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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manaalkhan

Hey..! Its very interesting..!!

Loved this idea of yours..!
Continue soon.. thanks for the pm..!

Thanku so much dear 😊
Glad you loved it 😳
Will update tomorrow
No need to thanks for the pm 😳
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Waoo ...
Cute story and sounds very interesting ...
Update soon ...
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Originally posted by: Komalbubly

Waoo ...

Cute story and sounds very interesting ...
Update soon ...

Thanku so much dear
Glad you found it interesting
Will update tonight 😳😊
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Beautiful , sweet and cute at the same time

just loved every bit of it
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Beautiful , sweet and cute at the same time

just loved every bit of it

Thanku so much
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Originally posted by: Prakrutibhat

Awesome dear...nice concept.

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PART 2

At evening Kabir and Jinie reached Kabir's house.

After entering Kabir said

K- so ye hai mera ghar

J- bahut Accha hai

Kabir smiled and said

K - I am glad tumhe Accha laga

Jinie smiled

K- to Jinie mere ghar pe ek guest room hai tum vaha raho, OK?

J- ye g..guest room kya hota hai juju

Kabir smiles and said

K- guest room yani ki vo room jaha mehman rehte hai

J- lekin juju dost mehman thodi hote hai

Kabir smiles at her logic and said

K- thik hai to main use guest room ki jagah friends room bulaunga, jiska matlab dost ka karma ab khush

Jinie nodded with a full blown smile

Kabir also smiles seeing her smiling and said

K- OK to tum jaakar apne kamre mein rest karo, main tumhare liye kuch khaane ko banata hu

J- oho juju usmein itna tension lene waali kya baat hai, ek minute

She clicked her fingers and a table appeared in front of Kabir with 7 star hotel food

Kabir's mouth hung open seeeing, he was looking at Jinie then at the food

K- Jinie ye sab???

J- kya ye sab juju aapke liye khaana hai

Kabir gulped at the site and sat on the chair whene Jinie said her

He was looking at the food and then said

K- Jinie ye aaj tumne kar liya lekin hamesha mat karna, vo kya haina ki mujhe apna kaam khud hi karna pasand hai aur jitna ho sake utna kam jaadu ka istemaal karna, OK?

Jinie smiled at her mind blowing juju and said

J- OK juju, aap bahut acche ho

Kabir smiled at her and then they had dinner

NEXT DAY
MORNING

Kabir woke up and yawned, then after fresh up he went to " FRIEND ROOM ".

When her entered he didn't found Jinie there.

K(pov)- ye Jinie kaha gayi

Kabir started searching for Jinie when he found her in living room sobbing in the corner

Kabir got shocked seeing her in tears and went to her. He went on his knees in front of her and said

K- Jinie kya hua tum ro kyu rahi ho

When she saw him in front of her she got more scared and stand up with a thud going away from Kabir. Kabir got more confused by this behaviour

K- Jinie tum mujhse dur kyu jaa rahi ho and by the way tum itna ro kyu rahi ho

J-(still sobbing)-juju aap mujhe kaid kar loge na vaapas, aap... aapne sabko jaise kaid kiya hai vaise mujhe bhi kaid kar loge na
Kabir got more confused hearing this and little shocked also

K- Jinie ye tum kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha and maine kisko kaid kiya hai

Jinie pointed at something and said

J- juju aapne in saare logo ki is jaadui dibbe mein kaid kar diya hai aur ab aap mujhe bhi ismein kaid kar doge hain na

And she again start crying, when Kabir saw the thing which Jinie was pointing he firstly got hell shocked and suddenly started laughing vigorously, he was laughing holding his stomach

Jinie got more scared seeing her juju laughing

K(while laughing) - Jinie tum... tum is wajah se... itna ro rahi thi... tum bhi na yaar

After sometime he some how stopped laughing and taking Jinie's hand he took her to the so called JAADUI DABBA.

Jinie started sobbing more loudly. Kabir made her stand facing him and kept both his hands on her shoulder and then said

K - Jinie stop crying (while wiping her tears with both hands) dekho Jinie ye jo haina ye koi Jaadui dibba nahi hai balki Ise kehte hai TV

J- TV ye kya hota hai juju

K - dekho ismein kya hota hai na Jinie ki ismein alag alag programs yani ki karyakram dikhaye jaate hai logo ke entertainment yani ki manoranjan ke liye

J- lekin juju itne bade log is TV mein aate kaise hai, jaadu se na?

Kabir smiled at her cuteness and innocence

K- nahi Jinie ye sab jaadu se nahi hota hai, dekho kya hota hai na ki Jinie hum log shooting karke satellite ke through in programs ko telecast karte hai, jaise ki jab koi frequency...

Kabir stopped seeing Jinie's face which was indicating that she was more than confused listening these new words from Kabir's mouth

K- Jinie chodo ye sab in sab ke liye tumhe physics padhna padega... Aur ab ye mat puchna ki physics kya hota hai kyuki main vo nahi samjha paaunga

Kabir added seeing Jinie is ready to ask

J- OK juju

Kabir smiled and said

K - thik hai to fir tum baitho aur is Jaadui dibbe ko enjoy karo, main breakfast banata hu

J - oho juju don't worry, breakfast maine...

K- nahi Jinie Maine kaha tha na ki mujhe in sab cheezo mein Jaadu ka use karna bilkul pasand nahi hai

J- juju aap pehle meri baat to suno, maine breakfast apne haanthon se banaya hai

K- whaaat, tumhe khaana banana aata hai

J-ha juju, vo kya hai na ki kal aapne mujhse kaha tha na ki aapko khaane ke liye jaadu ka istemaal nahi chahiye, isliye maine kal baithkar thodi bahut khaana banane ki tarkeebo ki jo pustak hoti hai na vo padh Li aur aaj naashta bana diya

K- lekin Jinie tumhe saara saaman kaise mila?

Jinie lowered her head

J- vo juju maaf karna , uske liye mujhe jaadu ka istemaal karna padha

Kabir smiled at her and said

K- lekin Jinie tumhe mere liye ye sab karne ki kya zarurat thi and main khud breakfast bana leta hai

J- oho juju aap banao ya main banau baat to ek hi haina, aakhir kaar aap (while blushing )mere hone waale pati jo ho

Kabir got shocked hearing this and glared at her

K- Jinie

Jinie cutting him in between excitedly said

J- juju chalo shaadi karte hai

END

I know bahut late hu sorry for that
Promise karke tod diya
But is baar pakka nahi todungi aur kal aur parso dono din update deke ye story khatam karungi, I promise
Tab tak please comment and I am sorry once again





Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Superb update
Jinni is so cute
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Good going... Bahut mazaa aaya padh ke..

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