Abhigya Song Fic - Maana ke hum

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maana ke hum yaar nahin
Lo tay hai ke pyaar nahin

Phir bhi nazrein na tum milaana
Dil ka aitbaar nahi
Maana ke hum yaar nahi...

She comes to the terrace and sees him already waiting for her. She wonders whether he is disturbed about what happened few minutes in their room. She walks to him and is about to put her hand on his shoulder but her hand stops just an inch before touching his shoulder as he turned and looked at her.

He tells her that it's good that she has come because he has something important to tell her and he is nervous about it. He is not only nervous with his words but also looks so pale. He tells her that he has decided something that's good for both for them. She doesn't understand what he is going to talk about and looks at him perplexed.

He tells her that since Tanu and her don't get along well, it wouldn't be nice if she continues as his secretary. He tells her not to have any hard feelings as continuing here would actually be uncomfortable for both of them and he doesn't want her to be accused every other day. He adds that though they're just friends and there's nothing more, people may not understand it and needlessly cook stories about them.

Raaste mein jo milo toh
Haath milaane ruk jaana

Ho...
Saath mein koi ho tumhare
Door se hi tum muskaana

Lekin muskaan ho aisi
Ki jisme ikraar nahi

He also tells her not to worry about getting a job as he would make sure she gets a good job. He boasts about him being a Rockstar and having lot of contacts. He doesn't face her while telling all this. As soon as he started talking about the job he walked beyond her and stood so that he faced her back. He knew this wouldn't be easy for her and he didn't want to see her sad face. It would stop him from what he is doing now so it served as an advantage for him that she didn't turned around to face him.

When she remains silent, he decides to lighten the atmosphere as the air around them is filled with tension. He acts like he is not affected by her leaving him and starts talking about the new life she is going to be living. When she is about to turn, he stops her by asking her not to turn. He tells since they're best friends and they are used to each other's annoying habits and presence, it might be difficult at first but then time will heal everything. He asks her to not to forget him. He playfully tells her to invite him for festivals, birthdays as he loves her mom's cooking and when he accidentally spells out "also your wedding", he goes numb for few seconds. Her heart is sinking and tears are fighting to come out of her eyes. She knew it was his wedding the next day and there will be people who would try to eliminate her from the place before she would do something to stop the wedding but she didn't expect that he would ask her to leave.

Nazron se na karna tum bayaan
Woh jis'se inkaar nahi
Maana ke hum yaar nahi...

He remembers how he and Pragya had accidentally fallen on his bed half an hour ago and how Tanu's mom walked into the room when they were lost in each other's eyes. He tried to explain the situation to Tanu's mom but her mom was being so loud and angry. The words which she used must have been humiliating for Pragya. He felt bad for her. He convinced her to relax and later Aliya joinef him by making her calm down. Aliya took Tanu's mom for some doubt related to the wedding next day. After few minutes, Aliya slowly entered his room while he was holding his head sitting on the ottoman. She started talking patiently and asks him not to worry about the incident because she knew her brother wouldn't do anything wrong. She then added a but' to her sentence. She says that she could understand that Pragya is his best friend but not everybody wouldn't understand it. Abhi stated at her sharply. She then told that she was telling it for Pragya's good because people might start talking ill of Pragya's character for being close with a married man. It irked him at first but then he understands what she means. He remembered the times Tanu taunted Pragya for being with Abhi. It ached him to think that their relationship would subject Pragya's character to people's judgement.

Phool jo band hai panno mein
Tum usko dhool bana dena

Baat chhide jo meri kahin
Tum usko bhool bataa dena

Lekin wo bhool ho aisi
Jis'se bezaar nahin

His train of thoughts break when he hears her asking if someone else asked him to do this and he doesn't have to worry about her. He fakes anger and tells her that he's not a baby to decide everything upon other's words. He tells her to be practical. He thinks what would he do if she starts talking about their friendship pheras and the promises they gave to each other so before she could think of it, he tells her not to live on those memories. Words spill out of his mouth so quickly and loudly that he feels the need to take a second to breath. He then apologizes to her by saying he doesn't mean to hurt her but just wants her to understand the situation. He assures her that they will be friends anyway even after his marriage but just won't see each other or spend time everyday like they do now.

He wanted her to be silent till he finished his talk. He wasn't sure that he wouldn't take back his decision if she says something to him or if he sees her cry. But now, her silence is becoming unbearable to him. He turns her to face him. She hugs him tightly and silently sobs into his chest. His eyes close involuntarily. He could feel her breath being irregular and also hear her low sobs.

Tu jo soye toh meri tarah
Ik pal ko bhi karaar nahin
Maana ki hum yaar nahi...

She wants to tell him a thousand things but all that escapes her mouth is "We're just friends? There's nothing more". He heard what he was dreading as well as longing to hear. It's not the words but the way she said it. He would be a naive guy if he didn't understand what she meant.

