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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guiding star

Teri vafaaye, teri mohabbat
Sab kuch hai mere liye
Tune diya hai nazraana dil ko
Hum to hai tere liye
Yeh baat sach hai, sab jaante hai
Tumko bhi hai yeh yakeen
Dil hai ke manta nahin
Dil hai ke manta nahin

This SS is dedicate to all the fans and all the ups and downs we have had in the past and to all the lovely people I have met over the nearly two years I have been here.

Sharan XXX

PS Tanu also you as well your encouragement was amazing next time i want a Oscar hehe!

The night was warm and all of Walia mansion lights were turned off, not a sound could be heard except the tinkling of a soft piano being played in the study tucked high up in Walia mansion. Jai Walia out of frustration slammed the keys shut, standing up in anguish, he shook his head and sweat beads fell off in every direction off his unkempt hair, walking towards his study window he removed his tie and unbuttoned the top button of his shirt, wiping the sweat off his forehead on the back of his hand, Jai Walia, Hotelier and the third richest man in India was broken, how could he have made such a stupid mistake, frustration pouring from his every pore, he slammed the window with his right fist and a crack appeared in the window pane, looking at the small cut on his wrist , he saw the blood ooze out, but the pain in his heart seemed to be worse.

KNOCK, KNOCK

"Jai, kya hua".

Turning around on hearing Meera's voice, Jai groaned, what the heck was she doing here, the reason for all this mess, Jai growled back at her,

"Kya chati ho"

Meera visibly flinched, was it not enough, in front of other people, did he really have to disrespect her in private to. Straightening her self she raised her chin and stared right back hard at her husband, refusing to let him disrespect her and showing him that she wasn't putting up with it like his first and lawfully wedded wife.

"Just to let you know, Ganga is finally asleep with Vidya in her bed, she kept asking for Bani, and Masi refused to sleep in Walia mansion so I had the driver drop her home back to the basti".

Seeing the blood drip from his hand and stain the collar of his pristine white shirt, Meera rushed over to wipe it with her sari.

Jai out of anger backed away and almost shouting at her said.

"Get away from me; don't fuss over me like a child, that's what Ganga and Vidya are for."

Grabbing a nearby handkerchief, Jai pressed it on the cut and bit his lip to hide the pain, pretending it didn't hurt he said,

"Besides it doesn't hurt a bit!"

Looking at the crack in the window pane Meera opened the window fully to let some air in,

"I don't know who is stubborn you or your daughter, she takes after you in so many ways."

Meera stared up at the dark clouds hovering over the moon, fearing she had said to much, she sighed waiting for the rapid rebuff from Jai, noting it not coming she suddenly felt his presence next to her turning her head, she saw him staring up at the night sky but unlike her, Jai was more interested in the stars.

"I have fought with destiny many times and sometimes losing, but mostly winning, just through hard work and determination alone, I'm sick of fighting, I just want her back, and I want my parivaar back, Meera I made a grave mistake marrying you for what ever selfish reason I did it for and I'm sorry for it , sorry for trapping you in a loveless marriage",

Turning fully towards her, he grabbed her shoulders and continued, as Meera listened closely; not daring to interrupt his heart felt speech.

"I have done to you what was done to me, I know all to well the horrors of being trapped in an unhealthy relationship, but it was from hatred that my love for Bani awakened and now again so, I have been a fool and Jigyasa will pay for her deeds, buts its you and Bani…….."

Trailing off, unable to face the terrible truth Jai turned away letting go of her shoulders unable to look her in the eye, Meera smiled understanding finally what this was about, walking up to a drawer she pulled out some papers and grabbing a nearby pen sighed them straight away, beckoning Jai over, she placed the papers open and passed the pen over to him, confused Jai said,

"What are these papers, I never sigh anything with out reading the small print first, and I didn't become the self made millionaire I am for nothing you know",

"For GODS sake Jai Walia stop being so pig headed and sign the divorce papers",

said Meera waving the pen at him.

Shocked, Jai rubbed his temples and screwed up his face and spat out,

"I'm not divorcing Bani".

Laughing Meera replied.

"It's our marriage I'm having it made null and void".

Jai's eyes widened and skimming through the papers quickly he signed them without a word. Meera grabbed them from him being careful not to touch his hurt wrist.

"Meera, can I ask you a personal question, even if I have no right to know it now".

"Sure",

said Meera glancing over the papers and at Jai happily.

