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ONE IN SOUL..

As mode closed my one in soul short story thread,so i made this thread n shift previous part here n will update next part within 2 3 days...

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Akdha Marriage...

ONE IN SOUL -

Jodha was pursuing college degree at one of most reputed college of her small town she loved her studies more than anything in her life n she was one of few fortunate girls whose belonging to those parents for whom education was far more important than an marriage alliance, who were bold and had the courage to wait to allow their daughters to complete their education before marrying them off in that orthodox society of that small town n because of her parents open morden thinking she had a lot of hopes as her parents wished and motivated her to pursue further studies and become a career girl n after her under graduation when jodha told them that she wanted to do MBA and wanted to do part time job whilst educating herself. Her parents continued encourage her n her father bharmal decided to leave that small town for fullfill his only daughter's dreams n they all shifted to mumbai n bharmal got good job in one of top company n jodha got admission in one of the best management college of mumbai...

There life going smoothly n jodha was studying hard to become topper in her college n she dropped the idea of part time job coz her parents convinced her to concentrate only her studies...Jodha loved very much her new life in new city till that day which changed everything her life her priorities her dreams. It was a day of her parents 25th wedding anniversary n bharmal organised a samll dinner party for his office colleagues to celebrate n he also invited owner of his company with his mother n that young entrepreneur accepted his invitation humbly. That day jodha n her mother mainawati were busy whole day in preparing dinner n decorating their house n in evening first jodha helped her mother in her makeup n hair n after that she made herself ready to attend guests who started to arrive on time as expected n jodha started to take care everything from drinks to snacks in while her parents were busy in receiving gifts n wishes n in the last his boss came with his mother n bharmal n mainawati received them happily n after some chitchat all went towards dinning table all ladies sat at one side of table n all men sat on other side of table n after ordered everything to maids jodha came n sit beside her mother who r busy in talking with her husband's boss mother n that graceful lady smile n asked mainawati about jodha mainawati introduced her lovely daughter n that lovely kind lady put her hand on jodha head n gv her blessing n after dinner guests started to leave one by one. when his boss n his mother asked to leave bharmal called jodha n mainawati to see off them till their car n introduced jodha to his boss bharmal sir plz meet my daughter jodha n that young entrepreneur politely said plz bharmal ji call me Jalal i m as young as ur son, he looked jodha n their eyes meet for first time n Jalal feel himself attracted towards jodha even jodha feel somthing in her heart but she cnt name her feeling that time they both greeted eachother n jodha n her parents see off jalal n his mother hamida till their car...

One evening jodha cameback from her college n found her parents waiting her in living room n they looked very happy she came near them n asked what happened. They asked her to sit between them n bharmal put his hand on her head n said i want to gv u one good news my bacchi today is the best day of our lives i cnt believe my daughter going to marry one of the richest business man of this country n jodha looked him surprisingly n bharmal cupped her face n smiled widely n said yes meri bacchi u r going to marry my boss Jalal today he himself asked ur hand for him n u tell me how can i refused him i said yes immediately n mainawati kissed her forehead n happily said mahri laadoo going to become queen n jodha feel her all dreams shattered into pieces coz she only wanted to complete her MBA she never thought about marriage n now suddenly this news her mind stopped working but she controlled herself n in serious tone she told bharmal that she want to pursue her MBA n after that want to work she is nt ready for marriage yet n what about our religon but bharmal again hold her face in between his both hand n in calm n assuring tone he said i knw about ur dreams beta n i cleared everything with Jalal n he has no problem with that u cn continue ur studies after marriage as like as b4 marriage n after completing ur MBA if u want u cn work with him in his company or any other company as per ur wish n for religon he himself said for this marriage there is no need to change ur religon n he make sure everyone in his family n society will respect ur religon, ur beliefs n ur costumes so beta please thinks once more time he is really a gem of person n if i search whole my life i cnt find life partner for u as good as him please don't loose this golden chance n mainawati put her hand on jodha's head n said ur father saying right jodha thinks about it with open mind n gv ur answer tomorrow now come lets have dinner n after dinner jodha went to her bedroom. After changed into her nightdress she went near window n while looking moon she thoughts about this marriage purposal of jalal n image of jalal flashed infront of her eyes n her heart felt same feeling again n she thought...
JODHA - i never loved anyone or never attracted to anyone but i believe in love may be he is the one whom God choose for me n as he has no problem with my studies n career or i have no grounds to reject him n my parents liked him n they always support me going against society n family for me they left everything just for fulfilling my dreams n never asked anything from me n even today they gv me choice to accept or reject this purposal but hw cn i marry a stranger whom i meet or should i say saw once i dnt knw him hw cn i but i felt something for him when i saw him first which i never felt for anyone hey kanha plz help me plz shw me right path plz khanha plz n she thought every aspect of this marriage purposal again n again n in the last for her parents happiness n for that unknown feeling which she feel for Jalal she made herself ready to accept his marriage purposal n next day on breakfast table she announced her decision n made bharmal n maina happiest parents in the world..

