NaiRan OS-Confession.

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So i am back with an OS hope you like it 😊

It had been 9 months since Naina and Karan had got married.Initaially when they had started things have been different between them.They had started as srangers who who married each other when they were not in good terms and Since then many things happened betweenthem,but the best thing which happened was their Friendship.But now there was something more .Much more than just friendship.

All of it was going so fine,until new feelings started to develop. Mostly after the entries of their respective best friends in their lives. Nisha who was karan's best friend. According to him She was the only one except masi ma who understood him.they were close .Real close .But only in terms of friendship.

On the other hand their was kabir.Naina's best friend.Even he had been with naina since her childhood.They shared very special bond.But indeed not more special than the bond she shared with Karan.

Still all of it was preety much normal except of the fact that they were jelous until masi ma played her card.She started instigating karan by saying that naina and kabir were not just friends but much more.If she wouldn't have been tied to this forceful marriage she could have been much more happy and got what she really deserved .

Whereas she said naina that the only person karan ever loved was nisha .He never confessed this to anybody but her.This was one more reason he did not want to marry her.

This had broken both of them completely .Both loved each other ,cared for each other but they coudn't hurt each other. And this was the reason that she wanted to go away from him.Somewhere down there karan had started hating this fact.He had started being rude to her.

Things were not the same .They had started to distance each other .But Naina decided to take a bigger decision .She wanted to go away as nothing else mattered to her more than karan's happiness. Of late even karan had started taunting her regarding kabir.But she never tried explaining herself.She knew she had to go and its better he keeps on hating her.

BUT that day change every thing whwn Naina...

FLASHBACK

They were words that she could no longer swallow back; no matter how much it killed her to say them.Karan was as usual playing his guitar.Naina turned on her side to lovingly trace his harsh profile with her.She could no longer contain the words and they spilled from her lips with desperate earnestness.

"I want a divorce."

every single muscle in his body went tight. before he turned his head to meet her watchful gaze. His eyes were hooded.

"Par woh tum hi thin a jisne kaha thi kit um yeh shadi apni puri zindagi nibhaogi? ," he taunted her and Naina lowered her eyelids, trying to mask her pain at his bitter words. When she was sure she had her emotions under control, she once again lifted her eyes to meet his dark gaze.

Aur yeh bhi kaha tha nah ki yeh shadi tum akhri din tak nibhaogi"

"Par ab tum mujhe chorke nahi ja sakti"

"mein tumhare sath nahi reh sakti karan"

" But you don't have a choice Naina"

"Dekho karan mein tumhare sath tab tak hi thi jab tak tum thik nahi hote.Ab tum thik ho gaye ho tumhe jiske sath rehna hai tum reh sakte ho." Saying this she tried leaving.

He grabbed her hands to halt her movement. shocked by the touch. He never touched her. He leaned closer to her and lowered his lips to her ear. She felt his hot breath on the side of her face before he spoke.

"kaha ja rahi ho...keh kyun nahi deti ki tumhe us kabir ke sath rehna hai .You know what agar yeh baat tum mujhe pehle kehti na toh mein tumhe khushi khushi jaane deta but ab not at all.

,"

"You can't stop me from divorcing you" she responded bravely.

"Tumhe sahi mein divorce chahiye ?" He asked tauntingly.

She said nothing, choosing to turn and walk away instead. He watched her go, she could feel his gaze but She did not turn.

He followed her to find setting herself in the storeroom.

"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho" he hit the door hard.

Naina was shocked by this behaviour .She knew he would not be happy wih her leaving the room but had never expected that he would react like this.Wanting an explaination.

"Bed bana rahi hun"she answered without looking at him.

"Woh dekh sakta hun Naina par kyun"

"Mein tumhare sath nahi rah sakti"she faked a smile.

"Dekho naina . all this is not gonna work...pagal go gyi kya"

"Yeh hi sahi hai karan tumhare liye bhi aur mere liye bhi "

"Mujhe tumhare phaltu ki baton mein koi interest nahi hai ...tum mere sath kamre mein wapas aa rahi ho"

He grabbed her hand and tugged her back toward their bedroom . She was so shocked by the abrupt gesture that she stumbled along behind him.

