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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

SCRIPT--- DEFECTS---

Lacks freshness , Charm , attraction.....Kuch bhi Akarshit nahin Kar rahi hai.
ADHIRAJ SHERGILL was the driving force who helped maintaining the freshness and the novelty of the script, with his passion & aggression making Addy-Radha relationship spicy and interesting.

Current Happenings in Radha's life are problems of 70's era Women have come a long way since then.World has advanced, women are moving in Hi tech, Hi fashion world with new a approach to life.We are the new generations & don't relate to half the things that is shown, therefore episodes R generating critcisms thru out the forum.

Older generation are going thru MIDLIFE CRISIS, they don't want to grow old these days, so they seem to be enjoying Shabbir & the current New Gen Romance stuff.

PPL R Loaded with Money Nowadays,have acquired affluent taste. All will enjoy earthy Romance with substance from the 70's era but not 70's trials & tribulations.

Radha's problems may be existing in small towns in India, the question is WHO WILL BE YOUR VEIWERS.
Lower middle class People from this segment will watch serials that will raise their spirits not tribulation stuff which they R used to in their daily lives.

Current Parivaar veiwers are Addy or Shaurya fans, might leave soon if they are not happy.

Radha is being presented in the most derogatory way--manhandling, molested,attempted rape, She is living in people's homes with no self respect, Nurses don't stay in people's homes for overextended period like that.

Radha's emotional changes are not normal, from Mohit to Pranay... Pranay incident she gets into so much problems almost got accused for murder..for staying in his house, Yet she stays in Shaurya's house--with no self respect...itnee musibaton ke baad koi sabak nahin sikhi hai, continues to do 1 mistake after the other.Radha's family are allowing her to stay in stranger's homes with no qualms..that's not how Indian Families operate.
Radha stayed in shaurya's house with his request..which is not normal in Indian families..Atma swabhimaan Naam bhi koi cheez hai...where is her Maan - Samaan,

Then instantly falls for shaurya & forgets long term relationship with Mohit..enjoys shaurya in the rain scene, starts loving him..
Then marries Addy forgets all of them, gets upset when he sleeps in a separate couch & then breaksdown for Addy when she finds him in a hotel room , as per my understanding if you care & love someone, then you breakdown like that...her feelings are moving like pendulam moving swiftly
Then Addy recovers his memory & love follows naturally for Radha....Happy Again
Her feelings are projected with no substance, no depth of love & emotions for anyone, then she stays with DR, Radha, again in another house looks after Princess , Then Swapnil comes in & she trips & falls in his arms & gives him a dazed love spelled look, & She apparently has adjusted to new surrounding taking care of princess & is comfy with swapnil...that means she has recovered from Addy's love.
Sangamitra track is abnormal, a woman is killing in vengeance higly unnatural, killing is not so easy.

BMTD"S vidya protects her husband with her pati vrata stuff & Radha is unable to protect anyone.
She stays in strangers homes & her curse works on them & they get killed. Radha is like a homeless wanderer staying in strangers homes & takes care of their needs & becomes target to their hate. anger , love or ultra motives.WHICH WOMAN IS LIKE RADHA IN INDIA ? Never seen or heard.

Radha's image is getting tarnished.
THIS WHOLE SERIAL DOES NOT MAKE SENSE. WHERE IS IT HEADING ?

Edited by Sonu_usa - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
#22

Marketing angles

do not look sound ...high fluctuation of Trps from 13 to 80's....is just like instable blood pressure or blood sugar .


When Blood Pressure/ Sugar levels in a body fluctuates from rapid hi's & lo's is a sign of serious problem, which needs to be controlled immediately or can lead to hi danger...

Same Way Vast fluctuation in Trps is a sign of instable Market,PPl R not watching daily...audience have not connected with the show yet.
Sudden twists & changes like this has an impact on their interests.Parivaar has not settled well with the audience yet.Parivaar is competing with other serials BMTD SPHERE & K is tarah. U R neglecting to focus on current market trends.

Edited by Sonu_usa - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
#23

10 / 3 / 1 detailing Marketing strategies for the show has not been made .

Script or any business plan for a corporate, needs to be well developed for 10 months/ 3 months / 1 month b4 being executed.

How the show will shape up in 10 months / 3 months / 1 month .

