'PUZZLE' behyad love saga of samay and maya..complete os

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey...hi guys
My name is desha
M trying to write a os on maya
I m not a writer
Just a though came in my mind so i thought to post

Hope you like it

PUZZLE

As the morning sun rays entered her room Maya woke up with a sly smile on her face ...Maya the Queen of fashion industry..A a beautiful charming women who was very powerful fearless confident but lonely...maya had everything in this world except for true love.but it never stopped her.there was something in her which seperated her from rest of the croud...she always conquered what ever desires she had..

wearing a dark blue pensil dress with hair left open maya reached the coffee house where she had a meating with some investors.as she was sipping coffee she could sense some one staring at her..Samay a tall handsome guy with perfect sculptured body and face who could make any girl go weak with just his wicked smile had fallen in love with maya the moment the moment he had seen her...he was obssesed with her beauty and confidence.. he was madly in love with her..all samay wanted was maya..as soon as maya left the table to go back to her office samay got up and kissed mayas cup from which she had drunk coffee...l

Samay was stalking maya since a long time..he fell in love with her since that rainy day when he saw a her standing alone on a deserted road wearing a beautiful white tube dress with a light blue scarf. fully wet shivering in cold she looked very fragil to him yet her eyes had the spark..The moment he saw her eyes he stopped his car and came out to help her..his eyes were fixed on maya when he fixed her car .he could hear her heavily breathing.soon he fixed her car..Maya looked in his eyes and smiled as if saying thanks.as she was sitting in the car samay could feel the pain that she is leaving him he didn't want her to leave..he wanted that time should pause..he wanted maya.he was so mesmerized by her beauty he couldn't utter a word..Maya accidentally drops her scarf while sitting in car..as she drives away Samay sits on the road with her scarf thinking about her..




To be continued


Hey guys please let me know if u like it..
And if you want me to continue?
Will be waiting for your reply
Please ignore typo m using mobile...
Bye
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plz continue 👏 I am waiting and update fast. There are hardly any Samaya OS so don't make us wait for too long
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3

Plz continue 👏 I am waiting and update fast. There are hardly any Samaya OS so don't make us wait for too long

Thank u so much for ur reply
It really means a lot
I am behtad crazy about maya and smay..will definately give an update soon...i really like the spark chemistry between maya and samay...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really liked this, so plz keep writing. Will wait for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manya_roy

I really liked this, so plz keep writing. Will wait for the next part.

Thanks a ton for your reply...will update it soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Last part of os PUZZLE

Coming back to the present day
Maya reaches her office.Every one at the office is terrified of maya. one mistake and you could loose your job for ever.
As maya entered her cabin she saw a bouquet of her favourite flowers cept on the table..she smelled the flowers ..there was a note written on it with blood
"Please maya i want to meet you ones.i promise every thing will be fine.meet me for one last time.please..i love you maya...
Yours and only yours Samay"
Maya sends message from her mobile "see you at 9 at your place"

As the phone beeped.his heart skipped a beat.he knew it was mayas message..he was ancious to read the message.as he read the message..he shouted i love you maya..you are mine and only mine..no one can take you away from me..and he gave a vicious smile..
Since years he was waiting for this day. He knew exctly what he had to do..samay would patiently send maya flower bouquets every day with same message..he would stand out side her house holdings the same message..today he was very happy his maya was coming to meet him.his wait time is over
His eyes were constantly on the watch.each second seemed like a year to him. Finally it was 9.the door bell rings. As He opens the door.He is spelled bound by looking at mayas beauty.
Dressed in a perfectly seductive red dress hugging her body tightly with red jucy lips and hair secured in a bun.she could make any man go crazy with her smile..he held her hand and brought her in..the room was decorated with candles as she came in he showered flowers on her..
He made her sit on the dining table and offered her vine as she took one sip from the glass he glanced at her.he kneeled down on one leg and asked "can i have a dance with you"

She gave her hand in his..a slow romantic music played in background they were dancing on the sencious music.they were so close to each other that there was no space for air to pass..he could smell her hair.and she could feel him ..their heart beats synch together..just then he brought his lips close to mayas .there was a distance of less than a inch between their lips.they could feel the warm breath of each other.
Samay thought to himself maya i love you.you will be mine for ever today.you won't be able to go back maya.our love story will be written in history that how a lover made his love immortal..yes maya i will kill you today so that you will always be with me..you can never leave me and go away frim me..my love has reached to this extent that i will kill you so that you are witj me for ever..no one can separate u from me
Their lips almost brushing together when he fall down all covered in blood..He shouted why maya..why..i loved you so much..just say you love me please say it ones...one last time


Maya: Do you know what's the limit of love? When found, it's desire...Attraction becomes a bond,
a bond which takes the form of love.Love only the one you can control, when lover begins to control you, destroy it



If You play with fire you will burn your self..you underestimated Maya .those who try to dig my grave i make sure they die first...Rest in piece samay...
Maya removed the knife from his heart which she stabbed him while he was kissing her...
Maya knew the behyad love of samay.but she did not love him.she one last time saw his lifeless body liying on floor..never mess with maya..

Maya walked out from the house with a smile of satisfaction on her face...thinking about now WHAT NEXT...
As she came out of samays house she was hedding towards her car when other car almost hit her ..she fell down and got minor bruses..a handsome guy came out from the car extending his hand he said i am sorry..I am Arjun sharma..
While getting up maya says in mind" your next Arjun"
...



Hope you liked it...




Edited by blue24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just loved it 👏 looking forward to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3

Just loved it 👏 looking forward to read more

Thank you so much..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was amazing, I visualised everything you wrote.
Loved it 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manya_roy

That was amazing, I visualised everything you wrote.
Loved it 👏

Thank you so much
Its really a big complement for me..thanks😊

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