Bharmal gv this news to Jalal n his family n they decided wedding date after one week n engagement after two days all were busy in arrangements n Jalal n jodha dn't found any chance to talk they meet alone just once before their engagement in jodha's room on jalal's request to meet her coz he want to knw b4 their engagement that she said yes to this marriage without any pressure of her parents n jodha assured him that she accepted this alliance without any pressure n her assurance made Jalal happy n relieved but b4 they talked further maina n hamida called them for engagement n after one week they got married but in between all ceremonies jodha's brain was buzzing with fear of the marring to unknown person fear of being alone in a new family n she was sad about leaving her home her parents n she was scared about the new life which she was going to lead but b4 leaving her house her married cousin sisters n some elderly women of her family gv her various advices for happy married life they told her that arranged marriages are short of tricky affair. They are a gamble that both the groom n bride play, which either results in new love stories or has a devastating effects on their lives n u r the one who about to find out which way ur marriage would head so beta give ur 100% efforts to this marriage n make it successful n jodha just node her head like an obedient student but one of her cousin advice her to please her husband on the first night without care her emotional outburst or mental trauma coz guy doesn't care you will be his property and unsuspecting toy to fullfill all his desires so jodha dear like a good girl u should respect ur husband commands. Any wish of his must be fulfilled,even if u aren't in the mood n that conversation with her cousin scared her to death n marriage suddenly became a nightmare for her n she thought i didn't want to be tagged as someone's property. No that is not what i had imagined my life to be will Jalal really treat me like his property n toy to satisfy his desires n physical needs no no he is a good man but i don't know him he still is a stranger for me how can i say he is different from other men oh khanha plz help me n with all these thoughts n fear of her new life n her first night she entered in her new house with her husband n after some rituals n teasing session from jalal's siblings salima (elder sister of jalalsingle mother of rahim), bakshi n mirza(younger brother n sister of jalal), other cousins n friends hamida asked bakshi n other girls to take jodha in jalal's room...

