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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara is so eager to share her happiness with Mrityunjay and tell him that Aradhana wants to meet him!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, she is after all her mother is giving her chance to present the man she had chosen 😊

It is surprising that the bird Tara tried to help got healed suddenly!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲
hmm..yes surprising

Something seems to be fishy here!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
let's see πŸ˜•

Tara and Mrityunjay's hug on meeting was very sweet and beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
Thanks 😳

Finally the spell is broken when Tara gave Mrityunjay the Pearl!!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
yes, finally the spell is broken!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

The effect was felt by the whole kingdom it seems as a big spell was broken!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, the spell was quite strong 😊

So to reveal a big thing like his lineage, Mrityunjay took Tara to the lake as it seems to be their special place!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
They need to be some where quite 😊 (well forest was quite but you know some places are specialπŸ˜‰)

Tara gets very excited when he tells her Guruji has told him about his family!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
she was excited for MJ😊

Finally Mrityunjay told her that he belongs to the royal family and is the eldest son of King Jayraj and Queen Nirmala!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
The big mystery is outπŸ˜›

He is so happy and hugged Tara but Tara is now behaving weird!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
she has some problem with timingπŸ˜†

Mrityunjay now wants to ask her mom for her hand in marriage!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
quite fast!!πŸ˜› don't you think soπŸ˜†

She now thought that with her status she is no longer suitable for Mrityunjay with his new found identity of a prince!!!!
she is right in her place

Mrityunjay is confused by her sudden change is behaviour!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Poor MJ didn't knew about her thoughts

Tara it isn't so easy to get out of Mrityunjay's arms as he would never let you go!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
yes, he has planned his life with her😊 ( Or you can say we planned itπŸ˜‰)

Poor Tara is crying and Mrityunjay is so sweetly wiping her tears!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭
A man should act like MJ in such situation😊

She keeps calling him Prince and obviously he is getting frustrated by it as he is only Mrityunjay to her!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
anyone would be frustrated with this

But Tara is still talking about the difference between them but how does that matter when he loves her and she loves him!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
But she is in her own world

Mrityunjay assures her that nothing can change the fact that he would marry only her whoever he might be!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
His love is pure 😊

But Tara is not relenting and is very hard to crack but Mrityunjay is not one to give up!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
He will not give upon her😊

Mrityunjay finally recited the vow that he was only hers and she was his!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
yes😊

Hearing this, Tara's hope was back and she also recited the vow and declared that she was his and he was hers!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
finally, she believed him😊

Their kiss was beautiful and sooo romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
yes, it was 😳😳😳

It put a seal on their promise to be together forever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, foreverπŸ˜ƒ

This seems to be an important event not just for them but also for Wonderland as it was reflected in the weather and the forest!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³
seems likeπŸ˜‰

So this was the "Jungle Wedding" of Once Upon A Time In Wonderland!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
yes, you got it πŸ‘

Happy Second Wedding Anniversary to you too Archu and to all EBIans!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
ThanksπŸ˜ƒ

Thank you for this very special chapter on this special occasion!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
You are welcomeπŸ˜ƒ

The chapter was fabulous!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thanks for loving it so muchπŸ˜ƒ


Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja



First of all Happy 2nd wedding anniversary to all EBIANS πŸ˜ƒ πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Thank You πŸ˜ƒ

MriAra are unique and their marriage too... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
'Jungle Marriage' ... WOW !! Archu πŸ˜ƒ

yesπŸ˜ƒ

Archu, I know you did this update on that special day..
I should have commented then.. 😡
But I was stuck with exam on that week and then have some health issues
I know you will consider me as usual you consider my late comment.


