ShivIka FF: An Ishqbaaaz Rising *3.7 Updated* (2nd July, Page 82) - Page 36

Originally posted by: water9786

Loved this dear and Pinky's insecurities also. You have portrayed her insecurities very well. Her character has so much potential but do not why CVS have not used it. I really do not know why till Holi episode in real IB pinky was having problem with anika. What was the reason of her taunts on Anika?.They have not given us a single monologue of shivaay what he thinks about himself after the way he had married her and not even anika's. Thank you dear for such an awesome update. Waiting for next please update as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: fffan123

Awesome update. Loved it. Waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

Ahhh wow, you never fail to make me fall in love with your writing again and again LOL. I mean seriously.. this was such a true and wholesome update. Something different.. and it flowed really well. I like how you don't force any Shivika scenes in and keep it subtle as well, makes it more believable to read as well😆

It was lovely to read Pinky's perspective. I understand her POV.. and tbh she is not wrong.. she is going by what she has seen for so long. Would love to see what you do with Pinky now, and whether she still remains as eager as ever for ShiTia or if she wavers.. would like to see her and Shivaay have a heart to heart.. so many possibilities. Excited hehe!!

Excellent update as usual.. waiting for the next part. And I am so so glad you are going to incorporate Roumya, ShivOmRu and Omkara's love story. Although I am not fond of Ishana for she was a con.. and fear of her hurting my Om LOL, lets see how you mould this!!😎 Thank you for keeping this FF original.. in lots of ways!

Will be waiting !!!🤗

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Hey Lily! Sorry for being late once again..😆 I love this story--I know you are familiar with this but I just can't refrain myself to write this 😳 I ❤️ THIS STORY! One of the best FF I hav ever read on IB.Te best part of this FF is that you really give out the best inner thoughts of all of them. The way you are moving with this story it is making me more hooked up to it.

And the way you describe shivaay's orbs..Hayyeee..! Dil Bhar aata hai..❤️ It is so amazing that I just couldn't explain in words.You are the One who could describe shivaay eyes so beautifully and No one else I Believe.

Love reading annika's pov.and rudy and Khanna are alway adorable lads they made the video and rudy was unsatisfied with the covering of his video but khanna made it.He took the left over covering.ANd then the whole faily grinning like idiots at them making shivika flushed.Just love this scene alot.

Pinky on the other hand is a protective mother and loved his son more than anyone.She know annika was good for shivaay but maybe atleast maybe shivaay may feel a little uncomfortable with Anni as he was with her because she was not the well educated one and can't mixed with the world of fame where her son was.

She had spend her whole life in making her son happy while learning english,stopping herself being a loud mouth and many more but still there are a lot of loopholes in them and she think that they will never be filled as much hard she tried.

This thought had forced her to think again on making tia her daughter in law.Well I'm just waiting for her next move.hope it's good.MAYBE.

Do continue soon..

Love ya,

Anya😳

Originally posted by: sky-if

Pinky! Isn't she one of the most under utilized character on the show?! Sad that they made her a typical m-i-l!

Just ❤️ the Pinky PoV you've articulated! She literally has had to "fit in" her whole life but still loves the family without second thoughts! And who better to understand that Annika would have the same struggle? So waiting for your take on the Annika-Pinky relationship!

Just love love the little childhood memories you weave in!

Originally posted by: LilyJames0194

Ufff sooo much praise?? I am all floating in clouds now 😆

But thank youuu... that's so sweet ❤️

@Bold- You nailed it! But about the heart to heart...not so sure...don't really see SSO opening up to ANYONE...glimpses of Billu and some breakdowns yes...but a full heart to heart...difficult. Even with Omkaara who he usually has those talks with.. its always a listening Billu...with glimpses of his true self..some advices.. some moments of flashback..but no real talk. Maybe inner monologue 😆

About Ishaana... hahah.. I don't like that she is a Con artist of sorts either... but she fits him...as Daadi said in the second episode.. Omkaara needs to add a little bit of lies and dreams in his life... something that his partner needs to add. Somehow.. everything that I have seen of Gauri (I haven't seen much..but even the beginning..) she doesn't fit my version/my take on the original at all. So even though the Mala-Bella track was stupid...problematic on so many levels.. I still find that doable! Don't worry, it's not so much him hurting anymore than him hurting her very soon that's coming up 😉

Thank you for the feedback...and as my long updates on comments must indicate... I love engaging on core issues of the story in this way! Adds so much more to both my writing as well as the characters no?

