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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: snehapriya

Maan is caring for Geet as she seems so fragile and childish and he holds a sense of responsibility too. Good that geet hasnt mistaken it for love. Love the equation vicky and Geet share. Geet is childish as well as mature. She has made vicky realise his mistake. Waiting for next.



I'm glad too that Geet hasn't thought much about Maan's care, now its up to Maan to think😉
She was the only one that could make Vicky realise
Thanks Sneha
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

amazing

Geet is innocent but she understand relationship more deeply



She does, maybe because she has been enveloped within relationships all her life so she understands it better 😊

Thanks Angel
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

it's really amazing maan still stuck in sofa he him self don't know y he so concern of geet and his staff was too shocked seeing his care nisha is stunned to see his polite side and next vicky they want to know wat relation both bro have with that girl whom getting this much importance

geet want Vicky to realize he taking decision from mind
but meera from heart she can't take his separation



Thanks Sanum, the office staff are very nosy 😆 shall i spare them 😉 nope let them wonder, right? especially sasha😈 serves her right after the show 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Awesome update

Maan was smiling and taking care of geet
Nisha was confused with his behavior
Whereas Sasha's headache was increased
Geet made Vicky realized what mistake he
Made
Even I agree men love with mind where as
Women from her heart



Great we all think alike😆
Sasha's headache will keep increasing 😉😆

Thank you Vasavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

You are not alone. Me too think same that men love through mind n women through heart thats why ladies never think of anything before following their love but men are very calculative in every aspect of life and this weired combination always set up as a perfect couple as two similar ppl cant walk long together they will be bore. I think so.

Geet in office is centre of attraction for everyone n maan felt responsible for her n do care. These are sweet moments to cherish life long. Waiting for next.
Happy holi



Wow another supporter, fun aside though I agree. I wont say its the same casee in all but in majority it is. Hence when a guy is broken, shows show them as players but when a girl is heartbroken she's shown to be independent and strong-willed to never to fall in love again.

Thank you Rising (i think we discussed your name ages back but forgot sorry, its not Manisha by any chance is it?)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Maan taking time out to source online goodies for his wife that is surprising yet it also shows that he is capable of caring and loving Geet
he needs to put more effort into his relation and try and make it work
Maan has to realize his life with Sameera was just at a standstill nothing much came out of it and he also occurred losses in his business because of his negligence but Geet its real he can get a meaningful life out
Oh and he needs to get rid of all those magazines just those pics alone hurts Geet she blames herself for coming between Maan and Sameera which is not even her fault



Hiya, its true he is capable of loving. Weird you mentioned Standstill because thats my upcoming chapter lol but trye Sam and he never shared a 'normal' relationship. About the magazines, i couldn't agree more. Being a businessman i'd assume he'll have the financial times or something like that rather than gossip papers😆

Btw Tahir sorry about the generalisation about the men and women thing😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
I'd like to thank everyone thats liked and commented for the previous chapter:
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Those that are silent please feel free to share your LIKES and COMMENTS, I really don't mind the silence but once in a while a few words from your viewpoint and most definitely your LIKES would help.

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Chapter 24: To be loved

Geet watched Vicky run away in speed, very much understanding his craze. She felt the same once upon a time, she couldn't wait to be with Maan then and now she very much wanted to be away from him. Life, why was it that complicated? There's couples like her and Maan, where love was missing and then there's couples like Vicky and Meera, where there's plenty of love but little of understanding. Maybe it wasn't a life thing, it was probably a love thing. Love was complicated!

Maan and Adi were busy discussing details while Sasha's mind wondered yet again, the last hour seemed impossible for her. Her mission had only been one, to find out who this 'IT' was but Maan had made it mission impossible. The minute she and Adi entered, he had bombarded them with queries each of which Adi answered. When Maan asked what she had been doing, she feigned a headache to which Maan said nothing but the grimace was permanently placed making it known that he didn't like it one bit.

'Sasha so what do you think?' Adi piped in seeing Maan's angry glare directed towards his lost colleague

'Sasha' Adi nudged throwing an apologetic look towards Maan forcing a breakage into her thoughts, that was still wandering around this 'IT'

'Sasha you might as well leave since you're more of a nuisance than help' Maan bawled throwing a file towards her which she immediately flipped open seeing red signs, Maan had marked areas and indicated in notes her next course of action.

'Adi I'd like you to...' Maan started but stopped seeing a forlorn Geet enter, ending their discussion right at that minute.

Geet had sat in Vicky's cabin for a while thinking of life and then the ringing phone made her realise she was alone, loneliness seemed like her only companion. Even in a sea of people, it seemed to still grip her in its clutches.

With a sigh she got up to leave for Maan's cabin, this office business being too much on her soft self. All she wanted was to be at home, in bed and with Bella. She needed advise and only Bella could help. So without much waste, she walked along the straight path that lead to Maan's cabin, if people looked her way she didn't know for her eyes were trained to the floor and her mind was a forest of thoughts. Geet didn't even bother knocking and just opened the door, to say her state of mind was bad would be an understatement. She looked at Maan in acknowledgment before going back to the sofa which she occupied previously and then stretched for a magazine as an excuse feeling his gaze on her.