When she keeps repeating them in a low painful whisper, he makes her face him and for a long moment, their tear filled eyes locked with each other. He knew he didn't need to second guess what to do. Suddenly he felt so sure of his life. He didn't have to hear her say it because he knew what's in her heart and he is no longer confused about what's in his heart.

"I love you", he tells her with indestructible smile on his face.

"What?", she asks him though she very well knows what he said because it was overwhelming.

"I am an idiot. Forget whatever I said before. Just remember this. I love you", he said pulling her for a hug.

"I love you too", she said making him twirl her swiftly.

Edited by -Nive- - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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RES because this is beyond perfection, Nivz. Will be back later tonight!! ❤️
P.S. Can I have your autograph? 😳

USRES.

Ummm well then get ready to be more embarrassed 😳

First of all, I think we had a twin moment-I've been listening to this song NONSTOP this past week and I'm in love with it! And I told you na about the Abhigyaira fever I've had for a while now? Its become a chronic disease and I was having trouble figuring out in what context can this be placed on Abhigya. So when I saw the title of the fic, my eyes BUGGED OUTT!!!

And in excitement, I put my headphones on and read your story with the song playing in the background to get maximum feels :)

Idk where to start though. i loved everything from start to end. I loved that it was from Abhi's POV, it was all about the curvebell of emotions he goes through as he finally makes a decision to create distance from Pragya and move on with Tanu.

For me, it hasn't been that I want him to pick Pragya. I've just wanted him to pick SOMEONE. Just give his priority to one person and that person be the one he gets married to. So thank you for making a decisive Abhi, and I thought his reasongs for why he decided to tell Pragya to move on was nice-he's thinking about her respect and how his relationship with her, however innocent it may be, affects her more than him (well unknowing that she is his wife, which then makes everything that they do valid). And I TOTALLY APPRECIATE how he realizes that after marriage, he can't be around her as carefreely...he can't be with her 24/7, and so rather than she face the brunt of Tanu's screeching, he'd rather set her free. THIS IS MATURE ABHI.

He playfully tells her to invite him for festivals, birthdays as he loves her mom's cooking and when he accidentally spells out "also your wedding", he goes numb for few seconds.

LOVE LOVE LOVE. Making him think closely about his decision and all the consequences that come with it, including the possibility of Pragya moving on and finding someone who fits the role of her "husband." See, all he needs to do is just think about the future and he'll realize its Pragz that he wants!!!

He knew he didn't need to second guess what to do. Suddenly he felt so sure of his life. He didn't have to hear her say it because he knew what's in her heart and he is no longer confused about what's in his heart.

Favorite line from the fic ❤️ She didn't really say anything more than just repeat his lines and he understood her feelings through her body language. Again, another characteristic I want show Abhi to understand. He hasn't said a word to Pragya, he's getting married to Tanu in a day, but she knows he has love for her. I'm hoping he can deduce the same if she doesn't confess it directly to him.

Whats great about fics is that while half of the time the show exceeds my expectations and fulfills all hearts desires, there are times when I realize what I want to see on the show may not be ever shown after all. And thats where the magic of fics work-providing another medium through which I can wholeheartedly ship Abhigya and see them in a new scene, a new setting, with some added characteristics that make them even more relatable than on the show. And Nivz, you are one of the strongest writers this forum has.

Most of the wonderful writers on this forum have been writing before I actually joined the forum, so I get extra proud when I see how far you've come from your first piece and how beautiful each one of your writings turn out to be!

Thank you for the weekend treat!!

P.S. UNDESTRUCTIBLE GRIN!! I CAN PICTURE SHABZ WITH THAT DESCRIPTION! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!

Love,
Naina


Edited by Naina- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naina-

RES because this is beyond perfection, Nivz. Will be back later tonight!! ❤️

P.S. Can I have your autograph? 😳


Waiting 😳

P.S. This much sweetness embarrasses me. Reduce it a little na 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry can't reduce it 😆 Unres above!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This made my day Nive
Awesome song Fic
Hope you di many more like This 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Nainz
Thank you for the detailed comment 🤗

P.S. Looks like Abhi on the show also has took a firm decision about marrying Tanu just the night before his wedding. Tanu's mom is the reason on the show too. 😉 But then it happened after AbhiGya love confession which made it 😭


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: akshayakannan

This made my day Nive
Awesome song Fic
Hope you di many more like This 👏


Thank you Akshaya :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nive, this was another perfectly scripted good written story of yours.
They way you showed at the beginning it felt like it was going to be some confession would happen.
And how you expressed their painful expression was amazing.
I was watching doubtful of his words.

I still have to think over how write without flawless.
And last part was cute and mindboggling. Forget everything.
I loved how you write to shown up his feeling and tried to maintain his feeling.
Beavo to his confession.
I got so emotional with writing.
Well written.

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