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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

I agree with everyone here who says Svetalana was not the problem. None of us had an issue with her till they made her creepy and gave her overdoes. I think her overdoes was courtesy of the aimless story. Like Neeme said, the flirty SvetKara was good. People liked it. But then they made her creepy. Today at the photo shoot I felt like they were trying to reestablish their former dynamic and that is good. That is what people liked before. It's not that anyone wants them to be endgame! It's just the RISKY business of their relationship that people love. (At least that is what anyone who enjoyed SvetKara scenes loved).

Now coming to Gauri, the initial Bareilly track showed her in a strong light. But since the marriage she started to act like some devotee of Om. She is happy devoting herself to him from afar. Near death experience, he saved her etc. Ok up to this point I can buy it. But the khoon bari maang, touching the ground and calling him PP? This is too much! This is killing her character and making her look pathetic for believing such things! Yes she is not highly educated but she seemed to be practical and an internet addict. No one who loves the internet so much will think their husband is a God just coz the guy saved her!

Om was an amazing character. Yes he has changed and is more cold and focused now. However the essence of Om is still there. Show that to us. Instead of faltu detectivegiri show him doing art again or organising an exhibition or maybe getting Oberoi industries to buy art galleries and venturing into Arts as a side business? Isn't there anything interesting that can come of it? Maybe Gauri can design clothes for one of these ventures? I always dreamt of Om going to a recital and seeing Ishana come on stage as a dancer and see she has changed her life. THAT would have been a great reentry for her. Om invests in some dance company and Ishana turns out to be one of the dancers in the show? Gul should have asked ME for ideas on reintroducing Ishana. But that ship sailed!

So getting back to Gauri, give her her Personality back. Get her in woman's clothes! End the bromance and start the Romance! Get Om to hate her, get Om to do something dumb like accept marriage with Svetlana in front of Gauri. Let Gauri be pissed off and determined to get him "married". Do some Farak nonsense and some Sautan BS! (Gul should be good with all this now). Let Kali Thakur have Tashan with Om! That is always fun to watch! I think they are trying to get the story back on track! But it's going slow.

Bua Ma needs to have an agenda but she doesn't have to be negative. She can be a cause of a rift between the brothers. She can be like Lord Ram's evil step mother? The lady with the name starting with K? Kekei? Is that right? She can fight to get Om to be the chairman like Tej does. Just like Kekei wanted her son to be king? She thinks she can use Gauri's "devotion" as a weapon! But it fails. Gauri won't help her seperate the family! Something interesting? Even GoodLana falling for Om is a good angle. SO much they can do!

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 8 years ago

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OnVanvaasMode

@OnVanvaasMode

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: neeme
I have a question. Is this Swetlana is the problem ? How we r so sure that audience rejected swetlana just ??
What i feel is.. Audience rejected bad storyline

Audience loved after bareli track where We saw SwetKara Flirty romance.. Trps were 2.3 that week... After than CV'S runied Swetlana character just bcz audience were getting attached with SwetKara in different way. Audiences rejected spoiled swetlana Character. N over dose of scientific investigation with empty hands.

Audience rejected Chulbul track.. there is no Gauri after starting 2 weeks of DBO. Peoples rejected that track... I must say if cv's keep showing Proper Rikara track. Even then this Raazlana track won't effect to Trps this much. But here Show is offering nothing to audience... No Love story. no suspense n mystery in Love story.. No family story. Bcz dbo cast is abt 4 to 5 members. So no family here. No major twist n turns by villans. N no hungama in storyline...

Basically dbo is offering no story to Audience... Everyone want swetlana track to end soon.. okay. Imagine if it happens. Then u all will be happy with CB n Om love story ?? This is what audience want to see ?? Sorry but not swetlana Character but main love story is actually a big problem... It is chulbul n omkara ki Love story. N peoples r not interested in this... KT Character too can't help much with this ChulKara track... Sorry cv but now its getting too much..

Exaclty !!!

when the FL is not having a sketch , and just made a ghost of the character, by masking it over with another, how can we blame the vamp??

Poor Rudra is not getting his due anywhere, ok you can't think about his LS, but at least his dynamics with the present scenario-for god's sake, he is also TejVi's son, and he would be as much affected as his brother is.

Sho us the territorial Ru, show us his angst over the broken relationship of his parents, show us his frustation over his inability to do anything, 'coz he is a "baby", Show that he is a baby for the happiness of his brothers , but not for the whole world. He can be the mighty Rudra Singh Oberoi when time demands it. He has his own way to tackle stuff, which are not heavyweights-but it hits sharp the bull's eye- show that

For the SvetKara angle, I was expecting it to go the Swabhiman( - the old one , not the recent colors' show) way, even there the mistress's name was Svetlana😆.

