my shelter,my safety, my love, my life (KRIYYAM) Part 4 - Page 2

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Kiran1018

@Kiran1018

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Posted: 8 years ago

Such a sweet and cute story. The best part was definitely the dream sequence for me. The details and descriptions were really too good. I had a movie playing in my head while reading it. Please continue soon. Your a very talented writer.

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: madbutmagic.
Heeyaa, I'd love to read it but where's the rest 3 parts?
lemme know, or link me pls <3

Did you get the links and read them? X

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 8 years ago

The begin part was just perfect...
But it was a dream..
I really dont like Yuvaan...
Aawww Saiyyam feeled shy even Yuvraaj and Yuvaani teased him..
Loveeed Saiyyam and Yuvraaj's part...
Cant wait for your next update..

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MetaphorMaggy

@MetaphorMaggy

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Posted: 8 years ago

Oh my dear.. Dis is such a lovely story!

Really luving the family bond n the emotions coming frm ur writing. Luving kriyam nok-jhok 2 much..

Update soonish.. Gr8 job!

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