Humraahi - Vitharva FF

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boringbrat

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi friends,
I am a silent reader on this forum, and a loyal fan of Vividha and Atharva. I used to enjoy the show before but currently very disappointed with the story line but some how still have hopes that show will redeem itself.Till the time, we are baring the burnt of the writer's shabby writing I have started a fan fiction "Humraahi". plz read it and comment whether you liked it and should I continue writing it..

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It was a usual morning at the vashisth house atharva was about to take his first sip of the coffee when the door bell rang. Sujatha while coming from the kitchen said she will open the door. On opening the door, panditji greeted sujatha good morning and sujatha too joined her hands and asked panditji to come in. Upon seeing panditji; atharva, ravish, guddi, vividha and tara came to the living room and upon greeting panditji, everyone took their sits. Sujatha suprised at panditji's unexpected arrival asked him about his visit. Panditji said today is 6th may, suman vashisth birthday and from last four years on this day raghav beta keeps nirjala varth for his mother and breaks fast only after performing pooja at the house. Everyone is shocked, atharva is lost in the memories of the last four years during which he considered suman as his mother ...ofcourse he now knew all was a lie but for him that was his life & he had loved and respected suman above all. He looked at ravish who too looked sad n lost in thoughts..he immediately told panditji that he was busy in work so couldn't inform but there will be pooja in the evening so he can come at that time and All the preparations will be done by than..everyone looked with Shocked disbelief but kept quiet till panditji left. After panditji left before anyone could say, atharva went to ravish and said i considered her my mother for four years & I cannot forget her but she is your mother and she will be respected in this house for that reason there will be pooja in her memory like always atharva placed his hands on ravish's arms and said you have always respected my mother in spite of everything and he will do the same for his mother both atharva and ravish hug each other with teary eyes. And everyone are proud of the brotherly bond between the two.
Madhav looked at both and said, "abhi jaldi karo mujhe bhook lagi hai, nashta karna hai." Everyone laughed than atharva said, aaj toh mera vrat hai toh mein kuch nahi khaunga, mein office Chalta hu. Atharva left to get dressed for the office in mean time everyone finished their breakfast. Ravish was standing looking outside the window in pensive mood. He knew he should tell the truth to everyone especially to atharva. The guilt of keeping a secret was eating him inside out. But he was a coward he couldn't muster up the courage to tell atharva the truth that will change everything. He thought to himself that what atharva doesn't know will not hurt him and even he himself deserves happiness surly, it's not selfish of him if for once he puts his happiness above the truth. But than his conscious prickled him maybe he could lie to everyone even himself but how could He lie to a brother who so selflessly loved him; at that moment atharva came to him by the window.
Atharva - I know why you are sad today, but I wanted to tell you something. I want you to forgive your mother suman. I know what she did was wrong and I am not justifying it but honestly if you ask me she was wronged too by our dad. Her bitterness towards life, me and my mother was because ramakant vashisth married her even when he was in love with other woman and ruined her life. No woman will tolerate other woman in her husbands life. Ramakant vashisth ruined two woman's life.
Hatred for his father very evident in atharva's voice.
Ravish upon seeing that atharva still hated his dad and saw him as a main culprit in the mess that this life was, made a decision that it was imperative for atharva to know the truth granted that he too at this point didn't have all d facts but whatever he had learned needed to be shared with atharva. So he took a deep breath, closed his eyes, gathered every strength in his body and said atharva I want to tell you something.
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In the room tara was helping madhav complete his homework vividha came in with the glass of milk in the room.
Vividha - madhav tum phir dudh peena bhulgaye
Madhav - are mummy mujhe nahi pasand
Vividha - haan toh Yeh jake apne papa pehalvan se bolo, abhi kal hi meine atharva se daat kyaee hai ki mein tumko nutrious khana nahi khilati hu.
Madhav - ohh nahi nahi papa ko nahi bolna kuch, woh phir se mujhe 2 glass of milk pila denge
Both tara and vividha laugh totally understanding madhav's frustration with atharva's fitness obsession.
Madhav upon finishing glass of milk asked to vividha
Madhav - mummy what is my nana's name? I have to write it down for homework. In homework I have to complete family tree.
Vividha turns sad remembering her father but still tells madhav it's kailesh kashyap.
Madhav writes the name k. A. I.
Vividha hears the alphabet k. K for kailesh...remembers what all kailesh kashyap did to her and atharva and suddenly everything makes sense ...with dread in her heart and tears in her eyes she runs towards atharva...
Atharva ...atharva... She comes running towards hall where atharva and ravish are having conversation upon hearing vividha's scream atharva runs towards her.
Atharva - vividha kya hua aap iss tarah kyun chila rahi hai...aur aap itna dari hui kyun hai?
Ravish - haan vividha app roo kyun rahi hai?
Vividha - atharva, kailesh kashyap ...kailesh kashyap hamare baache ko le gaya hai...