Jodha was sitting nervously on the edge of the bed decorated with rose petals n her mind was filled with thousands of questions. After sometime Jalal came inside n his every step which bringing him closer to jodha make jodha more nervous her heart start beating very fast, she clenched bedsheet with her hand tightly n closed her eyes in fear. Jodha he called her softly but rather in a nervous tone, jodha opened her eyes n looked up to n realise that he was as nervous as her. He smiled n slowly came n sat next to her n asked her to changed into somthing comfortable n get away with her heavy dress n jewellery jodha feeled concern in his voice but without looking him she went to bathroom n changed into comfortable night dress when she came out from bathroom found Jalal also changed into night dress n sitting on the edge of the bed waiting for her n when he saw jodha coming out of bathroom he smiled n told her to come n sit next him n jodha nervously came near him n sit beside him n then Jalal took her hands in his n felt her hands trembling n very cold. Jalal smiled and said, " jodha, i know u r very nervous...so am I." then he cleared his throat and said " u know jodha first nights don't usually have to be what is shown in the movies or many people told n for jodha it was like as if he was reading her mind, it is not about my life my feelings my desires or my pleasure, it is ours coz we r now one. There might be lots of things you like or not n similarly there are things I wouldn't like or like. We will explore every aspect of our marriage together n marriage is complex because people make it look like that, it is different for different people. I assure you it will be different for us, just the way we like it n not others do or have done in the past."..
Those words of jalal made jodha's all fears about her new life n first night disappeared from her mind n heart n she felt happiness in her heart n started cry which shocked Jalal n in panic he said, " what happened jodha did i said something wrong please jodha stop crying he said with an expression of guilty n in pleading tone he again said please stop crying jodha, I can't handle crying girls, so please stop." Jodha raised her eyes and looked directly into his eyes as the last drop of tear trailed down her cheeks n she chuckled at his almost comical expression n Jalal looked her in surprise n said " now u r laughing please tell me did i hurt ur feelings" jodha node her head in no n Jalal looked deep into her eyes n said." then why r u cried after listen my words haa tell me. Jodha lowered her eyes n shyly she told him everything about her fear her conversation with her cousin and her confusion about her feelings for him n Jalal smiled n raised her face from her chin took her one hand in his n tucked a strain of her hair behind her ear n both looked into eachother eyes. There was a moment of silence as both stared into eachother eyes n Jalal squeeze her hand gently n said " see jodha...you know i fell in love with u the moment i saw you. I know we were made for eachother n as u told me ur feeling about me i m sure you too feel same its just matter of time n u understand ur feeling for me soon, but fault was mine before asking ur hand for marriage i should asked u for dating actually we never get to know eachother. I never even took you out a single date. He stopped and looked deep into her eyes n smiled then he kneeled down in front of her raised his hand n said." it is still not too late so miss jodha will u be my girlfriend n jodha shyly node yes n put her hand on his hand Jalal smiled broadly. " Look, i want to take u out on a date n from now to till we really understand eachother will continue our relationship as girlfriend n boyfriend not as husband n wife n jodha again node in yes shyly n Jalal smiled back n he stood up n said "its very late lets go sleep n jodha again looked him nervously n Jalal understand her fear n he took deep breath n in assuring tone he said..

" Look jodha u dnt need to afraid from anything n for physical relationship i just want to say i believe that comes naturally and not be forced as i told u b4 I love u so much I would die for u but till u understand or explore ur feelings for me completely i will wait for u untill u love me, even if it takes forever, even untill my hair grows white or untill Rahim his 5yrs nephew graduates. They both laughed together on his last statement n their eyes meet again n Jalal said i liked ur smile very much u look more beautiful while u smile n jodha blushed n lowered her eyes again. Jalal smiled n said " I'll sleep on the sofa in our room untill u feel comfortable with share ur bed with me n he winked jodha looked him surprisingly n thought he was really sincere n in that particular moment love cupid struck in her heart n she fell in love with her husband who had made all her fears disappear. He lived up to the vows of their marriage n she feel glad that she said yes to his purposal n now she want explore their love as lover b4 as husband wife n she took his pillows and arranged them on the sofa n looked him n find him looking at her with lots of love in his eyes n she wanted to hug him but was too nervous but he again read her mind. He came to near her cupped her face and kissed her forehead softly, "I really love you." he whispered "And u look very cute when u r nervous." Jodha blushed n hugged him n felt so warm n safe in his arms. Then they said good night to eachother n sleep in their respective places...
In the morning Jalal opened his eyes when somebody knocked on their bedroom door n looked his beautiful wife who looked serene and blissful he slowly moved out of the sofa n went into bathroom n took shower n came out n without disturbing jodha's sleep he dressed up n tiptoed out of the room. When he came out everyone looked him with naughty smile on their faces n one of his friend mischievously elbowed him and asked, " so how was everything ?" Jalal smiled n happily he answered, " Everything waz beautiful, WE BECAME ONE, ONE IN SOUL." and he moved away to meet his mother to tell her his plan for first date with his wife oops his girlfriend...

