Written Update 17/1

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Today's scene starts with Vikram calling Vrinda.
Vrinda is sitting at home in the night, on a chair in her room. Her mobile rings. She sees its Vikram. But she doesn't look happy.
(I have missed Vikram, don't know about Vrinda😊)

Vrinda: Yes, say Vikram.
Vikram: Only by saying what is the use, Vrinda? Need someone to listen too.
Vrinda: Vikram, don't joke.
Vikram: Yaar, that is your problem. My every word is a joke to you. Anyways, nowadays the house must be in an atmosphere of fun and joke. Since a new bhabhi has come to the house.
Vrinda: Yes, nowadays in the house , so much is happening that .. see I don't even have the time to call you.
Vikram: I know, here the training is also very strict. That is why after that day I couldn't call you again.
Vrinda: No problem Vikram. As soon as I am free I will call you. You take care of yourself.
Vikram: Now I will surely take care. Bye
Vrinda: Bye
They hang up. Vikram looks at his phone and then is lost in his thoughts with a smile. Vrinda on the other hand has a worried look at her face.
She thinks to herself that after knowing the truth Vikram will not be able to concentrate on his training. I would be better if he doesn't learn about it now.

Scene changes to Akilesh's house. Sanya is sitting on the sofa chair. Lost in her thoughts of yesterday when she told Aditya that she will follow her own decision. She is crying. She gets up and walks but she feels dizzy and faints but Akilesh's mother who has brought milk for her supports her. Mother shouts out for Akilesh and tells him to take her to the hospital.

At Pandey residence,
Sharada is seated at the head of the dining table and Shankar next to her. Vrinda is between them serving the food.
Sharada doesn't want to eat.
Shankar: Eat mother. Your heart and brain won't work with food.
Sharada: There was a time when bowls of love and trust used to be drunk. So that values doesn't get stuck. Today there are no love trust and values.

Shankar's mobile rings. Its Akilesh. He informs Shankar that Sanya bhabhi is unwell and he is taking her to City Hospital. He tells Shankar to reach there. Shankar leaves the table much to Sharada's chagrin.


Akilesh takes Sanya to the hospital in a trishaw. Aditya walks past and sees them. He follows behind on foot.
Shankar is already in the hospital when Akilesh and Sanya arrive.
A trainee doctor is there as the senior doctors are away.
Shankar is very angry. The trainee assures him that they are contacting the doctor by phone and to calm down. But Shankar is still angry and tells her that if there is no doctor on duty they might as well just put a padlock on the hospital. He threatens her that should anything happen to his nephew and bhabhi , he will be the one to put a padlock on the hospital.
At that moment, Aditya arrives.
Shankar: It would be better if you leave from here
Aditya: Look Shankar, whatever was the atmosphere yesterday it has its own place. First and foremost, I am a doctor. Didn't you hear only trainee doctors are on duty. Even one mistake could prove to be fatal.
Shankar: This is Hindustan. Here prayers also work. But this is about my bhabhi and nephew's safety. They will get both medicine and prayer. You come with me.
Shankar takes Aditya to Sanya's room and tells him to save his sister in law and nephew. Akilesh asks Shankar what if Dehdahji finds out , then?
Shankar: Dehdahji's honour, dishonour aadesh ki kimat cannot be more than someone's life. I know this very well

When Aditya enters the room, a nurse is taking Sanya's blood pressure. Aditya asks the nurse how is her bp. Nurse says 140/100. Sanya is not happy to see him and avoids eye contact. He goes to stroke Sanya's head but she squirms. She doesn't want him to examine her. He tells her that at present there is no doctor in the hospital. All are trainees.
Aditya: Please let me treat you.
Sanya: I forbid you. As it is I am already going through lots of difficulties.Please don't increase them. Go away from here.
A: How can I go, Sanya? You are in this state and my child... my child.
S: I can take care of my child Aditya..I can.
Shankar comes in and is watching from the door.
A: This is my child too, isn't it Sanya.
S: So far its just news of the child's arrival. And you are already calling it your child. Have you thought about amma and bauji. Don't they have any right to call 'mera Aditya' ?
A: You don't know the truth Sanya that is why you are talking like this. They have instigated
S: They haves instigated, then they have instigated. In the love of that family, without anyone I am instigated in that instigation. Come back Aditya. In that family there is such a fragrance that will envelop us .
A: I am sorry. No.
S: Then forgot about me forever.
A: I cannot return Sanya. And if this is your last decision then listen to me carefully. Taking old relationships into account, I will never return, not now not ever.
Aditya leaves and runs into Shankar who was watching and hearing from the doorway.
A: did you hear Shankar, taking old relationships into account I will never return.
They stare at each other and Aditya leaves.

Shankar goes to Sanya. He looks worried.
S: Its no big deal. If Aditya is a good doctor then I am no less. Together with the other doctors, I give you a promise that nothing will happen to your bhabhi and nephew.


