new story:by chance update

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hie guys this is nia.my friend made me watch the initial episodes of this dhow and I instantly fell for the chemistry.i love to write stuff so thought to write something here,so here I am.i am not at all sure about how its gonna be but I really really hope you guys like it and one more thing the plot is not at all related to the dirction in which the story goes.here goes the prologue hope u guys like it.fingers crossed...

"hey Raman,what's wrong with you?give her some time,let her adjust to all this situation.not talking is not a solution to any problem."Raghav tried to put some sense in his head.these two guys were in Raman's office.Raghav was sitting on the sofa and Raman was just listening to him as if he is the mischevious child (which is true in all senses but here)and getting the scoldings.but te difference that stood here is that here the person sitting on his table and flipping the paper weight s not at all paying attention to whatsoever being told to him.the only thing in his mind was how could she do this to him,wasn't he the one who was always there for her to protect her,to listen to her rantings,to tolerate her moodswing and still he is the one who has to face all of this.

On the other hand in her room this girl is trashing all the things and blabbering continuously"what the hell?how could this be possible.if there stood any way,,I am gonna go all the way to get back what is rightfully mine.i won't let him go.he is my life.he is mine and only mine.he will have to come back to me".And then there was this girl sitting by the window smoking ciggrates,gets up goes near to the other one and gave her a tight slap"get your hold girl,even u know what u want is not him,so just take what u want and leave him to me."with this this lady moves out and the other one who got slapped sits on the floor holding her hand on the cheeks"I won't let you destyoy his life,its true I don't love him but same intensity is shared by the fact that I don't want him to face any difficulties,whatsoever I have done was important,was necessayr to be done.i know it broke his heart but still it was the only was.i am gonna protect him all the way come what may."

Plzz plzz plzz guys let me know what u have to say about this story and should I giv it a try further.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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the index--
prologue--page 1.
part 1--page 2.
Edited by Montario - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for the new story
nice prologue
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: DikshaN

congrats for the new story
nice prologue
continue soon



Thanks and yes i will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue dear.
Looks interesting.
Update the first part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nits83

Nice prologue dear.
Looks interesting.
Update the first part soon


Ya sure next part will be updated soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue .
You wrote name of boys but not girls .
Do cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Divanru

Interesting prologue .

You wrote name of boys but not girls .
Do cont soon


Thanks

I will update soon
Montario thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: ria1990

Interesting prologue ..

Update soon



Thanks
Will update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue...
The girl is ishita?...
Continue soon...
Pm me if possible...

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