The arrival...shivika os (part 2 of the departure)

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xerxes12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: jarir2010
Lovely.full of emotion.do write more. 👏

Thankyou dear! 😊

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sharmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Did u really have to end it up incomplete???

Loved both the parts...pls continue .

Anyways it is beautifully written...

Awesome!

Love Sharmi

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xerxes12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Did u really have to end it up incomplete???
Loved both the parts...pls continue .
Anyways it is beautifully written...
Awesome!
Love Sharmi

Honestly I wasnt much happy with this chap...I couldnt come up with a desired end..So I finished it however I could... 😭
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So Im not planning to continue..
But next if I write...I wont leave it incomplete.. 😉

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sharmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: xerxes12

Honestly I wasnt much happy with this chap...I couldnt come up with a desired end..So I finished it however I could... 😭
😭
So Im not planning to continue..
But next if I write...I wont leave it incomplete.. 😉

But we all loved this chap...it couldnt be much better...

Waitung for ur next writings...

Love u..