain soon understood the scenario.Suraj wanted to sleep on bed but with her.But due to her refusal,he preferred to sleep on this sofa so that she could sleep comfortably on bed.This thought made her smile.
She loved his scournful way to show his respect towards her and this was the only reason that made her life interesting or may be his also.This was also one of the reason that she loved him unconditionally.
Now it was her part to play.She smiled and then moved towards the bed.Suraj who was attempting hard to go on with his acting of sleeping peacefully.When chakor left he turned to take her last glance ,of the most beautiful night of his life till date.
Few seconds later,he felt something beside him.He felt a cloth piece on his hand.When opened his eyes,he saw Chakor who leaned on the sofa.And her purpose was clear in just a second.She made place to lie on the same sofa in which Suraj laid.
Suraj filled with confusion, amazement but opened his eyes to show his fake disgust to her.Chakor ignored him as if he wasn't visible to her.She laid down near her.Their hands almost over each other.Her pink dupatta covering his chest over his black t shirt.
Suraj trying to look annoyed,"patni ji,apni bhawnaon par control karo.mana ki humse sexy pati tumhe nahi mil sakta Lekin iska matlab yeh thodi nahi hai ki Tum Kuch bhi..."
Chakor pulled him again on the sofa,"jyada nautanki mat karo aur so Jao.hum bahut thak Gaye hain."
Finally he spoke,"kya hua chakor???hum toh Mazak kar rahe the.hum jaante hain Tum comfortable nahi ho aur woh bhi is chote se sofe mein!!!"
Chakor,"suraj ab toh hum tumhare sath hi soyeinge.chahe Kuch bhi ho jaye." And pulled her blanket up pretending to sleep.
Suraj smiled seeing her childish behavior.He said,"biwi ke naam par ek ziddi baccha Mila hai humein."Chakor made a puppy face hearing this.Suraj,"plz meri maa Jao aur bed par so Jao,humein itna seriously mat lo."
Chakor,"humne Jo Keh Diya so Keh Diya."
Finally,Suraj came into action.He slid his hands below her and picked her up.She was shocked at this and tried to protest but all in vain.
He carefully kept her on one side of the bed and pulled her blanket up.As he turned to leave,she stood up and ran towards the sofa and picked his pillow and blanket and came back to her place on bed holding his things tightly.
Now,it was no more unknown to Suraj that his most deserving rival was none other than his own wife who would do anything if she makes up her mind to do that.With no options left,he fell over other side of the bed but still a huge amount of guilt in his heart.He knew Chakor was doing this for him.
After minutes, when chakor was sure that this is his final sleeping place.She returned him his things.His silence created a unbearable atmosphere in room.Suddenly,he got up and brought a round pillow and kept it between them.
This is then he settled peacefully on the bed and looked at her.She was smiling.So he too returned her a smile.
Chakor,"suraj!"
Suraj eyes closed,"hmmm"
Chakor,"bad night and many nightmares."
Suraj,"same to you,my love."
And there was chuckles heard from both sides.
It was morning,a totally different scenario is found.Pillow on the floor.The bed which was meant for two people could now adjust four more in it.Chakor's hand on Suraj chest.Suraj's hand on her waist.Her legs between his and better not to say more.When the cool breeze of the morrow entered the room through window, chakor shuddered but this was not enough to wake her up.Rather Suraj got disturbed by her sudden movement and moved a bit without realizing his position.And this woke up chakor and in seconds,both were wide awake.The first thing their sleepy eyes saw was each other's face which caused a smile to form on both of them.There was a brief eyelock followed by an ecstasy of fumbling.They realized their positions and we're embarrassed to the core.They moved apart and both turned to other side.Eventually a smile formed on both the pair of lips.Chakor took her dupatta and ran straight away to the washroom closing the door behind her with a thud that made Suraj realise the effect he had on her.While she in the washroom walked towards the mirror and saw her face which turned blood red.And she looked even more beautiful than any other state time she saw her reflection.
Thanks for reading guys.Hope you all liked it.I imagined the confession night without that vimli crap and the result was this.plz do comment and like.Actually I found many members of the forum who wanted sura promotion from sofa to bed like me so this.it was my first OS and promise to write more if u like it.thanks again.
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