Shivika TS: Tere Bin Yaara (ch1-pg3) 05.05.2017

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wrote this after the revelation of Pinky that she will seperate Annika from Shivaay..

Really needed to keep away from this track..

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Prologue:

"Aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye thha Pinky ji. Annika ko ghar se nikal ke aapne bohut badi galti kardi hai.. Najane ab woh kahaan hai? Kis haal mein hai?" A voice tore the disturbing silence residing amongst the family members.

As everyone turned to look at the source of the boice,some people were shocked seeing the person.

"Sameer Damsingh Rathore.. Deputy Comissioner of Police and Head of Mumbai Crime Branch... And Annika's dadusaa.." the person replied.

Dadi went near Sameer and held him,asked with teary eyes', " Sameer beta,meri bacchi kahaan hai? Mili woh tujhe? Bol na kuch?"

"Aap fikr mat kijiye.. Jab tak Sameer Damsingh Rathore hai,tab tak Annika ka koi kuch nahi bigadh sakta hai.. Not even you,Mrs.Pinky Oberoi?" Sameer replied with a smirk.

All heads turned towards Pinky,who was sweating very badly and was scared.

"Mom.. Yeh Sameer keh kya raha hai? Aap sach bataiye.." Shivaay asked her.

"Pinky,yeh sab kya hai?" Jahnvi,Daadi,Shakti and Tej asked her.

Pinky couldnt speak and struggling to form words due to nervousness..

"Arey!! Yeh kyun batayengi? Main batata hu.. Asal mein Annika ka ghar se nikala jaana aur uska "KIDNAPPING" hona..inn sab ke piche ka mastermind Mrs.Pinky Oberoi hi hai!"

All gasped as Sameer disclosed this information infront of the family..

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Index:

Prologue: pg1
ch1: pg1
Edited by Annika_Ishqbaaz - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one:-) :-) Interesting start.

Sameer Rathore... You just reminded me of 'Arjun'...

Keep updating:-)

Love
- Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful strt nd concept..
Continue soom
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful strt nd concept..
Continue soon
Pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome prologue..
very interesting..
loved it..
cont. soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Nice one:-) :-) Interesting start.

Sameer Rathore... You just reminded me of 'Arjun'...

Keep updating:-)

Love
- Harshada


Yay!!! I just loved Sameer Rathore's charecter.. I had to include him..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz


Yay!!! I just loved Sameer Rathore's charecter.. I had to include him..




I have been a regular viewer of 'Arjun'...
A beautiful series it was indeed...
But I wish they wouldnt have ended it abruptly and showed what exactly was happened at 'Roshni's incident' !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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really interesting concept! Is Pinky behind all this? waiting for the bext part.
So do update it soon.

p.s. With which name I'll address you?

love you,
Anya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story line Di. Please update fast can not wait to read more.
Loved the prologue.
With Love
-Chhaya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: water9786


Awesome story line Di. Please update fast can not wait to read more.

Loved the prologue.
With Love
-Chhaya



Will update sooonish Chhaya.

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