Just they tried to indirectly show it- Svets was making Om look at his dad in a corporate way, she tried to crack a joke over two deals, but those were actually indirect insights.

In the beginning of DBO and in IB, as Neeme said- they showed us a splendid- antagonist-protagonist relation, it was the unique thing in the show, Nafrartbaazi-takkar ki I would say!

I felt they would explore the journey of Omkara, how he experiences with the ugly , corporate side of his world, through his hate-mate, the more this phoenix burns, the stronger he would rise!

From Svetlana's perspective, yes she was the mistress of the richest man out there, and had a chance to become his queen, but she dumped it and joined hands with the maamooli Artist

Yes, she has revenge and destruction in her mind, but why through him? well he is the weak-link, and resist it or not, he has a magnetic charm, an aura which allures you insanely. He his not classy and suave like the eldest heir or a Prince Charming like the youngest one, he is right at the middle-a mystery , a puzzle which will attract you more and more, you will like to have a a conection with him- no matter what it is...he is her forbidden attraction, but's then Svetlana is all about forbiddance.

Instead , they turned this Svetlana something straight for cartoon network, and we are bearing with Dexter's laboratory!!!!!

CVs just look what you ruined!!!

Coming to the Female lead , I have no comments, Shrenu is a fab actress, please use her potential, she will be amazing if she gets some layers

Thanks to the plot, Gauri is still in a shell, and there is no sketch of hers, so there's still time to revamp her, make necessary changes in her and present us a decent story

If you can't do it, then stalk us , we will not ask for credits 🤣

Just remember that, Omkara is your established character, you made a spin-off by placing a bet on him, so make changes according to him , do not change him instead.

Well at least mercies have been there that he is still intact, I appreciate the CVs for that, but come on! now it's time to explore him in his own accord!

Edited by OnVanvaasMode - 8 years ago

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Cold coffee_mania

@Fruitcustard_9

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Omkara ke character mai bahut jyada flaws nhi hai, na hi usse apne life patrner se bahut jyada umeed. I dont think omkara will ever change gauri coz he accept d person as he or she is, it his quality. I dont know what gauri will give 2 omkara vishwas jaap, well omkara was never a religious person, he was always believed in karma, omkara is bit angry &upset on certain things which r logical also. I don't know how gauri will prove her point 4 lies r essential 4 life. Majboori to tab hoti agar Svetlana ka kaam karti, Svetlana to kaam kabhi nhi Kiya, majboori ki baat hi nhi. Yeh koi logic nhi agar aap problem mai ho to dusro ko fool karne ka ticket aapke pass hai. Aaj tak Samaj nhi aaya gauri ka character kya hai

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Iamsu

@Iamsu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

The launch day of DBO has created history by starting the First ever spin off of Indian television.

Concept has not been understood by many and some don't want to take it up as their favourite characters are not going to come in one frame again.

Fan war and arguments are inevitable and this is the failure of Creative heads,Production House and the Channel as they would have make the concept clear to the audience in a proper way rather than showing promo multiple times.

It has started with bang because of the brilliant actors like Rahul Dev,Kunal Jaisingh, Srenu Parikh and the amazing chemistry of Omkara and Gouri.Coming to the story line I have never liked it as when other production houses are coming up with unimaginable stories where are the out of box thinking gone for indias first spin-off.Rather than showing the same old don't know how many times shown on television "Gaon ki gori and Seher ka Chora" concept.There research would have been quite extensive as the expectations were huge.

People who are thinking if DBO ends than all the actors will go back to Isqbaaz or mergers what so ever than clear your head the main Leads will leave as they are getting paid far more with other facilities which they will not get if they go back or whatever there are lot of terms and conditions needs to be follow for running a show.

There are lot of heads involved for running a show,its story line,concept,characters and actors.

Try to understand that.

Convey your message liking,disliking,suggestion but do not bash.If you don't like a particular show take your own call.Do not threat or spreading the negativity.

If you want to show, show your love for the serial when its doing good even when you do not like suggest them how to make it better.

For the ardent fans if possible ignore the negative comments,the more you respond the more it will get spread.