As I have said early you are never late, just you take time πŸ˜‰
Take good care of your health and focus on your studiesπŸ˜ƒ
You know me very well πŸ˜ƒ

It is a Superb update ⭐️⭐️⭐️
The title is lovely !!! 😊
Thanks😳😳😳

Tara was so eager to tell MJ that Aradhana wanted to meet him πŸ˜›
yes, she was after all her mother had agreed to meet him😊

She found a injured bird and tried to help it..
So kind of her 😊
But how it got well so soon !! πŸ€”
that's strange isn't itπŸ˜•

Finally Tara reached to MJ.
She showed him the pearl and the spell was broken by his touch πŸ˜ƒ
the Pearl was the key to break the spellπŸ˜ƒ

On the way MJ told he found out about his family 😊
Tara was also excited to hear this πŸ˜ƒ
And finally it was revealed that none other than MJ belonged to the royal family πŸ˜ƒ
Tara now realized why the bloodline tree was alive 😊
Tara is smart to link everything quickly 😊

MJ was so happy, he hugged her.
But Tara had awkwardness in her mind...
MJ told he would ask her hand from her Mom for their marriage πŸ˜›
But Tara was not so happy πŸ˜”
She was surrounded by her status and MJ's new found identity 😡
She thought he would have some duties as prince and would have to marry a princess
Tara and MJ both were in their own world

MJ was confused by her sudden behavior .
He tried to find out, only found her crying and gloomy.
She kept maintaining distance and calling him Prince ... πŸ₯±
yes, he was confused and she was constantly did things which annoyed him

MJ cleared he was only 'Mrityunjay' to her
But it seemed Tara was not going to see his emotion
She kept telling she was an ordinary girl and he was prince πŸ€ͺ
he made it clear but she was in her own world

MJ told, nothing could change this that he would marry only her πŸ˜ƒ πŸ‘πŸΌ
But Tara is Tara...
She was never so easy to crack until someone gave her some sense πŸ˜†
looks like she got some stubbornness from MJπŸ˜†

Awee... MJ recited the vow, the promise that from then he was only her πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Hearing his promises Tara's confusion went away πŸ˜ƒ
She too announced herself to be his πŸ‘πŸΌ
And their kiss...
A vow made with pure heart😊

It was really an important change of their lives...
Now, everything is going to be right when MJ and Tara become one 😊
soon they will😳

It was a wonderful part Archu πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
It is your 'Jungle marriage' of Once Upon a Time In Wonderland πŸ₯³πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³
Very special update on special occasion πŸ˜ƒ
yes, I tried to make it special😊

Yes, I will try to be not so late on commenting



Thanks for loving it so muchπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely beautiful updates!
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Sorry for the late reply.

Was busy with work..
Loved the jungle scene..
And that jungle wedding was just out of this world beutiful..
Still missing EBI..
Did anyone following vpp new show in star plus??
I don't understand after doing a role like MJ..
How can he do such a spineless role???
Pl keep updating..
Thanks for the pm..

I am glad you made time from your busy schedule to read and comment hereπŸ˜ƒ

I am also glad you loved the jungle sceneπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

We all miss EBI badly 😭😭

No comment on VPP's role in Star plus show

I am trying to update as I get time😊

Thanks for still sticking to this storyπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great chapter!!!!

It moved fast as ebi !!!!!

So Tara came to share her happiness that mother wants to meet his life ... Mrityunjay!!!

Bird start flying with the touch of Tara ... how something fishy!!!!

Beautiful the way both hugged each other !!!!

Both r eager to share their happiness ...so Tara does ...

Mrityunjay also told her about his past life ... how guruji helped & he is prince !!!!!

Tara is so dump ...she loves him &a he also does then why she behaves like this ...

Mrityunjay getting frustrated & he shld be !!!!!

Finally good things happen ... the awaited Marriage!!!!

This story becoming more interesting!!!!!
Sorry fir tooo late reply!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Lovely beautiful updates!
Thanks for the pm!

Thanks for loving it so much πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Great chapter!!!!
ThanksπŸ˜ƒ

It moved fast as ebi !!!!!
yes πŸ˜‰

So Tara came to share her happiness that mother wants to meet his life ... Mrityunjay!!!
yes, she did😊

Bird start flying with the touch of Tara ... how something fishy!!!!
hmmm...

