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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Armela

The confrontation between Kinky and Lola would be explosive. LOL

You have NO idea 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .brokensilence.

Oh my guess was kind of right then. I didn't expect him to get so suspicous about Khushi being Lola just because of her bralessness and I definitely didn't see the following her to the cafe thing coming but then what can we say, he is mighty ASR with sharp brains and all. 😆 But what surprised me was the fact that he took it all so coolly. I expected his reaction to be something big or I rather say I expected him to atleast react but he took it all so lightly 😕 Ohho NK, do you think at all while you're eating? I am sure Khushi will make him blurt out the whole thing. I am waiting to see how Lola-Kinky matter will turn up now. I just hope they don't start accusing each other for cheating and all. Update soon.

The bralessness and the same cafe was kinda obvious actually. This is based on a true incident 😉
Arnav is kinda shit-scared and mindblown right now. He's not on a guilt trip. Yet. Wait for that one.
And NK has a sense of self-preservation. No way in hell would he tell Khushi everything 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _nandy_

Wow

now arnav knew

how will khushi react ?

Let's see! Update coming up!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zeenay

Please update next chapter little faster.. I can't tell you how much I waited for chapter 20..u posted it after 48hrs

I'm sorry but when I posted chapters 18 and 19 together, I mentioned I won't update on Sunday. 19 was supposed to be the compensation for Sunday.
I cannot update another chapter so quickly because daily updates have already become a little stressful for me. I hope you understand. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello, guys! I love your enthusiasm for this story.. Your reviews really keep me going. 😊
If you thought last chapter had a lack of guilt on Arnav's part or if you really want to read EITHER of Arnav and Khushi feeling guilty about their affair ASAP, I urge you to NOT read today's update right now. Read it tomorrow when I post part 22. Today's update is not about regrets. It's about a catalytic reaction to finding out about the reality of Kinky and Lola.
Also, I want to tell you that more than half this story is over. Don't get too disappointed. I'll be starting a new story as soon as this one is done.. 😉
Hope you like the chapter! 😃

PART TWENTY-ONE

As soon as Arnav parked outside the house, he knew something was wrong.

The porch light wasn't on. Nor were any of the other lights in the house. In the darkness of the new moon, the house looked like the ghostly spectre of its usual self. The deadly quiet was punctuated by the absolute stillness. There was no breeze. And nothing seemed to be stirring anywhere in the neighbourhood.

Yes, something was very, very wrong.

Climbing out of his car stealthily, Arnav took a deep breath. He wasn't afraid. There was no reason to be afraid. Khushi knew nothing. To her, Kinky had just never shown up.

The turning of the doorknob of the front door seemed loud enough to wake the dead and Arnav's pulse went haywire as he stepped into the pitch black corridor.

Boy, something was DEFINITELY wrong.

Taking tentative steps in, Arnav slowly managed to reach the living room. As he felt around the wall for the light switch, he heard a noise behind him. His face drained of colour just as his fingers found the switch.

Before he could turn around, before he could shield himself with his arms, she was upon him. The sharp smacks of the bailan upon his back made him yelp and cry out.

Behind him, Khushi shrieked into his ear, "How dare you?! How DARE YOU?!"

Little Arnav trembled with terror.

Using both her hands, inwardly calling upon Kali to give her strength, Khushi kept striking her husband with her weapon. He was cheating on her. And she'd bet her wedding jewellery that he'd already slept with the chudail. True, Khushi had been cheating on him too... But hadn't she gone to the caf to end it all? And Kinky hadn't shown up anyway. His crime was certainly bigger than hers...

While Arnav thrashed around, trying to protect himself, Khushi roared with anger, ignoring his cries for her to stop and listen. Listen to what?! There was nothing left to listen to!

"Khushi! Stop! Ahh! Please listen to me! It was me, Khushi! The guy you talked to!"

She couldn't hear him over her own angry growls. He shouted louder.

"Khushi! It's me! I'm Salman Khan! I'm Kinky! It was only you I talked on Tinder, I swear! You can check my phone!"

For a few minutes, she continued hitting him. Then, as his words sunk in, her blows slowed and she drew in sharp breaths. Her glare gave way to an incredulous stare.

"It was YOU?", she gasped. He nodded frantically.

For a moment, neither of them spoke. They stood heaving, trying to catch their breaths, and stared into each other's eyes unblinkingly. Then Khushi broke the silence.

"I didn't know you wanted to try doggy style", she accused.

"I didn't know you had an ear fetish", he shot back.

They paused again, the staring match unbroken. Both their eyes smouldered. Little Arnav and Khushi's hoo-hah squirmed in perfect synchronisation.

"Well," Khushi said slowly. "Now that you know... What are you gonna do about it?"

Arnav said nothing. As Khushi's hazel eyes challenged him, his dark brown ones filled with determination. Taking a few steps closer to her so that their chests just barely brushed against each other's, he grabbed the bailan from her hand and tossed it across the room.

And as Khushi's weapon collided with a ceramic vase, creating a deafening noise of breaking china, Arnav's hot lips crashed against Khushi's eager mouth.

Reviews to me are like.. like the lack of bailans are to Arnav? LOL

Drop me a comment!😆

Edited by PhoenixKhushi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome yar...I dnt expect this reaction from both of them...Aree they are OK with it...arnav's reaction shocked me more because he seems fine khushi chatted with him and agree to see him...wat if she had gone to see another person
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hahaha hilarious part
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
That made up for the lack of drama in the previous update, definitely!
Okay, so first I'll reply to the little explanation. On my part, I wasn't really looking at guilt. Just a stronger reaction or emotion to what he found out. And yes, I had a problem with him connecting the dots because I had imagined that he'll just suspect that Khushi 'knew' he was Kinky and on Tinder and leading him on to finally confront him. That would have justified the immediate fear for me. But since this is your story and I respect your perspective, I'll just enjoy the updates and come along and watch the story go.
So, finally coming to this chapter. Well, it was dramatic and your writing really enhanced that quotient. Reading about Arnav's dread was hilarious, especially because of the air of mystery you created with the lights off and all.
I am glad the bailan happened. Was looking forward to it after you mentioned that'll happen. From this Khushi, I had guessed that kind of a reaction. Since, the update was written in that way. I don't mind the humour and the light way in which it was written, in keeping with the genre of the story. Plus, their attraction was so-in-the-moment I loved it. Guess all I had a problem was Arnav's individual reaction.
But anyway, I really liked this. Looking forward to the next update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
This chapter ia nowhere close to what I had even thought of and I loved it. 🤣 Arnav's sixth sense works wonder, the way you showed his dread upon getting down the car was hilarious and so was Khushi's weapon of choice. 😆 He surely did deserve those bailans he got. This little revelation has definitely brought some sparks between them we can say by the way chapter ended. Now I am looking forward to know how they will take this fact and act on it once the heat is off their heads and erh body. I really liked reading this chapter. Looking forward for tomorrow's update already. :D
Edited by .brokensilence. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved part 21 👏
Hilarious start leading to passionate action.
Eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 😃

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