Shout out " Dil Bole Oberoi ".🥳🥳🥳

Edited by Iamsu - 8 years ago

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Abhiya

@abhiya_12

Achiever

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: OnVanvaasMode

Exaclty !!!
when the FL is not having a sketch , and just made a ghost of the character, by masking it over with another, how can we blame the vamp??
Poor Rudra is not getting his due anywhere, ok you can't think about his LS, but at least his dynamics with the present scenario-for god's sake, he is also TejVi's son, and he would be as much affected as his brother is.
Sho us the territorial Ru, show us his angst over the broken relationship of his parents, show us his frustation over his inability to do anything, 'coz he is a "baby", Show that he is a baby for the happiness of his brothers , but not for the whole world. He can be the mighty Rudra Singh Oberoi when time demands it. He has his own way to tackle stuff, which are not heavyweights-but it hits sharp the bull's eye- show that

For the SvetKara angle, I was expecting it to go the Swabhiman( - the old one , not the recent colors' show) way, even there the mistress's name was Svetlana😆.
Just they tried to indirectly show it- Svets was making Om look at his dad in a corporate way, she tried to crack a joke over two deals, but those were actually indirect insights.
In the beginning of DBO and in IB, as Neeme said- they showed us a splendid- antagonist-protagonist relation, it was the unique thing in the show, Nafrartbaazi-takkar ki I would say!
I felt they would explore the journey of Omkara, how he experiences with the ugly , corporate side of his world, through his hate-mate, the more this phoenix burns, the stronger he would rise!

From Svetlana's perspective, yes she was the mistress of the richest man out there, and had a chance to become his queen, but she dumped it and joined hands with the maamooli Artist
Yes, she has revenge and destruction in her mind, but why through him? well he is the weak-link, and resist it or not, he has a magnetic charm, an aura which allures you insanely. He his not classy and suave like the eldest heir or a Prince Charming like the youngest one, he is right at the middle-a mystery , a puzzle which will attract you more and more, you will like to have a a conection with him- no matter what it is...he is her forbidden attraction, but's then Svetlana is all about forbiddance.

Instead , they turned this Svetlana something straight for cartoon network, and we are bearing with Dexter's laboratory!!!!!
CVs just look what you ruined!!!

Coming to the Female lead , I have no comments, Shrenu is a fab actress, please use her potential, she will be amazing if she gets some layers

Thanks to the plot, Gauri is still in a shell, and there is no sketch of hers, so there's still time to revamp her, make necessary changes in her and present us a decent story
If you can't do it, then stalk us , we will not ask for credits🤣

Just remember that, Omkara is your established character, you made a spin-off by placing a bet on him, so make changes according to him , do not change him instead.
Well at least mercies have been there that he is still intact, I appreciate the CVs for that, but come on! now it's time to explore him in his own accord!

Yes please for god sake show Rudra somewhere either IB ya DBO but at least give that guy something to do other than being cheer leader for their brothers story if you don't have love story at least give him some SS with him getting affected by their parents , Om's condition, his take whatever but show him IB now looks like Shivay-Mahi track then show him in DBO at least. He needs his due, leenesh too is signed as a lead not a clown 🥱

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FlauntPesimism

@FlauntPessimism

Viewbie

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Rudra is something which I don't want to even dream for anymore

I had always thought Rudra would turn out to be the game changer and he would become Rudra Roop but I guess that now there is very faint hope for this

But even if not a parallel lead can't Rudra be an important second lead with individual characterization n if possible a story. I would be satisfied if they give 10 minutes of individual Rudra a week in IB n 25 minutes a week in DBO (both the shows air 100+ minutes a week)

I am seriously losing hopes

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Abhiya

@abhiya_12

Achiever

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism
Rudra is something which I don't want to even dream for anymore
I had always thought Rudra would turn out to be the game changer and he would become Rudra Roop but I guess that now there is very faint hope for this

But even if not a parallel lead can't Rudra be an important second lead with individual characterization n if possible a story. I would be satisfied if they give 10 minutes of individual Rudra a week in IB n 25 minutes a week in DBO (both the shows air 100+ minutes a week)

I am seriously losing hopes

Preet I lost all hopes like no hopes just wishing for miracles for both OmRu stories like pri said in the other topic it's tough to say which is worse the kind of love story Om is getting or Rudra's non existent story. It's like I did a sin loving OmRu characters 🥱

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FlauntPesimism

@FlauntPessimism

Viewbie

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Preet I lost all hopes like no hopes just wishing for miracles for both OmRu stories like pri said in the other topic it's tough to say which is worse the kind of love story Om is getting or Rudra's non existent story. It's like I did a sin loving OmRu characters 🥱

I always knew that OmRu wouldn't be important to the story (IB) right from the promos they seemed to be secondary characters still I loved them but I never expected this step treatment

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Abhiya

@abhiya_12

Achiever

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism

I always knew that OmRu wouldn't be important to the story (IB) right from the promos they seemed to be secondary characters still I loved them but I never expected this step treatment

Preet you know I am the one who always used to say quality above quantity I don't mind 3 to 4 minutes SS but want de sensible and good story for guys now see what crap they are serving for us. 😆

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