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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aaniya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guyz, back with shot on Suggestion By Mahimesha :)
I hope i can justify ur concept through my execution.
Dedicated to Mahimesha & Priya,
Belated happy b'dy !!

Love In Disguise
Part-1

"NEXT !"

Echoed the grim voice, in the intercom. As soon the voice reached her ears, she adjusts her pencil skirt & white formal shirt. Fervently hoping to mark the post as hers, she stands quickly, swaying her body she enters the cabin.
She is the last candidate for interview. He closed his eyes, preparing himself to annoy himself with yet again another stupid chick. He hears the sharp footsteps of pencil heel. He dont get these people came for official interview or for f**king fashion show. He drawls his legs on the floor, rotating himself on his rotating chair, turning his back to the door.
A minute later the door click open. Peering her head in she saw a nice build man occupying the luxurious chair, studying a file with his back towards the door. His head full of silky black hairs rest against the velvet material of the chair, gracing the chair with his presence.
"May i comin ?" She asked breaking out of her daze.
"Yes" came his velvety voice.
Oh, how charismatic persona he has !! Stepping in she spot the wooden frame with his name inscribed on it "RISHAB KUNDRA".
What a classy powerful name & voice His every things build the curiosity in her to see this handsome hunk face to face.
"Take the seat" he spoke again, followed by the fumbling sound of her making herself comfortable in chair.
"Riya Mehta" he spoke studying the file.
"Yes sir" she prompts.
"Ur qualification is too high for the secretary post & even u have worked for many reputed firms. Why did u apply for this post in my company ?"
"Sir, getting a job now a days is not easy even with high degree. Besides ur company offers handsome pay scale & job security" she reasoned impressed with her own answer, given the bitch she is, she knows to use men & money for her own good. With handsome salary she is getting handsome boss too, ready to woo him, she adjust her shirt, revealing her skin to tempt.
"If u wants to do this job. U have to make sure of the timing being here. My appointment, meeting everything will be ur responsibility. Will u be able to manage it ?" Rk asked with still his back towards her & she can see the taut sculpted muscles under his shirt.
"Of course sir, i'll manage ur every Needs" she drawls. Rk raised his eyes from the file at her tone. Such type of tone is not alien for him. Its just that woman dont think twice before taking the tone with him, but regret thousand times after having the good introduction with him. Throwing the file in the glass desk, he turn around revealing himself to her, keeping his hands upon the desk, leaning forward on glass table.
"Is it ?" He asked in low grim voice, getting the expected reaction from the girl sitting in front of him as a result. Riya gasp at him, dropping her sensual smile, her eyes fixed on the corner of his forehead at the frightful thin scar. Rk studied her with cold eyes. He is habituated to such kind of reaction from people, yet every damn time people look at him like that he feel the anger bubble up inside him. Ha has got every manly feature in him, it just the damn scar on his face which make people scurried away from him.
"I can very well manage my needs. U better watch out for urself." he spoke crispy, drawing her back to earth.
"Button up ur shirt" He gravely spoke looking at her in her eyes, which send shiver down her spine. She fidget but manage to button up the 3 buttons from for chest to her collar.
"One slip from ur side, u would be kicked out from my company with such sentences, which would make it difficult for getting other job for u" he stated firmly, and Riya gulped nodding her head at his every words. What she has gotten herself into. The Man Rishab Kundra is devil in disguise.
"BITTUJI !" He called loudly in intercom, and a minute later a plumpy round man hurries in the cabin without knocking.
"She is appointed for the post" rk fill in the details as Riya looks like she did a mistake my coming over here "Get her the work list & keep an eye on her"
Rk finished looking at Bittuji, who gave a curt nod to Rk.
"Miss. Riya, walk up to reception. U will get necessary there" bittuji ordered & Riya scurried out from the room, away from the petrifying gaze of Rk.
"She wont last. U better start looking for other person to fill in the post" Rk comments relaxing himself on the chair as Riya went out. In front of Bittuji he needn't to pull on the demeanour.
"Sure chief, and u remember we have to go Malik house today ?" Bittuji enquired.
"Yes bittuji. We'll get there at the time" Rk spoke picking up another business file.
"Mohan sir called an hour ago, reminding us to be there on time at any cost. He has image to maintain"
Rk didnt commented on that, but just nodded his head in acknowledgement.

