SwaSan TS - Yet Untitled [PART 2 PG 1 ON 17/3/17] - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey harshada...
Amaxing start girl...well we all know how much sanky love swara...not trusting her is just something which he is not capable of doing..wondering what could be reason for his behavior...

For title...hmmm well im not very creative...but how about...walk through hell or betrayed...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: elsanna


Thanks harshada di...😳



Pleasure is all mine🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey harshada...

Amaxing start girl...well we all know how much sanky love swara...not trusting her is just something which he is not capable of doing..wondering what could be reason for his behavior...

For title...hmmm well im not very creative...but how about...walk through hell or betrayed...

Talia




Thank you so much Talia🤗
Glad you liked the start.

Even I don't know what to do with the title😆
Thanks for the suggestions😳

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey dear..
great update..
story is so strong and powerful..
swara is broken and so is sankskar..
what's going on..
beautifully written..
please keep writing..
thank you so much for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Harshu, 😊
Firstly u know that I went Missing In Action for many days due to my exam (which is still going on) right?? 😳 Managed to take out some time for today. 😳
Okk so coming back to the TS, my god! Both the parts were so intense!! 😉 But why is Sanskar doing like this even after knowing that Swara did nothing wrong?? 😕 Why is he hurting both Swara and himself with his behavior?? 😭 Thanku for the pm and I might be again going MIA as my exam is still not over, but don't stop pm'ing me with the further update of this TS. Update soon. 😉
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harshada dear...
I remember you wrote one more story on this track..i just love that n this too...till the end we could not figure out why sanky behaving oddly with swara..here too..im confused what exactly made sanky so aloof...swara is in pain...confused..curious

Update as usual was great...looking forward for next...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update and nice plot line...
Please do share the link of your previous story like to read that too...

As for the update seems like a complex story full of twist and turns...

I see that the ff will explore swasan relationship to the extant of the fear that they cannot lose each other...sanskaar behaviour is confuse but interesting to read...

Update soon...

Like Sharon liking the tittle of unspoken as it's seems there is a lot to be said before the storm will calm...

Take care razia

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