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Edited by jiya.k - 8 years ago
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Part 2 FIRST DATE...

After discussing his plan of his first date with his newly wedded wife cum girlfriend Jalal returned to their room n found Jodha was sitting in front of dressing table n combing her beautiful long black wet hair n she looked like a fresh beautiful flower who took his breath away n he was looking her without blink n jodha cought his staring session through mirror n smile but her smile bring him back from his dreamy world n he looked into her eyes in mirror, they shared eyelock but after sometime jodha turned her face in other direction to avoid his intense gaze, Jalal smile at her act n with naughty smirk he came near her n stand just behind her, he bend n put his head on her shoulder n while looking at her in mirror he whispered '' good morning my beautiful wife cum girlfriend" jodha looked him in mirror n with smile she said '' Good morning". Jalal smiled back n said '' in this pink saree n wet hair u r looking like a fresh pink rose with dew drops" his complement made jodha's cheeks as red as tomatoes she blushed hard, Jalal gv her romantic smile n said '' now u r looking a two colour rose combination of pink n red he winked n jodha lowered her eyes in shyness...

Now Jalal kneeled down n sit infront of her with smile he said '' look at me jodha i wnt to discuss something very important wid u" Jodha raised her eyes n looked into his eyes n in serious tone said '' is there some problem that u want to discuss with me "
'' yes jodha there r something very important which i want to discuss with you but i dn't knw from where i start" said Jalal in same serious tone with fake worried face. Jodha hold his hand in panic n said '' plz Jalal tell me what's the matter is everything all right" looked him to answer n found him looking her with dreamy eyes, she called his name but no response n she again called him but little louder n this time Jalal came out frm his dream world n looked away in embarrassment, jodha smiled n asked him what happened n Jalal looked her n he fumbled '' wo woh u first time hold my hand and called my name na, toh after listening my name in ur melodious voice n feelling ur touch on my hand i was feeling like in heaven" he told in romantic tone with dreamy eyes n jodha blushed hard n looked here n there in nervousness. JALAL smile n to make her comfortable again '' off oh jodha see u make me forget our important discussion, now stop ur blushing n without wasting more time listen me carefully" he said in serious tone jodha looked him in anger '' what i m wasting time haan for ur kind information Mr. Jalal its u who wasting time with ur talk" she pout cutely, Jalal looked her n thought '' ya khuda its very difficult for me to nt kiss these pouted lips plz gv me strength to control" he closed his eyes n took deep breath to control n again looked jodha n said '' ohk ohk baba it was my fault i m sorry plz don't be angry n nw common forget all this lets start discuss our first date plan." jodha looked him '' so this is ur big n serious problem which u want to discuss with me" she said shaking her head in disbelief , Jalal grinning '' aur kya today is our first date n wht is more important than this for us i want make this date most memorable for both of us n as i told u last night from now it is not about my life my feelings my desires or my pleasure, it is ours coz we r now one so we should decide together about this too na" he said with lots of love, Jodha looked him n smile n they planned together their first date with lots of enthusiasm but after discussing all thing Jalal feel jodha want to say something to him he hold her hand said '' jodha u want to say something to me plz don't hesitate tell me what u want to say" jodha thought '' how he always read my mind" she smile n said '' u knw Jalal since we came Mumbai i always visit shidhi vinayak mandir before starting new n important work like exams n all, toh i want to go for bappa's darshan with you before start our new life new relationship, i want his blessing for our