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"This is the way right ?" Rk asked as he drive his car. Malik house is on the opposite way to his mansion.
"Yes chief, but i cant see mohan sir's car" bittuji spoke confused sitting beside Rk on passenger seat.
"B/64, thats their house" Rk stops his car near a narrow lane from which he can see a well maintain house.
"Should i call mohan sir ?"
"No there is time, lets wait here" Rk spoke looking around. The silence of the lane got disturbed by loud noise coming from engine of a scooty. From the rear view mirror of his car, he spot a girl wearing off the helmet from her head, while grabbing two plastic bags, whats looks like shopping bag in her hands. Bidding to the other girl on the scooty she quickly rushed to the house in front of him, while the other girl on scooty took U-turn & went off. The silence of the lane was again knocked by the sound of vehicle, but this time by a black Audi.
"Mohan sir.." Bittuji points, as a car drove past them, while Rk follow it.

Stopping the car near the gate way, mohan step out of the car followed by a handsome guy, veer.
On the other hand, Rk & bittuji too step out locking the doors. Mohan darted a glance at Rk, as Rk looks at him impassively.
"Behave properly" mohan spoke to no one in particular.
As they saunter to porch, Mohan saw Malik standing with a plastered smile welcoming them. They exchange hugs.
"Welcome mohan" malik said.
"Malik, meet my younger son Veer" mohan points at veer as veer return a smile "And thats my elder son Rishab."
Malik looks at Rishab, who is holding a straight face. Malik's gaze followed up his face to the scar on his forehead. As Rk felt malik's gaze on him, he join his hands in gesture of respect, greeting malik "Namaste"
Malik, smiled at him, and Rk look away.
"And thats Bittuji, our trusted companion". Mohan introduced. Malik smiled at bittuji as bittuji reciprocate.
"Plz make urself comfortable" malik asked them to take seat & calls padmini for the introduction. Padmini smiled at everyone, while her eyes lingered on Rk for a moment. Rk look away clenching his jaws.

"Veer recently took over my business, and Rishab have his business of his own." Mohan delivered information as the conversation begins. Veer was busy in sliding his mobile giving customary smiles to malik & family, while Rk & bittuji sits in silence.
"My daughter will be fortunate to become a member of ur family" malik smiled.
"Madhu is daughter to me, and she will always be." Mohan assured.
"Padmini call madhu downstairs" hearing malik padmini quickly went to bring madhu.
Rk looks away quickly, making himself ready to face yet again another look from other person. Whenever people looks at himself, either they have sympathy in their eyes, or fright & he dont need any of the looks. Clenching his jaws tight, he sit up straight with the sound of descending footsteps.
"Thats madhu.." Malik smiled as padmini reached the end of stairs with madhu, who is clad up in simple yet elegant full sleeves frock suit, with minimal makeup, silky straight hairs nicely flowing down her shoulders.
"Namaste uncle" madhu smiled as she bend down, taking the blessing of mohan, as mohan patted her head.
"Thats veer, Bittuji & Rishab" mohan points, and that is when Rk looks at the pretty madhu.
"Hey" madhu smiled at veer, as veer reciprocate. Then surprisingly she bend & touched bittuji's feet too surprising bittuji as well as Rk.
"Its not needed" bittuji said to which madhu smiled. And the last person to meet Rk, he looks at her, more like glaring her, challenging her to dare to stare at his scar. Madhu turns around, landing her eyes on Rk she smiled warmly at Rk.
"Hey" she spoke & then turn around to sit beside malik. Rk frowned at her eerie reaction. Isnt she suppose to stare awkwardly at his face, his scar. Thats the normal reaction of people towards his scar, hesitant, disgust, sympathy, fright.
"This year, madhu finished her post graduation" malik said.
"Thats good !" Mohan nods "Veer do u want to have a talk with madhu" mohan asked veer. Madhu looks at him expectantly but to her disappointment veer shrugged his shoulders. How could he ? They are going to have arrange marriage, dont they need to talk atleast.
"Veer already told before hand, My choice is his choice". Mohan laughed as Rk darted a glance at him, while madhu looks away. Ok so he is Papa's boy !! Madhu concluded.
"Madhu.." Padmini asked her to serve the tea & eatables. Madhu nodded as quickly set the cups & snacks while the elders talked. After giving tea to elders she forward tea to Veer with bright smile. He is good looking, 10 on 10, she likes him. Veer took the cup keeping his mobile in pocket, returning her smile. Then she passed bittuji his tea & lastly to Rk, who is sitting on other corner of sofa.
"Thanks, but i dont drink tea" Rk tries his best to keep his voice gentle though he is not successful at all. He hardly talk to people politely.
"Right, coffee is better than tea. It smells good & taste much better than tea. Should i get coffee for u" to his utter surprise madhu talks to him quietly not to fetch unnecessary attention. He looks up at her to find her looking at him in his eyes without wandering her eyes on his face, and though he doesnt want to accept it did made him feel comfortable.
"No.. Need" again his voice came as rude as possible. Madhu looks at him for a minute then turned to padmini asking loudly.
"Mama we have coffee in stock ?"
All looks at her, as Rk looks away muttering something annoying under his breath.
"Yes"
"He dont drink tea. I'll get coffee for him." Madhu spoke to no one in particular & moved to the kitchen while other resume their talking, but Mohan kept throwing angry glances at Rk occasionally. Now, what is his fault ? Rk curled his fist, when he said he dont want to drink tea means he Dont Want To Drink, but This Stupid Girl Assumed he like coffee, which he likes definitely, & went to get him coffee, yet he didnt ask her to get him coffee !
"Here.." His cursing era ends as he saw the coffee mug in front of him, forwarded by madhu. Without saying anything he took it & starts sipping on it quietly wondering if he spoke any damn word, she'll twist the meaning of his words.
"We should set up another meeting soon, for the preparations." Mohan said standing up to take their leave.
"Sure, sure.. Mohan ! Keep coming !" Malik said as he hugged mohan & they made their way out of the home. Rk walk past malik, as malik smiled at him warmly & he couldnt help but to be touched at the affection.
"I'll take ur leave now" he spoke to malik, smiling a lil, then rushed out to catch up with bittuji.

