Fan Fiction - The Happy Ending

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Of late, we have not been able to be happy with the track. So I made an attempt to make this lazy Saturday a bit interesting. This can be considered as my audition for the post of script writer ala CVs. The timeline has been borrowed from the show. I hope this will please all of you in some way or the other. 😉

Ishwari Niwaas:

"Tum!! ...Ab yahan kya lene aayi ho?", Ishwari is surprised to see Sonakshi at the doors of Ishwari Nivaas

Sonakshi: "Maa..."

Ishwari: "Main tumhari maa nahi hoon. Naa tumhaara mujhse ab koi rishta hai, naa Dev se aur naa iss ghar se."

Sonakshi: "Main aapko aur Dev ko aapka adhikaar dilaane aayi hoon"

Ishwari: "Kaisa adhikaar?"

Sonakshi: "Aap daadi banne waali hai Maa"

Ishwari(background score of ho hoo): "Kyaa? Matlab...mera Dev... "

"Aae Bangalaan!!" , comes a scream from behind before Ishwari could speak any further.

Ishwari turns around to find her beloved bhabhi, Radha Rani standing.

"Bhabhi, aapne suna, mera Dev... mera Dev pita banne wala hai, mai Daadi banne wali hoon!", exclaims Ishwari.

Radha Rani: "Haaye Jiji, kitni bholi hai hai aap. Ye bangaalan aake boli aur aap maan gayi. Yaad nahi aapko, daaktar ki rapat. Ye kya kabhi maa bann sakti hai? Ye sab iski aur iske ghar walon ki chaal hai. Itne bade ghar se chali to gayi, lekin iss ghar ke aish o aaram ki aadat jo lag gayi thi, woh kaise chhodti. Sher ke mooh mein khoon jo lag gayi hai."

Ishwari begins to think as Raadha Rani continues: "Chaliye maan lijiye, ki ye maa ban sakti hai. Par Jiji, ye log do mahino se alag reh rahe hai, to baccha kaha se ayega"

Ishwari: "Main Dev ko phone karti hoon"

A while later Dev arrives.

Dev: "Kya hua maa, tune mujhe achanak aise phone kar ke.." He stops as he finds Sonakshi seated at the living room.

Then he continues at Sonakshi: "Tum yahan kya lene aayi ho?"

Ishwari: "Dev, tujhe pata hai...arre tujhe kaise pata ho sakta hai... mai bhi kitni paagal hoon..."

Dev: "Kya hua Maa..tu itni hadbadayi kyun hai?"

Ishwari: "Sonakshi keh rahi hai ki iske konkh me iss ghar ka chirag hai, tera bachcha hai Dev. Tu baap aur main Daadi banne wale hai"

Dev is elated: "Kya? Sach?"

Ishwari: "Ye sab kab hua Dev? Tune mujhe bataya hi nahi!!"

Dev: "Maa, teri mehnat rang layi Maa. Tune Shimla mai jo intezaam karawaya tha ye sab ui ka phal hai. Yaad hai tujhe wo badaam wala doodh jo tune humare kamre mein rakhwaya tha. Ye sab usi ka hi natija hai Maa."

Ishwari: "Dekha bhabhi, main kehti thi naa, mera beta mujhe kabhi nirash nahi karega."

Radha Rani: "Kya karr rahi hai aap Jiji, iss Bangaalan ki baton ko aankh band kar ke vishwaas kar rahi hai aap. Yaad nahi aapko, kaise pichli baar aapse jhoot kaha tha. Aur Dev ko kahan se in sabke bare mein pata hoga? Aap log iss aadhi daaktarni ko kisi achhe daaktar ke paas leke jaiye. Phir pata chalega."

Sonakshi is taken to the doctor are the reports come out as positive.

Ishwari Niwaas:

Ishwari to Sonakshi: "Aaj se tum isi ghar main rahogi. Main bhola se kehkar mehmaano ka karma taiyaar karwa deti hoon. Aaj se main tumhara khayal rakhoongi. Dekhna iss ghar ka chirag bhi Dev ki tarah tandurust paida hoga. Tum chaho to apne gharwalon ko iss bare mein bata sakti ho"

Sonakshi: "Theek hai Maa"

Ten months later:

Sonakshi places three month old Soha in Ishwari's arms. Mamaji seated nearby.

Ishwari: "Dekha bhaiya, dekhte dekhte humaari Suhana teen mahine ki ho gayi. Iski aankhen bilkul mere Dev pe gayi hai"

Mamaji: "La bhai Ishwari mujhi bhi dikha, mujhe bhi apni poti ko dekhne de zara. Waah! Waah! Waah! Kitni pyari bachchi hai"

Sonakshi: "Ab mera farz poora hua. Mai aap sabko apni adhikaar dilane aayi thi."

Ishwari: "Tum nahi jaanti Sonakshi, tumne humein kitni badi khushi di hai. Mai tumhara yeh ehsaan zindagi bhar nahi bhoolungi"

She turns her head and calls out: "Dev... Dev"

Dev: "Kya hua Maa, kyun bula rahi hai?"

Ishwari: "Dev, Sonakshi ne humare liye bohot kuch kiya hai. Aaj jab ye wapas jaa rahi hai, mai chahti hoon ki tu ise iska ghar wapas dila de."

She turns towards Sonakshi and says: "Mana mat karna Sonakshi, ye tumhara haq hai. Aur maine tumhare ghar walon ke liye mithaiyan mangwayi hai. Bhola se kehkar gaadi mein rakhwa diya hai. Driver tumhe tumhare kiraye ke makaan mein chhod ayega. Ghabrao mat bohot jald tumhe apna ghar mil jayega, hai naa Dev?"

Dev: "Haan Maa, tu fikar mat kar, sab ho jayega"

Ishwari: "Sonakshi, tumhe jab Suhana se milne ka mann kare tum yahan aa sakti ho. Bas aane se pehle ek phone kar dena"

Sonakshi kisses Suhana on her forehead and leaves for her home.

Dev and Ishwari live happily ever after.

Trust me guys, it is really difficult to write Hindi dialogues in English. I hope I could justify the characters as ideal ones.🤣 If you liked it, do hit like button. Also share your feedback😆😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahaha seriously Dev and Ishwari ke liye to Happy ending ka Matlab yahi hai and that bad am wala doodh kaam kar gaya dialogue totally cracked me up
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Hahaha seriously Dev and Ishwari ke liye to Happy ending ka Matlab yahi hai and that bad am wala doodh kaam kar gaya dialogue totally cracked me up



Ha haa!!! See I have taken the risk. And I can foresee both flower garlands and flying chappals coming my way.
Edited by imnowhere - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wah wah... Happy ending all around.
Ishwari got waris without bahu.

Dev got new obsession.

Sonakshi got her life back.

Boses got their home back.

Elena won't have Golu because now Radha knows that Dev won't be obsessed with Golu anymore.

Everyone is happy.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tia.0

Wah wah... Happy ending all around.

Ishwari got waris without bahu.

Dev got new obsession.

Sonakshi got her life back.

Boses got their home back.

Elena won't have Golu because now Radha knows that Dev won't be obsessed with Golu anymore.

Everyone is happy.



See, I care about everyone.

An ideal female protagonist shouldn't utter anything more than "Haan ji" So did Sona here.

An ideal son should always be agyakaari. So is Dev.

Ishwari knows the pain of being homeless. So she gave the Boses their house back. She is such a kind lady.

What else can we ask for?

And I am sure I am gonna give the CVs a run for their money. 😆
Edited by imnowhere - 8 years ago

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