life n love " she looked into in his eyes with love n hope in her eyes. Jalal put his hand on her cheek n with same love in his eyes he said '' off course jodha we will go shidhi vinayak first but why u dn't tell me this before? " jodha smile n said '' coz of our different religons i feel nervous to asked u to visit temple with me" she lowered her face, Jalal raised her face from her chin '' yes this truth that we follow different religons but i respect all religons n trying to adept all positive n good qualities of every religon n coz of this ur religon is nt new for me i knw many things abt ur religon n even i visited shidhi vinayak n other temples before, i request u jodha plz never hesitate to ask somthing coz of our religon difference or any other thing" he said in determined tone n jodha node her head in yes he smile n said '' good girl n one more thing as i hv no problem to follow ur religon n practice ur customs, this does not mean u also practice our customs or follow my religon if u dnt like toh just say no to everyone" jodha smile n put her hand on his hand on her cheek n squeeze it gently n said '' like u Jalal i also respect all religons n always trying to collect new information abt different religons n for ur surprise i also visited hazi ali dargaah like shidhi vinayak so i hv no problem to follow ur religon n practice ur customs " Jalal looked her with love n both lost in eachother eyes n slowly slowly they start moving their faces closer to eachother n their lips just about touch when someone entered in their room like tornado..
''Mamu jaan mamu jaan nani jaan calling u for breakfast" Rahim said while throwing himself in jalal's arms n Jalal lift him n make him sit on his lap '' Good morning chemp we will go for breakfast but first meet your new friend" he said towards looking jodha n rahim looked jodha in shocked n in surprised n he whispered in jalal's ears '' Mamu jaan yeh toh pari hai, yeh yanha kaise aayi" [ uncle she is angel, hw she came here] Jalal chuckled n looked jodha who looking them with confuse expression n jalal smile n said '' yes rahim she is pari bt nw she is ur mami jaan n new friend n frm nw she always live with us here in our home coz rahim is good boy na so God gift u this beautiful angle as ur friend." Rahim jumped frm his lap n hold jodha's hand n said '' is that true pari ?" jodha smiled n cupped his face n said '' yes rahim i m ur new friend n i live with u always" n rahim hugged her immediately n said '' thank u pari" jodha smile n looked Jalal who looking her with emotional, jodha broke hug n asked '' u r
welocome rahim but why r u calling me pari i m nt pari my name is jodha " rahim looked Jalal n said '' mamu jaan told me when i saw ur pic in his phone that u r pari his pari " jodha looked Jalal in amusement n asked rahim '' ohk rahim tell what else he was said about me'' n b4 rahim answered Jalal stopped him n lift him in his arms n said '' oh chemp u forget nani jaan send u here for calling us for breakfast " he forward his hand to jodha '' come lets go for breakfast ammijaan will waiting for us'' he told jodha smile n said '' u n rahim go n hv ur breakfast I'll eat n drink somthing after bappa's darshan" Jalal gv her understanding look n said '' ohk u wait for 5 min i'll be right back after infrom ammijaan n we will together hv our brunch after bappa's darshan" jodha nodded with smile, Jalal goes towards door but b4 going out frm room he turned n called jodha n jodha looked him n asked frm eyes ''what? " he smiled n said '' which is ur favourite flower jodha?" jodha answered '' white n red roses " Jalal smiled '' till today morning i liked the same but nw my favourite flower is JODHA" he said with love in his eyes n naughty smirk on his face n jodha blushed heavily n lowered her eyelashes in shyness...
JALAL n jodha went to shidhi vinayak temple n they prayed there n asked bappa's blessing for their new life,for their happiness n for their togetherness n after that they went to Hazi ali dargaah n offered flower chaadar n did sajada after finishing prayer they tied thread together n wished God to protect their love n their relationship...