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"The malik family is good naa, chief !" Bittuji spoke to Rk, as they entered the hall of Kundra Mansion, after coming from office.
"Yes" rk replied in monosyllable as his thoughts drifted to malik.
"And madhubala is nice too" bittuji added making Rk frowned. She was so close to make him chopped by mohan.
"Bittuji" he turns to bittuji before bittuji could proceed "Mr. Mehta called informing about the pre poned meeting, so on ur way back collect Mehta project file from office, rest i will send the quotes to u in mail"
"Okk chief" bittuji obliged, walking out of the mansion while Rk to turned to go to his room, when the loud ringing of telephone pierce the silence of the hall. Rk halts in his steps looking around for any soul who can receive the call but he cant spot anyone. As the volume of the telephone tear his ears, he strolled towards the phone at the corner of the hall to receive it.
"Hello.." He spoke receiving the speaker of the telephone.
"Veer ?" Came a soft tentative quote. Rk frowned looking at the speaker of the phone, then spoke with A no.
"No.."
"Who is it then ?" Came another question after a minute of silence.
"U called here, shouldn't it should be u to give ur introduction first" rk crisp. He dont even get why the hell is he entertaining this stranger on the phone. He should cut the call & go away.
"Madhu"
"Madhu ?" He questions.
"Madhubala malik" she spoke & then it struck him that its her, daughter of Mr.Malik, but why she is calling in landline, she should directly contact veer in his cell.
"Yes madhubala say what is it ?" He quizzes.
"Who are u ?" Madhu questions at his tone.
"Rk"
"Rk ?" Who rk !! Madhu thought.
"Rishab kundra" Rk spoke annoyed.
"Oh.. Rk, hii :) Can i speak to veer plz" she prompt.
"Why dont u call him in his cell ?" He said.
"Woh actually.." He can sense her hesitation as she spoke "I got this phone no. by spying my papa's phone. He has mohan uncle"s no. But not veer's. So i thought i can use the landline."
And that explains, why she called.
"Can u plz call veer, i need to talk to him" she spoke again.
"Ok, wait. Be on line" rk said, looking around for veer. He climb upstairs to call veer and to his luck Veer was already descending down the stairs typing something on his phone.
"Veer" rk called, making veer halts in his steps.
"Arrey Rk The Charity Case ! Now what Charity u want ?" Veer grinned at him leaning on stairs, mocking him. Rk clenched his jaws hearing him. Thats why he makes sure to maintain distance from veer, but today cause of this Madhubala, he dont know what gotten into him, that he agreed to call veer for her.
"Will this do ?" Veer forwards his old head phones to rk "after all charity begins at home". He winked at Rk.
Rk curled his fist, ready to punch those damn head phones in veer's head, but then his eyes flickered to the landline, madhu is still on call.
"Madhubala called on landline. She wants to talk to u" rk spoke coldly and walks away ignoring veer's taunts. On the other hand, madhu waited for someone to answer, she could hear the faint sound of someone speaking but couldnt make it out, of what they are talking, then after few second, veer answers the call.
"Madhubala ?"
"Hey veer.." And then she starts to speak to him, about the alliance, whether he is ok with it or not.