Beautiful the way both hugged each other !!!!
Thanks😊

Both r eager to share their happiness ...so Tara does ...
yes, they are πŸ˜ƒ

Mrityunjay also told her about his past life ... how guruji helped & he is prince !!!!!
the biggest mystery of his life😊

Tara is so dump ...she loves him &a he also does then why she behaves like this ...
they do love each other but some how she messed up

Mrityunjay getting frustrated & he shld be !!!!!
yes

Finally good things happen ... the awaited Marriage!!!!
yes!!!πŸ˜ƒ

This story becoming more interesting!!!!!
Sorry fir tooo late reply!!!!!!
No worryπŸ˜‰

Thanks for loving it and commenting on itπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

The witch, who was performing black magic on a girl, felt a sudden jolt. She sensed somewhere her spell was broken, that too a powerful one. She could not remember which of her curses was broken, so she tried to see it in her crystal ball, but it did not show her any.


"Some strong power is hindering my view otherwise I would have known who broke my spell and which spell."

She was pacing in her room and was thinking about Nandini who had not returned. She again turned to the crystal ball and tried locating her and what she found was shocking.


"She is dead!!!" She said seeing Nandini's body burning.

"There is something going on in this forest. Something that I don't know. Focus Kalavati, focus. You are a powerful witch. Focus."

She started recalculating the spells which she had performed in past to understand what was happening.


After hours of brain storming, she recalled the spell which might have been the reason behind the jolt.

"No, this can't be true. No, this can't be. He can't get the Pearl." She was terrified. "What if this is true?" she thought.


"If it's true, then no one will be left alive in this Kingdom. I will not allow that King and Kingdom to live happily." She said in fury.



After a satisfying hug, Mrityunjay asked Tara in a giggling tone, "Don't you have to go anywhere?"

"No, no place is better than your arms," she said tightening her hug.

"Let's go Tara. We should inform Guruji about the reward." He said caressing her hair.

"Hmm..." she murmured.


"Soon there will be a battle, we need to prepare for that," he said in a heavy voice.

Tara loosened the hug and said, "Don't worry everything will be fine."

"I am not afraid. I am just worried about my family and kingdom. What will happen if the witch attacks them?"


"Why will she?" Tara said looking at Mrityunjay in surprise.

"By now she must have come to know that I am alive." He said.

Tara was confused. She asked, "How?"


"She had done magic on the city which prevented me from entering it. When you gave the Pearl to me, that spell broke. When a powerful spell is broken, the person who cast that spell feels it," he explained. He knew this by reading the book Guruji wrote.


"Then we should reach Guruji fast," she said walking towards Maria.

She mounted herself on Maria followed by Mrityunjay and they galloped Maria towards his cottage in the woods.


"Are you not going back to your family?" She asked on their way to his house.

"I want to return as soon as possible, but now is not the time. If I am in the Kingdom, the danger to the people increases." He said.



As soon as they reached his place, they walked into the cottage where Guruji was meditating. He sensed them there and woke from meditation.


"Guruji, the Pearl." He showed him.

"How did you get this?" Guruji questioned.

Tara explained how the King had declared it as reward to whoever brought the Prince back.

"So the spell is broken," Guruji said looking towards Mrityunjay. He nodded in a yes.

"So the witch must have come to know about it," said Guruji and after pausing for a moment he continued, "We need to prepare for battle."

Mrityunjay walked out hearing this to check the armory.


Now Guruji turned his focus towards Tara and asked, "Are you alright?"

"I am fine, Guruji," she said.

"Are you sure?" he enquired.

"Yes." She said.

"Did anything strange happen today?" he asked again.

"Nothing strange," she said.


Then after a moment she remembered and said,

"Except that a wounded bird suddenly got well and flew in sky. Is this strange?"

"No, nothing strange." he said.


"So soon she will know who she is. But what will she be?" he thought.


"How lucky is Mrityunjay that he got his family! I wish I meet my father someday." She said looking nowhere in particular.


"Who knows God may grant your wish too," said Guruji and started walking towards the cottage.


He stopped and said, "You two better not tell anyone about this" and then went to his books lying around.

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Continued in next post

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Tara was out practising with the sword when her sword fell down. Tara kneeled to pick it up but before that Mrityunjay picked it up for her.

"What are you doing Tara?" he questioned.


"If a war is coming, your army should be trained well to fight." She said taking her position to fight.


"I am not taking you there. I don't want to risk your life. Remember what Nandini said? The witch is coming for you. It's not your fight Tara." said Mrityunjay trying to take the sword from her hand.


