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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Loved it!!
Yash was teasing Geet and geet was offended with yash's statement that she left the place being annoyed
Yash threw party for the youngsters as his reception party was cancelled
Prem stated need to keep geet away from maan
Maan sudden entry to the party changed the ambience making heer go nervous thinking abt prem's words
Coincidentally prem to landed up in same restaurant as maan and gang's
Prem's anger was on peak witnessing maan's presence in yash's party
Looking forward to the next update
Thanks for the next pm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! well written! Geet upset with Yash's teasing n leaves! Maan is there n Heer worried! Prem sees Maan! he is angry! his reaction is justified!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

nice

yash given dinner in hotel fr his cousins
heer asked prem but he said he have meeting and if maan
going than geet is not allow to go their
heer get to know from Annie that he also have meeting
so heer went with geet and ayush their
but maan came their and also prem
heer get scared seeing them
prem ko chance dena chahiye unne
geet ko decide karne de apna decision
usse pr na force kare

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 19

pr...em!
these two are very difficult for heer her breath got stuck in fear

shut up!
he glared her

chalo geet!
he ignored everyone even new bride mahi and hold geet's hand and leave now yash realized why heer got scared when she saw maan.

kitni ghalat baat hy prem bhai ko aisa nhi krna chahye tha at least mahi bhabi ka hi khayal kr latey.
annie got angry on prem's act and sad for her beloved brother how his eye's got twinkled when he saw geet in front of him

maan stand up gazed everyone and leave the hotel if priya didn't give him her swear he give lesson to prem but he controlled himself.

at KM
geet is standing in front of mirror and take off her earring, than she loose her hair and makes loose bun, ayush is sleeping peacefully, prem take her home and then he is in his room hell angry she knew he didn't say anything to anyone but poured his all anger on heer, she is in deep thought that she didn't realize someone enter in her room hell angry and hold her arm harshly and turned towards him her hair bun get open and all her hair get loose on her back geet startled and got hit on his chest.

kya smajhti ho khud ko aur kya batana chahti ho agr aj prem k iss act pr meri khamoshi ko meri weakness smajh rhi ho to geet madam! to yeh tumhara illusion hy prem jo kr raha hy wo bewakofi k siwa kuch nhi aur jo tum iss ma uska sath dey rhi ho to ma isaey tumhari bewaqofi k siwa koi naam nhi doon ga agr ma chahta to prem ka dimagh do minute ma theek kr skta tha tumhain wo hotel sy sab k samney yun lay gya to iisey us bewaqoof ki jeet aur meri haar mat smjho mujhey sirf yash ki dinner party ka khayal tha uski khushi ka ehsas tha jo tumhain to bilkul nhi tha warna tum uskay sath nhi jatein.
he saw her eyes where he can see a sea, dont't know why her tears get slipped from her eyes is it pain of her arm which maan hold so tightly or maan's anger on her.

maan! chorye mujhey takleef ho rhi hy.
she protest and try to free her arm but failed in front of his well toned body

acha bht akkad(ego) hy na tum ma...

haan hy aur ap khud kya hain jo meri insult kye ja rhy hain ap phele bhi wild thay aur aj bhi aisey hi hain nhi rehna mjh ap k sath.
in sad and anger she blabber everything which came on her mouth

bht bolney lagi ho tum marey samney

ap kay zulm k samney to koi deaf bhi bol skta hy

aisey kon say zulm k pahrr(mountain) torr dye ma ne tum pr apna ek haq hi to use kiya tha jis ki wajah sy ek itna pyara beta bhi dia hy.
he said with boldness and saw her cold face

geet's tears got stop on his few bold words automatically her lashes got down heart beat got raised and her pinkish lips shivered, maan saw her face with passion now after seeing her his anger got down his hold got loosed he softly pulled her.

jab pata hy k haar jao gi to kyun krti ho kyun time waste kr rhi ho mjhey majboor mat karo k mao koi extreme step loon geet!
with difficulty she raised her complained eyes, maan didn't say anything further he softly separate her and leave the room.

nhi sudharein gay ap kabhi bhi
she crying badly but his one word extreme step glued on her mind.


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Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear, pream needs a good lesson, hope this time annie teach him a lesson
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Thank u for pm..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear..prem drag Geet out hotel..annie cursing Prem .I feel bad for heer..she only face Prem anger..maan show his angry to Geet..Geet tears flow in her eyes..both have pain..when they both become together...but Geet hurt becauseof his word..she crying badly..thanks for pm and continue soon
Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice update
prem can't force geet to stay way from maan , he can clearly warn maan not to behave badly with geet in future
what he is doing with heer is worst than what maan done to geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part
I can understand Prem's anger but this was no way to take his sister away when shes at a public place
Maan confronted Geet with the same
Hmm...lets see what extreme steps hes talking about
cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! well written! Prem angry! Maan upset! he speaks 2 Geet! update soon

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