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*Ding-Dong*

Madhu rings the bell standing on the door step of the huge & lavish kundra mansion & soon the door gets opened as one of the servant attends her.
"Yes ? Whom do u want to meet ma'am ?" Ask the servant.
"Veer ?" She enquired.
"Sir is upstairs, plz come in i'll inform him" the servant offered & madhu walks in looking at the splendid decor. Veer agreed to talk to her face to face after few days of talking over phone. Madhu insisted on meeting, as they will get to know each other, and he asked her to come home & she too knows Mohan uncle wont mind her being here. She was sitting on the sofa idly flipping the pages of the magazines, as the servant serve her water.
"Madhubala.." She looks up from the magazine to find what-seems-like-sleepy Veer descending down the stairs while rubbing his eyes.
"U here ? So early in morning !" Veer asked yawning.
"Early ?" Madhu looks at him perplexed "its 11:30 in morning"
"Ah.. Right.. Was working on a project last night" veer sputter "give me few minutes, i'll be back" he spoke.
"Ok" madhu smiled & veer run upstairs. Sitting alone like a ghost in the hall madhu soon started to die out of boredom, so she starts wandering in the hall have a lil tour of the house. While strolling She reached the back side of the garden admiring the beauty of the plantations, when she spot Bittuji arranging paper sitting on the bench of the garden. She developed A liking for bittuji from first meet, so, she went to eat his brains.
"Hii Bittuji" she beamed. Bittuji looks at the cheerful source of sound & smiled seeing Madhu.
"Madhubala ji.."
"Good morning Bittuji" madhu spoke "what are u doing ?" She looks at the papers.
"Chief has important meeting to attend today, so i was arranging the papers of the meeting" bittuji said. Quickly sending the send button, Rk send the mail, and came out in the garden wearing black shirt & denim to find Bittuji talking to a pretty lady, who is none other than Madhu, clad up in short top & long skirt. He heard him delivering information to madhu. He stands there as he overhead their convo.
"Who chief ?" Madhu asked while helping bittuji.
"Chief.. My chief" bittuji states the obvious as madhu giggled, making rk frown at her, for giggling at him.
"Bittuji, thats what i am asking. Who is this chief ? Is he too part of this family ? Why i never heard about him ?"
Bittuji looks at her in surprise.
"Chief.. Rishab Kundra, u know him right".
"Rk is ur chief ?" Madhu asked startled.
"Yes"
"Like really.. Chief.." Madhu spoke as she burst out laughing "Chief.."
"What the heck is so funny in that !" Rk wanted to snarl at her, but he controlled himself cause right now he is eavesdropping them.
"Whats so funny ?" Bittuji spoke Rk's thought as Rk proudly smiled at him. Thats like my Bittuji !
"Bittuji, in which era u live in & ur chief, dont he feel awkward. Ur chief will said Bittuji', and then u'll reply yes his highness !" Madhu mimicked them chuckling, as bittuji joined her too offending Rk. Traitor Bittuji !!
"Kinda ancient novel type" she said.
"Whats going on here ?" Rk step out in front of them, not able to take them making fun of him.
"Ur chief" madhu quietly whispered sobering up.
"Hey Rk" she turns to him with sweet smile on her lips.
"What are u doing here ?" Rk questions ignoring her greeting.
"I came to meet Veer, and i came across Bittuji" she replied "oh shit..!" She suddenly hits her own forehead with her palm like mad. Bittuji & Rk exchange a look between themselves, seeing her hitting herself.
"Veer told me to wait in the hall, but i came here. He must be searching for me. I need to go.. Bye.." She hastily sputter & runs off from there, leaving bittuji & Rk alone.
"She is sweet" bittuji praise as Rk gave him a irritated look.
"Is the file ready ?" Rk asked.
"Yes ch.." Bittuji stops himself from calling rk chief recalling madhu's words. Rk tightens his jaws at bittuji.
"She appeared before u just before few days, while i am with u from years, and u are paying more heeds to her words" rk asked annoyed.
"No.. No.. Chief.." Bittuji tries to deny.
"Leave it bittuji. Here is the car keys. U go, am coming" rk disperse him & bittuji quietly moves from there while rk looks at his retreating back.
This madhubala, she is stealing his only companion from him, from Rk. She is stealing Bittuji from Rk, she is bad influence on bittuji. He can see that bittuji has became quite fond of her. He have to make sure to keep bittuji away from her, even her shadow. Hmm.. With this final plan he too follows bittuji.