Naina coul not handle all this any more.With a lot of courage she had decided to be this strong now she could not afford to be weak.She released her hand.

"MRS.Naina Chauhan mujhe pata that kit um ziddi ho par itni ?

"Dekhiye Mr Kran Chauhan ..apne abhi tak mera asli roop dekh hi nahi hai ..aur mein chahungi ki ap nah hi dekho to accha hai"

"App ...seriously naina ?"

He pushed her to the nearest wall.They were just inches apart.At that point they could even feel each others breath.They both had never thought of being this close and that to in suh harsh terms.But Karan had already had enough of the divorce crap.

"And by the way for your information i can get worser and trust me on that.."

Naina could not control her emotions anymore and bursted out.

"Don't do this with me karan .I can not take this anymore.Tum mujhse aise baat karte ho ..your closeness with nisha ...i can't see al this ..all i want is to see you happy and nothing else ..agar tum nisha ke sath khush ho toh raho nah ...par mere sath aise mat karo.I want my old karan back.Old Karan back."

"And jot um mere sath kar rahi ho do you think i can take all this ..divorce and all ,tumhari kabir ke sath closeness...tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe pharak nahi parta"

"KYUN pharak parta hai karan... bolo na kyun pharak parta ..bolo ..." she kept on pushing his chest while saying this.

"stop it Naina kya kar rahi ho"

"Nhi chorongi aur marungi kyun pharak parta hai bolo"

"Because i love you dammit..." he held her tight by her arms and pulled her into a tight hug .

" pehle nahi bol akte the idiot ..mujhe itna rulaya ."

"AUR tumne jo mujhe itna mara ...and by the way nisha is getting engaged ajj uski engagement hai .."

"Excuse Me ...ajj meri best best friend ki engagement hai ..."

" ek min kahi un dono ki toh engagement nahi ?"

"Let me check "

"Nisha weds Kabir"

Both started laughing hard ...

"meine ajj tak notice kyun nahi kiya ..."

"Mujhse nazar hategi toh nah notice karogi "

"Accha betu aur apne bohot notice kiya " and she started running behind him ...and throwing things at him ..

After running for few minutes karan pulled naina by her waist I love you Mrs Naina Karan Chauhan "

"I love you too Mr Kara chahan"

He cupped her face and kissed her forehead .

THE END



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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey Trisha right??? tell me if I m wrong. I m still trying to memorize the names... but yar what a story...I wish we will get such a scene in serial too at some point...perfect story with every emotion...be it jealousy romance n their happiness... do write more stories yr...
Posted: 8 years ago
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Trish beta uper char lines padh k hi i m rolling on floor laughing like crazy 🤣 🤣
Nisha kabir???😲
Like seriously?? 🤣
🤣
🤣
🤣
I m going mad reading this only!!! 🤣
Posted: 8 years ago
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Karan ki frnd Nisha 🤣

Aur naina ka kabir🤣

Dekh both r shocked reading this!!

Soch re h hum swabhiman me kahan se aa gye?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!!loved the jealous Karan and Naina..their confessionplease do write more!!
Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww such cute OS😳
Nibir ka naam hi liya bas mujhe laga ek ad scene b hoga 😆
best part was Karan pulling back naina to their room from store room and naina hitting him saying bolo kyu farak padta h and then that Nisha weds Kabir 🤣
Yar Mishkat aur aneri le leti na aur maza ata tha 😆
aneri weds Mishkat padne me

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os trisha . . . . Really hope we get this in the show . . I just love intense stuff
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: annie_scorpio

hey Trisha right??? tell me if I m wrong. I m still trying to memorize the names... but yar what a story...I wish we will get such a scene in serial too at some point...perfect story with every emotion...be it jealousy romance n their happiness... do write more stories yr...

Yeah i am trisha ..and i hope the same 😊and thank u
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anuvanathi

Wow!!loved the jealous Karan and Naina..their confessionplease do write more!!

thank u and i will
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ___Neha___

Trish beta uper char lines padh k hi i m rolling on floor laughing like crazy 🤣 🤣

Nisha kabir???😲
Like seriously?? 🤣
🤣
🤣
🤣
I m going mad reading this only!!! 🤣

ikr ...proof that i am a nibir fan🤣

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