After praying in hazi ali dargaah they went to eat jodha's favourite paav bhaaji frm her favorite place bombay paav bhaaji stall though being a hygienic freak Jalal never ate roadside food but for jodha's happiness he first time eat paav bhaaji frm roadside stall n when he looked jodha eating her paav bhaaji with happy he feel content n jodha's smile make that paav bhaaji more tastier for him after eating paav bhaaji in their brunch they came back home n after little chit chat with family they went to their room n took rest for sometime before going out for their first dinner date in the evening Jalal prepared everything to make their date very special for jodha...
In the evening Jalal gv one gift box to jodha n asked her to be ready for their dinner date n he went to mirza room for changing his cloths. After he left jodha opened her gift n find beautiful emerald green colour halter neck gown with diamond n pearls embroidery on neck with matching pair of diamond n pearl earring n bracelet...JODHA loved his gift n she feels happy, Jalal wear black suit with emerald green shirt n he looked dashing n handsome as always. Jalal n other family members waiting for jodha in hall when they heard footsteps on stairs n they looked towards stairs n saw jodha who looked absolutely ravishing n beautiful in that emerald green gown n in matching earring she left her wavy long black hair open put light n perfect makeup n gloss on her lips. She looked simple yet elegant. Jodha came down n joined other family members n all praise her for her beauty n Jalal once again forget to breathe after looking his beautiful wife in his gift he never imagined jodha looked that beautiful in that gown. After taking hamida's blessing they walked out to their car Jalal opened car door for her n she got seated n Jalal went to his side of the car n got in. He started the car and drove off towards their destination n after one hour journey they reached their destination mumbai's famous restaurant of a five star hotel. Jalal got out of the car and went over and opened jodha's door and offered his hand to assist her in getting out. He forward car keys to gate keeper for parking. They started to walk towards restaurant Jalal grabbed her hand and their fingers interlaced. They walked very close holding their hands tightly. Jalal looked down in jodha's eyes n jodha smiled so prettily, there was a sparkle in her eyes that made her look rediant at that moment Jalal totally lost himself in those beautiful eyes...
They entered in the restaurant and warmly greeted by the manager. Their table was ready for candle light dinner. Manager held the chair for jodha and put napkin in her lap, he came to Jalal's side and did the same for him. First manger came with some special soft drink n said '' your appetizers will be ready in a few minutes. Enjoy this special drink of our restaurant while you wait."

Jodh was enjoying being courted and treated like a special lady. After sometime manager brought their appetizers which were paneer tikka one of jodha's favourite jodha looked Jalal n smiled. They start eating n jodha finds paneer tikka very tasty and she just ate them with pleasure. Next they served them their special tandoori vegetables dishes which jodha liked very much. They were both smiling and having a good time eating n after finishing appetizers they wait for sometime n after that manager brought main course meal which had all jodha's favourite dishes. Jodha's eyes stare wide open at the food and how it was presented. She looked over at Jalal and asked '' how to u knw abt my all favourite dishes" Jalal smiled n said '' that i will tell u later now just enjoy dinner." jodha smiled n nodded n they continued to enjoy their meal. The table was bathed in candlelight and light from ceiling lights. It was a very romantic atmosphere.
Jodha laid her hand across the table n Jalal reached over and clasped her hand gently jodha looked down at their hands and looked up into his eyes. She whispered softly, '' This is the best time have i ever had. I never believed that someone would treat me so well and so special. Thank you, i will remember our this first dinner date ever for as long as I live." '' sweetie, i am glad you liked this date, you have brought new light into my life and i will also remember this night till my last breath." Jalal spoke in a hushed tone. Jodha squeezed his hand and a tear of joy running down her face n Jalal captured that tear keep it in his pocket near his heart. They finished their dinner with rabri in desert n evryone see the happiness and joy radiating from their faces. Jodha looked Jalal and tear of joy and happiness were flowing down her face. Jalal truly succeed in making their first dinner date special for both of them. Jodha hold his hand squeezing it hard, Jalal looked into her eyes and saw happiness but also a peaceful calm emotions in her eyes the tension n hesitation that was always there was gone. She was finally at ease with herself and with him. Somthing wonderful had happened between them. Jalal asked her, '' would you like to have dance with me?" jodha smiled n nodded then he holded her hand went to dance floor n danced slowly on soft romantic number Jalal hold her frm waist n she rest her head on his chest they lost in eachother completely while dancing...
They thanked restaurant manger for their wonderful service n walked to the car with holding eachother arms. Jalal opened the door for jodha but for his surprise she stood on her tiptoes and kissed on his cheek n immediately went inside the car jalal went around to the other side and got in n saw blushing jodha with lowered head Jalal smriked n lift her face n looked at her lips n with love n hope he asked her permission frm his eyes n jodha shyly node Jalal smiled n bent and softly touched her lips with his. They kissed softly n gently till they needed air to breathe. They looked eachother with lots of love n emotions in their eyes n with sweet smile on their faces they started to drive towards their home...