For every track, budgeting, casting, planning ,detailing of clothing,situation, location, Lines, Taking ,special effects. soundtracks & action sequences, chemistry of characters is a MUST B4 implementing the serial.

All these shud be well thought out since it is a daily soap, last minute changes & decisions will lead unnecessary results.

Analysis of the Script will tell you , What kind of audience will be suitable for the show.
Then Air in the channel that'll be suitable for the show Parivaar. After the show is aired, then changes shud be made to the script as per the demands of the veiwers instead of writing / creating new script within a short time frame...

Flow is not thorough from 1 Track to another.
Mand/Avi/Megh track does not make sense.Ppl R complaining abt their relationships.Meghna stuff does not make sense? She took the money, her track shud flow from some other angle not as Avi's wife...

Creatives shud come up with something better. This track is becoming weak gradually..along with Radha's track with Addy dead. Both the tracks are unappealing to the mass.

Good thoughtfully planned script...is a must....

Edited by Sonu_usa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Sonu_usa

AUDIENCE IS UNHAPPY with new twist--anytime good or bad happens it reflects.Now restlessness, unhappiness, misery ,bad energy R reflecting...in all.

Maybe a Bad strategy was adopted or you have some new Agenda unknown to us.
The wave is always in the ocean not separate from the ocean .The same way the divinity in each one of us is the same in the form of absolute power. Now all these powers are colliding , clashing & everything is in chaos.
It is clear Rahil & Viewers have lot of meritorious acts .. Their divinity is shining in them as the abundant ocean of grace of god irrespective of each one's present qualifications.
One can count the grains of sand on the shore of ocean but one cannot comprehend the greatness of one's divinity, that's where you made a MISTAKE. Underestimated your audience & overlooked Rahil's Potentials.


Without analysing the viewers's profile thoroughly & going ahead with a story which is bringing unhappiness / misery to all.

What Caused the Sudden Change ?

Even I would like to know what caused the sudden change in Killing Addy & fastforwarding 6 months contract & presenting a disgusting stuff which is not to anyone's liking.

My professional bkgrnd does not cover business areas, so I cannot comment on Sonu's analysis.Her statements are valid._

But I have my own theory _

Swapnil is totally new to our lifestyle, culture,habitats & the way we talk & behave. You are forcing us to live our life with a stranger which is difficult.

Kartavya ki ees pariksha mein kya aap hamein sahi disha mein le rahen hai.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Hello Miditech,

Happy New Year & Many many thanks for Rahil Azam from my end.

Looking at he way Radha's life is taking turns, we are unclear about her next move & her life with a man.

If your Karma is bad suffering comes to you & Radha is projected as very good with lot of good merits.
The good merits are more in her & yet sufferings are higher than good merits.

DOES NOT MAKE SENSE CREATIVES.

It cannot go 2 ways good Radha & sufferings at the same time.

Ram & sita went to banvaas, Sita didn't really suffer,she was close to her husband, her happiness was her husband.When Ravan kidnapped his sitay, Ram turned heaven on earth to rescue Sita, how romantic.
Radha's sufferings are going crazy,IN Parivaar with No Man in her life.
Nothing makes sense anymore.

Mandy stuff is becoming a farce, very strange story with Avinash living under the same roof with 2 wives is strange.Mandira has to accept Meghna, no wife will tolerate that.
Aayi & Aaji look old fashioned, they accept all this charade.

Addy will save the show. 😃

My comments on this..

Fans give in to his Attraction/Kashish.. He provides boundless love keeps it alive in your mind keeps you connected to his heart & soul. THIS IS 100% true. I want Fans to comment on my analysis.

I honestly don't know, but I'm attracted to Rahil like crazy😆Yes my mind is connected to heart & soul. Yes I vouch it is 100% true😆.I'm nuts for him.

So this is Rahil 's 😆Kashish ehh. Now I know why I love him so much.

Thanx sonu for the enlightenment.😆

Edited by Reshmi800 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
What steps do you think Radha shud take to stay close to her partner ?
What shud true partnership mean to Radha ?
Members may express their opinion, so creatives can work around it for Radha ?

My Answer is
To me True Partnership means _
To start with the self. until we can be a true Partner to our own feelings,we cannot be a partner to someone else.
Radha needs to understand her self, where she is going wrong first, then plan her life instead of throwing herself to circumstances.

Then all Champagne & roses will follow.
All Addy's champagne & roses went to the doledrums, reduced us to sadness.

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