Sasha was shaken by the woman's audacity, this 'IT' didn't knock nor provided any explanation and just sat down as if she owns the place, didn't even bother to smile either. The more shocking thing was the fact that Maan said nothing rather looked concerned.

'You can go home now Adi and Sasha' Maan said taking note of time

'MK who is sh..' Sasha dared to ask

'I said leave' he yelled looking directly at them, not liking the intruding questions to which both shambled their bits and pieces together and ran for the door, but even then Sasha never failed to run her prying eyes over this unknown woman who wore a black kameez looking sophisticated but had a face which looked young and immature.

'Geet is there a problem, did Vicky say something?' he asked sitting warily beside her

'Nope everything is good, we're back to normal' her wet smile showed how hard she was trying to hide her emotions

'Then why so sad?' he questioned forwarding a tissue

'I want to go home' she cried gently tapping her nose with the tissue

'What happened?' he groaned yet again in displeasure

'Mujhe ghar jana hai' she snivelled looking towards him with tear filled eyes

'Fine lets go' he shot up pulling Geet to her legs and then directed out the door, she could feel his angry restricted vibe while he blinked back her hurt eyes.

'Pick up' Vicky screamed for the nth time, it seems like Meera knew he was repenting and that's why his calls where rejected or ignored. Frustrated, he pressed harder onto the accelerator zooming through the somewhat clear roads, rush hour was long gone with it being beyond 7pm. The minute he was at her place, he jumped out before the car hit a stop.

'Meera open up please' he begged seeing the fate of the doorbell meeting the same as his calls.

'MEERA' he shouted loudly pushing at the door

'Get lost Viks' he heard her angry voice

'Meera please, look honey puffs please' he fell on his knees trying to cool down his temptress who he knew was running on fire

The minute the door opened, he was awarded with hits and blows, 'sorry' was all he muttered pulling her to his chest.

'Sorry' he apologised into her hair while she broke down in loud sobs

'I was a fool, I'm sorry' he said when Meera pulled away

'You're not forgiven' she whispered going back to his chest with a voice which he knew meant he was back in the safe house but that didn't mean he forgave himself. For that he needed to tell Meera everything which would start after he ensured she ate something.

Geet had silently let Maan steer her by the waist, not even for a second did she look up. But then again there wasn't that many spectators seeing how most of the employees went home. Once at the lift, she had moved to the corner knowing very well that his questioning look was on her, so she maintained her gaze low. Why was she sad? Well she wanted Maan to be her husband in real form, she wanted to be loved which he couldn't give to her and hence it was best not to ask or be questioned.

'I'm not holding the door for the wind to get in' his sarcastic remark stopped her movement which was heading for the front seat of the car, beside the driver.

Maan looked at Geet with exasperation, annoyed with her silent treatment. When all she did was look at him in confusion and then back to the ground, he forced her into the back seat with a heavy hand.

'Sorry' he muttered seeing her shocked expression, she then nodded as she shifted in her seat trying to move away but that was controlled by Maan who had his arm still around her.

'You're meant to sit with me and not the driver' he whispered in agitation coming close to her ears and then fell back. Throwing his head onto the headrest, he ran a frustrated hand through his thick hair. Why was she always so sad? Why did he care? He thought sitting back up to look at her but by then she moved to the corner and hid her face, pretending to look out the window.

'Would you tell me what's wrong?' he asked trying a calm voice

'I want to be loved' she wanted to shout but instead opted for a little shake letting him know that she was fine, which in turn he took as that she wanted some quiet for now

'FINE' he screamed switching to his phone however Geet closed her eyes, in the hope that the tears would absorb back into the white surface with the passage of exit being sealed, but those hideous drops still rolled down the curve of her nose and was washed away by the dark sleeve on the wrists.

'Vicky you idiot, how can you think like that?' Meera hit his thigh in annoyance, Vicky had narrated why he thought it would be best to be apart making Meera blow a fuse over his weird thinking.

'I don't care about anything as long as you are with me, we can live in the slums or with rats for all I care but my Viks needs to be with me. Vicky I won't live without you' her determined silly slap got to him before her words but both had the desired effect, he immediately pulled her into a bear hug with the thought of thanking Geet and telling Dadi.

'Vicky all I want is to be with my love' Meera declared intertwining her hands with his while his lips curled into a loving smile after all he wanted the same

'As for the family, I like them as they are. So what they argue, fight or don't even talk to each other. They are your family and soon to be mine' Meera confirmed, so that Vicky wouldn't feed into lousy ideas like this no more.

'I love you' he stated pulling her closer while she repeated the same.




Edited by DaftGirk - 7 years ago


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Chapter 25: Gender'Eye Love

'Pammi bhabi what are you doing?' a young Geet asked in excitement seeing her sister-in-law braid colourful flowers into a delicate bracelet

'Don't tell anyone but I've got a little surprise for your brother' Pammi revealed to a then 16 year old Geet in detail of how she planned everything for her first marriage anniversary, it was going to be the perfect picnic with the stars.