"Why have you put up with me for so many years, despite knowing I never really got over Bani"?

"It's quite simple Jai, I lost the love of my life just like you, on the night of my honeymoon it self, I loved him with all my being, I felt your pain too Jai, that's what bind's us together are hurt, I understood, that's why I put up with it, and now I feel free after all these years, I feel as if I can breath and finally move on."

"I'm sorry",

said Jai.

Putting her hand up Meera waved at Jai, "No need to be, I have just one more thing to do before I leave Walia mansion for good, may I use your phone".

Curious about what she meant, Jai readily offered his phone to Meera. Dialling the number quickly Meera asked the person on the other line if Bani was their, and if she was comfortable after nodding a few minutes, she said,

"Well her husband will be their tomorrow morning first thing, can you start the treatment as soon as possible, and he will deposit the fees then."

Hearing an affirmative answer on the other end she clicked the phone shut; Jai wide eyed with amazement at the strange conversation asked her what the call was about.

Meera bit her lip slightly out of nervousness and motioned for Jai to sit down on the sofa, grabbing a glass and pouring some water in it she offering it to Jai, who was looking more and more panicked and as white as a ghost.

"You know were Bani is, is why the heck didn't you tell me",

His temper rising he went to stand up when Meera pulled him back down.

"I had a private investigator follow Bani since she came back into our lives, I wanted to know the reason you left her and why you loved her still, the P.I reported to me Bani was visiting a clinic in a hospital, I happened to know the Doctor treating Bani, and tricked them, I got to know that Bani had T.B, her treatment costs 6 lakhs and she would rather die then ask you for help Jai, that's what all the drama about Ganga being adopted by us and everything she has said or done since"

putting a hand gently on his shoulder Meera said with a hushed whisper, "Go save your wife Jai, go save the love of your life, unlike I couldn't".

Stunned beyond belief, Jai Walia cried, like he had never cried before, all the frustrations, the guilt the pain all come flooding out, Meera as a friend offered support and stayed with Jai while he cried, wiping her own tears, she smiled at him and offered her hand.

"Mr Walia, ab hum pati aur patni nai hai, tu mein do batai kehna chati hu".

Wiping his tears Jai just nodded, Meera took his hand and said,

"Mujhse dosti karogai",

Grabbing her hand he shook it gladly and smiling through his tears, "Off course, I owe you so much, and what's the second thing."

"Mr Walia, you have the most awful taste in ties."

Both laughing their heads until their tummy's hurt, they both looked up at the same time and saw the shooting star which went past the pale silvery moon, both closed their eyes and made a wish silently.

"What did you wish for Meera",

"You really want to know",

"Yes Meera",

"I asked for god to never separate my Ram and Sita again, meaning Jai and Bani."

Touched, Jai was chocked; Meera asked him what he had wished for.

"My new best friend's future, to be bright and full of every happiness in the world that she deserves".

Smiling at each other Jai and Meera knew that they would never be able to thank each other enough for this day, Meera for Jai, when he gave her freedom back and Jai was grateful for Meera saving his Bani.

The end.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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mine! 😉 shh.. sharan.. not supposed to tell ppl i cheated!😆

Me will be back 2morw.. i'm v. sleep now..

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like...very nice..you didn't destroy Meera...left her as she is in KS a woman in a loveless marriage...well not divorced and JW's achi dost....nicely done...now if they do something good like that in KS.........well done...now you have to write more....you got an Oscar...a lovely comment from the FF Queen....👏👏👏
Edited by divan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: divan

saving......sharan.......uff bunny was too fast.......not fair😭

Sweetie she had plenty of warning and i mean plenty my dear!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Beautiful, short and sweet. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ahhhh. dil ko shanti mil gayi 😛
i see Meera has 'brain' hmm
gr88888888888 SS

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very nice, Sharan!

I hope it goes like that.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Shaz,

A very sweet short story.

Now Jai and Meera as friends is digestable 😉.

Nikita
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

mine! 😉 shh.. sharan.. not supposed to tell ppl i cheated!😆

Me will be back 2morw.. i'm v. sleep now..

No excuse dear i want a BIG comment dear!!!

NIGHT NIGHT

Sharan XXX

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Very nice, Sharan!

I hope it goes like that.... 😃

OMG Sheena you like, i feel so honoured WOW thanks 😃😃😃!!!! Me happy !!!!

Sharan XXX

PS me going to bed now night night !!!

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