New KaYa FF- Jab We Met...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Guys!!! 😃 I know I wasn't able to update my previous ff for so long...But now my exams are over and I m free... 😃 And right now working on next update of Ek Duje Ke Vaastey...And and here's another ff on kaYa...I just couldn't resist my mind from thinking on it so thought to pen it down...And here's the prologue...

Prologue


A man may be in his early 30's is sitting on the couch in his lavish bedroom... Holding a diary in his hand...Smiling and recalling the old memories...

*********** FLASHBACK ***********

New Delhi Railway Station

I got off The train...As I reached Delhi and I was so happy that I got the opportunity to work with the most popular Newspaper of delhi "Delhi Kranti"...The day before Pandit ji the publisher of the newspaper hd called me and informed that I have been selected as a reporter and the editor of the newspaper...At that time my happiness knew no bounds...I dailed the number of a friend of mine MANAV My best friend he was the best guy I have met in those 24 yrs of my life...

ME- Oye kahan h tu??
M- Main bs pooch hi gaya yr...
ME- Tujhe pta h saale adhe ghante se tera wait kr raha hu station pe khada...
M- Haan yr main bs aa hi gyaa..
ME- ok jaldi aa...

I hanged up the call with that...Just then I heard some sort of commotion on the opposite side of the plateform...There was a girl who was shouting at a boy may be her boyfriend...wooohh that girl was something more than beautiful...Her chocolate brown eyes...Her silky smooth hairs...Pointed nose...Rosy lips...She was looking so beautiful even without make up...I was totally lost in her beauty but somehow managed to control my thoughts and concentrated at their talks...She had came near the railway tracks...And was shouting at that guy...

G- Chale jao otherwise I'll jump down Sid...

That boy's name was Sid I think...She again shouted the same sentence...And the train was coming to her side...Was she mad or what I thought...

S- ohk fine I'm going bs tum khud ko kch mt krna plz...
G- JAOOO 😡

And the boy had walked away from there may be he was scared that if he didn't fulfill her command she would probably jump on the tracks...But she was still standing near the tracks where the train could hurt her badly...And the train was reaching her and I just couldn't control my self from shouting at her...

ME- Oye...!! ********* Pagal h kya...Hat wahan se ni toh mr jayegi... 😡

She glared at me...May be she had just heard what I had addressed her...But she didn't moved even a step away...And wooohh the train reached her... 😲


So guys that's it...Do comment and hit like button only if uh liked it... 😛 😉 Do tell me should I continue this one or not... 😊 thank uh so much for reading...🤗
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RamAayeHain thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Interesting concept kaushiki
Excited to read further
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
rajeeviansonai thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome dear.plz keep it up
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting story
Waiting for your next update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey hii...
It's long time you see
n yes it's been long you last updated n missed so much EDKW updates...please update them soon and continue this one too...so they've(kaya) been met 6 years before...now I m so excited to know more...their past as well as present n future too...bas update jaldi jaldi...i m waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Still asking,,,, ??//
Oye jaldi se update maar... ,,itne suspense mein chhoda hai... jaldi kar kahin Usse kuch ho na jaye... 😉
😛😛😆

Very very interesting one ... ⭐️👏 Hmm... Jab we met... Sincere thanks Doll for this new one... waiting for the previous one too... 😳

Chal koi na... no ghamand at all... just post this one... jaldi... kahin train na aa jaye n kahin wo kood hi gayi toh... 🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii
Dear

Very nice start.
Totally different .

All the best for this new story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice going Kaushi dear 👏
Loved the concept, do continue pls ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start and the concept. Loved the Kaya meet and in a vague row 👏
Looking forward to it, plss continue and thank you Kaushi dear 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii
Very interesting start dear.

Nice storyline.

All the best.

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