"How can you say that? It's our fight Mrityunjay. There is no mine and yours. Everything is ours." She said taking the sword from his hand.


"No Tara, listen to me. You are not coming with me." He said in a bit angry tone.


"You do what you want, I will do what I want," said Tara and started practising.

Mrityunjay seeing no way to stop her left her to practise. She too got a bit angry on Mrityunjay.


She had seen men suppressing women, thinking they are inferior to them, they are an object of pleasure. But what she had learnt from her mother and the Queen is that they are not inferior. They are no less than men. They are equal and even the power of men in hard times. Because of her anger, her sword was falling again and again. Each time she bent to pick up the sword she thought Mrityunjay would come and give her the sword to fight with him in battle, but it didn't happen. Her anger increased when she saw him playing with Maria outside the stable.


"He can play with her but I am not leaving my practice," she murmured.

Again her sword fell. She snapped her figures and picked it up. She turned her back towards Mrityunjay and continued her practise. Mrityunjay took Maria and tied her to the fence. From there Maria was visible to Tara, he knew Tara might want someone to talk to and left to clean the stable.


Mrityunjay was cleaning the stable when he suddenly saw the corner of its roof burning. He picked up the bucket near him and started putting water on it to put out the fire. Then he noticed that the fire had not started there. He followed the fire trail and what he saw shocked him.


Tara's dress was about to catch fire and she, being unaware of it, was practising her moves with her sword. He ran to her and dragged her away from it. Tara at first didn't understand what was happening. Then she turned and saw a small fire at the place where her sword had fallen.


"Are you ok?" he asked her and took a quick glance at her.

She nodded her head in a yes.

He then grabbed the bucket and started putting water on the origin point of the fire. Tara too joined him in this. Soon the fire was under control. He looked at Tara and without saying a word, he walked towards Maria. She followed him.


"Why are you so worried Mrityunjay?" she asked keeping her hand on his shoulder.

"It was a small fire."


"I am just worried about you, you are my life Tara." He said turning towards her.

"I can't imagine myself without you," he said holding her by her shoulders.


"I too can't imagine my existence without you," she said.

"You think I will be a liability for you in war. But no, I will not be." She argued seeing no change in his expression.


"No Tara, I don't think like that. You are my power." He said caressing her face.


"Then let me be there with you. Together we can win any war." She said with hope in her voice.


He hugged her and said, "So shall we." She tightened the hug.

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Thanks Shaina_b for making it readableπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for reading😊

I know I am way too lazy when it comes to updating😳
Sorry for late😳

Thanks to all woderfull reader out there who still read this storyπŸ‘

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Posted: 8 years ago
The witch felt it when the spell was broken!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

She saw in her crystal ball that Nandini is dead!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

Finally she realized which spell was the reason behind the jolt and was furious!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Tara wants to remain in Mrityunjay's arms and that is soo cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Mrityunjay wants to tell Guruji about the pearl as he knows the witch won't sit idle!!!!

He explained to Tara about it and knows a lot now after reading the book!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It seems like Mrityunjay would only go back to his family and his kingdom after the war!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

So Guruji expected something strange to have happened to Tara!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

But even if he made something out of the bird incident, he didn't tell her!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Tara wishes to meet her father and Guruji said her wish might be granted!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara is already preparing for the war but Mrityunjay doesn't want to involve her!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

She is right that everything is theirs now including the fight!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She is angry at Mrityunjay and rightfully so as how can Mrityunjay think her to be less than anyone!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Tara has learnt well from Nirmala and Aradhana that they are equal to men!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Mrityunjay just doesn't want to risk her life as he loves her too much!!!! ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Tara got even more angry seeing him play with Maria as she wants him to come and pick up her sword and give it to her himself!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Mrityunjay is so sweet and left Maria there so that Tara can have her company!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

From where did this fire come suddenly??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Fortunately Mrityunjay saw it in time and saved Tara as her dress was about to catch fire!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Thank God they together got the fire under control!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Finally Mrityunjay told Tara she is his life and he couldn't imagine himself without her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

It was great when Mrityunjay said that she is his power!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Finally they agreed and truly when they are together they would always win!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

The chapter was great!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 8 years ago

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