So much love! xx

Daksh was angry. Angrier than he could ever remember being... all because their plan... the plan was going completely wrong ... that too in front of his eyes.

First Shivaay had actually gone ahead and married Annika, and then now - instead of being filled with hatred... Shivaay was here now, in front of Annika's new office building...pacing up and down the street like a mad man.

His hand fisted in anger as continued staring at Shivaay from the rooftop of an adjoining building.

Shivaay was shooting fervent glances at first his watch and then at Annika's office building.

What was wrong with Shivaay? Didn't he want to go to work today?

Shivaay Singh Oberoi didn't go to work?

Shivaay Singh Oberoi was here... in a small lane in the suburbs of the city waiting for a girl?

No... it didn't make sense at all. In fact this went against everything that he knew about Shivaay Singh Oberoi.

And he knew Shivaay. Oh yes, he knew Shivaay very well. He had known Shivaay since they had been to kindergarten together. Through every single phase of his life... through each of his relationships... Shivaay had never prioritized women over his business or family.

So yes, he knew and understood Shivaay Singh Oberoi very well.

And yet, yet... here he stood staring at Shivaay trying to understand what was going through his head that afternoon.

He could almost hear Shivaay's phone was ringing from the rooftop... and it really had been non-stop over the last two hours. So now he stared warily as Shivaay continued his pacing back and forth... answering and growling instructions to what he could only assume were the people back at his office. Yet, somehow through all of the work that was Shivaay still managed to sneak glances towards his watch and then the office.

What was this?

On one side Annika was pulled towards Shivaay, and here Shivaay was pulled towards Annika... and no matter what he did... no matter what they did... these two found ways to protect each other through every circumstance... in spite of the misunderstandings.

No... he would not let this happen. Shivaay had always taken everything that he wanted... Now he would take away the one thing that Shivaay wanted... Annika... Forever.

A new conviction filled him as he stood contemplating the next move.

He smiled at himself silently then... as he finally thought of a way to get through Annika despite Shivaay's presence there.

The smug smile still in place, he pulled up his phone and dialed the last dialed number.

Yes, this would work. Shivaay had one more weakness... other than Annika that is. Shivaay Singh Oberoi was responsible... sometimes blindly so... and this...this he would use against him today.

"Tia -"

The slightly fearful... uncomfortable voice on the other side only boosted his ego then.

He loved when it when women got scared of him...Oh yes... he would have to make sure that he recorded Annika's pleas... asking him to let her live... this would undoubtedly be his last gift to Shivaay.

"Call Shivaay and tell him that you are getting threatening calls. And do it now."

Even as he said those words, a new fervor passed through him. A familiar pull towards fulfilling a hunt... the irreplaceable feeling of hunting down a prey that meant so much to someone else.

Knowing that this particular prey was actually Shivaay's just added so much more to the thrill now. His throat suddenly dry due to the frustrating wait towards the hour threatened to overpower him then... but he ringed it in.

He would wait... he could wait... He had waited all his life for this... he could certainly wait a few more hours to get back at his best friend.

The slight hitch... the unsteadiness in Tia's voice assured him that she would do as asked.

Oh how he loved it when women got scared of him... somehow that made him feel stronger.. . more powerful. And this was one of the main reasons that he hated Shivaay... Shivaay always, always came between him and the women that he had feelings for. Shivaay's principles... Shivaay's success... everything was always about Shivaay! And he hated being in the shadow of his best friend.

Best friend... of course Shivaay was his best friend.

And this was going to be the last gift that he would give his best friend.

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