Shivika Ts_Main Phir bhi tumko Chahunga_(2 years later)27.4 COMPLETED

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Posted: 8 years ago
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RESS... I haven't even read it Anya but I am currently in love with the lyrics of this song and I am sure you have done justice to it being the fabulous writer you are!! I'm slightly busy currently but I shall be sure to come back and give a lot of love after reading it 😳 😃

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Sam 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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UNRESSS-

Omg Anya!!! This was an amazing start, honestly felt so sad that the second part wasn't already up! 😭 What a cliffhanger! Dying to know their reaction on witnessing each other in the same place after a gap of TWO YEARS!! Like woah! Toofan aane wala hai 😆 and I hope this storm sorts out their differences 😳 But more than that Shivaays penance is pending (I know the 2 years of separation is punishment but I never think it's enough for him!!)

Cannot believe he just let her go But very wonderfully written, and this concept is most probably my favourite Really really amazing honestly! Commending your creativity once again because you always manage to hit the nail right on the head 😆 👏

Oh and wow Om has left for London and Ru is not speaking to his so-called superman! What happened to all for one and one for all 😭 Although again I definitely think Shivaay deserves it- and I hope Pinky finally realises her errors and actually feels guilty for them!

Please do update fast for this one!! I wonder how the song will come into play 😃 really curious and impatient so do give us a LENGTHY update with lots of detail 😆

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-Sam ❤️
Edited by Sam98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii dear loved this to the core. Beautifully written. Shivaay let Anika go and did not stop her💔 and 😭...
This was superb and awesome. Cannot wait to read more. Waiting for next please update as soon as possible...
With Loads of Love
-Chhaya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it
it's too emotional
He let her go i can't believe it...
he forget her career, love everything when it comes to Nkk
then he never deserves her at all...I seriously dnt think this seperation is not enough for him...he should get suffoccated by his Nkk...his brothersdid right by ignoring him...I dnt want Annika to forgive him so easily...she should not mind him at all...
if a person can forget love,care,support for Nkk then we don't need that person in our lives
i am so excited for the next chapter


Edited by AYUSHIVISHU - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely superb fentastic
i can't wait for next
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HOLY COW!!!!!!!!! 😲 😲

Are you planning on giving me a heart attack!?! 😡 I swear, it wasn't Shivaay who was dying, it was ME!!!!!! 🤢 🤢

Ohh, HI! 😳

As I was saying, WHAT WAS THAT? 😲 You should only write happy and blissful stories, because when you write about pain and angst, I can literally feel my heart ache 🥺 .

How do you write like that. If someone had recorded my face, it would've looked like this:
😃 (b/c I received a PM) --> ( the moment I read ' I'm leaving Shivaay...) --> 😡 (when Shivaay didn't stop her) --> (when Shivaay moved forward to stop her, but the next second I looked like this b/c he stopped midway 🤢 )

Basically throughout the story, I was in pain because I felt Shivaays pain.
You're FREAKISHLY AMAZING with words, actually you're BRILLIANT. 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

EAGERLY WAITING FOR PART 2! 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims ❤️

P.S Thanks for the PM! 😛
Edited by moon99 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is awesome..
i m really fed up of seeing the current drama of Pinky playing woth Shuvaay's ideals so that he leaves Annika and all.. urrrggghhh..
perfect portrayal...
continue sooonish,Anya..
thanks for the om.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's awesome 👏
Brilliant writing.
Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was so interesting! I felt like a sadist as I thouroughly enjoyed Shivaay's pain😆 continue soon and do PM me if possible!
-Sanu

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