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Edited by jiya.k - 8 years ago
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PART - 3 [no proof reading ]

Love blossoms between Akdha n their SR...

That night after returning from their first dinner date Jalal n jodha was feeling so calm n happy in their hearts,they tried hard to sleep but sleep was missing from their eyes so they decided to watch movie on tv. After playing movie on dvd player jalal sat hugging jodha on the couch as they watched movie but both do not know what they watched coz both r lost in eachother n ended up sleeping on the couch all night. In the morning when Jalal woke up jodha was lost in preparing pooja thal n she was humming khanha bhajan Jalal looked over her n smiled n without disturbing her he went to bathroom n after taking bath when he came out jodha already arranged their breakfast n they happily ate their breakfast together...

After that night they slept together cuddling eachother and jalal never crossed his line n waited for that day when jodha gv him green signal to consummate their marriage though jodha love him madly but she decided to give herself to him after one month of their marriage on his birthday as a birthday surprise gift, but Jalal never left any chance to romance with his beautiful wife by each passing day his naughtiness increasing n he start showing his affection n love outside their room. He wink n gv flying kisses when no one looking them but sometimes mirza n bakshi caught them which make jodha totally red in shyness n embarrassment but Jalal shamelessly grin at them...
Though mughal's hv many cooks but hamida preferred to cook by herself for her family n jodha want to help her but she deined n told her to concentrate only her studies but jodha insists to make food at least on holiday which hamida agreed happily. It was third week of their marriage jodha preparing evening tea n paneer pakoras for everyone Jalal daily came back from office at dinner time but that he came early n find his whole family sitting together in hall n chatting he went near them n greeted good evening everyone n asked about jodha n hamida told him ''she is in kitchen making tea n snacks for them" n one naughty idea came in his mind he excused himself n went to kitchen n find jodha trying to tucks a strand of her hair behind her ear with her batter strained hand n with one hand she frying pakora in pan. Jalal slowly came near her, '' i see somone is busy " he said as he wrapped his hand around her waist. Jodha turned to face him '' you you here " she said in a shock, Jalal smiled at her shocked expression '' yes i m here " he said while pulled her near him frm her waist. Jodha looked him with surprise n said '' What r u doing? What if someone walks in?, ''its ok sweetheart, no one will come." he assured her. Jodha was not convinced but Jalal assured her again while tucking her hair strained behind her ear he said '' all r busy in their chitchat no one will come here." he touched her face n they gazed lovingly into eachother eyes, and Jalal gently kissed her lips n slowly their kiss became more passionate and jodha feel the sexual tension start building between them but Jalal stopped n broke their kiss '' I won't be able to stop myself if we continue " he whispered in her ear. Jodha kissed his cheek, '' you know u r such a sweet husband." Jalal smiled n left the kitchen. But poor love birds didn't know that pair of innocent eyes witnessed their romantic encounter yes u guys guess it right rahim who came into kitchen to meet his pari watched them kissing.
After sometime all family members enjoying their tea n pakoras together when suddenly rahim asked to salima ''ammijaan when will small baby come in our home n where is he now" all looked him in surprise n salima asked him why he asking about baby, rahim looked her n innocently he said '' riya told me when big girl n big boy kissed eachother then new baby will come home n i saw mamujaan n pari kissed eahother in the kitchen, plz ammijaan tell na when will baby come." after listening rahim Jalal spilled his coffee n all looked them
with naughty teasing smile on their faces jodha turned into red tomato in shyness n embarrassment and run from there but Jalal shamelessly smile n gv so what look to everyone...Their love affair continued like this n their love for eachother increasing with each passing day...