'Wow bhabi can I help?' and with that Geet sat down selecting different types of flower so Pammi could sow a matching bracelet for herself. Pammi wanted to showcase a sign of flowering love' when presenting her husband with his bracelet.

All morning, Pammi waited in enthusiasm hoping for her husband to return early after all this was their first anniversary but sadly all she received was a call informing her that like always he would be late, again. By the time Teji came home, Geet got bored of waiting and went to sleep wishing her bhabi all the best.

The next morning, Geet rushed to a sad looking Pammi gridding ingredients, without much interest and care.

'Kya hua Bhabi, did veerji like your surprise?' what was Pammi to say that her husband immediately fell into bed without wishing her, never mind celebrating the occasion. She had tried presenting the basket filled with his favourite delicacies which was rejected with a tired look.

'Haan he loved it' she lied turning on her shoulder to look at the boiling pot on the stove

'What did you guys do?' an inquisitive Geet asked only then realising Pammi's wet eyes

'Teji Veerji' Geet screamed her lungs out as soon as the truth was out, fury raised like no other. How dare her brother ignore her bhabi's effort?

'Geet shhh'

'But' Geet whined breaking into hot tears feeling bad for her bhabi

'Geet it's not that your brother doesn't care, he forgot and regretted this morning. He even promised me a day out' Pammi revealed with a shy smile

'But he still forgot Bhabi and what about your effort?' Geet questioned after a few minutes of thought

'You need to remember Geet that a woman loves from the heart, so she never forgets anything related to him; be it his birthday, favourite colour, or any other minute detail. But a man loves from the mind, he cares for her but doesn't really store everything related to her in his memory. He only thinks of her well-being while she thinks of his happiness' Pammi explained sitting Geet down on the nearest stool, who looked rather perplexed with the explanation but seemed to have brought it since a frown took over.

'Now that's not the case with everyone but with most' Pammi added trying to rub off the frown but it deepened into a scowl.

'So males can't love like females then' her notable unwavering voice forced Pammi to nod with trepidation, worrying over the fact whether she ruined her little sister-in-law's ideology of love forever.


'Are you going to tell me now?' Maan asked with irritation as the car came to a still breaking Geet's thoughts

'woh main ...I... erm' she hesitated turning towards him while playing with her dupatta

'If you don't want to tell me, then don't. I don't bloody care' he shouted getting out the car and slamming the door shut in exasperation. But then in reality he did care, for the entire ride he kept eyeing Geet to notice any change but other than the secret rubbing of tears, he saw no change, up until they reached the mansion.

'But I'm trying to tell you' she ran behind earnestly, bumping right into his stationed back

'Then tell me' he turned around looking appeased while she watched his arms that pulled to either of her sides, stopping her movements. He wasn't touching her yet the heat penetrated through. She stood there with her mouth open, trying to comprehend his actions making him wait further.

'GEET' he shouted having enough of this agony and the next second she fell forward due to the scare taking him down with her. Unfortunately, or fortunately Maan fell to the sofa on his back with Geet laying on his chest, her face hidden in the crook on his neck. Time? The indefinite clock circled around until it reached 12, marking a minute then it continued the same route, but the breathing humans lay in oblivion. Geet by how raised a little observing his dark eyes growing in light, she acknowledged his hands stiffening at her sides and his shallowing breathes. Somewhere, Pammi's words had its effects may be she can love him through her mind and ignore her heart's desire of being truly wanted. She did love him with the heart, and what did she get other than heartache and pain. So why not ignore the past and look to the future?

Maan looked at her in something akin to care, his eyes grew soft seeing her questioning expression. As much as he tried to guise his affection with indifference, but moments like this broke his resolve. Feelings for her were growing and his original persona of care and warmth shone through wanting to protect her. Was he starting to get affected by Geet or was love infesting his heart? He shook his head a little trying to clear his head but all that changed was her eyes, they seemed to dilate and familiarity bore him down. Was he falling for Geet, his wife? How else was he to describe his actions? He cared to surf through the net just for cushions, he stopped his work so she could eat something and he left work on her ask. He wasn't stupid, he knew something in her caused this reaction. It could be attraction? But he was changing once again, and that was a fact.

Love, why is it so different in the male and female world. While she feels, he thinks; she attracts and he desires. When she follows then he leads. Generally that's the case, and it's no different here. Geet wanted assurance and Maan thought of stability. Either which way both were beginning to acknowledge the first door of their relationship, each other.

Notes: I love inserting the past, sorry just a thing I enjoy. Oh the good old Into the Dark days, all that story had was snippets from the past I believe lol (I know bad writing but it's my 1st piece). By the way it was a conscious decision of not naming Maan's feeling as lust, to me that's superfluous which mocks all other feelings. Sorry, if you think otherwise.

Plus I'm speeding things up a little, this is still meant to be an SS lol.


Edited by DaftGirk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Imp Note:

At the moment I have my Easter Holiday's so technically I'm free (although realistically should be revising for finals😆 which I am, kinda😳). Ok so I can update regularly or more in the next two weeks, depending on your response. Me being nice I thought to post two parts😃 though next time, I may not be so nice 😆


Comments and likes would make a difference, silent praises or critiques in your head don't count, I'm afraid 😆

Thank you


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