Shivika's Holi scene

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Nirmala

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: KALVIN
Yes Holi scene was beautiful and after your description I watched it again. It looks more beautiful to me.

Kalvin, thanks dear. I too watched it a few times and each time, new words came in my mind as Narbhi expressed the emotions perfectly.

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Nirmala

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: 10Messi
Beautiful post
You're an amazing writer
Keep it up

thanks messi and will try to write more.

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Nirmala

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aarti_16
Beautifully written ! loved reading it.

Thanks Aarti, glad you enjoyed the little WU.

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Nirmala

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
Lovely post nim_var. You do have a way with words👍🏼

Hi Amru (hope I am right)

I enjoy reading your posts too. 😃

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Nirmala

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan
Nice post 👍🏼
You described the holi scene so beautifully I feel like watch the scene again after reading this post... god knows in this two days how many times I watch the scene.
Small part that I like when shivaay said tum hai ab jana chahiyaa anika with sad face jane ka maan nahi kar raha.could imgain how much anika was longing for shivaay.

Thanks dear, I am sure many would have watched the scene multiple times and lost count too. 😆😆

Now, Anika is showing her emotions more openly and is not afraid to express them either. The way they parted reluctantly from each other was cute, Shivaay holding her hand and walking away together.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: JasmitaK
So brilliantly expressed.

Thanks JasmitaK.😃

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Nirmala

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: AnnzSageflower7
Was going to reply, and got sidetracked by the FB live chat 😆...
Awesome write up Nim!

That soft way she caressed his cheek, so gently like he was the most precious person to her, right one then the left. It brought out such a tender expression in his eyes, when moments ago he was just nagging her about being caught by Farzi.

The nagging stopped instantly, and she had ALL of his attention. Petulantly she was complaining about his less than proper return wish, and he smiles.

"Okayyy, so that's the problem ji..."

She was so sure he won't wish properly, because he had no access to colours, forgetting that she had just put some on him...😳

He really enjoys making her blush wildly. He's getting more bold too.

That was a bone crushing tight hug there that he gave her. Best feeling ever. (Yeah, I love hugs)

" I too don't feel like sending you away..." ☺️
Vahvah Shivaay... not bad! 😆

"Just a few days more, Annika..."

And then WHAT Shivaay ???? Pray tell !!!!???

😆

Anisa,

I am also waiting for the 'what next' plan SSO has in store... for his biwi. 😉😉 the way he told her tell me what is bothering you, am I the cause of your tears was true SHivaay. His relief at his not being the cause was palpable. He can sense her truly, even her BLUSH now... 😆 that is so WILD. The result of the bone crushing, breath stealing HUG. He proved a point to her that he can execute plans better than her, does not need much planning ... a challenge that was thrown and the gauntlet picked up by him and proved that he won by a resounding thunder... by captivating her senses and his by his touch and HUG.

What I missed the FB live chat again... 😲 I have to catch up on a lot. Been so crazy at work. This forum is my sanity check. 😆😃 and ofc Shivika.