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Posted: 8 years ago
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Even though I have left this show just taking in bits n pieces here n there but still my agitated conscience is restless hammering me with WHAT IFS so I thought to pen it down to heal my ego n let go hopefully
This is post leap 4yrs passed
CONVENIENCE -
Vividha married ravish scene opens ravish a milk vendor which was his brother's lineage now vividha a successful entrepreneur a child running amok creating mischief as only a child could, anniversary declared out of blue both MADE to hug it out but...any spark any cheer any longing to linger it a few more seconds as is on anniversaries even after years of togetherness hmmm NO. a fun ,care, happiness surrounding the child #bliss or is it
My only question was it meant to be shown like this or just another of the famous loopholes or maybe the lack of adequate chemistry between the actors too but general disconnect felt especially post leap.

Passion -(same plot different characters as I visualize them my imagination as it can only be)
Post 4yrs leap

Atharva pov

Vividha married to atharva, while milking cows atharva heard a sound turned to that direction found his son UpTo some mischief and vividha running behind him exhausted she turns to him you make your son understand this is no place for running the hay is getting wasted, she fumes at me.
ahh! Now is he my son that's so convenient smiling at her folding my arms for extra affect willing her to say the exact words (I LOSE YO U WIN) to make me go control the little devil but I always take the upper hand she has to grouch😆.
Just bring him back exhausted she sat down the steps running to her I checked her making sure she is OK I went in search of our son.
Calling him out but in my hurry I would have just missed seeing that smirk playing in my wife's pretty face but still I ran not bringing it to attention doesn't matter let her win this round the she devil shrugging we had this game going on of who says I lose first becomes the slave for weekends this added spice to our lives, what with both being busy whole week the marriage being a whirlwind and eventually welcoming our bundle of joy we had a tough few years but now finally we have routine. I can't wait to the weekend hush atharva vividha is right I have one track mind but what to do my mind stops when she is near only actions happening without much thought I was pulled out off my musings with the bucket being overturned nearby.
Tiptoeing around the corner I had sight of his little head bobbing up n down with the stealth of a cat I pounced on him gotcha! Madhav you should not trouble your mother like this come back out I would hav e continued my rant but seeing his sheepish smile his innocent eyes looking UpTo me damn he always uses this face to get from under me I blame the eyes yes it's the eyes the same color as his mother they do me in.
Pulling him I brought him out, just then my mother came out of our house with sweets smiling hugging vividha her eyes searching landing on me her smile turned huge calling out to us she stood in front of us tears brimming her eyes.
Alarmed I looked on at vividha but she was beaming perplexed I opened my mouth to know what it was but mother started today I am happy these four years have been more than I ever could have asked God for may God bless you both saying she presented the sweet.
Madhav took four and ran before anyone could stop him "oh to be a child" vividha started running to stop him shouting don't eat so many sweets oh god this kid is getting out of my hands wailing on I stopped her from running off after him again let him be dear, clutching her hand pulling her back she struggled but calmed eventually all the while I was smiling it never gets old the feeling of her in my arms is the best thing possible but I was waiting for her to notice our proximity her traitorous blush crept up the cutest ever thing never stops me from making her even more irresistible than she already is but before my next move my mother's throat clearing broke the spell scrambling to two opposite sides like lovesick teenagers caught doing the deed.
Embarrassed I looked UpTo mother she was smirking you two start anywhere huh but today it's OK it's free day from my side laughing she handed me my phone informing me it had kept ringing but I was distracted by her words.
what'stoday why today racking my brain I came up empty but opening my phone I had a dozen voicemails worried something had gone Wrong at the factory opened the first one out loud the words of Happy anniversary sir were sung from the other end cby my colleague but the earlier worry was turning into dread damnation I had forgotten about the anniversary again I hope vividha doesn't get to know before I get my act together but she had already read my face oh my god! Don't tell me you didn't remember it AGAIN?
Rounding me up she bellowed at me her face turning red fumes coming out of her ears literally sheepishly beseeching her with a smile liked for a excuse but somebody called her at the exact moment I found my chance and made a run for it but she turned shouting you you come right back.
I didn't dare turn back just shouting back I will make it UpTo you love you need not worry smiling already a beautiful idea forming in my mind but just before turning the corner her you better Mr atharva Sujatha reached me oops SHE Is not only A.N.G.R.Y but livid confirmed😕.

End or is it😛

Just something which I thought to pen down vitharv marriage may take eons more but in the process the essence is dying the ethereal romance these two had is diminishing with each passing day but I wanted to make myself remember why I came here why loved them why they will be forever special.

Thankyou whoever brave enough to give it a read😆 it is just something going in my mind a rough draft be mindful for the typos n errors there are many.

Edited by kriyansh22 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This gives me such a nostalgic feel for Phase 1. Please do write on. Although it would be easier to read if the sentences ended. But the words do draw a beautiful picture. Loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kriya this is every vitharvian dream i bet. Loved it. It healed a bit our sore hearts.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's a beautiful write up. This gives me so much hope that someday we will see ViTharv reunion with the same essence and passion in their love story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -JC-

This gives me such a nostalgic feel for Phase 1. Please do write on. Although it would be easier to read if the sentences ended. But the words do draw a beautiful picture. Loved it.

Thankyou it means a lot coming from you have read your wonderful reviews this was just most random Stuff i penned will think about continuing though also didn't double check cuz of time constraints hence the overload of errors but will edit 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilatha1

Kriya this is every vitharvian dream i bet. Loved it. It healed a bit our sore hearts.

Truly but hope it doesn't remain a dream forever but hope is the only thing we all seem to be doing nowadays
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritz.anYa.vivu

It's a beautiful write up. This gives me so much hope that someday we will see ViTharv reunion with the same essence and passion in their love story.

Thankyou their passion is the greatest draw for me but let's see what the makers have in store for us.
Edited by kriyansh22 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved your alternate take. Now why does this remind me of this quote "I would rather die of passion than boredom" 😉

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