In Pandey residence living room , Nirbhay is sitting with his mother Krishna. Krishna is feeding him. Vrinda is sitting next to them. Sharada is sitting on the swing . Taiji is standing drinking tea and talking to Shakti near to Sharada.
Taiji: Sau baath ki ek baath Shakti. We have 7 generations of Pandey family's pyre. But the pyre that Kashinath's generation has opened, there is no answer for that.
Shakti replies to Taiji but his eyes are looking at Sharada (the words are aimed at Sharada). A sinister smile is playing on his face whilst he is talking.
Shakti: What are you doing? Why are you doing this?
He walks over to the swing.
Shakti: Can't you see how worried she is? Again and again talking about that same thing what is the profit? One thing, Dehdahji has gone to Dehli leaving her. On top of that , the difference between them keeps increasing
T: What am I doing? I am just helping Sharada. Take care of yourself as soon as possible. All this was bound to happen in this house.
Sharada looks up at her angrily. Shakti smiles. Vrinda is pissed.
Then,
Nirbhay: Mummy, Why are Nani and Papa together disturbing chotti nani (Sharada)?
K: Its like this Nirbhay son. Lalita Pawar's atma has entered your nani's body permanently and I cannot do anything about that. But until today, I used to think of your papa as Shashi Kapoor but he turned out to be Shakti Kapoor instead. 😆.
K: did you hear mother? Nirbhay is asking who are these Lalita Pawar and Shakti Kapoor. Shall I tell him?
T: you keep quiet. Everytime stuck to this Vrinda. Don't you know she and her mother have blindfolded against us.
Vrinda can't take it anymore. She gets up and goes towards Taiji.
V: Please forgive me Taiji. But I don't know how to blindfolded people. But the cloth that is covering the eyes(blindfold), I surely know how to remove it. And I am trying.
Sharada: Vrinda!
V: Mother. What Taiji is doing, is it correct ? A big problem has come into our house and Taiji is not coming out of her insulting, your tears are not stopping. Isn't it enough? Why are you increasing the flow of the tears? Taiji has made two parts of the house. Is this our portion or yours, Taiji? Why have you never accepted this house as one?
T: Go ask your Bauji this question. Why until today he has not accounted for us as his own. Until today, he has acted according to his own wishes, why has he destroyed us? Who started enemity first in this house? How is responsible for my situation. Go, go ask Bauji.
At that moment, Shankar enters.
T: Sau baath ki ek baath. Everyone in this house only picks on Taiji
V: Taiji aap
Shankar: Looks like Taiji is again fanning the ambers. Vrinda if the food has become cold , then heat it up again. Have to take it for Sanya bhabhi.
Everyone stares at him.

He walks up the stairs. Sharada and Vrinda follow him up the stairs.
Sharada: Shankar! Why has the fight between brothers become the spectacle at the steps of Benaras? Why are you increasing the problems of your family? I cannot make outsiders understand and my own don't want to understand.
Shankar: Then what should I do mother. You tell me. Bhaiya is acting against the family and Bauji and I should just keep quiet and watch?
Sharada: You worry a lot about your father Shankar? If you are really concerned about him, why didn't you obey his orders? Why are you keeping Sanya?
Shankar: Because mother the truth is such that Bauji is still not able to understand, and until he does understand the truth, it is my duty to keep it safe and protected.
Sharada: in this fight between truth and untruth, my family is breaking. It seems as if in the season of relationships,autumn has imprisoned. Your father started it and the rest you fulfill.
Shankar: But Amma..
Sharada shouts at him, pointing her finger at him: Don't argue with me.
Vrinda takes Shankar away with her to her room.

Vrinda: sit. see shankar you know what situation our family is going through. Can't you change yourself for this time? Please Shankar, I know you have your won ways. You have a thinking that is correct but Shankar, now only one thing matters, that thought which can bring together broken relationships. Instead of bringing Adi closer why are you increasing the distance?
Shankar: to bring him close we cannot ignore the others. Those relationships cannot survive for long.
Vrinda: Look Shankar. I only know one truth. And that truth is this that amma and bauji have brought up their family with lots of love and not for us to break it all up one day.
Shankar: That is what I am saying Vrinda. We all have to work together to unite this house. And the one who wants to free it, we should help him.
Vrinda: you are talking about Sanya, isn't it?
Shankar: Yes I am talking about her. She has given our family more respect. Our brother had come to Akilesh's house to take her away. But she rejected it. Because she doesn't want to break the Pandey family. And moreover, she didn't allow Aditya to treat her in the hospital. She is unwell but Pandey family honour is more important to her.
Vrinda is shocked.
Vrinda: I don't understand anything Shankar ( you are not the only one😕)
Who is wrong who is right. I can't understand anything. On one end, your increasing distance between Aditya. The other end, going against everyone supporting Sanya. And on top of that mother, tolerating everything quietly. Without respite, Taiji starts her taunting.
Shankar: That is mother's mistake. Why does she listen to Taiji's rubbish. Just give an answer and end it.
Vrinda: Otherwise, Shankar . Mother has an answer for every question but don't know why when Taiji blames Bauji for her bad luck, mother becomes quiet. No answer no question. There must be something that we both don't know. That is being hidden from us.

Sharada is in her room, calling Kashinath on the phone but the he is unreachable. She says to herself that here questions are being piled on relationships and there you have taken the answers with you. She is afraid the present situation will worsen if not handled on time. She is afraid that taking care of these other relationships her own relationship with Kashinath will be affected.
Vrinda comes to her. She tells her that Sharada has always comforted her in sadness and today she would like to do the same in return and wipe her tears.
Vrinda wipes away Sharada's tears.
Then Vrinda asks her what Taiji was talking about.
Sharada is hesistant about answering but Vrinda prods on.
Sharada doesn't to break her fragile heart with the hard truth. But Vrinda insists that she shares it. Vrinda keeps persisting.
Sharada loses her temper and tell her that Taiji accuses Kashinath of murdering her husband (Taiji's husband).
Episode ends on Vrinda's shocked face.

Thank you. Sorry for any mistakes.😊


Edited by ovaltine - 17 years ago

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