SS: Concealed Part 1 (Page 3)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi all.. Well well this is my first try to write something .. Hope U guys will like it.. Plz tell me .. should I continue or not..? 😛

Entire Oberoi family was waiting outside of I.C.U. waiting for Doctor's call. There is someone lying lifeless on bed surrounded by lifesaving machines. With every Beep of machine, every member of oberoi family was praying for safety of that person to be saved N to return safe N sound back to them. He can't.. he won't leave them as it is. He just returned back to home where he actually belongs N again leaving them? This time permanently? No this should not happen. Pinky aunty and Shakti uncle were crying for safety of their son. Ru was crying badly saying.. O, Bhaiyan hume chodake nahi ja sakate.' Om and anika were consoling him saying Kuch nahi hoga usse' He is true oberoi. He will fight, will defeat death and will come back to us. Amidst of all this no one noticed one more person shedding tears badly for putting that person in such condition. He was standing in corner shedding silent tears. Because of him, just because of him, Oberois may lose one member of oberoi family he may lose his one family member. Doctor came out of I.C.U. telling all that next 48 hrs we can't give any confirmation. He needs to be kept under observation. They did their best. Hi heart condition and heavy blood loss they can't give guarantee for next 48 hrs.. We can only pray for his safety now, everything in god's hand now. Hearing that person standing in corner slumped down crying and defeated. OmRu and anika rushed towards him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey it's amazing
So something has happened to shivaay
I guess the person might be mahi
Will be waiting for your update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start. Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing start teju
plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the start Teju. You shd defo continue dis one.

For a change Annika is strong here n consoling Rudra wid Om ..*thumbs up*

The person gotta be Mahi for sure.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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STARTING IS AMAZING. DO CONTINUE SOON.
WAITING
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Posted: 8 years ago
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please continue ... looking forward for the rest
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Awesome start Teju... Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The person inside will be mahi otherwise Annika will not be this much strong if shivaay is in ICU
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting Teju... loved it dear... 😳 continue soon 🤗

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