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"Excuse me" madhu prompts, as she saw a servant passing through the hall.
"Yes ma'am"
"Where is veer ?" She asked.
"Ma'am, sir just left few minutes ago. He got call from office. He was searching for u, but u were not here so he left in hurry" servant informed as madhu's face fell.
"Ok, thankyou" she smiled at the servant & turn around to go back home.
"Veer kundra.. This is not fair. But he has work too. Its okk, some other time" madhu mumbled to herself walking out of the mansion.

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"PAPA !" Madhu shouts to draw Malik's attention.
"What madhu ?" Malik snap as she is disturbing himself like a bee, while he needs to be focus on his work.
"Give me veer's office address" she poke malik's arm with her index finger.
"Uffo madhu.. Wait" malik hurries to a chest of the drawer & rumble out a card, handing her.
"Where is it ?" Madhu ask again keeping the card in her purse without looking at it.
"Its on card, some BL Block." Malik replied getting back to her work.
"Thankyou, papa" madhu hugged him sideways & malik shook his head at her childish nature & resume his work.

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"Excuse me, where is Mr.Kundra ? I have to meet him" madhu spoke to the receptionist.
"Sir is in his cabin. Do u have an appointment ma'am ?" The receptionist enquired.
"No, i dont need an appointment. Tell him Madhubala Malik is here" madhu spoke.
"Just a minute, ma'am".
Madhu watch the receptionist picking up the telephone, informing the other person about her, then after few second of silence, she nods.
"Ma'am u can meet sir. Sir is in his cabin. Take right turn reaching the 3rd floor."
"Thankyou" madhu quickly made her way to reach 3rd floor. Reaching 3rd floor she spot a grand cabin with grand door, and without wasting a minute more she barged in.
"Veer.." She starts to speaks but stops in shock seeing Rk giving dictation to a girl. Rk looks up at madhu, then gesture Ria to go out.
"I'll call u later" he said to Ria. Madhu watch as the lady name Ria, walk past her giving her perplexing glance.
"What is it ?" Rk asked madhu leaning back on chair as soon as Ria went out closing the door. He was shocked when receptionist said Madhubala has came to meet him, & he cant point why the hell she wants to meet him.
"Where is veer ? Receptionist told veer is here. I came to meet him" madhu answered looking around to spot veer magically & that clears that she came to meet veer not him, But one thing is still confusing.
"Sit" he gesture her to sit, as madhu sit opposite to him.
"Veer ?"
"In his office & this is my office" Rk cleared keeping his interlocked fingers on the glass table, watching her frowning profusely.
"This is veer's office" she said adamantly.
"Mine" Rk spoke, showing the wooden frame with his name inscribed on it.
"But papa gave me this address" madhu said confused keeping her eyes on his name in wooden frame she absent mindedly draws out the card that malik has given her & forward it to Rk.
"Havent u read the name & address on the card, its my business card & my address" Rk said giving the card back to her.
"I was in hurry thats why i didnt saw it, and i bugged papa too so guess he mistakenly gave ur card instead of veer's card" she concludes sadly.
"U want anything to drink" Rk asked as he saw her making faces at her own stupidity.
"No, can u give me veer's address please. I really need to meet him. Papa is going to talk to panditji for dates." she requested him standing up. Rk thought for a moment, then took a pen & paper he starts scribbling over it.
"Chief, mr.sinha, approve the deal and.." Meanwhile Bittuji barged in the cabin to find madhu standing.
"Hey bittuji" madhu beamed as soon as she saw bittuji.
"Madhubala jii, u here ?" Bittuji smiled pleasantly at her, making Rk stare at him annoyingly.
"If ur pleasantries are done, then u were saying something" Rk said curtly drawing bittuji back to earth.
"Yes chief, the deal got finalized" bittuji looks at Rk who seems annoyed for some reason.
"The address" Rk forward the chit to madhu, who looks at the paper for a minute then starts chuckling softly.
"What is it ?" Both bittuji & Rk asked in unison.
"So clean handwriting. No wonder u are successful business today" madhu showed them Rk's handwriting while Rk looks at her like she has grown two horns.
"Ok, thanks for this Rk. And Bye bittuju, Take care" Madhu slips the paper in her purse.
"Bye madhubala ji" bittuji reciprocates as madhu walks out of the cabin. Bittuji turns back to find Rk glaring at him.
"Chief ?"
"OUT !" Rk shouted. Bittuji never smiled with him in all these years but here he is giving toothy smile to this madhubala !!
Rubbish !!
But then have he ever smiled ?? So that bittuji can smile with him !! His inner voice questions him.