Finally the much awaited day of their life was come yes it was Jalal 's birthday n jodha tried her best to make his birthday memorable. In morning after taking hamida 's blessing n other family ,members wishes they went to temple n dargaah to take god 's blessing taken after that they went some orphanages n distributed cloth,sweets,books n toys in between orphan children. In evening she was arranged grand party with the help of bakshi n mirza in world famous taj hotel. They celebrated Jalal birthday with family n friends after cake cutting they dance but in all this arrangements jodha did not get time to arranged to make their first night special but she was determined to gv herself completely to him. After dance when their all family n guests was busy in dinner she pretended headache n asked hamida's permission to go back home with Jalal n hamida gv her permission n assured her that she will take care everything here n told Jalal to take jodha home n make her rest...
In whole journey jodha feel sad for not make special arrangements for their special night. She want to gv her surprise but when they reached home Jalal give her surprise he handed her a package, Jodha looked him in confusion,Jalal smirk n said '' i knw what you want to give me as my birthday gift thats why i didn't asked gift from you" now go get ready in another room for your return birthday gift n he winked. Jodha blushed hard n went into another room and closed the door. The package contained a beautiful red colour dress n with matching heart erring n pendant jodha hold that dress tightly near her heart. She got ready and after sometime Jalal knocked on the door n when she opened the door, he looked her top - to - bottom n said '' you look very beautiful n stunning " he gv small peck on her lips n took out a scarf. '' I am going to blindfold u and lead you to our bedroom." he said while closing her eyes, and he lift her in his strong arms. Now jodha feel very excited..


When they reached their room Jalal let her down abd removed the blindfold. Jodha was totally shocked to see their decorated bedroom with white n red roses ans lighted scented candles n her eyes feel with happy tears coz once again Jalal understand her feelings n wish without telling a single words. '' I wanted to make this night very special not only for me but for us. Hope u like it " he whispered .
' it's so beautiful, exactly same as i wanted ...thanks." n she kissed him gently but the kiss grew more passionate with desire they kissed eachother with hunger n broke the kiss for breath. Jalal looked deep into her eyes n asked her permission to go further n jodha gv her sweet smile as green signal. Jalal with smile slowly opened her zip helped her off with her dress n gently lifted her made her lying on bed.

He began running his hand on her face n kissed her forehead, both cheek, nose, chin n lips. Then he kissed her neck and slowly nuzzled his head on her chest. Jodha start moaning, her heart was beating faster n faster n was breath heavily n she feel Jalal breathing a harder too. They both going crazy with desire n passion...''Are u ready?" Jalal whispered breathing heavily. Jodha found hard to speak and just said ''yes...".They made love passionately for the first time after one month of their marriage jalal trying to be gentle as much as possible n jodha feel immense love for her in his each n every touch n kiss.



Finally they became one in all aspect '' ONE IN SOUL n body"..
Afterwards, as jodha rested her head on his chest n he ran his hand lovingly on her hair. '' Happy birthday my dear husband hope u liked ur birthday gift."jodha said Jalal looked her with lots of love n emotions in his eyes said '' Thank u jodha for giving me this precious gift i m carving n waiting for this night.this is my best gift i ever get in my life thank u thank you very much" ...'' i m sorry i made u wait for so long, thank u for understanding me." jodha whispered Jalal put finger on her lips n said '' no need to say sorry sweetheart say now come lets sleep u must be feel tired sore" jodha snuggle to him n he hold her tight n in few minutes both slept with peaceful content smile on their faces...



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Edited by jiya.k - 8 years ago
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