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The story is yet to unfold, this is just the build up :)
Enjoy reading..

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Aaniya :)

Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 9 years ago

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res..

unres...

congrats on this new story aan..

nice start..

hm..rk have a scar on his his forehead..so what..?a simple scar cant take away his elegance..

& why you are always doing like this dear..either you tie rk with dips or madhu with veer..they wont love normally..

i hate veer how dare he mock Rk..😡

hope madhu will fall for rk instead for that makki veer..

update soon..thanks for the pm..

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dharsii

@dharsii

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congrates for new story..

Thanks for dedicate me..

Superb start...

Madhu is veer fiance..

Rk has scar..He doesn't accept others disguise,courage,

That's why he showed him as a angry man..

Bittuji and Madhu relationship is so nice..

RK is so possessive towards bittuji...Lol..

He doesn't like their talks..

Veer is bad..He doesn't know,how to talk with his brother..

Why will she want to meet veer?

Didn't she like this marriage?

Because she is very urgent to meet him.

Waiting to known about unfold..

TFS..

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

Gawdd.. I just read it..
And there are quite a many typo errors..!!
Sorry, for that :(

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HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey Evil baby...just got ur ping and read the part too...yes..

so let me talk abt teh story first...

RK is RK...the arrogant, rude facade with hidden emotions ..he is not mohan's son or not the son of first wife ???? I got this clue when that douche Veer mocked him as " CHARITY case" bloody

Madhu is like any other happy go lucky girl and RK is not even thinking abt her except getting super possessive abt Bittuji 😆😆..and what's up with his so called Father, why is assign RK to behave and RK is obeying him;;what up with his SCAR

i guess a dark past or let it be..this girl EVIL na is one of her 😃kind

Madhu wanna knw more abt Veer bt what seems like Veer is not into this marriage like super happy or happy its just that he has to get married and he is marrying but he is not good either coz teh way he mocked RK si quite annoying ..bloody jerk.

I am not liking the way Madhu is running behind Veer like Love sick I meant would like to see her running for RK like that hahah..

RK is happy with mallik's behavior so..let's see how this unfolds..

Thank u so much for coming up with unique and amazing ideas and entertaining us...Love u for that ..

and haan be this wonderful and EVIL ..

take care and loads of love

Ashu.

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appuhatti

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congratulations for the new story.Nice update.

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Rumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats for the new story...

Rk is mohan's son from first wife .

Veer is RK younger brother .

He taunt RK being a charity case.. stupid veer.. 🥱

Veer is not into this marriage but madhu is running behind him like a love sick puppy..

Lets see how rishbala's love in diguise happen..

Thnku for the pm..

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dharsii

@dharsii

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unres on PG.no 1

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Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago

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congrats for new story sweety

super start dear ..rk angry businessman but not cheap personality..so good..ria such disgusting girl.she behaved rk but rk show her ways so cool.mohan differentiate with veer and rk even rk not care about his behaviour..veer and madhu marriage fixed..veer rudely behaved with rk. i think rk not real son of mohan insake of both behave like with rk..

hilarcious part rk possessive about buttuji..so cute..🤣

madhu met rk unknowingly..

madhu teasing bittuji for he called rk to chief..

i love it whole part ,sweety..

thanks for pm and continue soon